Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ01NW3HH6DW5TBBN05XZPYV

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Duration:
42.2s
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$0.006738
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Xiaomi

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of ozone and damp stone. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the edge of the taped-off area, her worn leather watch feeling tight on her wrist. The Veil Market, tucked into the guts of an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, was a labyrinth of stalls shuttered and dark. The usual hum of hushed transactions and arcane energy was gone, replaced by the sterile white light of forensic lamps and the low murmur of SOCOs. Her partner, DS Morris, would have known what to make of this place. He’d whispered about things like it, places that bent the rules. Quinn had filed his words away under ‘stress-related delusions’. That was before the unexplained circumstances. “Over here, Detective.” The voice, crisp and professional, came from a young constable standing by a stall draped in purple velvet. Quinn ducked under the tape, her heels echoing on the grimy platform. The victim lay in a pool of light, a man in a tailored coat, one hand clutching a slim brass compass. His face was frozen in an expression of serene shock. “Single stab wound, center mass,” the constable reported. “No witnesses. Market was closed for the cycle. The night watch found him.” Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw setting as she looked at the body. The positioning was too neat. No defensive marks on his hands. The compass in his grip wasn’t pointing north; its needle quivered, pointing at a bare, brick wall. A Veil Compass. She’d seen one in Morris’s notes, after his death. “The compass,” she said. “Bag it. Priority.” “Already on the list, ma’am.” A rustle of fabric and the scent of old paper approached. Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows, her round glasses catching the light, her worn leather satchel hanging heavy. She tucked a curly red strand behind her left ear, a nervous tic Quinn had known since childhood. “Harlow.” Eva’s voice was a hushed thing in the cavernous space. “They called me. As the museum’s liaison.” “You’re not a liaison to a crime scene, Eva.” “I am when it involves provenance.” Eva gestured vaguely at the surrounding stalls. “This isn’t just a murder. This is an item theft. The Veil Market’s ledger lists a transaction for this compass an hour before the estimated time of death. A significant purchase.” Quinn straightened, the worn leather of her watch strap creaking. “So he bought a compass, walked three feet, and got stabbed? The thief left the one valuable item behind?” “It’s not just an item,” Eva insisted, her freckles standing out on her pale skin. She avoided looking at the body, focusing instead on the market stalls. “It’s a tool. A Shade artisan made it. It points toward rifts. Portals. Weak spots in the veil.” “Right. And our victim just happened to be admiring it when someone decided to test his ribcage.” Quinn’s tone was flat. She circled the body. The blood pool was a near-perfect circle. No spatter. No drag marks. The knife, if that’s what it was, had been withdrawn cleanly. “The watch,” Quinn noted, nodding to the victim’s wrist. A slim, modern piece. “It stopped. 11:47 PM.” The constable checked his notes. “That’s within the window.” “It’s not broken,” Eva murmured, leaning closer, then pulling back. “The crystal’s intact. It just… stopped. Like all the energy was sapped out.” Quinn ignored that. She scanned the floor around the body. Clean, except for a faint, circular smudge in the dust near the compass hand, too perfect to be accidental. “Someone knelt here. Recently.” “There’s no residue,” the constable said. “No prints on the compass besides the victim’s.” “The compass is the key,” Eva said, her voice gaining a quiet urgency. “They didn’t take it because they couldn’t. Or because it was already doing what they wanted it to do. Look where it’s pointing.” Quinn followed the needle’s trembling direction to the blank brick wall. Standard mortared brick, stained with age. She walked over, her gaze tracing the lines. One brick, low to the ground, had mortar that was a slightly different shade. Newer. She pulled on a glove and tapped it. It sounded hollow. “Brick’s been disturbed,” Quinn said. “Recently.” The constable frowned. “Access to utilities, maybe?” “No.” Eva had moved beside her, her satchel bumping against her hip. “Look at the dust pattern on the floor. No tracks coming from or to this wall. The brick was disturbed from the other side.” Quinn looked back at the body, then at the wall, then at the compass in its evidence bag, still twitching. The logic of the scene collapsed. No entry point for the murderer save the main stairs, where the night watch was posted. No exit. A perfect circle of blood. A stopped watch. A compass pointing at a wall. Her eyes, trained by eighteen years of service, stopped on the victim’s coat. Not the blood, but the lapel. A tiny, singed mark. The smell of ozone was stronger here. “He wasn’t stabbed,” Quinn said, the words coming out slow. “Not with steel. The wound is cauterized at the edges. I saw it, but dismissed it.” Eva nodded, her green eyes wide. “A burst of raw energy. Contained, focused. The compass… it drew the energy. Or it was the focus.” The scene shifted. Not a stabbing. An execution. Or an accident. The man hadn’t been killed for his purchase; his purchase had made him a conduit. The perfect blood pool, the stopped watch, the hollow brick—it was a pattern, a circuit. And the compass was still active, still pointing, not at a wall, but at a rift that had opened there and sealed shut, leaving only a ghost in the brick. Quinn looked at Eva. The nervous habit, the satchel of books, the master’s from Oxford. Not just an occult researcher. A woman who understood the patterns Morris had died trying to follow. “Get your team,” Quinn ordered the constable. “Seal this entire