Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ01VG5CSP2TWZCEH8AR0XNC

Run Details

Duration:
50.5s
Cost:
$0.007836
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the windscreen in sheets, the wipers barely keeping pace. Harlow Quinn gripped the steering wheel and watched the darkened storefronts blur past. Three years of following dead ends. Three years of questions about what happened to Morris. Tonight, a name had dropped into her lap like a gift from a god she didn't believe in. A figure darted between parked cars fifty metres ahead. She killed the engine and was out before the car stopped rocking on its suspension. The rain hit her like a wall of cold needles. Her shoes slapped wet pavement as she vaulted the bonnet of a black cab and cut across the road. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" The figure—male, dark jacket, hood up—glanced back. Young face. Terrified eyes. He scrambled over a low brick wall and vanished into an alley between a shuttered kebab shop and a payday loan office. Quinn's lungs burned. She'd given up cigarettes eight months ago, and her body still hadn't forgiven her. The watch on her left wrist read 11:47 PM as she hauled herself over the wall and landed hard on the other side. Her knee protested. Forty-one years of wear and tear on joints that used to carry her through obstacle courses without breaking a sweat. The alley stank of grease and standing water. The suspect's footsteps echoed off brick, growing fainter. She pushed harder, her jacket heavy and sodden against her shoulders. A chain-link fence blocked the end of the passage. He'd already climbed it, his dark shape dropping down the other side and sprinting toward the mouth of Camden High Street. "Tomás!" she barked. "Tomás Herrera! I just want to talk!" The name belonged to a 29-year-old former paramedic with olive skin, a knife scar on his forearm, and a Saint Christopher medallion that witnesses had described at three separate crime scenes over the past eighteen months. A man who shouldn't exist in any police database—no NHS record, no National Insurance number, no passport. A ghost with warm brown eyes. He didn't stop. Of course he didn't. Quinn grabbed the fence and hauled herself up. The chain links bit into her palms. She dropped the other side and landed in a puddle that soaked through to her socks. Camden at midnight. The market stalls were gone, replaced by black bags and the smell of stale beer. A fox watched her from behind a wheelie bin, its eyes catching the orange glow of a streetlight. Herrera cut left down a side street, then right, weaving through a warren of back alleys that Quinn had only ever seen on patrol maps. He knew these routes. He'd planned them. This wasn't panic—it was preparation. Her hand went to her waist. The Glock sat in its holster against her hip, cold and familiar. She hadn't drawn it. Not yet. You didn't draw on a man you wanted to talk to. That's what Morris would have said. Morris, who'd been found in a canal three years ago with water in his lungs and no explanation for the symbols carved into the concrete beneath the bridge. She rounded a corner and stopped. Herrera stood at the edge of a dead end—or what should have been a dead end. A brick wall rose three metres high, topped with broken glass. But he wasn't looking at the wall. He was looking at the ground. A stairwell. Concrete steps descending into darkness where no stairs should be. The entrance was partially concealed by a collapsed section of hoarding, the plywood bleached and warped by weather. Someone had been maintaining this way in. The concrete edges were clean. No moss, no debris. Herrera glanced back at her one more time. Rain streamed down his face, plastering dark curls to his forehead. His chest heaved. The Saint Christopher medallion glinted against his collar. "Detective." His voice carried over the downpour, accented with something warm and foreign. Seville, her notes said. Born in Seville. "You should not follow me down here." "Then stop running and we won't have a problem." "The problem is not mine." He took a step down. The darkness swallowed him to the waist. "You're looking for answers about your partner. I know that. But the answers you want live in a place that doesn't follow your rules." Quinn's jaw tightened. The sharp line of it could cut glass when she was angry, and right now, anger was the only thing keeping the cold out. "What rules?" "Any of them." He descended another step. Gone. She stood at the edge of the stairwell, rain pooling in the creases of her jacket. The steps vanished into a tunnel that smelled of damp stone and something else—something sweet and chemical, like the air above a bonfire mixed with incense. Faint light flickered from somewhere far below, amber and unsteady, like torchlight. She pulled her phone from her pocket. No signal. The GPS showed her standing in the middle of a solid block on the map. No stairs. No tunnel. Nothing. Her hand dropped to the radio clipped to her shoulder. Static. She pressed the call button. More static, layered with something that almost sounded like whispering. "Control, this is DI Quinn. I'm at—" The static swallowed her voice. She released the button and stared at the radio as if it had betrayed her. Eighteen years on the force. Eighteen years of procedure and protocol and the understanding that backup was one call away. Morris had taught her that. Morris, who'd walked into something three years ago and never walked out. She looked at the stairs again. Her fingers found the worn leather of her watch. The glass face was cracked—had been cracked since the night she'd found Morris's body. She never fixed it. Some part of her understood that fixing it would mean moving on, and moving on meant forgetting, and forgetting meant the thing that killed him won. Quinn drew her weapon. The Glock felt different in the rain, slick and alive. She checked the magazine. Full. She chambered a round and thumbed the safety off. Then she descended. The stairs were steep and narrower than they'd looked from above. Her shoulders brushed both walls. The