Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ01GQT40743RAK095SY88ET

Run Details

Duration:
1m 24s
Cost:
$0.000478
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the rusted gate that led into the grove, the metal biting at her palm as she pushed it open. The night folded around her like a shroud, the moon a thin slash of silver above the ancient oak standing stones. Their bark, twisted and dark, seemed to inhale the cold air, exhaling a faint scent of damp earth and wilted wildflowers that never wilted. She tightened the silver chain around her neck, the Heartstone pendant brushing against the scar on her left wrist, a reminder of the promise she’d made to someone she never saw. She had come here because the city had whispered the name of the grove in a half‑heard rumor. A rumor that a portal, a Hel portal, flickered beneath the stones, a doorway to a place where answers lay for those who dared to ask. She wanted answers about the benefactor who’d given her the pendant, about the faint pulse that now thrummed against her skin. She’d left the delivery bag in the back of her van, the scent of ginger and soy still clinging to the bag's canvas, and walked alone into the unknown. The first footsteps on the leaf‑laden ground sounded too crisp, as if the leaves had never known rain. Aurora’s boots crunched, the sound echoing off the stone circle. She paused, listening. A distant owl hooted, then the hollow thud of something heavier—like a sack of grain dropped on stone. She glanced at the stones, their silhouettes jagged against the moon, each one etched with runes she could not read. The air felt thicker, as if the grove inhaled and held its breath. “Aurora,” a voice muttered, low and winded, as though it came from a throat half‑covered in moss. No one stood there. Her breath fogged the night, but the voice seemed to ripple from the very stones. She swayed the pendant and felt a faint warmth, a pulse like a heartbeat, but steadier. The sound of the pulse matched the rhythm of the distant hoot; the timing was off, out of sync, as if the grove tried to align its own rhythm with hers. She lifted the pendant, the deep crimson gemstone catching the moonlight, casting a thin red line onto the stone. “Did you bring me?” The words were hers, spoken into the emptiness, the wind swallowing the syllables. The leaves rustled, an unsettling shuffle that sounded less like wind and more like a footstep dragging across dry straw. She turned, eyes scanning the darkness beyond the stones. Shadows moved just beyond the periphery, a flicker of movement that vanished when she focused. She pressed her palm against the cold bark of the nearest oak, feeling the ridges of its bark under her fingers. The tree seemed alive, breathing, the bark vibrating faintly as if a tremor passed through it. A low hum rose from the ground, like a distant engine idling, but there were no engines here—only the grove, the stones, and the night. “Show me,” Aurora whispered, more to the pendant than to anyone. The Heartstone glowed brighter, a soft inner light that cast a crimson halo on her face. The light revealed a small opening at the base of one stone, a fissure no larger than a thumb. She knelt, the scar on her wrist prickling as if the stone sensed her wound, the pendant’s warmth intensifying. She reached for the fissure, the tip of her fingers grazing the edge. A sudden rush of cold air burst from the opening, dragging a spray of leaves and a whisper of ancient voices that lilted in a language she did not understand. The night seemed to pull back, the stars dimming as a veil lowered over the sky. From the darkness beyond the fissure, a shape emerged—a silhouette of a woman, tall and slender, her dress made of spun night, her hair a cascade of black that matched Aurora’s own. The figure’s face was a blur, eyes indistinct, but the shape moved with a fluidity that made the grass ripple in its wake. “You carry the stone,” the figure said, voice echoing like a choir of unseen insects. Aurora felt the words not on her ears but in the marrow of her bones. The figure stepped closer, each footfall leaving a faint imprint of frost on the soft earth. Aurora’s hand tightened around the pendant, the scar throbbing as if remembering old pain. She stood, back straight, eyes fixed on the creature. “Who are you?” she asked, voice steady though the wind tugged at her hair, raising strands that brushed her cheeks. The figure smiled, a thin line that never reached eyes that were now visible—two pits of darkness, voids that seemed to swallow light. “I am the keeper of the gate,” the figure said. “The gate that opens when the heart beats true.” Aurora felt the heartbeat of the pendant accelerate, a thrum that matched her own pulse, amplified. The grove around them seemed to close in, the standing stones leaning inward as if listening. A rustle rose from the underbrush, a sound of branches snapping, but no animal could have moved so deftly in the tight circle of stones. A sudden shriek cut through the night—a high, keening wail that seemed to come from the very ground. The figure’s form wavered, the edges of her dress fraying like old parchment. The sound grew louder, now accompanied by a chorus of whispers, a thousand tiny voices shouting in unison, “Leave… leave…” Aurora’s breath came in short bursts, the cold air biting her lungs. She stepped back, the pendant slipping against the scar, a painful sting echoing through her wrist. The stone’s inner glow dimmed, then flared again, a pulsating red that illuminated the grove in an eerie twilight. The figure raised a hand, the fingers elongating into spindly branches that creaked like old wood. “You have been summoned,” she intoned. “But the price is the night itself.” A gust of wind slammed through the grove, scattering leaves like ash. The standing stones trembled; their runes glowed faintly, the glyphs shifting, rearranging themselves in a pattern Aurora could not decipher. The ground beneath her feet cracked, narrow fissures spidering outward, each one glowing with a faint, amber light that seeped into the soil. Aurora crouched, her eyes tracking the shifting patterns. “What do you want?” she asked, not for answer but to keep the voice from the void from swallowing her thoughts. The figure leaned in, breath a cold draft that brushed the back of Aurora’s neck, bringing with it a scent of iron and wilted roses. “Your heart,” the keeper whispered. “Your scar.” Aurora’s hand flew to the crescent scar on her wrist, feeling the reminder of the childhood accident that had left a faint line on her skin. The scar tingled, as if acknowledging the keeper’s claim. She clenched her fist around the pendant, the crimson stone humming, a low resonance that seemed to vibrate with the grove itself. A sudden flash of light erupted from the fissure, blinding white that turned the night to day for a heartbeat. When Aurora could see again, the figure was gone, the grove empty except for the standing stones, silent as tombstones. The Heartstone pendant pulsed once, then fell still, its glow faded to darkness. She stood alone, the wind now a whisper, the night returning to its original hush. The moon hung low, its silver light filtered through the leaves, casting long shadows that stretched like hands across the grass. Aurora breathed out, the breath fogging her face, the scar on her wrist still tingling faintly. She turned away from the stones, the path back to the gate faintly lit by the remnants of the pendant’s pulse. The grove's silence pressed against her ears, a pressure that seemed to claw at the back of her mind. Each step felt heavier, as if the earth tried to hold her, to keep her bound to the place where time moved differently, where an hour could stretch into days. Aurora paused at the edge of the clearing, looking back at the stones. The standing stones stood unchanged, their ancient presence unshaken by whatever had happened. The clasp of the pendant clinked against her chest, the chain too tight now, a reminder of the promise she had yet to fulfill. She lifted her head, eyes scanning the darkness beyond the grove. The night was empty, save for the faint rustle of leaves and a whisper that lingered like a memory—“Leave… leave…” The whisper had no source, yet it reverberated in her mind, a lingering echo that refused to fade. Aurora took a step forward, the cold grass biting her boots, the scar on her wrist still a quiet reminder. The moonlight caught the glint of the pendant as she walked, casting a fleeting red streak across the stone. She didn’t look back. The grove faded behind her, the standing stones shrinking into the distance, the heartbeat of the Heartstone slowing to a faint thrum that matched the rhythm of her own steps. She emerged onto the path that led out of Richmond Park, the streetlamps flickering in the distance, the city’s glow a promise of safety. Yet, the night clung to her, a chill that wouldn’t leave, a feeling that something unseen still watched from the shadows of the grove. Aurora pulled the pendant tighter, the scar on her wrist still warm, the promise still unspoken.
created_at"2026-04-24T15:25:15.984Z" 4/24/2026, 3:25:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.643
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1581
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1581
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"reminder"
count4
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count5
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count3
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count2
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count4
10
word"footfall"
count1
11
word"wavered"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"reverberated"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"glint"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"chill"
count1
21
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"flickered"
2"pulse"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"etched"
6"warmth"
7"scanning"
8"flicker"
9"whisper"
10"footfall"
11"wavered"
12"trembled"
13"resonance"
14"pulsed"
15"silence"
16"reverberated"
17"echo"
18"glint"
19"fleeting"
20"chill"
21"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1577
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1507
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Hel1
Aurora17
Leave1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.936
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"seemed alive breathing, the bark vibrating faintly as if a tremor passed through it"
1"as if remembering old pain"
2"voids that seemed to swallow light"
3"as if listening"
4"wail that seemed to come from the very ground"
5"as if acknowledging the keeper’s claim"
6"resonance that seemed to vibrate with the grove itself"
7"pressure that seemed to claw at the back of her mind"
73.18% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.268
wordCount1577
matches
0"not on her ears but in the marrow of her bones"
1"not for answer but to keep the voice from the void from swallowing her thoughts"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"feeling that something"
41.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean56.32
std16.69
cv0.296
sampleLengths
098
194
282
336
466
561
662
765
859
955
1046
1143
1242
1357
1451
1547
1629
1755
1829
1932
2057
2153
2252
2370
2450
2549
2673
2764
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences89
ratio0.09
matches
0"A distant owl hooted, then the hollow thud of something heavier—like a sack of grain dropped on stone."
