Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ02Y2F34W14Q4HRQYYDWJGS

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.005337
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain turned London’s streets into slick mirrors, reflecting the garish neon of takeaway signs and the red pulse of traffic lights in shattered ribbons across the asphalt. Detective Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped the wet pavement, a metronomic beat against the city’s damp sigh. Ten yards ahead, the man who called himself ‘Silas’ ran with the panicked, loping gait of a cornered animal. He’d been a whisper in the back of The Raven’s Nest, a shadow that slipped out when Quinn’s questions got too sharp. Now, he was a fleeing target, and the chase was the only thing that made sense. Her breath plumed in the chill air, controlled and steady, a product of years of training and a stubborn refusal to be outrun. The worn leather of her watch strap dug into her left wrist, a familiar pressure. Silas cut left, down a narrow alley choked with overflowing bins and the stink of old grease. Quinn followed, her short, salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp, her sharp jaw set against the downpour. He was agile, but she was relentless. He knew these warrens; she knew pursuit. He scrambled over a chain-link fence, his movements clumsy; she vaulted it, her landing precise, her body absorbing the impact with a military efficiency that had earned her commendations but not many friends. He burst out onto a wider street, Camden High Street, and for a moment, the crowd swallowed him—a throng of late-night shoppers and revelers huddled under umbrellas. Quinn’s gaze cut through the chaos. There—the flash of a dark jacket, a head turning back. He was heading for the mouth of a Tube station, the familiar roundel a beacon of public transit. But as she gained on him, her hand outstretched, he didn’t swipe his Oyster card. He veered sharply, shouldering past a couple, and shoved open a heavy service door marked ‘Authorised Personnel Only,’ a door that should have been locked. The clatter of a service stairwell replaced the hiss of the rain. The air went cold and stale, thick with the smell of damp concrete and ancient, stagnant water. Quinn didn’t hesitate. Her hand flew to the compact Taser holstered on her belt, a more certain companion than a firearm in the uncertain dark. The stairwell spiralled down, far deeper than any normal maintenance level. The sounds from the street above faded, replaced by her own footsteps and the ragged echo of Silas’s. He knew where he was going. He didn’t fumble. He hit a landing and threw open another door, this one unmarked, and plunged through. Quinn followed, her senses on high alert. The world beyond the door was not a station platform. It was a vast, vaulted chamber, the curved roof lost in shadow, ribs of old iron arching overhead like the bones of some great leviathan. The air was dry here, unnervingly so, and it hummed with a low, sub-vocal thrum that vibrated in the teeth. The space was a labyrinth. Not of trains, but of stalls and makeshift structures, built from scavenged wood, draped cloth, and what looked like polished bone. Lanterns burned with an unsteady, blue-green light that didn’t cast shadows so much as give the darkness a luminous, watery quality. Figures moved through the dimness—some in cloaks, others in modern, incongruous streetwear. A vendor hunched over a table, his face hidden in a hood, arranging vials of liquid that glowed with a soft, internal luminescence. The air carried alien scents: ozone, dried herbs, something metallic and sweet like old blood. The Veil Market. The name had been a murmur in informant cells, a myth to scare rookies, a detail in the redacted file on her partner, Morris. Now, it was real, and she was standing at its threshold. Her training screamed *contaminated scene*, *unauthorised entry*, *radio for backup*. But her gut, honed by eighteen years of instinct, screamed *he’s getting away*. And beneath it all, a cold, creeping fascination—the same feeling that had led her to Morris’s closed case file time and again. Silas was fifty feet ahead, weaving through the sparse crowd. He glanced back, his face a mask of terror not just of her, but of this place. He was desperate to shake her off its scent. He ducked behind a stall draped in black velvet, from which the sound of chanted whispers emanated. Quinn advanced, her posture shifting. No longer a pursuit run, but a tactical approach. Her eyes scanned, cataloguing. A man with skin like crinkled parchment sold what looked like glass eyes that wept real tears. Two women in severe suits whispered over a map that seemed to shift and rearrange itself as they watched. This wasn’t just black market goods; this was a different ecosystem. The rules were different. She passed a stall where a creature that was almost, but not quite, a monkey sold intricate silver jewelry. It chittered at her, its eyes too knowing. She ignored it, keeping Silas in sight. He was panicking now, his flight becoming erratic. He knocked over a tray of carved bone tokens—they skittered across the floor like frightened beetles—and didn’t stop to pick them up. The vendor, a woman with eyes entirely black, hissed after him. Quinn saw her chance. Silas had run into a dead end—a cul-de-sac of stacked crates and a sheer, damp brick wall. He spun around, his back pressed to the wall, his chest heaving. Rainwater and sweat dripped from his hair. “End of the line,” Quinn said, her voice low and hard, cutting through the market’s ambient hum. She held the Taser leveled at his chest, the red laser dot dancing on his soaked jacket. “Detective, you don’t understand,” he gasped, his eyes darting past her, looking for an escape that wasn’t there. “You can’t be here. You don’t have a token. The Market… it has rules.” “The only rule I’m interested in is you coming with me to answer a few questions about DS Morris,” she said, stepping closer, her movements deliberate. “You were seen leaving the scene that night. A witness saw your face.” His terror seemed to double, transcending fear of her arrest. “That wasn’t… I wasn’t there like you think. I was trying to help him. They… things were happening. Things you don’t know about.” “You can tell me all about it at the station.” “No!” He thrust a hand into his pocket. It came out clutching a small, yellowed object—a carved piece of what looked unmistakably like human finger bone. “I can’t go with you. You don’t know what they’ll do.” As his fingers closed around the token, the quality of the air around him shifted. The blue-green lantern light seemed to bend toward him, and the low hum of the Market intensified, rising in pitch. A shadowy shape detached itself from the deeper darkness behind the crates, its form indistinct but its presence a palpable wave of cold. Quinn’s instincts, honed on years of human violence, screamed danger, but a different, older part of her brain, the part that had stared at photos of Morris’s inexplicable injuries, understood this was a new calculus. She adjusted her grip on the Taser, but her primary target was no longer just Silas. “Put the trinket down,” she ordered, her voice betraying none of the sudden ice in her veins. “Now.” Silas shook his head, a frantic, jerky motion. He pressed the bone token against the brick wall behind him. “The Market provides passage for those who hold the key,” he muttered, like an incantation. “I paid my way in, I can pay my way out…” The bricks behind him seemed to soften, to blur like wet ink. The shadowy thing behind the crates hissed, a sound like steam escaping a valve. This was it. The edge of the world she knew. One step across, and she was no longer in London, no longer governed by procedure and precedent. She was in the territory of unexplained circumstance, of the force that had taken her partner. The case file on Morris was full of redacted pages and expert analyses that contradicted each other. This was the source. Right here. Her radio was silent on her hip. Backup would find nothing but an empty, dripping service stairwell. She was alone. Silas began to sink backward, the bricks now visibly distorting around his body, like a reflection in disturbed water. The shadowy creature took another, gliding step toward her, its intent unmistakable. Quinn made her decision. It wasn’t a choice of bravery, but of necessity. The truth, the real truth about Morris, wasn’t in the witness statements or the forensic reports. It was here, in this impossible place. She holstered her Taser. The click was deafeningly loud. “You’re under arrest for obstruction and suspicion of involvement in the disappearance of a police officer,” she stated, her voice flat, formal, a lifeline of procedure in the churning unknown. She reached into her pocket, her fingers closing not on handcuffs, but on her own personal effects. She pulled out her worn wallet and flipped it open. She’d collected strange things over the years, souvenirs from cases that left a residue. Her fingers found it—a single, small, polished stone she’d pocketed from the beach where Morris’s body was found, a stone that had been inexplicably warm to the touch even in the freezing rain. It wasn’t a bone token. It wasn’t a key. It was a piece of evidence. A piece of the mystery. She held it up, not at Silas, but at the Market itself, a silent, defiant offering to the strange rules of this place. The distortion around Silas faltered. The hum of the market wavered. The shadowy creature paused. It wasn’t much. It wasn’t enough. But it was an intrusion of her world into this one. A claim. Silas’s eyes went wide with disbelief. “What are you doing?” “My job,” Quinn said, and she stepped forward, across the threshold of the softening bricks, into the dim, humming heart of the Veil Market. The air closed around her, cool and electric, tasting of ozone and old secrets. The chase was over. The real investigation had just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He veered sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.563
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
97.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1700
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1700
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"beacon"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"dancing"
count1
13
word"palpable"
count1
14
word"churning"
count1
15
word"wavered"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"shattered"
2"whisper"
3"chill"
4"familiar"
5"beacon"
6"footsteps"
7"echo"
8"vibrated"
9"velvet"
10"scanned"
11"intricate"
12"dancing"
13"palpable"
14"churning"
15"wavered"
16"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences122
matches
0"was desperate"
1"e with disbelief"
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords10
totalWords1691
ratio0.006
matches
0"contaminated scene"
1"unauthorised entry"
2"radio for backup"
3"he’s getting away"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1523
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Harlow1
Quinn12
Raven1
Nest1
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tube1
Oyster1
Taser4
Silas11
Veil2
Market4
Morris6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Taser"
4"Silas"
5"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
21.13% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like polished bone"
1"looked like glass eyes that wept real tea"
2"map that seemed to shift and rearrange itself as they watched"
3"not quite a monkey sold intricate silver jewelry"
4"the bricks now visibly distorting around h"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.365
wordCount1691
matches
0"Not of trains, but of stalls"
1"not just of her, but of this place"
2"not on handcuffs, but on her own personal effects"
3"not at Silas, but at the Market itself, a silent, defiant offering to the stra"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean49.74
std29.48
cv0.593
sampleLengths
0101
1119
2101
383
486
597
683
753
869
975
1040
1134
1232
1339
1433
1510
1637
1758
1851
1918
2045
2126
2266
2320
2431
2536
269
2771
2853
2923
3015
3119
3210
3348
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"was found"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs236
matches
0"was heading"
1"was going"
2"was standing"
3"was panicking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences130
ratio0.085
matches
0"He knew these warrens; she knew pursuit."
1"He scrambled over a chain-link fence, his movements clumsy; she vaulted it, her landing precise, her body absorbing the impact with a military efficiency that had earned her commendations but not many friends."
2"He burst out onto a wider street, Camden High Street, and for a moment, the crowd swallowed him—a throng of late-night shoppers and revelers huddled under umbrellas."
3"There—the flash of a dark jacket, a head turning back."
4"Figures moved through the dimness—some in cloaks, others in modern, incongruous streetwear."
5"And beneath it all, a cold, creeping fascination—the same feeling that had led her to Morris’s closed case file time and again."
6"This wasn’t just black market goods; this was a different ecosystem."
7"He knocked over a tray of carved bone tokens—they skittered across the floor like frightened beetles—and didn’t stop to pick them up."
8"Silas had run into a dead end—a cul-de-sac of stacked crates and a sheer, damp brick wall."
9"It came out clutching a small, yellowed object—a carved piece of what looked unmistakably like human finger bone."
10"Her fingers found it—a single, small, polished stone she’d pocketed from the beach where Morris’s body was found, a stone that had been inexplicably warm to the touch even in the freezing rain."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.011834319526627219
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005917159763313609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.01
std7.54
cv0.58
sampleLengths
028
116
219
322
416
523
615
717
817
97
107
1133
1227
136
1410
1518
1615
1725
1812
1917
203
2122
2211
2318
246
253
2615
277
2810
2925
3020
315
3221
3321
3412
3523
3615
373
3824
3911
4010
4113
4222
4310
4417
459
4617
475
489
494
32.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.25384615384615383
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners33
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"No longer a pursuit run,"
ratio0.008
50.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences120
matches
0"He’d been a whisper in"
1"Her breath plumed in the"
2"He was agile, but she"
3"He knew these warrens; she"
4"He scrambled over a chain-link"
5"He burst out onto a"
6"He was heading for the"
7"He veered sharply, shouldering past"
8"Her hand flew to the"
9"He knew where he was"
10"He didn’t fumble."
11"He hit a landing and"
12"It was a vast, vaulted"
13"Her training screamed *contaminated scene*,"
14"He glanced back, his face"
15"He was desperate to shake"
16"He ducked behind a stall"
17"Her eyes scanned, cataloguing."
18"She passed a stall where"
19"It chittered at her, its"
ratio0.425
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences120
matches
0"The rain turned London’s streets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped"
2"He’d been a whisper in"
3"Her breath plumed in the"
4"The worn leather of her"
5"Silas cut left, down a"
6"Quinn followed, her short, salt-and-pepper"
7"He was agile, but she"
8"He knew these warrens; she"
9"He scrambled over a chain-link"
10"He burst out onto a"
11"Quinn’s gaze cut through the"
12"There—the flash of a dark"
13"He was heading for the"
14"He veered sharply, shouldering past"
15"The clatter of a service"
16"The air went cold and"
17"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
18"Her hand flew to the"
19"The stairwell spiralled down, far"
ratio0.9
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"Now, he was a fleeing"
1"Now, it was real, and"
ratio0.017
48.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"He scrambled over a chain-link fence, his movements clumsy; she vaulted it, her landing precise, her body absorbing the impact with a military efficiency that h…"
1"The air was dry here, unnervingly so, and it hummed with a low, sub-vocal thrum that vibrated in the teeth."
2"Lanterns burned with an unsteady, blue-green light that didn’t cast shadows so much as give the darkness a luminous, watery quality."
3"A vendor hunched over a table, his face hidden in a hood, arranging vials of liquid that glowed with a soft, internal luminescence."
4"And beneath it all, a cold, creeping fascination—the same feeling that had led her to Morris’s closed case file time and again."
5"Two women in severe suits whispered over a map that seemed to shift and rearrange itself as they watched."
6"Quinn’s instincts, honed on years of human violence, screamed danger, but a different, older part of her brain, the part that had stared at photos of Morris’s i…"
7"She was in the territory of unexplained circumstance, of the force that had taken her partner."
8"Her fingers found it—a single, small, polished stone she’d pocketed from the beach where Morris’s body was found, a stone that had been inexplicably warm to the…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he gasped (gasp)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"he muttered (mutter)"
3"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.5
72.1828%