Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ024TSWW4FQ8K4N67QX0NZ1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.000599
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked, the deadbolt slid back, and the door swung inward. Aurora stepped into the cramped room, the faint smell of spiced broth hanging from the hallway, her eyes sweeping the walls. Piles of leather‑bound books leaned against the battered bookshelf, a stack of handwritten notes spilling onto the floor like a tangled web of thoughts. Ptolemy, the tabby, flicked his tail, ears pricked, and slunk beneath a chair as the hinges whispered. “It’s been years,” Lucien’s voice cut through the silence, low and even. He rested his ivory‑handled cane against the doorway, the hidden blade glinting for a heartbeat before he tucked it away. His platinum hair caught the dim light, a flash of steel against the charcoal of his suit. Aurora’s hand twitched toward the small crescent on her left wrist, the scar she’d traced a thousand times in unconscious habit. She didn’t meet his eyes, but the slight press of her fingers spoke louder than any apology could. “You’re not a ghost,” she replied, voice steady despite the knot tightening in her chest. “You never were.” He took a step inside, his shoes silent on the threadbare rug. “I’m not here to haunt you, Rory.” The nickname slipped out, warm, familiar, a reminder of late‑night coffee runs and whispered jokes about courtroom dramas. Her shoulders relaxed just enough to let an exhale slip out. “You chose a different courtroom.” She gestured to the cluttered desk, the pile of delivery receipts splayed like a badge of honour. “Fine. What do you want?” Lucien's smile tugged at the corner of his mouth. “A place to talk. No intermediaries. No brokers.” Ptolemy let out a soft hiss, ears flattening, and Aurora shooed the cat with a flick of her wrist. “He’s not going to like this.” “Then I’ll make it worth his while.” The Frenchman’s eyes flicked to the scar, then back to hers, amber meeting black in a silent challenge. He lowered his cane, letting it rest against the floor. The room seemed to close in, the walls of books pressing in like witnesses to a trial long overdue. Aurora crossed to the window, pushed aside the curtain, and let the street’s neon flicker across her face. She glanced at the night sky, the London lights a blur behind the rain‑slicked glass. “It wasn’t supposed to end like that,” she said, the words hanging between them like unpaid rent. “You left without a word, vanished into the night, and I…” Her hand brushed her scar again, a habit that steadied her breathing. Lucien unfolded his cane, the hidden blade catching a sliver of streetlight. He didn’t touch it. “I left because I thought you’d be safer without me. I was a liability.” “A liability?” Aurora laughed, short and sharp. “You think I needed protection from a half‑demon in a tailored suit?” He shook his head, the movement sending a cascade of silver tinkling in the lamplight. “You were right to think I was dangerous, but I chose the danger because it was the only thing I could give you.” The cat darted from under the chair, landing on the windowsill, his eyes wide, tracking the tension as if it were a moving mouse. Aurora reached out, a tentative hand hovering over the feline, then settled on the back of his neck, feeling the fur’s coarse under her palm. “You think you can fix everything with a smile and a blade.” She turned, face inches from his, their breaths mixing. “You think a few words can erase the night you disappeared?” Lucien’s gaze dropped to the scar, then rose, his brow creasing with something that might have been regret or resolve. “I cannot erase the night. I can only offer a chance to rewrite the morning.” She laughed again, softer this time, the sound barely escaping the tiny room. “Rewrite? With what, promises? You disappear, you reappear, you leave a trail of smoke and secrets.” He knelt, the cane clattering softly against the wooden floorboards. He knelt at the edge of the rug, close enough to see the scar’s faint line, the way it caught the light. “I have no promises. I have a truth.” Aurora’s eyes flicked to the door, to the world beyond, to the taste of street food lingering on her tongue. “Truth is a hard thing to swallow after you’ve been fed lies for years.” Lucien’s fingers brushed the scar, fingertips cool against the raised skin. He didn’t speak, but the gentle pressure told her he was listening, not just to her words but to the pulse beneath them. The cat hissed again, a low growl that vibrated through the worn carpet. Aurora’s shoulders tightened, the tension a coil ready to snap. She swatted at Ptolemy, a playful jab that sent him scuttling to