section. I want every sigil on that compass documented. And get a structural engineer down here. I want to know what’s behind that brick.” As the constable hurried away, Quinn stood alone with Eva and the body. The sterile white light made the shadows deeper. “This changes things,” Eva said, her voice barely a whisper. “It means nothing yet,” Quinn replied, but her eyes were on the compass. “It means someone used a supernatural tool to kill a man in a supernatural market. And we’re the only two people here who even believe that’s a possibility.” Eva’s hand went to her satchel, her fingers brushing the worn leather. “What do we do?” Quinn looked at her, at the friend who’d moved to London before her, who worked in restricted archives, who knew about Veil Markets and Shade artisans. The pieces weren’t adding up. They were assembling into a picture she didn’t want to see. “We do our job,” Quinn said. “We follow the evidence. Even when it points at things we don’t understand.” She looked back at the compass, its needle now pointing directly at Eva’s satchel. “Starting with you. What else is in that bag?” Eva’s face went pale, but she didn’t reach for her hair. She met Quinn’s gaze, a silent challenge passing between them. The first crack in the case wasn’t in the evidence. It was in the two women standing over it, one representing the law, the other the lore, and the dead man between them holding a compass that had just changed its direction.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.048
95.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"quivered"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count4
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"echoing"
2"quivered"
3"perfect"
4"crystal"
5"scanned"
6"standard"
7"tracing"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
96.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1246
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
34.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount866
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.31
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn20
Veil3
Market1
Tube1
Camden1
Morris3
Compass1
Kowalski1
Eva14
Oxford1
London1
Markets1
Shade1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"Compass"
1"Oxford"
2"London"
globalScore0.345
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
39.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.605
wordCount1246
matches
0"Not the blood, but the lapel"
1"not at a wall, but at a rift"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean31.15
std17.41
cv0.559
sampleLengths
076
139
221
343
421
552
67
75
847
918
109
1144
1229
1345
1448
1517
169
1723
1833
1914
2036
2151
226
237
2436
2558
2630
2726
2824
2971
3032
3134
3221
3310
3441
3516
3642
3742
3821
3942
86.19% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences92
matches
0"was gone"
1"was frozen"
2"been withdrawn"
3"was posted"
4"been killed"
59.15% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs142
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"weren’t adding"
2"were assembling"
68.32% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences115
ratio0.026
matches
0"The compass in his grip wasn’t pointing north; its needle quivered, pointing at a bare, brick wall."
1"The man hadn’t been killed for his purchase; his purchase had made him a conduit."
2"The perfect blood pool, the stopped watch, the hollow brick—it was a pattern, a circuit."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount405
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.019753086419753086
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0024691358024691358
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.83
std7.26
cv0.67
sampleLengths
08
120
222
326
413
511
69
76
821
912
1021
1110
128
1313
1412
155
166
1717
183
199
204
213
225
2311
2418
2518
2611
277
289
2913
3031
3110
3219
3315
3412
3518
3621
374
387
392
403
4111
429
434
444
455
464
4710
4813
493
54.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3739130434782609
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences85
matches
0"Her partner, DS Morris, would"
1"He’d whispered about things like"
2"His face was frozen in"
3"She’d seen one in Morris’s"
4"She tucked a curly red"
5"She avoided looking at the"
6"She circled the body."
7"She scanned the floor around"
8"She walked over, her gaze"
9"She pulled on a glove"
10"It sounded hollow."
11"Her eyes, trained by eighteen"
12"They were assembling into a"
13"She looked back at the"
14"She met Quinn’s gaze, a"
15"It was in the two"
ratio0.188
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"The air tasted of ozone"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The Veil Market, tucked into"
3"The usual hum of hushed"
4"Her partner, DS Morris, would"
5"He’d whispered about things like"
6"Quinn had filed his words"
7"That was before the unexplained"
8"The voice, crisp and professional,"
9"Quinn ducked under the tape,"
10"The victim lay in a"
11"His face was frozen in"
12"the constable reported"
13"Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw"
14"The positioning was too neat."
15"The compass in his grip"
16"A Veil Compass."
17"She’d seen one in Morris’s"
18"A rustle of fabric and"
19"Eva Kowalski emerged from the"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was in the two women standing over it, one representing the law, the other the lore, and the dead man between them holding a compass that had just changed it…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Eva insisted, her freckles standing out on her pale skin"
1"Eva said, her voice gaining a quiet urgency"
2"Eva had, her satchel bumping against her hip"
3"Quinn said, the words coming out slow"
4"Eva said, her voice barely a whisper"
5"Quinn replied, but her eyes were on the compass"
30.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"the constable reported (report)"
1"Eva insisted (insist)"
2"Quinn noted (note)"
3"Eva murmured (murmur)"
4"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.619
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.238
74.7328%