1"The sound of the pulse matched the rhythm of the distant hoot; the timing was off, out of sync, as if the grove tried to align its own rhythm with hers."
2"A low hum rose from the ground, like a distant engine idling, but there were no engines here—only the grove, the stones, and the night."
3"From the darkness beyond the fissure, a shape emerged—a silhouette of a woman, tall and slender, her dress made of spun night, her hair a cascade of black that matched Aurora’s own."
4"The figure smiled, a thin line that never reached eyes that were now visible—two pits of darkness, voids that seemed to swallow light."
5"A sudden shriek cut through the night—a high, keening wail that seemed to come from the very ground."
6"The standing stones trembled; their runes glowed faintly, the glyphs shifting, rearranging themselves in a pattern Aurora could not decipher."
7"The night was empty, save for the faint rustle of leaves and a whisper that lingered like a memory—“Leave… leave…” The whisper had no source, yet it reverberated in her mind, a lingering echo that refused to fade."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1374
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.025473071324599708
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005822416302765648
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.44% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean17.72
std7.02
cv0.396
sampleLengths
022
121
224
331
418
526
621
729
818
910
103
1118
1220
1313
1417
154
1615
1716
1831
1919
2017
2120
229
2315
2421
2516
2625
2711
2816
2919
3019
3113
3230
3316
3432
3523
3615
3715
3816
3914
409
4120
4223
4310
449
4516
4616
4725
4818
4913
38.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2247191011235955
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences85
matches
0"Their bark, twisted and dark,"
1"She tightened the silver chain"
2"She had come here because"
3"She wanted answers about the"
4"She’d left the delivery bag"
5"She paused, listening."
6"She glanced at the stones,"
7"Her breath fogged the night,"
8"She swayed the pendant and"
9"She lifted the pendant, the"
10"She turned, eyes scanning the"
11"She pressed her palm against"
12"She knelt, the scar on"
13"She reached for the fissure,"
14"She stood, back straight, eyes"
15"she asked, voice steady though"
16"She stepped back, the pendant"
17"she asked, not for answer"
18"She clenched her fist around"
19"She stood alone, the wind"
ratio0.282
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences85
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the rusted"
1"The night folded around her"
2"Their bark, twisted and dark,"
3"She tightened the silver chain"
4"She had come here because"
5"A rumor that a portal,"
6"She wanted answers about the"
7"She’d left the delivery bag"
8"The first footsteps on the"
9"Aurora’s boots crunched, the sound"
10"She paused, listening."
11"A distant owl hooted, then"
12"She glanced at the stones,"
13"The air felt thicker, as"
14"a voice muttered, low and"
15"Her breath fogged the night,"
16"She swayed the pendant and"
17"The sound of the pulse"
18"She lifted the pendant, the"
19"The words were hers, spoken"
ratio0.953
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Yet, the night clung to"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"The first footsteps on the leaf‑laden ground sounded too crisp, as if the leaves had never known rain."
1"The leaves rustled, an unsettling shuffle that sounded less like wind and more like a footstep dragging across dry straw."
2"The tree seemed alive, breathing, the bark vibrating faintly as if a tremor passed through it."
3"She knelt, the scar on her wrist prickling as if the stone sensed her wound, the pendant’s warmth intensifying."
4"A sudden rush of cold air burst from the opening, dragging a spray of leaves and a whisper of ancient voices that lilted in a language she did not understand."
5"The figure’s face was a blur, eyes indistinct, but the shape moved with a fluidity that made the grass ripple in its wake."
6"Aurora’s hand tightened around the pendant, the scar throbbing as if remembering old pain."
7"Aurora felt the heartbeat of the pendant accelerate, a thrum that matched her own pulse, amplified."
8"The grove around them seemed to close in, the standing stones leaning inward as if listening."
9"The ground beneath her feet cracked, narrow fissures spidering outward, each one glowing with a faint, amber light that seeped into the soil."
10"The figure leaned in, breath a cold draft that brushed the back of Aurora’s neck, bringing with it a scent of iron and wilted roses."
11"Aurora’s hand flew to the crescent scar on her wrist, feeling the reminder of the childhood accident that had left a faint line on her skin."
12"The moon hung low, its silver light filtered through the leaves, casting long shadows that stretched like hands across the grass."
13"The grove's silence pressed against her ears, a pressure that seemed to claw at the back of her mind."
14"The grove faded behind her, the standing stones shrinking into the distance, the heartbeat of the Heartstone slowing to a faint thrum that matched the rhythm of…"
15"Yet, the night clung to her, a chill that wouldn’t leave, a feeling that something unseen still watched from the shadows of the grove."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the figure said, voice echoing like a choir of unseen insects"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"a voice muttered (mutter)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2"the keeper whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.429
65.2489%