Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ01M7DYQTG2XYDXKYD99ANM

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.005416
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the sign bled onto the wet pavement, turning the rain-slicked soot of the alley into a smear of liquid emerald. Rory hauled the insulated bag onto the counter, the condensation from the containers leaving a damp ring on the worn wood. Silas was at the far end of the bar, his grey-streaked auburn head bent over a ledger, the silver of his signet ring catching the low light as he turned a page. “Last delivery of the night,” she said, her voice flat with the fatigue of a twelve-hour shift. “Yu-Fei sends his regards. And the spare spring rolls.” Silas looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. “Man’s a saint. Put them in the back fridge, Rory. You want a drink on the house? You look like you could use one.” “Just water. I’ve got to get up at six.” She moved behind the bar, a space she navigated with the ease of long familiarity. The bar was quiet, a Thursday lull. A few regulars nursed pints in shadowed booths, their faces illuminated by phone screens or lost in thought. The air smelled of old wood, lemon polish, and the faint, yeasty ghost of spilled beer. She was pulling a glass from the rack when the door opened, letting in a gust of damp London night and a figure that paused on the threshold, shaking a tailored umbrella. Water dripped from the hems of dark trousers, from the shoulders of a coat that was clearly not off a rack. He looked around the low-lit room with an air of polite appraisal, his gaze sweeping over the old maps and monochrome photographs that papered the walls until it snagged on her. Rory’s hand stilled on the glass tap. The face was older, sharper around the jaw, the easy boyish grin replaced by a more controlled, careful smile. But the eyes were the same—a warm, cognac brown—and the way his eyebrows shot up in disbelief was achingly familiar. “Rory? Rory Carter?” Her throat went dry. She knew that voice, but it had been smoothed of its Cardiff lilt, polished into something neutral, posh even. “Marcus,” she breathed. It was like saying a word from a dead language. He crossed the floor in a few long strides, his expensive shoes making no sound on the old floorboards. He stopped on the other side of the bar, and for a moment, they just stared. The years between them yawned like a canyon. “My God. What are you—?” He laughed, a short, incredulous sound. “You work here?” “Part-time.” She finished filling her glass with water, her movements deliberate. “I live upstairs.” Silas had been watching the exchange, his posture shifting from relaxed to subtly alert. He closed his ledger with a soft thud. Marcus’s gaze darted to Silas and back to her. “You live above a bar in Soho. Right.” He ran a hand through his hair, now a shade darker than she remembered, and meticulously styled. A sleek watch glinted on his wrist. “I was just looking for a quiet pint. Some place… not a chain. This seemed fitting.” He gestured vaguely at the decor. “All a bit mysterious.” “The Raven’s Nest,” Silas supplied, his voice a low rumble from down the bar. “On the house for an old friend of Rory’s. Whiskey? Bourbon?” “Bourbon would be perfect, thank you.” Marcus slid onto a stool, his coat billowing slightly before he arranged it neatly beside him. He looked back at Rory, his expression trying to recapture that initial spark of recognition, but now it was layered with something else—curiosity, or perhaps caution. “Eleven years. That’s… that’s got to be it. Since you vanished from Cardiff.” “I didn’t vanish,” Rory said, the words sharper than she intended. She wiped down the already-clean counter in front of him. “I left.” “Left. Right. One day you were there, the next your number was disconnected and Eva said you’d gone to London and that was all anyone knew.” He picked up the glass Silas slid to him, but didn’t drink. “We all wondered.” “Did you?” The question slipped out, laced with an old, familiar bitterness she thought she’d purged. Marcus flinched, a tiny tightening around his eyes. “Of course we did. I did. You were my friend, Rory.” The word ‘friend’ landed between them, heavy and hollow. She remembered late nights studying constitutional law she hated, sharing cheap cider on the steps of the Students’ Union, him defending her in a moot court competition when her voice had failed her. He’d been a fixed point in the shifting chaos of university. She looked at him now—the cut of his suit, the manicured nails wrapped around the heavy tumbler, the confidence that sat on his shoulders like a second skin. This wasn’t the boy who’d lived on instant noodles and dreamed of arguing before the Supreme Court. This was a man who looked like he already belonged there. “You look… successful,” she offered, the word tasting bland. “Corporate law. Mergers and acquisitions.” He took a sip, his eyes never leaving hers. “It pays. Keeps me in London, mostly. You? Delivery, and…?” He gestured to the bar, the flat above. “Some things are stable,” she said, thinking of the steady rhythm of the restaurant, the silent agreement with Silas, the small, fiercely protected space she called hers. It wasn’t the life she’d mapped out, but it was hers. “It works.” “Right. Right.” He nodded slowly, looking down into his drink. “You just… decided Cardiff wasn’t for you anymore.” The silence stretched. The hum of the beer cooler, the distant clatter of a dish from the kitchen, the soft patter of rain against the front window. Rory could feel Silas’s quiet attention, a physical weight. “It wasn’t a decision,” Rory said finally, her voice low. “It was a necessity.” Marcus looked up sharply. “What does that mean?” “It means I had to go.” She busied herself rearranging the bottles of bitters on the shelf behind her, lining up their labels. “It was Evan, wasn’t it?” The name hung in the air, ugly and raw. Marcus’s voice had lost its polished edge, dropping back into the softer consonants