concrete was dry, which made no sense given the deluge behind her, as if the rain refused to follow her down. The air thickened with each step—warmer, heavier, saturated with those competing smells of smoke and spice and something metallic she couldn't name. Thirty steps down, the tunnel opened into a wider passage. The walls were old brick, Victorian-era, probably part of the original Underground construction. But someone had strung bare bulbs along the ceiling at irregular intervals, and the light they cast was amber and unsteady, humming at a frequency that made the fillings in her back teeth ache. She heard it before she saw it. Voices. Dozens of them, murmuring in overlapping conversations that bounced off the tunnel walls and merged into a single wall of sound. And beneath the voices, movement—shuffling feet, the clink of glass, the whisper of fabric. The passage ended at an archway. Beyond it, the abandoned Tube station opened like the belly of some vast, sleeping beast. The platform stretched in both directions, its original tile work still visible beneath decades of grime. The tracks were gone—covered over with wooden boards and rugs that created a continuous floor from wall to wall. Stalls lined both sides, makeshift structures of plywood and tarpaulin and, in some cases, materials Quinn couldn't identify. The ceiling vaulted overhead, lost in shadow, but the space below it blazed with light. Paper lanterns, candles jammed into bottles, bare bulbs on frayed wires, and in one corner, a fire burning in an oil drum that sent sparks spiraling upward. People moved through the space in clusters. Dozens of them. More. They wore every kind of clothing imaginable—leather, silk, hooded cloaks, business suits—and some of them wore things Quinn's eyes refused to process. She saw a woman whose shadow didn't match her body. A man counting coins with fingers too long and too many. A stall selling jars of liquid that glowed faintly blue, arranged next to bundles of dried herbs and what looked like animal bones wrapped in copper wire. The smell hit her full force. Incense, copper, ozone, and something underneath it all like the air before a lightning strike—charged, dangerous, waiting. A large man at the nearest stall turned to look at her. His face was broad, flat-nosed, and covered in what she first took for tattoos before the patterns shifted and rearranged themselves across his skin. He said something to the woman beside him in a language Quinn didn't recognize. The woman glanced at Quinn, then at the gun in her hand, and her expression hardened. Quinn holstered the weapon. Slowly. Deliberately. Keeping her hands visible. She scanned the crowd. Herrera was twenty metres ahead, moving through the stalls with the ease of someone who'd walked this path a hundred times. He wove between bodies, ducked beneath a hanging tapestry, and disappeared around a corner. Quinn pushed forward. The crowd parted for her—not in deference but in avoidance. Eyes tracked her. Conversations dropped to whispers as she passed. She caught fragments. "—bone token? Where's her token—" "—smells like surface. Smells like badge—" "—the green sign, take her to the green sign—" A hand closed around her elbow. She spun, instinct driving her fist upward, but the grip released before she connected. A small man in a moth-eaten cardigan held up both palms, grinning. His teeth were filed to points. "Easy, love." His voice was pure East End, cheerful and completely unafraid. "You don't want to make a scene down here. Not your jurisdiction. Not your laws." "Let go of me or I'll show you my jurisdiction." He laughed. "First time in the Veil Market? You need a token, detective. Entry requirement. No exceptions." He cocked his head. "Unless someone invited you down, in which case—" He spread his hands. "Enjoy yourself. Browse. Buy something. But keep that iron on your hip holstered. Iron's bad manners down here." He melted back into the crowd before she could respond. Quinn stood alone in the middle of a black market she'd never known existed, rainwater still dripping from her jacket onto the wooden boards beneath her feet, watching the man she'd chased two miles through London turn a corner and vanish into the dark. She followed.
created_at"2026-04-24T15:31:09.014Z" 4/24/2026, 3:31:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1754
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1754
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"database"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"database"
3"familiar"
4"flickered"
5"whisper"
6"silk"
7"charged"
8"scanned"
9"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences157
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1737
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1597
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn13
Morris6
Camden2
High1
Street1
Saint2
Christopher2
National1
Insurance1
Glock2
Seville2
Victorian-era1
Underground1
Tube1
East1
End1
London1
Herrera4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Glock"
5"Herrera"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Seville"
4"East"
5"End"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like whispering"
1"looked like animal bones wrapped in coppe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.576
wordCount1737
matches
0"not in deference but in avoidance"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences168
matches
0"understanding that backup"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean33.4
std23.63
cv0.707
sampleLengths
057
19
244
33
433
563
657
710
859
97
1067
1137
1269
136
1440
1546
1630
1727
189
1941
2029
213
225
2354
2429
2526
267
2757
286
2953
3028
313
3260
3357
3443
3521
3695
3781
3823
3966
4010
4139
4226
435
446
459
4638
4727
4810
4951
94.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences157
matches
0"were gone"
1"been found"
2"been cracked"
3"were gone"
4"were filed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs270
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences168
ratio0.089
matches
0"The figure—male, dark jacket, hood up—glanced back."
1"A man who shouldn't exist in any police database—no NHS record, no National Insurance number, no passport."
2"This wasn't panic—it was preparation."
3"Herrera stood at the edge of a dead end—or what should have been a dead end."
4"The steps vanished into a tunnel that smelled of damp stone and something else—something sweet and chemical, like the air above a bonfire mixed with incense."
5"The glass face was cracked—had been cracked since the night she'd found Morris's body."
6"The air thickened with each step—warmer, heavier, saturated with those competing smells of smoke and spice and something metallic she couldn't name."
7"And beneath the voices, movement—shuffling feet, the clink of glass, the whisper of fabric."
8"The tracks were gone—covered over with wooden boards and rugs that created a continuous floor from wall to wall."
9"They wore every kind of clothing imaginable—leather, silk, hooded cloaks, business suits—and some of them wore things Quinn's eyes refused to process."
10"Incense, copper, ozone, and something underneath it all like the air before a lightning strike—charged, dangerous, waiting."
11"The crowd parted for her—not in deference but in avoidance."
12"\"—bone token? Where's her token—\""
13"\"—smells like surface. Smells like badge—\""
14"\"—the green sign, take her to the green sign—\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1556
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.021208226221079693
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005784061696658098
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean10.34
std7.74
cv0.748
sampleLengths
011
113
26
39
418
59
615
710
819
93
107
112
122
1322
143
1514
1623
173
1820
198
208
2111
229
2321
243
257
2636
2717
286
293
304
318
327
3316
343
3515
3618
3725
384
393
405
416
4212
434
442
4511
466
4728
486
4916
57.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3869047619047619
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners65
47.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"Of course he didn't."
1"Then she descended."
ratio0.014
90.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences139
matches
0"She killed the engine and"
1"Her shoes slapped wet pavement"
2"He scrambled over a low"
3"She'd given up cigarettes eight"
4"Her knee protested."
5"She pushed harder, her jacket"
6"He'd already climbed it, his"
7"He didn't stop."
8"She dropped the other side"
9"He knew these routes."
10"He'd planned them."
11"Her hand went to her"
12"She hadn't drawn it."
13"You didn't draw on a"
14"She rounded a corner and"
15"He was looking at the"
16"His chest heaved."
17"His voice carried over the"
18"He took a step down"
19"He descended another step."
ratio0.324
31.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences139
matches
0"Harlow Quinn gripped the steering"
1"Tonight, a name had dropped"
2"A figure darted between parked"
3"She killed the engine and"
4"The rain hit her like"
5"Her shoes slapped wet pavement"
6"The figure—male, dark jacket, hood"
7"He scrambled over a low"
8"Quinn's lungs burned."
9"She'd given up cigarettes eight"
10"The watch on her left"
11"Her knee protested."
12"The alley stank of grease"
13"The suspect's footsteps echoed off"
14"She pushed harder, her jacket"
15"A chain-link fence blocked the"
16"He'd already climbed it, his"
17"The name belonged to a"
18"A man who shouldn't exist"
19"A ghost with warm brown"
ratio0.856
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The name belonged to a 29-year-old former paramedic with olive skin, a knife scar on his forearm, and a Saint Christopher medallion that witnesses had described…"
1"A man who shouldn't exist in any police database—no NHS record, no National Insurance number, no passport."
2"The steps vanished into a tunnel that smelled of damp stone and something else—something sweet and chemical, like the air above a bonfire mixed with incense."
3"Some part of her understood that fixing it would mean moving on, and moving on meant forgetting, and forgetting meant the thing that killed him won."
4"But someone had strung bare bulbs along the ceiling at irregular intervals, and the light they cast was amber and unsteady, humming at a frequency that made the…"
5"Dozens of them, murmuring in overlapping conversations that bounced off the tunnel walls and merged into a single wall of sound."
6"The tracks were gone—covered over with wooden boards and rugs that created a continuous floor from wall to wall."
7"A stall selling jars of liquid that glowed faintly blue, arranged next to bundles of dried herbs and what looked like animal bones wrapped in copper wire."
8"Quinn stood alone in the middle of a black market she'd never known existed, rainwater still dripping from her jacket onto the wooden boards beneath her feet, w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.1
83.9711%