Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ02A6WDW7JR48FS5X91BEP3

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Duration:
49.6s
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$0.002339
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Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted as they stepped through the portal, a sensation like passing through cold water that warmed instantly. Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae-forged blade at her hip, its cold comfort a familiar anchor in this sudden disorientation. The amber glow of the sky bathed everything in an unnatural warmth that made her cheeks flush despite the cool air. "Welcome to Dymas," Isolde whispered, her silver hair seeming to absorb rather than reflect the strange light. "Where gluttony wears the crown of plenty." Aurora shielded her eyes, taking in the sprawling landscape that stretched before them. Vines thick as her arm snaked across the ground, bearing fruits that pulsed with internal light. Some glowed blue, others shimmered violet, and a few pulsed with the deep crimson of her Heartstone pendant. Nyx materialized beside her, their shadow-form rippling as they adjusted to the realm's energy. "The air tastes of desire and satisfaction. Almost cloying." "Focus on the path," Isolde advised, gesturing toward a winding road paved with what looked like crystallized honey. "Remember, time moves differently here. What feels like minutes may be hours outside." They began walking along the path, their footsteps muffled by the strangely soft ground. The vegetation grew more extravagant with each step. Trees bore fruits that changed color when touched, flowers that chimed like tiny bells when disturbed. "My mother would've loved this place," Aurora murmured, reaching out to touch a petal that shimmered like mother-of-pearl. "She always said gardening was the closest humans could get to magic." "You're not in a garden," Nyx noted, stopping abruptly. "You're in a stomach." Aurora followed their gaze to see what they meant. Ahead, the ground began to undulate like flesh, and the trees resembled intestines coiling upward. The air grew thicker, carrying the scent of baking bread and something sweet like honey wine. "Let's find higher ground," Aurora suggested, already scanning for an escape route. Her fingers brushed against her Heartstone pendant, which pulsed warmly against her chest. Isolde led them toward a series of stone steps that seemed to grow organically from the landscape. They climbed until they reached a plateau overlooking a vast valley filled with impossible architecture. Structures resembling giant table settings dotted the landscape—chairs carved from marbled meat, tables made of woven bread, and chandeliers dripping with glowing amber liquid. "The Prince's feast awaits," Isolde announced unnecessarily, her voice carrying without effort. "Though whether as guest or menu remains to be seen." Aurora's stomach clenched. The scale of indulgence was overwhelming. She saw figures in the distance—some human, others less so—preparing enormous dishes using tools that defied logic. A woman with three arms kneaded dough that expanded before her very eyes. A man with skin like polished copper stirred a pot that seemed to contain liquid stars. "They're cooking with stars?" Nyx wondered aloud, their shadow-form momentarily solidifying with curiosity. "Not stars," Isolde corrected. "Souls. Contracted helbound souls who chose this punishment over damnation." Aurora felt sick. She touched her left wrist where the crescent-shaped scar rested, a childhood memory grounding her in reality. "We need to find a way back. Or at least somewhere less... consumptive." "The Heartstone grows stronger here," Aurora realized, her fingers tightening around the pendant. Its crimson glow was now visible even in the amber light. "It's pointing toward something." They followed the pendant's pull, descending into a marketplace where everything was for sale—though the currency remained a mystery. Vendors offered experiences rather than goods: a bite of forbidden fruit, a sip of memory wine, a dance that promised ecstasy. One vendor—a being with multiple faces, each showing different emotions—beckoned to them. "Fresh arrivals! Would you like to taste eternity? Or perhaps purchase a moment of perfect joy? Prices are reasonable for newcomers." Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form rippling with interest. "What do you accept as payment?" The multi-faced being smiled with its central face. "Memories. Dreams. Time. What do you have to spare?" Aurora stepped back, not wanting to part with any of those things. "We're just passing through." "Just passing through!" The being laughed, a chorus of different voices. "No one just passes through Dymas. This is the realm of desire made manifest. You came here for something." Isolde stepped forward gracefully. "We seek knowledge. Not indulgence." "Ah, knowledge!" The being shifted to a thoughtful expression. "That can be arranged. For the price of a future you haven't yet lived." Isolde didn't flinch. "I have lived three centuries. What is one more?" The being's faces cycled through emotions rapidly. "Not yours to trade. Hers." It nodded toward Aurora. "Or theirs." It gestured to Nyx. "The shadows remember little," Nyx replied calmly. "But they know when to retreat." Aurora's heart raced. "What do you know about us?" "I know you carry a key," the being said, fixing its attention on her Heartstone pendant. "And a weapon that shouldn't exist in a stomach like this." The pendant pulsed violently against Aurora's chest. "What does that mean?" "It means you're not here by accident," the being replied. "Someone brought you here. For a purpose." Before Aurora could question further, the ground trembled. A shadow fell across them as something massive approached. A creature made of living cuisine lumbered past—its body formed of roast meats, its eyes glowing coals, its steps shaking the very ground. "The Prince's appetizer," Isolde whispered, pulling them back as the creature passed. "We should find shelter quickly." They ducked into a nearby structure that resembled a wine barrel turned on its side. Inside, they found themselves in a surprisingly cozy space lined with shelves holding bottles of varying sizes and colors. "The Cellar of Unfulfilled Desires," Isolde read from a sign written in a language that seemed to rearrange itself as she looked at it. "Safe enough. For now." Aurora leaned against a wall that felt like velvet. "What did that creature mean about me bringing us here? I didn't choose this place." "Someone did," Nyx replied, their form barely visible in the dim light filtering through the "wooden" walls. "The pendant brought you here. It's attuned to something in this realm." "Like a compass," Aurora realized, pulling the pendant from her shirt. It glowed with a steady crimson light. "But toward what?" Isolde knelt, touching the floor. "There's a current beneath us. Something moving through this realm's foundations." As if in response, the entire cellar shuddered. Bottles fell from shelves, their contents releasing clouds of colored smoke. The air grew thick with impossible scents—ozone, cinnamon, old books, and something metallic like blood. "The Veil is thin here," Nyx warned, their form flickering. "Things from other realms might slip through." Aurora heard a whispering sound coming from the floorboards. "What's that?" "It's the foundation singing," Isolde explained, placing a hand on the ground. "Dymas is built on ancient magic. Gluttony consumes everything, even time and space." The pendant grew warmer against Aurora's skin, almost hot. It pulsed in rhythm with the cellar's tremors. "We need to follow it," Aurora decided, standing up. "Whatever it's pointing to." Before Isolde could respond, a section of the cellar wall dissolved into swirling darkness. Through the opening, they could see a path leading downward into glowing depths. "The Prince's larder," Isolde breathed. "No mortal should enter there." But the pendant pulsed insistently, pulling Aurora toward the opening. "It's our way out," she insisted. "Or at least answers." Nyx flowed toward the opening. "Shadows remember this place. There's a portal hidden in the larder. One that leads elsewhere." As they stepped through the dissolving wall, the air grew colder despite Dymas's warm climate. The path descended into crystalline caverns where fruits grew upside down from the ceiling and rivers of liquid candy flowed through channels carved from rock. Aurora's breath caught as they reached a chamber where the walls displayed shifting scenes of feasts through the ages—some human, others involving beings that defied description. In the center of the room stood an altar of what appeared to be fused utensils, atop which rested a gemstone that seemed to drink the light around it. "The Heartstone," Aurora whispered, her pendant reacting violently to the stone on the altar. "They're connected somehow." Isolde approached cautiously. "The artifact that binds this realm to the others. The Prince's source of power." Nyx drifted closer to the altar. "It's also the lock on the portal to Hel's deeper realms. The one that leads to the true punishment." Aurora reached out, her fingers trembling. The pendant pulsed so intensely it felt like it might burn her skin. "If we take this..." "You could collapse Dymas into chaos," Isolde finished. "Or free everyone trapped here. The choice was never simple, was it?" Before Aurora could make her decision, the chamber entrance filled with shadow. Prince Belphegor stood there, his form a blend of human and impossible appetites, his eyes like polished plates reflecting their terrified faces.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde announced unnecessarily [unnecessarily]"
1"Nyx wondered aloud [aloud]"
2"Nyx replied calmly [calmly]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.373
leniency0.746
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.09
79.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"warmly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
4
adverb"intensely"
count1
highlights
0"warmly"
1"very"
2"quickly"
3"cautiously"
4"intensely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count7
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"desire"
count2
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count3
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"structure"
count1
14
word"velvet"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
16
word"crystalline"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"shimmered"
4"desire"
5"crystallized"
6"footsteps"
7"stomach"
8"scanning"
9"dance"
10"perfect"
11"raced"
12"trembled"
13"structure"
14"velvet"
15"depths"
16"crystalline"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
48.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1480
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
36.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1016
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae-forged1
Aurora23
Heartstone3
Nyx10
Isolde15
Dymas1
Belphegor1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Dymas"
4"Belphegor"
places(empty)
globalScore0.368
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"looked like crystallized honey"
1"pot that seemed to contain liquid stars"
2"language that seemed to rearrange itself as she looked at it"
3"felt like velvet"
4"gemstone that seemed to drink the light around it"
5"felt like it might burn her skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1480
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
96.17% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean25.52
std12.42
cv0.487
sampleLengths
061
124
247
323
431
538
630
713
840
925
1056
1122
1255
1313
1414
1533
1628
1740
1833
1914
2017
2116
2230
239
2423
2512
2622
2713
289
2927
3011
3117
3240
3317
3434
3528
3624
3729
3821
3916
4034
4117
4211
4325
4417
4513
4627
4710
4820
4920
85.98% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences91
matches
0"being smiled"
1"being laughed"
2"being shifted"
3"being said"
4"being replied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences131
ratio0.053
matches
0"Structures resembling giant table settings dotted the landscape—chairs carved from marbled meat, tables made of woven bread, and chandeliers dripping with glowing amber liquid."
1"She saw figures in the distance—some human, others less so—preparing enormous dishes using tools that defied logic."
2"They followed the pendant's pull, descending into a marketplace where everything was for sale—though the currency remained a mystery."
3"One vendor—a being with multiple faces, each showing different emotions—beckoned to them."
4"A creature made of living cuisine lumbered past—its body formed of roast meats, its eyes glowing coals, its steps shaking the very ground."
5"The air grew thick with impossible scents—ozone, cinnamon, old books, and something metallic like blood."
6"Aurora's breath caught as they reached a chamber where the walls displayed shifting scenes of feasts through the ages—some human, others involving beings that defied description."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1032
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03682170542635659
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.016472868217054265
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11.3
std5.79
cv0.512
sampleLengths
019
121
221
317
47
513
616
718
814
99
1018
1113
1214
138
1416
1518
1612
179
184
199
2015
2116
2212
2313
2417
2515
2624
2712
2810
293
306
3117
3213
3316
3413
354
3610
373
3817
3913
4013
4111
424
4319
4421
4512
4621
478
486
498
66.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4198473282442748
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences87
matches
0"They began walking along the"
1"Her fingers brushed against her"
2"They climbed until they reached"
3"She saw figures in the"
4"She touched her left wrist"
5"Its crimson glow was now"
6"They followed the pendant's pull,"
7"It nodded toward Aurora"
8"It gestured to Nyx"
9"They ducked into a nearby"
10"It glowed with a steady"
11"It pulsed in rhythm with"
ratio0.138
23.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air shifted as they"
1"Aurora tightened her grip on"
2"The amber glow of the"
3"Isolde whispered, her silver hair"
4"Aurora shielded her eyes, taking"
5"Vines thick as her arm"
6"Some glowed blue, others shimmered"
7"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
8"Isolde advised, gesturing toward a"
9"They began walking along the"
10"The vegetation grew more extravagant"
11"Trees bore fruits that changed"
12"Aurora murmured, reaching out to"
13"Nyx noted, stopping abruptly"
14"Aurora followed their gaze to"
15"The air grew thicker, carrying"
16"Aurora suggested, already scanning for"
17"Her fingers brushed against her"
18"Isolde led them toward a"
19"They climbed until they reached"
ratio0.874
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"Before Aurora could question further,"
1"As if in response, the"
2"Before Isolde could respond, a"
3"Before Aurora could make her"
ratio0.046
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The air shifted as they stepped through the portal, a sensation like passing through cold water that warmed instantly."
1"The amber glow of the sky bathed everything in an unnatural warmth that made her cheeks flush despite the cool air."
2"Aurora shielded her eyes, taking in the sprawling landscape that stretched before them."
3"Trees bore fruits that changed color when touched, flowers that chimed like tiny bells when disturbed."
4"She saw figures in the distance—some human, others less so—preparing enormous dishes using tools that defied logic."
5"Vendors offered experiences rather than goods: a bite of forbidden fruit, a sip of memory wine, a dance that promised ecstasy."
6"A creature made of living cuisine lumbered past—its body formed of roast meats, its eyes glowing coals, its steps shaking the very ground."
7"Aurora's breath caught as they reached a chamber where the walls displayed shifting scenes of feasts through the ages—some human, others involving beings that d…"
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Isolde announced unnecessarily, her voice carrying without effort"
1"Nyx wondered aloud, their shadow-form momentarily solidifying with curiosity"
2"Aurora realized, her fingers tightening around the pendant"
3"The being laughed, a chorus of different voices"
4"Nyx warned, their form flickering"
5"Aurora whispered, her pendant reacting violently to the stone on the altar"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde advised (advise)"
2"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx noted (note)"
4"Aurora suggested (suggest)"
5"Isolde announced unnecessarily (announce)"
6"Isolde corrected (correct)"
7"The being laughed (be laugh)"
8"the being said (be say)"
9"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
10"Nyx warned (warn)"
11"Isolde explained (explain)"
12"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
13"she insisted (insist)"
14"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.254
leniency0.507
rawRatio0.882
effectiveRatio0.448
68.3987%