she remembered. “Things with him were… bad. Everyone knew.” Rory’s left wrist tingled, a phantom ache where the old crescent scar sat. She’d never told anyone the full story of the accident, how she’d tripped on the stairs because he’d shoved her. “You didn’t know,” she corrected him, turning back. “You saw what he wanted you to see. What we all wanted to see.” “I should have done more.” Marcus set his glass down too hard; a little whiskey sloshed over the rim. He stared at the dark stain spreading on the wood. “I told myself it wasn’t my business. That you were smart, you could handle it. That’s a coward’s excuse.” Rory looked at him, really looked. The regret wasn’t a performance. It was etched into the faint lines bracketing his mouth, visible in the way his shoulders, so broad and assured a minute ago, now seemed to carry a subtle weight. He hadn’t just gotten a better suit and a nicer watch. He’d shed the skin of the person he was, but the memories had followed him. “You were my friend,” she said again, this time a simple statement. The tension in her chest loosened, just a fraction. It didn’t excuse anything, but it acknowledged the loss. “That’s what mattered back then.” “And now?” He met her gaze. “Are we strangers who used to know each other?” “We’re two people in a bar,” she answered, which was both a truth and an evasion. She nodded toward his glass. “Are you going to finish that, or just baptize the counter?” A ghost of the old smile touched his lips. “Fair enough.” He lifted the glass in a small, wry toast. “To necessities, then. And to finding solid ground.” He drank, and Rory watched the column of his throat work. The easy camaraderie they’d shared at nineteen was gone, buried under a decade of unspoken choices, fear, and survival. But something else had emerged from the rubble—a stark, unadorned honesty that was more real than any shared joke or study session. Silas drifted to the far end of the bar, giving them a semblance of privacy, his presence a reassuring sentinel. Marcus placed his empty glass on the counter. The rain had picked up, drumming a steady rhythm on the roof. “I’m in town for two weeks. A case. It would be…” He paused, choosing the word with care. “It would be good to talk. To catch up, properly. Not behind a bar.” Rory thought of her small flat, the books on criminology and foreign policy she read for pleasure now, the silence she craved at the end of a day. She thought of the boy who’d once known her favourite coffee order and the man before her who didn’t know her at all. “I get off at eleven tomorrow,” she heard herself say. “If you’re still around.” Marcus’s face relaxed, the careful control giving way to something genuine and relieved. “I’ll be around.” He stood, pulling out his wallet. “Silas said it was on the house,” Rory reminded him, jerking her chin toward the bartender. “Right. Well.” Marcus tucked the wallet away, a flicker of discomfort crossing his features. He wasn’t used to not paying his way. He shrugged into his expensive coat, the transformation from casual old friend back to polished professional instantaneous. “Thank you. For the drink. And for…” He gestured vaguely between them. “For not throwing me out.” “It’s a public bar, Marcus. You ordered a drink.” He almost smiled. “Goodnight, Rory.” “Goodnight.” The bell above the door chimed as he left, letting in a swirl of damp air and the distant sound of traffic before closing him out into the night. Rory stared at the empty stool, at the ring of water left by his glass. Silas materialized beside her, quietly clearing the tumbler. “Old university friend?” he asked, his voice neutral. “From a lifetime ago.” She picked up her water, the glass cold against her palm. “We used to study together.” “And now?” Silas prompted, his gaze perceptive. Rory watched the neon sign reflected in a puddle across the street, the letters distorted, trembling. “Now we’re just two different people who remember the same ones.” She took a long drink of water, the cold shock of it grounding her. “Now we’re just trying to figure out if we remember how to talk to each other, or if all we have left are the ghosts.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
61.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags36
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He nodded slowly [slowly]"
2"Rory said finally [finally]"
3"she said again [again]"
4"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.139
effectiveRatio0.139
88.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
3"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"sentinel"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"familiar"
2"lilt"
3"perfect"
4"silence"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"etched"
8"tension"
9"unspoken"
10"stark"
11"sentinel"
12"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences102
matches
0"p in disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1772
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1305
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas11
Thursday1
London1
Cardiff1
Marcus9
Rory13
Supreme1
Court1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Marcus"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he already belonged there"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1772
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean32.81
std20.51
cv0.625
sampleLengths
077
126
234
39
456
584
646
73
836
943
1014
1114
1222
1367
1425
1561
1623
1741
1816
1919
2053
2156
229
2332
2440
2518
2636
2714
288
2923
3036
3155
3248
3367
3435
3515
3632
3728
3852
3920
4052
4151
4214
4322
4416
4556
469
475
481
4944
91.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"been smoothed"
1"was layered"
2"was etched"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was pulling"
1"was like saying"
35.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences133
ratio0.038
matches
0"But the eyes were the same—a warm, cognac brown—and the way his eyebrows shot up in disbelief was achingly familiar."
1"He looked back at Rory, his expression trying to recapture that initial spark of recognition, but now it was layered with something else—curiosity, or perhaps caution."
2"She looked at him now—the cut of his suit, the manicured nails wrapped around the heavy tumbler, the confidence that sat on his shoulders like a second skin."
3"“I should have done more.” Marcus set his glass down too hard; a little whiskey sloshed over the rim."
4"But something else had emerged from the rubble—a stark, unadorned honesty that was more real than any shared joke or study session."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount743
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03230148048452221
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012113055181695828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean13.32
std7.85
cv0.589
sampleLengths
024
121
232
317
49
510
624
79
815
97
1018
1116
1232
1321
1431
157
1619
1720
183
194
2019
213
2210
2319
2416
258
2611
273
2811
293
3014
318
329
3325
347
3522
364
3714
3811
3922
4026
4113
4211
4310
442
4538
463
4716
488
4911
48.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3383458646616541
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences100
matches
0"she said, her voice flat"
1"She moved behind the bar,"
2"She was pulling a glass"
3"He looked around the low-lit"
4"Her throat went dry."
5"She knew that voice, but"
6"It was like saying a"
7"He crossed the floor in"
8"He stopped on the other"
9"He laughed, a short, incredulous"
10"She finished filling her glass"
11"He closed his ledger with"
12"He ran a hand through"
13"He gestured vaguely at the"
14"He looked back at Rory,"
15"She wiped down the already-clean"
16"He picked up the glass"
17"She remembered late nights studying"
18"He’d been a fixed point"
19"She looked at him now—the"
ratio0.51
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences100
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Rory hauled the insulated bag"
2"Silas was at the far"
3"she said, her voice flat"
4"Silas looked up, his hazel"
5"She moved behind the bar,"
6"The bar was quiet, a"
7"The air smelled of old"
8"She was pulling a glass"
9"Water dripped from the hems"
10"He looked around the low-lit"
11"Rory’s hand stilled on the"
12"The face was older, sharper"
13"Her throat went dry."
14"She knew that voice, but"
15"It was like saying a"
16"He crossed the floor in"
17"He stopped on the other"
18"The years between them yawned"
19"He laughed, a short, incredulous"
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She was pulling a glass from the rack when the door opened, letting in a gust of damp London night and a figure that paused on the threshold, shaking a tailored…"
1"He looked around the low-lit room with an air of polite appraisal, his gaze sweeping over the old maps and monochrome photographs that papered the walls until i…"
2"Silas had been watching the exchange, his posture shifting from relaxed to subtly alert."
3"She looked at him now—the cut of his suit, the manicured nails wrapped around the heavy tumbler, the confidence that sat on his shoulders like a second skin."
4"But something else had emerged from the rubble—a stark, unadorned honesty that was more real than any shared joke or study session."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags36
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas supplied, his voice a low rumble from down the bar"
1"she offered, the word tasting bland"
2"Rory said finally, her voice low"
3"Marcus tucked, a flicker of discomfort crossing his features"
4"he asked, his voice neutral"
5"Silas prompted, his gaze perceptive"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.152
leniency0.303
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.091
75.9754%