the far side of the room, his tail a banner of defiance. “Do you ever wonder why we keep coming back?” Aurora asked, voice low, the question a whisper against the hum of the city outside. “Why we stand on this faulty bridge, each footfall a gamble?” Lucien’s mouth curved, a half‑smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “Because the bridge is the only place we meet halfway.” She stared at him, cheeks flushed, the scar a dark line against the pallor of her skin. “And if the bridge collapses?” He lifted his cane, the blade catching a stray beam, and placed it gently on the floor, leaning on it like a prop. “Then we build another.” Aurora stepped closer, the space between them shrinking to a breath’s length. Her hand hovered, fingers trembling, then brushed his cheek, the contact electric, a spark that sent a shiver up her arm. Lucien’s eyes widened, amber flickering like a candle guttering in wind. “The night you left,” she murmured, “I thought you’d forgotten me.” He chuckled, low and resonant, a sound that seemed to vibrate the very books lining the walls. “I carry you in my mind’s ledger, every case, every contract, every secret.” Their proximity made the air feel thicker, each inhalation a shared rhythm. Aurora’s heart hammered, her pulse echoing the rhythm of the city outside. She pressed her thumb to the scar, feeling the faint pulse beneath, a reminder of the past but also of resilience. “Do you still write me into your plans?” She asked, half‑joking, half‑serious, the edge of a smile playing on her lips. Lucien reached out, his hand hovering over her wrist before settling on the scar, his thumb tracing the line as if trying to read an invisible script. “I plan to keep you close, even if the world tells me otherwise.” The moment stretched, the room a cocoon of whispered confessions and half‑heard promises. Ptolemy, now perched on the back of a chair, stared at them with luminous green eyes, as if gauging the danger of the intimacy unfolding. Aurora tilted her head, a question lingering in her gaze. “And what about the betrayal? The lies?” His fingers tightened around the scar, a pressure that spoke of guilt and determination. “The lies were shields, not weapons. The betrayal… it was my mistake, not yours.” She let out a breath she didn’t know she’d been holding, the sound ragged, mixed with relief and lingering anger. “I built walls after you left. You think they’ll crumble with a touch?” Lucien lifted his hand, palm open, a silent offering. “Then let me be the stone that pries them open.” She stared at his knuckles, the faint bruises from countless fights, the subtle tremor in his touch. “You’ve always been a storm, Lucien.” He smiled, the amber eye glinting. “And you, my calm. The sea needs both.” Their words hung, a fragile truce between tide and shore. Aurora’s fingers curled around his wrist, the scar a reminder that pain could also be a map. Lucien’s other hand rested on the cane, the hidden blade now invisible, a promise tucked beneath polished wood. The door behind them creaked as the wind slipped through the thin walls, a reminder of the world beyond their bubble. Ptolemy leapt from the chair, landing softly on the rug, his fur brushing against Aurora’s leg. She knelt, pulling the cat into her arms, the soft purr a soundtrack to the uneasy peace. “If we’re sitting here, talking, does it mean we’re…?” Lucien folded his cane, tucking the blade back into its concealment, his movements deliberate. “It means we’re standing at the edge, waiting to see if we can jump together.” She looked up, eyes bright, the scar catching a stray beam, turning the crescent a shade of navy. “And if we fall?” He pressed the cane lightly against the floor, the metal whispering. “Then we rise, because we know the ground beneath us isn’t the same as the one we left.” Aurora drew a breath, feeling the weight of years lift a fraction, the tension in her shoulders easing. She placed a hand on his cheek, thumb brushing the corner of his jaw. “I don’t know if I can trust the night again,” she whispered. Lucien’s mouth hovered near her ear, his breath warm, his voice soft as a promise. “Then let me be the dawn you need.” Ptolemy let out a contented sigh, tail flicking, as if approving the truce. The rain outside tapped a steady rhythm against the window, a metronome for their hesitant hearts. Aurora’s lips trembled, caught between the urge to speak and the pull of the moment. She swallowed, the words tangled, and then, as if the world paused, she leaned in, her forehead meeting his, breaths mingling, a silent pact stamped in the quiet of Eva’s flat. The cane rang faintly as Lucien stood, the blade hidden again, and the night held its breath, waiting for a next step.
created_at"2026-04-24T15:36:14.407Z" 4/24/2026, 3:36:14 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
2"very"
3"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"flicked"
count3
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count4
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tension"
count3
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count3
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"footfall"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
2"glinting"
3"traced"
4"familiar"
5"reminder"
6"flicker"
7"tension"
8"resolve"
9"pulse"
10"vibrated"
11"whisper"
12"footfall"
13"electric"
14"echoing"
15"tracing"
16"weight"
17"trembled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences80
matches
0"d with relief"
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1630
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1233
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Aurora16
Frenchman1
London1
Ptolemy6
Eva1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
2"Frenchman"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.851
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sound that seemed to vibrate the very books lining the walls"
1"as if trying to read an invisible script"
2"as if gauging the danger of the intimacy unfolding"
3"as if approving the truce"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.613
wordCount1630
matches
0"not just to her words but to the pulse beneath them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
57.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean31.96
std11.21
cv0.351
sampleLengths
012
162
249
339
418
537
638
717
825
935
1052
1140
1230
1319
1438
1549
1632
1735
1829
1940
2034
2134
2247
2335
2420
2522
2627
2744
2811
2930
3045
3121
3240
3338
3417
3528
3633
3719
3823
3914
4045
4137
4226
4329
4422
4529
4644
4723
4829
4946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was listening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1233
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0227088402270884
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004866180048661801
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.12% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean14.95
std5.91
cv0.395
sampleLengths
012
121
224
317
412
520
617
721
818
915
103
1112
1225
1311
1422
155
169
178
1819
196
2025
2110
2219
2318
2415
2517
2623
2712
284
2914
307
3112
3215
3323
3424
3525
3621
3711
3820
3915
4013
4116
4210
4322
448
4520
4614
4711
4823
4913
47.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.21100917431192662
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences78
matches
0"He rested his ivory‑handled cane"
1"His platinum hair caught the"
2"She didn’t meet his eyes,"
3"she replied, voice steady despite"
4"He took a step inside,"
5"Her shoulders relaxed just enough"
6"She gestured to the cluttered"
7"He lowered his cane, letting"
8"She glanced at the night"
9"she said, the words hanging"
10"Her hand brushed her scar"
11"He didn’t touch it."
12"He shook his head, the"
13"She turned, face inches from"
14"She laughed again, softer this"
15"He knelt, the cane clattering"
16"He knelt at the edge"
17"He didn’t speak, but the"
18"She swatted at Ptolemy, a"
19"She stared at him, cheeks"
ratio0.462
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences78
matches
0"The lock clicked, the deadbolt"
1"Aurora stepped into the cramped"
2"Piles of leather‑bound books leaned"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby, flicked his"
4"Lucien’s voice cut through the"
5"He rested his ivory‑handled cane"
6"His platinum hair caught the"
7"Aurora’s hand twitched toward the"
8"She didn’t meet his eyes,"
9"she replied, voice steady despite"
10"He took a step inside,"
11"The nickname slipped out, warm,"
12"Her shoulders relaxed just enough"
13"She gestured to the cluttered"
14"Lucien's smile tugged at the"
15"Ptolemy let out a soft"
16"The Frenchman’s eyes flicked to"
17"He lowered his cane, letting"
18"The room seemed to close"
19"Aurora crossed to the window,"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"Aurora stepped into the cramped room, the faint smell of spiced broth hanging from the hallway, her eyes sweeping the walls."
1"The cat darted from under the chair, landing on the windowsill, his eyes wide, tracking the tension as if it were a moving mouse."
2"Aurora reached out, a tentative hand hovering over the feline, then settled on the back of his neck, feeling the fur’s coarse under her palm."
3"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the scar, then rose, his brow creasing with something that might have been regret or resolve."
4"She swatted at Ptolemy, a playful jab that sent him scuttling to the far side of the room, his tail a banner of defiance."
5"Lucien’s mouth curved, a half‑smile that didn’t reach his eyes."
6"Her hand hovered, fingers trembling, then brushed his cheek, the contact electric, a spark that sent a shiver up her arm."
7"Lucien reached out, his hand hovering over her wrist before settling on the scar, his thumb tracing the line as if trying to read an invisible script."
8"Ptolemy, now perched on the back of a chair, stared at them with luminous green eyes, as if gauging the danger of the intimacy unfolding."
9"His fingers tightened around the scar, a pressure that spoke of guilt and determination."
10"Ptolemy leapt from the chair, landing softly on the rug, his fur brushing against Aurora’s leg."
11"Aurora drew a breath, feeling the weight of years lift a fraction, the tension in her shoulders easing."
12"Ptolemy let out a contented sigh, tail flicking, as if approving the truce."
13"She swallowed, the words tangled, and then, as if the world paused, she leaned in, her forehead meeting his, breaths mingling, a silent pact stamped in the quie…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she replied, voice steady despite the knot tightening in her chest"
1"she said, the words hanging between them like unpaid rent"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.143
70.5528%