Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ029GW39B8B7CY7ATCK2EQ5

Run Details

Duration:
37.3s
Cost:
$0.005609
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last of the summer twilight bled from the sky as Rory pushed through a thicket of overgrown hawthorn, thorns snatching at her jeans. The pendant hanging under her jacket thrummed, a persistent, low-grade heat against her sternum. It had led her here, a steady pulse drawing her across Richmond Park as the other joggers and dog-walkers peeled away into the gathering dark. Now, past the ancient oaks that marked the boundary, the air changed. It was thicker. The evening breeze that had rustled the park’s grass died, replaced by a stillness that felt humid, close. The wildflowers underfoot—an impossible riot of bluebells and foxglove—crunched softly, their scent cloyingly sweet, like perfume on old velvet. Aurora paused, her breath misting faintly in the chill that didn’t belong to a London summer night. The Grove was a clearing, but it felt like a mouth. “Right,” she murmured, the sound swallowed. She pulled out her phone. No signal. Of course. The time read 9:14 PM. She’d left the park entrance at 8:30. The walk shouldn’t have taken more than twenty minutes. A branch snapped in the tree line behind her. She spun, heart kicking. Nothing moved among the black shapes of the oaks. Just shadows. The pendant pulsed harder, a frantic little thump-thump against her ribs. This was wrong. Eva’s tip about the ‘odd energy fluctuations’ near the old stones had sounded like a lark, another one of her friend’s half-baked paranormal investigations. But the Heartstone’s reaction was real. It had never behaved like this. She took a step towards the centre of the clearing, where the largest standing stone reared up, its surface etched with spirals that seemed to shift if she stared too long. The air here hummed. Not with insect noise—that was absent—but with a deep, subsonic vibration she felt in her teeth. Then came the whisper. It wasn’t words. It was the ghost of a sigh, sliding around the perimeter of the trees. Rory’s fingers tightened around her phone, the plastic creaking. She scanned the darkness. At the edge of her vision, to the left, something flickered. A blot of deeper black against the night, there and gone. Like a figure stepping behind a tree. “Hello?” Her voice came out too sharp. She swallowed, tried again. “Is someone there?” The whisper answered, a faint hiss of breath drawn through dead leaves. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. The wildflowers at her feet trembled, though there was no wind. She forced herself to move, to keep walking toward the central stone. Her mission, if she could call it that, was to take a reading. Record any anomaly. Be the empirical counterpoint to Eva’s breathless stories of Fae and hidden realms. But the data she was collecting now was all wrong. The temperature was dropping, visible plumes of her breath now. The time on her phone still read 9:14. A soft, wet sound came from behind her. Like a footstep in mud. She didn’t turn this time. She kept her eyes locked on the standing stone, its bulk a grim silhouette against the star-pricked sky. The spiral carvings seemed to gleam with a faint, internal luminescence, a sickly greenish phosphorescence that had nothing to do with the moon, which was still hidden below the horizon. *You are not alone.* The thought wasn’t hers. It sat in her mind, cold and certain, like a stone dropped into a well. Rory’s breath hitched. Cool-headed. Intelligent. Quick out-of-the-box thinking. The words were a mantra. She catalogued the sensations: the thrumming pendant, the auditory hallucinations, the temperature inversion, the temporal distortion. There had to be a rational explanation. Atmospheric conditions. Infrasound from the old stones. Suggestion. Another flicker in her peripheral vision. This time, closer. Not a shadow. A shape. Tall, impossibly thin, stretching like taffy before snapping back into nothing. A child’s laugh, clear and bell-like, chimed from the oak canopy. Rory’s blood iced. That was new. That was specific. She risked a glance upward. The branches were a dense, interlaced blackness. Nothing moved. But the laugh hung in the air, twisting, warping, slowing down into a low, gurgling chuckle that seemed to slither down the bark of the nearest tree. Her training, her logic, was fraying at the edges. She fumbled in her pocket for the EMF meter Eva had given her. Her fingers were clumsy, stiff. As she drew it out, its small lights were dead. She shook it. Nothing. The central stone was ten feet away now. The green glow intensified, casting long, wavering shadows that moved independently of any light source. One of them, long and spindly, crept towards her feet. She stopped. The pendant’s heat was searing now, a brand against her skin. It wasn’t just pulsing; it was vibrating, a frantic, silent scream. It knew. It knew what was here. The whisper returned, clearer this time. It was a woman’s voice, low and amused, murmuring just behind her right ear. “*Pretty thing.*” Rory’s back stiffened. The breath on her neck was cold, smelling of damp earth and something else, something sweet and rotten, like decaying flowers. Every instinct screamed at her to run, to bolt back through the hawthorn and never look back. But running meant showing fear. And the thing behind her breath felt ancient, patient. She stood frozen, the cold spreading from her neck down her spine. The wildflowers around her boots began to wilt, their bright petals curling and blackening in rapid decay. The spreading circle of death widened, a creeping stain on the impossible meadow. Then, from the direction of the park, a faint, distant sound carried through the stillness. The clip-clop of a horse’s hooves on pavement, and the chime of a bicycle bell. Normal sounds. London sounds. They were a world away, but they were a tether. The presence behind her stiffened. The whisper cut off. A new sound arose within the Grove, a low, grinding rumble from the standing stones themselves. The green glow flickered violently. The shadows on the ground writhed and retreated. Rory didn’t wait. She took one step back, then another, her eyes fixed on the decaying flowers, then on the central stone where the spirals now seemed to twist in agitated loops. She turned, slowly, deliberately. The space behind her was empty. Just the dark, watching trees. She walked backwards, not taking her eyes off the clearing, until her shoulders hit the rough bark of the boundary oak. She slipped through the thicket, thorns tearing at her jacket, and didn’t stop until she was back on the manicured grass of Richmond Park, under a streetlight that cast a reassuring orange glow. Her phone read 9:17 PM. She’d been in the Grove for three minutes. The pendant was cool against her skin, inert. In the distance, the bicycle bell chimed again, cheerful and mundane. Rory stood, trembling, the sweet rot smell still clinging to her clothes, and knew with cold certainty that the thing in the Grove would remember her scent. And that the next time the pendant pulsed, it would be an invitation she couldn’t refuse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count4
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"wavering"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"velvet"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"etched"
5"whisper"
6"scanned"
7"flickered"
8"trembled"
9"flicker"
10"wavering"
11"searing"
12"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1182
ratio0.005
matches
0"You are not alone."
