| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2064 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2064 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "magnetic" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "oppressive" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 184 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 191 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 2084 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park. The standing stones. Midnight. Come alone or don't come at all." | | 1 | "You came here for a reason," | | 2 | "Find out what they want. Then leave." | | 3 | "Don't pick that up." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 2036 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Aurora | 20 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 3 | | November | 1 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though conspiring with its neighbours" |
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| 56.05% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.44 | | wordCount | 2084 | | matches | | 0 | "not all at once, but in fragments" | | 1 | "Not oaks at all, but oak-shaped" | | 2 | "Not the gentle pulse she'd grown accustomed to, but a single sharp throb" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "stopped that thought" | | 1 | "saw that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 34.73 | | std | 28.49 | | cv | 0.82 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 104 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 84 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 98 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 76 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 89 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 57 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 67 | | 32 | 55 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 71 | | 37 | 62 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 76 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 55 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 91 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 99.54% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "was tilted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 191 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones emerged from the darkness the way a ship emerges from fog — not all at once, but in fragments." | | 1 | "Not oaks at all, but oak-shaped — the bark too smooth, the grain too uniform, as though someone had carved them from living wood and then planted them upright to watch the centuries pass." | | 2 | "The air inside the circle tasted different — thinner, colder, with an undertone of something floral she couldn't place." | | 3 | "At the centre, a single oak — a real one this time, massive and gnarled, its trunk wider than her arm span — held its branches aloft like a canopy." | | 4 | "In the spaces between the stones, the brambles grew too thick to see through, but she caught the occasional suggestion of movement in her peripheral vision — a branch shifting, a shadow reconfiguring." | | 5 | "Not to its usual resting state — it was cold, actively cold, a small ice against her skin." | | 6 | "She'd miscounted because one of them wasn't a groove at all — it was a seam in the bark, slightly darker than the rest, running perpendicular to the others at about shoulder height." | | 7 | "In the depression between two roots sat a bundle of cloth — dark fabric, tied with a cord of something that glittered faintly in the beam." | | 8 | "No signal, but a notification sat in the centre of the display — not a text, not an app alert, just a line of grey text against a black background." | | 9 | "Something in between — a long, low exhalation, the kind of sound a body makes when it's been holding its breath for hours and finally lets go." | | 10 | "For a fraction of a second — half a heartbeat, maybe less — the surface of the stone wasn't stone at all." | | 11 | "The sky above the grove wasn't night — it was absence." | | 12 | "Closer this time, or maybe just quieter — a whisper of sound that brushed past her left ear and carried with it a scent she recognized: petrichor, the smell of rain on dry earth, except it hadn't rained in days and the air inside the circle was too cold for rain." | | 13 | "It had the proportions of a woman — two arms, two legs, a head — but it stood wrong." | | 14 | "Its arms hung at its sides, and its head was tilted at an angle that no neck should have allowed, and its skin — if it was skin — was the same grey as the standing stones, smooth and featureless in the absence of light." | | 15 | "The voice came from the nearest figure — the one directly ahead, between the two stones she'd entered through." |
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| 98.18% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2020 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 85 | | adverbRatio | 0.04207920792079208 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007425742574257425 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 191 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 191 | | mean | 10.91 | | std | 10.59 | | cv | 0.971 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 39.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2670157068062827 | | totalSentences | 191 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 88.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the next, and the" | | 1 | "Then back at the phone." | | 2 | "Then the stone was just" | | 3 | "Then a third." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the zipper higher" | | 1 | "She'd almost deleted it." | | 2 | "It had guided her across" | | 3 | "She followed them anyway, her" | | 4 | "She passed a wooden bench." | | 5 | "She stopped at the edge." | | 6 | "It held, like a fist" | | 7 | "She stepped between two of" | | 8 | "She crouched and touched one." | | 9 | "It was real." | | 10 | "She didn't get close enough" | | 11 | "Her voice came out thin" | | 12 | "It didn't echo." | | 13 | "She checked her phone." | | 14 | "She hadn't noticed when." | | 15 | "Her flashlight swung wide and" | | 16 | "She didn't know what that" | | 17 | "She didn't like not knowing." | | 18 | "She moved toward the oak." | | 19 | "She stopped that thought before" |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 69.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 118 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's" | | 1 | "She pulled the zipper higher" | | 2 | "The text from the unknown" | | 3 | "The standing stones." | | 4 | "She'd almost deleted it." | | 5 | "It had guided her across" | | 6 | "Tonight it burned so steady" | | 7 | "The park stretched ahead of" | | 8 | "The trails that wound through" | | 9 | "She followed them anyway, her" | | 10 | "Aurora kept her flashlight low." | | 11 | "The beam jittered across patches" | | 12 | "She passed a wooden bench." | | 13 | "A rusted bin." | | 14 | "The remnants of a rope" | | 15 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 16 | "She stopped at the edge." | | 17 | "The Heartstone flared." | | 18 | "Aurora hissed through her teeth" | | 19 | "The warmth didn't subside." |
| | ratio | 0.781 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 22.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It had guided her across London twice now, its warmth intensifying like a compass needle swinging toward magnetic north." | | 1 | "First the nearest: a column of grey stone taller than her, leaning slightly inward as though conspiring with its neighbours." | | 2 | "Not oaks at all, but oak-shaped — the bark too smooth, the grain too uniform, as though someone had carved them from living wood and then planted them upright t…" | | 3 | "Not the gentle pulse she'd grown accustomed to, but a single sharp throb that radiated heat through her sternum and down both arms." | | 4 | "Cool and slightly damp, with the faintest vibration running through its stem, as though something underground hummed at a frequency just below the threshold of …" | | 5 | "The voice had come from everywhere and nowhere, a woman's voice, low and textured, like someone who hadn't spoken in a long time and had to test each word befor…" | | 6 | "Roots sprawled outward in every direction, thick as her wrist, rising and falling in undulations that created natural hollows between them." | | 7 | "In the depression between two roots sat a bundle of cloth — dark fabric, tied with a cord of something that glittered faintly in the beam." | | 8 | "All of them at once, vibrating in their foundations, sending tremors through the impossible grass that Aurora felt in her ankles and the base of her spine." | | 9 | "Smooth and grey and featureless except for the suggestion of closed eyes and a mouth slightly open, as though the exhalation had come from its lungs." | | 10 | "A flat, featureless darkness that started at the tips of the highest branches and stretched upward into something that didn't have a top." | | 11 | "Closer this time, or maybe just quieter — a whisper of sound that brushed past her left ear and carried with it a scent she recognized: petrichor, the smell of …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |