| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1281 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1281 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "complex" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "potential" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "profound" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "solitary" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "wavering" | | 16 | "resonance" | | 17 | "beacon" | | 18 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1279 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "thump… thump… thump" | | 1 | "thump" | | 2 | "thump" | | 3 | "thump" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Wren | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 15 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.824 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "turf that seemed to pulse gently underfoot" | | 1 | "as if guiding them" | | 2 | "knot that seemed to watch them pass" | | 3 | "not quite a grasping hand" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.127 | | wordCount | 1279 | | matches | | 0 | "not illuminating, but seeming to absorb the darkness" | | 1 | "not grey granite, but a pale, almost translucent material" | | 2 | "not like pillars, but like elongated droplets, frozen mid-fall from the earth towa" | | 3 | "not from any visible source, but from the stones themselves, vibrating in the marrow of her b" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 42.63 | | std | 20.67 | | cv | 0.485 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 97 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 76 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 69 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 79 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 41 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "were shaped" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "were looking" | | 1 | "were wading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "She held the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt; its warmth against her sternum was a steady, alien pulse." | | 1 | "The air grew warmer, carrying a complex perfume—honey, rain-soaked earth, and a metallic tang like ozone." | | 2 | "Light didn’t pour in; it bloomed in floating motes of gold and silver that drifted in lazy currents, painting moving constellations on the trunks." | | 3 | "They were not colours Rory could name—a hue between twilight and a deep, resonant hum." | | 4 | "The bark wasn't rough; it was smooth and warm, and it yielded slightly under her touch, like skin over muscle." | | 5 | "Rory noticed details as her senses adjusted: insects with wings like stained glass flitted between blooms; a small creature, furry and with too many legs, skittered up a trunk and vanished into a knot that seemed to watch them pass." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1118 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03220035778175313 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01073345259391771 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.37 | | std | 7.29 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 46.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.33707865168539325 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She held the Heartstone pendant" | | 1 | "They’d slipped through the iron-bound" | | 2 | "They moved forward." | | 3 | "It wasn’t a heartbeat." | | 4 | "It was deeper, more granular," | | 5 | "They stepped out onto a" | | 6 | "They were looking into a" | | 7 | "They were not colours Rory" | | 8 | "She plucked a flower from" | | 9 | "Its stem was cool, the" | | 10 | "They descended into the meadow" | | 11 | "She reached for a branch" | | 12 | "They followed a natural depression" | | 13 | "It wasn’t fear, exactly, but" | | 14 | "They rounded a massive trunk," | | 15 | "It pulsed with a light" | | 16 | "Her usual riddle-like cadence was" | | 17 | "She felt the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 18 | "They hadn’t come here to" | | 19 | "They had stepped into the" |
| | ratio | 0.26 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of damp" | | 1 | "Rory’s boots made no sound" | | 2 | "She held the Heartstone pendant" | | 3 | "They’d slipped through the iron-bound" | | 4 | "Isolde moved at Rory’s other" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered, her pale lavender" | | 6 | "Rory asked, her voice hushed" | | 7 | "The cavern, if it was" | | 8 | "Veins of pale blue crystal" | | 9 | "Nyx’s whisper rustled past her" | | 10 | "They moved forward." | | 11 | "The ground transitioned from stone" | | 12 | "The air grew warmer, carrying" | | 13 | "Rory’s hand drifted to the" | | 14 | "The moonsilver was even colder" | | 15 | "A sound reached them, a" | | 16 | "It wasn’t a heartbeat." | | 17 | "It was deeper, more granular," | | 18 | "They stepped out onto a" | | 19 | "They were looking into a" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s boots made no sound on the mossy ground that shouldn’t have been growing in the basement of a derelict Wren crypt." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx was a smudge of deeper darkness in the gloom, their form flickering at the edges as if the very shadows here were thicker, more substantial." | | 2 | "Below their ledge, the ground sloped away into a rolling meadow of flowers that opened and closed in silent, slow motion." | | 3 | "As her fingers touched it, the bloom didn’t wilt, but unfolded further, releasing a single mote of light that spiralled up into the canopy." | | 4 | "Walking through them, Rory felt a strange resistance, a gentle push against her legs as if she were wading through shallow water." | | 5 | "Rory noticed details as her senses adjusted: insects with wings like stained glass flitted between blooms; a small creature, furry and with too many legs, skitt…" | | 6 | "In its centre stood a circle of standing stones, not grey granite, but a pale, almost translucent material that glowed with a soft, internal luminescence." | | 7 | "The light motes swirled, coalescing for a moment above the bloom, forming a shape that was almost, but not quite, a grasping hand." |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice hushed" | | 1 | "Nyx warned, their voice a dry rustle" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |