| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.588 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "lilt" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "porcelain" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1072 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 788 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | French | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Southbank | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Eva | 1 | | Thames | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.675 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to smooth over the tension" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1072 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.49% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 28.97 | | std | 12 | | cv | 0.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "A faint scar—crescent‑shaped, pale—as thin as a line traced his left wrist where the cane's hidden blade slipped out with a soft click." | | 1 | "A flicker of memory sparked behind Aurora's eyes—midnight, a rooftop in Southbank, the city lights blurred under their feet, the demon's clawed hand slipping, her quick thinking snapping a chain that had bound Lucien." | | 2 | "He didn't need it; his presence alone cut deeper than steel." |
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| 95.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 335 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.04477611940298507 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011940298507462687 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 13.74 | | std | 6 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 44.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.2948717948717949 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes snapped up, bright" | | 1 | "he replied, his tone smooth," | | 2 | "He lifted his cane, the" | | 3 | "She pressed the scar on" | | 4 | "she said, stepping away from" | | 5 | "Her tone softened, but barely" | | 6 | "She could still hear the" | | 7 | "he said, his eyes flickering" | | 8 | "She poured two mugs of" | | 9 | "She handed him a cup" | | 10 | "he murmured, taking a sip" | | 11 | "Her hand tightened around the" | | 12 | "He leaned against the kitchen" | | 13 | "she said, the edge in" | | 14 | "He chuckled, low and bitter." | | 15 | "He brushed against Aurora's leg," | | 16 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 17 | "he replied, eyes glinting amber" | | 18 | "She hadn't spoken his name" | | 19 | "she asked, standing, the tea" |
| | ratio | 0.469 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The door slammed open, the" | | 1 | "A rush of stale curry" | | 2 | "Her eyes snapped up, bright" | | 3 | "Lucien stood there, his charcoal" | | 4 | "A faint scar—crescent‑shaped, pale—as thin" | | 5 | "Aurora's voice cut the tension," | | 6 | "he replied, his tone smooth," | | 7 | "He lifted his cane, the" | | 8 | "Aurora's hand drifted to the" | | 9 | "She pressed the scar on" | | 10 | "The flat above" | | 11 | "she said, stepping away from" | | 12 | "Her tone softened, but barely" | | 13 | "She could still hear the" | | 14 | "he said, his eyes flickering" | | 15 | "Aurora crossed the narrow kitchen," | | 16 | "She poured two mugs of" | | 17 | "She handed him a cup" | | 18 | "he murmured, taking a sip" | | 19 | "The liquid slid down his" |
| | ratio | 0.984 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The scar on her wrist tingled, a phantom reminder of the crash that had taken her freedom from Evan." | | 1 | "A flicker of memory sparked behind Aurora's eyes—midnight, a rooftop in Southbank, the city lights blurred under their feet, the demon's clawed hand slipping, h…" | | 2 | "He brushed against Aurora's leg, purring, as if trying to smooth over the tension." | | 3 | "Aurora knelt, stroking the cat, her fingers trailing over its sleek fur." | | 4 | "The memory of stolen kisses behind the Thames, the promise whispered under a flickering streetlamp, and the betrayal that followed, surged like a tide." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, his tone smooth, accented with a faint French lilt" | | 1 | "he said, his eyes flickering to the scar, then back to her" | | 2 | "Lucien said, his voice dropping to a whisper" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "he replied, eyes glinting amber" | | 5 | "he said, a smile playing on his lips" | | 6 | "he said, his voice a low hiss" | | 7 | "Lucien muttered, his hand slipping into the pocket of his suit" | | 8 | "Aurora began, but the stranger raised a gloved hand, the metal glinting under the dim light" |
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| 2.94% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Lucien observed (observe)" | | 2 | "the other side barked (bark)" | | 3 | "Lucien muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "the stranger whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.294 | |