1"Pretty thing."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1155
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Richmond2
Park2
London2
Grove4
Heartstone1
Eva3
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a mouth"
1"spirals that seemed to shift if she stared too long"
2"chuckle that seemed to slither down the bark of the nearest tree"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1182
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.82
std21.31
cv0.595
sampleLengths
075
168
236
39
465
551
64
759
814
931
1069
1113
1253
134
1419
1544
1625
1711
1850
1941
2033
2131
2220
232
2455
2542
2644
279
2829
2947
3054
3113
3262
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was collecting"
1"was dropping"
2"was fraying"
3"was searing"
4"was vibrating"
5"wasn’t just pulsing"
75.89% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences128
ratio0.023
matches
0"The wildflowers underfoot—an impossible riot of bluebells and foxglove—crunched softly, their scent cloyingly sweet, like perfume on old velvet."
1"Not with insect noise—that was absent—but with a deep, subsonic vibration she felt in her teeth."
2"It wasn’t just pulsing; it was vibrating, a frantic, silent scream."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount226
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.03982300884955752
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.01327433628318584
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean9.23
std7.08
cv0.767
sampleLengths
024
114
225
312
43
518
619
717
811
96
105
112
122
135
147
159
169
174
189
192
2011
213
2224
236
246
2531
264
2716
284
293
3014
319
324
3311
3411
357
367
374
383
3912
408
4111
4212
4313
443
4513
4610
4710
488
498
46.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners44
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then came the whisper."
1"Then, from the direction of"
2"Just the dark, watching trees."
ratio0.027
87.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences112
matches
0"It had led her here,"
1"It was thicker."
2"she murmured, the sound swallowed"
3"She pulled out her phone."
4"She’d left the park entrance"
5"She spun, heart kicking."
6"It had never behaved like"
7"She took a step towards"
8"It wasn’t words."
9"It was the ghost of"
10"She scanned the darkness."
11"Her voice came out too"
12"She swallowed, tried again."
13"It seemed to come from"
14"She forced herself to move,"
15"Her mission, if she could"
16"She didn’t turn this time."
17"She kept her eyes locked"
18"*You are not alone.*"
19"It sat in her mind,"
ratio0.33
58.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences112
matches
0"The last of the summer"
1"The pendant hanging under her"
2"It had led her here,"
3"It was thicker."
4"The evening breeze that had"
5"The wildflowers underfoot—an impossible riot"
6"Aurora paused, her breath misting"
7"The Grove was a clearing,"
8"she murmured, the sound swallowed"
9"She pulled out her phone."
10"The time read 9:14 PM."
11"She’d left the park entrance"
12"The walk shouldn’t have taken"
13"A branch snapped in the"
14"She spun, heart kicking."
15"Nothing moved among the black"
16"The pendant pulsed harder, a"
17"This was wrong."
18"Eva’s tip about the"
19"It had never behaved like"
ratio0.804
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Now, past the ancient oaks"
ratio0.009
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Not with insect noise—that was absent—but with a deep, subsonic vibration she felt in her teeth."
1"The spiral carvings seemed to gleam with a faint, internal luminescence, a sickly greenish phosphorescence that had nothing to do with the moon, which was still…"
2"But the laugh hung in the air, twisting, warping, slowing down into a low, gurgling chuckle that seemed to slither down the bark of the nearest tree."
3"The green glow intensified, casting long, wavering shadows that moved independently of any light source."
4"She slipped through the thicket, thorns tearing at her jacket, and didn’t stop until she was back on the manicured grass of Richmond Park, under a streetlight t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
80.2411%