| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1259 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1259 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gleaming" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "glint" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "hulking" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "anticipation" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "e with disbelief" | | 1 | "g with anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1253 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 956 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 3 | | French | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Old | 1 | | Vic | 1 | | Lucien | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Old" | | 3 | "Vic" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.872 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like regret threading through the" | | 1 | "as if measuring its depth" | | 2 | "eye that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken apologies" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1253 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.34% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 29.14 | | std | 12.87 | | cv | 0.442 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "She heard a soft thud behind her—Ptolemy, the tabby, leapt onto the doorframe, eyes narrowed." | | 1 | "\"—to break me,\" she finished, voice barely above a whisper." | | 2 | "He held it up, the steel reflecting his own face—half‑demon, half‑man, all danger." | | 3 | "Aurora flinched, but the sound of the cat's hiss sparked a memory—Lucien's hand, warm, pulling her from a burning building, his breath smelling of ash and cheap perfume." | | 4 | "The door slammed open, and a hulking figure lunged—a masked courier, shoulders broad, a tattoo of a snarling wolf etched on his forearm." | | 5 | "The night outside pressed against the thin walls, the city humming with unseen danger, and in the centre of the flat, two figures stood, their past and present colliding in a breathless moment—just as a second, taller silhouette stepped through the doorway, a gleaming silver ring flashing on a finger, and the air cracked with a promise of betrayal." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 405 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.024691358024691357 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0049382716049382715 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.19 | | std | 7.37 | | cv | 0.559 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 45.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.29473684210526313 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 52.84% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Her left wrist twitched, the" | | 1 | "She heard a soft thud" | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal suit clung" | | 3 | "His platinum hair caught a" | | 4 | "He lifted a brow, a" | | 5 | "She set the parcel on" | | 6 | "Her heart hammered, a familiar" | | 7 | "He glanced at the ledger," | | 8 | "His voice softened, a hint" | | 9 | "She brushed past the cat," | | 10 | "He lifted a hand, fingers" | | 11 | "he replied, his tone edged" | | 12 | "She leaned against the counter," | | 13 | "He held it up, the" | | 14 | "He lowered it, the point" | | 15 | "she asked, voice steadier than" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 17 | "She stared at the blade," | | 18 | "he said, his hand slipping" | | 19 | "She could feel the heat" |
| | ratio | 0.418 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The brass knocker clanged twice," | | 1 | "Aurora stared at the empty" | | 2 | "Her left wrist twitched, the" | | 3 | "She heard a soft thud" | | 4 | "the voice said, low and" | | 5 | "Lucien stood in the doorway," | | 6 | "His tailored charcoal suit clung" | | 7 | "His platinum hair caught a" | | 8 | "He lifted a brow, a" | | 9 | "She set the parcel on" | | 10 | "Lucien stepped forward, the cane" | | 11 | "Her heart hammered, a familiar" | | 12 | "He glanced at the ledger," | | 13 | "His voice softened, a hint" | | 14 | "Aurora crossed the room, each" | | 15 | "She brushed past the cat," | | 16 | "Lucien's gaze lingered on the" | | 17 | "He lifted a hand, fingers" | | 18 | "The ivory cane shifted, the" | | 19 | "Aurora's eyes narrowed." |
| | ratio | 0.97 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Lucien could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "His tailored charcoal suit clung to a form that seemed both human and something else, the amber eye flickering like a dying ember, the other black as midnight." | | 1 | "He lifted a hand, fingers tracing the curve of the scar as if measuring its depth." | | 2 | "He brandished a crude, iron‑tipped baton, eyes wild with a hunger that seemed less human than demon." | | 3 | "The man choked, a spray of dark blood arcing across the tiles, then collapsed, his body hitting the doorframe with a hollow thud." | | 4 | "Lucien's hand slipped from her wrist, resting instead on the back of her head, fingers threading through her black hair." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice softened, a hint of something like regret threading through the syllables" | | 1 | "He lowered, the point resting just inches from her skin" | | 2 | "she asked, voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the courier snarled (snarl)" | | 1 | "she warned (warn)" | | 2 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.229 | | leniency | 0.457 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |