Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ026Z3QDV5FDBDC6R3N353N

Run Details

Duration:
24.8s
Cost:
$0.004414
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in hard, slanting sheets, turning the neon signs of Soho into smeared, bleeding colours on the wet tarmac. Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather watch strap was saturated, the water seeping into the cracks and weighing heavy on her wrist. She ignored it, her focus narrowed to the silhouette forty yards ahead—the man who’d been watching Silas’ bar for an hour, the man who’d bolted the second her shadow had lengthened in the doorway. Her shoes slapped against the puddles, the sound sharp and precise in the night. She cut through a knot of late-night revelers, her shoulders dipping with a soldier’s economy of movement. The suspect was quick, but he was panicking, his turns wide, his path erratic. He was burning out. Quinn wasn’t. She ate up the distance in grim silence, her cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp. He veered left, down a narrow alley reeking of stale beer and discarded kebabs. A dead end. She heard the clatter of a bin being knocked over, a grunt of frustration. She rounded the corner, hand going to the service weapon holstered at her hip. The alley was a canyon of dark brick, slick with grime. He was scrambling at a fire escape, the metal ladder retracting upwards with a hydraulic hiss. She didn’t hesitate. Her fingers found purchase on the cold, wet rungs of the permanent ladder bolted beside it. The metal bit into her palms. She climbed, the rain stinging her eyes. Below, the alley floor glowed with reflected light. Above, the man vanished over the roof’s edge. She pulled herself up, muscles in her arms burning a familiar protest, and swung a leg over the parapet. The rooftop was a landscape of tar paper and ancient air conditioning units. He was halfway across, leaping over a gap between buildings with a desperate, stumbling grace. Quinn followed, her boots finding solid purchase. The city spread out below them, a glittering, rain-washed expanse. It was a long way down. She kept her eyes on him. He slammed through a rooftop access door, the frame splintering. Quinn was through it a moment later, into a stairwell that smelled of damp concrete and old sweat. The chase went down, level after level, his footsteps echoing below her. It was a dizzying descent, a spiral into the bowels of the city. Ground floor. Sub-basement. The air grew colder, thick with the smell of earth and decay. The sound of running water became louder, a distant, rushing roar. He burst through a heavy service door at the bottom, and the sound hit her like a physical wall—a cacophony of voices, the chink of glass, the thrum of unseen machinery. She followed, pushing into a space that shouldn’t have existed. A vast, vaulted ceiling arched overhead, crisscrossed with pipes and conduits that wept steady drips. The floor was a patchwork of stone and metal grating, slick with moisture. It was an abandoned Tube station, but it was teeming with life. Stalls were carved into alcoves, draped with velvet or hung with chains. Flickering lanterns and strings of bare bulbs threw dancing shadows. The air hummed with low voices, bargaining in a dozen languages, some human, some not. The smell of ozone, strange spices, and something metallic and organic twisted in the air. This was the Veil Market. The man—her suspect—was weaving through the crowd, his panic now a focused desperation. He knew this place. He moved with the confidence of someone navigating their own neighborhood, slipping between a hulking figure draped in furs and a vendor selling jars of what looked like captured smoke. Quinn’s hand stayed on her weapon, but she didn’t draw. Not yet. A conspicuous police presence here would be like dropping a lit match into a powder keg. Her bearing shifted, becoming more watchful, her movements deliberately measured. She was a predator in unfamiliar territory, and she knew it. Her eyes scanned, cataloguing. A man with skin like polished obsidian haggling over a leather-bound book. A woman with too many fingers on one hand sorting through a tray of silver teeth. The crowd parted and closed around the suspect, swallowing him. She pushed forward, using her height and the hard set of her jaw to create a path. The market’s inhabitants looked at her, their gazes lingering on her practical coat, the bulge of her holster, the authoritative set of her shoulders. A low murmur followed in her wake. She paid it no mind, her senses straining. The suspect had to be close. This was a bottleneck. There. A flash of his dark coat disappearing behind a heavy velvet curtain marked ‘Information.’ She strode towards it, pushing aside the thick fabric. The noise of the market dimmed to a muffled thrum. She was in a narrow corridor, lined with doors. At the far end, another door swung shut. She moved to it, her hand flattening against the wood. It was warm, vibrating slightly with the bass note of a generator or something else. She pressed her ear to the surface. Silence. She drew her service pistol, the metal cool and familiar against her palm. The tactical part of her brain, the part honed in training and loss, took over. Assess. Plan. Execute. She turned the handle. It was unlocked. The room beyond was not a room at all, but a landing at the top of a steep, stone staircase that spiralled down into further darkness. A different kind of darkness. The air rising from below was colder, carrying a scent like old stone and something sharp, like burnt sugar. The suspect was gone, vanished down into the maze. Quinn stood at the precipice, the rain-washed city and its familiar, tangible crimes a world away behind her. Below lay the unknown. It was where the answers about the clique, about Silas, about the unexplained death of her partner Morris, likely resided. It was also where the rules she’d built her life and career on ceased to apply. She looked down at her worn leather watch, the face beaded with moisture. A timepiece for a world that measured moments in seconds and minutes. Down here, time might be measured differently. Her partner, Morris, had chased a lead into a place like this. He hadn’t come back whole. He hadn’t come back at all. A floorboard creaked behind her. She spun, weapon rising. Tomás Herrera stood there, his warm brown eyes wide, his olive skin pale in the dim light. He wasn’t armed, but he held a small, glowing vial that cast a sickly green light on his face, illuminating the scar along his forearm. The Saint Christopher medallion was a dull gleam against his chest. “That stairwell goes nowhere you want to go, Detective,” he said, his voice low, urgent. “It’s not a rabbit hole. It’s a throat.” Quinn didn’t lower her gun. Her voice was flat, hard. “The man I was chasing went down there.” “He’s running from something worse than you.” Herrera took a cautious step closer, his free hand raised. “This market… it has rules. But down there?” He shook his head. “No rules. Just hunger. You follow him, you don’t come back. Not the way you went in.” “Stand aside, Herrera.” Her eyes didn’t leave his. “Official police business.” “You’re not in your jurisdiction, Detective. Not even close.” His gaze flickered to the dark maw of the stairwell and back to her. The fear in his eyes was genuine, but there was something else—knowledge. The weary resignation of someone who’d seen the edge. “I patch the wounds people get in places like this. I’ve seen what comes back. Sometimes, it isn’t them.” Rain drummed on the distant roof above them, a reminder of the world outside. She could still turn back. File a report. Mark the suspect as lost. Retribute to the familiar streets where the monsters at least wore human faces. But Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his surprised expression, the way his eyes had looked past her at something unseen in his final moments. She looked down the stairs again, at the absolute, waiting blackness. Her choice wasn’t between going back or going forward. It was between the devil she knew and the abyss that might hold the truth. Quinn holstered her weapon. The click of the retention strap was deafeningly final in the quiet. “Tell me about the token,” she said to Herrera, her voice leaving no room for argument. “Tell me what it costs to get back out.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count4
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"cacophony"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count2
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"navigating"
count1
8
word"hulking"
count1
9
word"measured"
count3
10
word"predator"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"tangible"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"maw"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"cacophony"
5"velvet"
6"dancing"
7"navigating"
8"hulking"
9"measured"
10"predator"
11"scanned"
12"tangible"
13"flickered"
14"maw"
15"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1284
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Silas1
Morris3
Herrera3
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Silas"
4"Morris"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like captured smoke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.706
wordCount1417
matches
0"not a room at all, but a landing at the top of a steep, stone staircase"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
94.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean48.86
std23.55
cv0.482
sampleLengths
076
167
272
367
457
579
681
757
847
991
1066
1151
1264
137
1459
1558
1655
175
1857
1923
2018
2146
2211
2363
2440
2524
2635
2716
2825
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences120
matches
0"was saturated"
1"being knocked"
2"were carved"
3"was unlocked"
4"was gone"
41.27% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs210
matches
0"was panicking"
1"was burning"
2"was scrambling"
3"was teeming"
4"was weaving"
29.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences126
ratio0.04
matches
0"She ignored it, her focus narrowed to the silhouette forty yards ahead—the man who’d been watching Silas’ bar for an hour, the man who’d bolted the second her shadow had lengthened in the doorway."
1"He burst through a heavy service door at the bottom, and the sound hit her like a physical wall—a cacophony of voices, the chink of glass, the thrum of unseen machinery."
2"The man—her suspect—was weaving through the crowd, his panic now a focused desperation."
3"The fear in his eyes was genuine, but there was something else—knowledge."
4"But Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his surprised expression, the way his eyes had looked past her at something unseen in his final moments."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount140
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean11.25
std6.68
cv0.594
sampleLengths
022
120
234
314
417
514
64
72
816
914
103
1114
1214
1311
1416
153
1616
176
187
198
208
2119
2213
2315
247
2510
266
276
2810
2918
3012
3113
322
331
3412
3511
3631
3710
3815
3913
4012
4112
4210
4315
4415
455
4613
474
4830
4910
42.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences111
matches
0"She ignored it, her focus"
1"Her shoes slapped against the"
2"She cut through a knot"
3"He was burning out."
4"She ate up the distance"
5"He veered left, down a"
6"She heard the clatter of"
7"She rounded the corner, hand"
8"He was scrambling at a"
9"She didn’t hesitate."
10"Her fingers found purchase on"
11"She climbed, the rain stinging"
12"She pulled herself up, muscles"
13"He was halfway across, leaping"
14"It was a long way"
15"She kept her eyes on"
16"He slammed through a rooftop"
17"It was a dizzying descent,"
18"He burst through a heavy"
19"She followed, pushing into a"
ratio0.477
5.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences111
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather watch"
2"She ignored it, her focus"
3"Her shoes slapped against the"
4"She cut through a knot"
5"The suspect was quick, but"
6"He was burning out."
7"She ate up the distance"
8"He veered left, down a"
9"A dead end."
10"She heard the clatter of"
11"She rounded the corner, hand"
12"The alley was a canyon"
13"He was scrambling at a"
14"She didn’t hesitate."
15"Her fingers found purchase on"
16"The metal bit into her"
17"She climbed, the rain stinging"
18"She pulled herself up, muscles"
19"The rooftop was a landscape"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn was through it a moment later, into a stairwell that smelled of damp concrete and old sweat."
1"The room beyond was not a room at all, but a landing at the top of a steep, stone staircase that spiralled down into further darkness."
2"He wasn’t armed, but he held a small, glowing vial that cast a sickly green light on his face, illuminating the scar along his forearm."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice low, urgent"
1"she said, her voice leaving no room for argument"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.8163%