Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ02YDHB317MNMKVWSC0TT1K

Run Details

Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.005276
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolt’s final, definitive *thunk* was the sound of her evening ending. Rory exhaled, the tension in her shoulders unwinding by a fraction as she tossed the keys onto the cluttered counter. The flat smelled of old paper, Ptolemy’s cat food, and the lingering ghost of Eva’s jasmine tea. Home, in its chaotic, cramped way. She shed her damp delivery jacket, the logo of the Golden Empress faded on the back, and was just reaching for the kettle when the sharp, urgent knock came. Three raps. Not Eva—she’d texted from Manchester. Not the landlord, who emailed. A cold prickle ran down Rory’s spine. She grabbed the heavy-bottomed bottle of wine from the counter, its weight a small comfort, and padded silently to the door. Peering through the peephole distorted the world into a fish-eye circle, but she didn’t need a clear view. The shock of platinum hair under the dim hallway light was unmistakable. Her hand froze on the top deadbolt. Lucien. Of course. The universe had a truly vicious sense of humor. She turned both locks with deliberate, slow movements, the sound unnaturally loud in the quiet. When she pulled the door open, he stood there in a charcoal suit that didn’t belong in the shabby corridor, rain beading on the shoulders like scattered diamonds. His ivory-handled cane was planted firmly on the worn mat. One amber eye, warm as aged whiskey, was fixed on her face. The other, a void of solid black, seemed to absorb the meager light. “Rory,” he said. His voice was low, a rasp of French under the London air, and it did something stupid and traitorous to her pulse. “Aurora,” she corrected, the name formal, a shield. She didn’t step back. “It’s late. The shop’s closed.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “I am not here for business.” His gaze dropped to the wine bottle in her hand. “Though you appear to be preparing for some.” Her knuckles were white around the glass. She forced them to loosen. “This is for me. And this is Eva’s flat, not mine. I’m just… minding it.” “Ah.” He nodded, that single, elegant dip of his head. “So you are the guardian of the books.” His heterochromatic eyes drifted past her shoulder to the teetering stacks that formed canyon walls in the living room. “May I come in, Rory? The hallway smells of damp and despair.” Every instinct screamed no. It was simpler, safer. But the rain was soaking into his shoulders, and behind the polished fixer persona, she saw the faint shadows under his eyes. It was a weakness in his armor she’d never seen before, and it was her undoing. She stepped back, the wine bottle still a pointless totem in her hand. “Fine. But wipe your feet. Eva’s particular about the carpet.” It was a lie; the carpet was ancient and bore the stains of a dozen spilled curries. He stepped inside, bringing the scent of rain, expensive wool, and something else—sandalswood, maybe. The flat seemed to shrink around him, his tailored form an affront to the cozy disarray. He surveyed the space with a quiet, assessing gaze that missed nothing: the precarious piles of anthropological texts, the half-unrolled scrolls on the dining table, the empty mug with a lipstick stain on the rim. “Your friend is… scholarly,” he remarked, tapping a precarious stack of leather-bound journals with the tip of his cane. “My friend is brilliant. She’s also in Manchester. So whatever you’re here for, you’re out of luck.” Ptolemy, the tabby, chose that moment to emerge from under the sofa, blinking sleepily. He wound once around Rory’s ankles, then, with the fickle curiosity of his kind, trotted over to inspect the intruder. Lucien watched, a faintly bemused expression on his face. He didn’t stoop to pet the cat, but he held very still. “I am not here for Eva,” he said, his eyes lifting from Ptolemy to lock with hers. “I am here because of you.” A bitter laugh escaped her. “Right. Because the last time we saw each other went so well. I believe your exact parting shot was ‘You are in over your head, little bird. Do not call me when you drown.’” The memory was still sharp, the humiliation hot in her gut. He’d been talking about the nascent supernatural mess she’d stumbled into, the one she was still trying to clean up. He’d looked at her with that mix of pity and clinical interest, and she’d hated him for it. “I was,” he acknowledged, his tone frustratingly even. “You were. You are still. And yet, here you are, breathing air and drinking cheap wine. I am impressed.” “My resilience is not your concern.” She finally set the wine bottle down on the counter with a firm click. “What do you want, Lucien?” He was quiet for a moment, his gaze traveling over her face, as if reading some map only he could see. The air grew thick with unsaid things—with the memory of a late-night conversation in a pub that had shifted from intellectual debate to something charged and personal, with the jarring shock of seeing him weeks later in a different context entirely, all professional edges and dangerous knowledge. “I want to know if you have been contacted,” he said, his voice dropping lower. “By anyone asking questions. About the Wren Street incident. About the symbol carved into the brickwork.” The directness of it was a slap. This was business. Of course it was. “No,” she said, crossing her arms. “No one’s contacted me. And I haven’t been back to Wren Street since you so kindly pointed out my incompetence.” “Incompetence was not the word I used,” he murmured, taking a step further into the room. The space between them charged, a live wire. “I believe I said you were brave. Recklessly so.” The change in his story made her pulse flutter. “You’re misremembering.” His lips twitched again. “My memory is a steel trap, *ma chérie*. You were the one who called me a patronizing bastard and threw a breadstick at me.” She had. God, she had. A piece of baguette, right across the table at the little café near Waterloo. “It was a scone,” she corrected through gritted teeth. “A stale one.” “Ah. I stand corrected.” The amusement in his voice was infuriating. He was close now, close enough that she could see the fine, faint lines at the corners of his amber eye, the stark contrast of his other pupil. “The point is, Rory, the people asking these questions are not like me. They do not offer sarcastic commentary over coffee. They are methodical. They are quiet. And if they are looking for loose threads, you are a very visible one, tied to events you barely understand.” The genuine concern in his voice—or the very convincing performance of it—unbalanced her. She took a step back, bumping into the counter. “Is this your idea of a warning? The fixer looking out for the delivery girl?” Something shifted in his expression. The professional mask slipped, just for a second, revealing a flicker of something raw beneath. “It is Lucien looking out for Aurora,” he said, his voice rough. “I did not like how we parted. The words were… chosen for effect, not accuracy.” Her breath caught. The room was too warm, too small. The smell of sandalwood was overwhelming. She could feel the heat of him even a foot away. The attraction she’d tried so hard to bury, the one that had sparked that night at the pub, surged back with a vengeance, tangled up with the anger and the hurt. “That’s a very neat trick,” she whispered, her voice not entirely steady. “Show up unannounced, offer a warning wrapped in an apology. What’s the catch, Lucien? What do you need from me?” He reached out, not to touch her, but to rest his hand on the edge of the counter beside her hip. His knuckles brushed the backs of her fingers, a fleeting, electric contact. “Information,” he said simply. “And I need to know you are safe. These are not mutually exclusive desires.” Ptolemy chose that exact moment to leap onto the counter, demanding attention with a sharp *mew*. The spell shattered. Rory laughed, a shaky, relieved sound, and scooped the cat into her arms, using him as a furry, purring barrier. “You’re a menace,” she muttered to the cat, then looked at Lucien over its striped head. “You can’t just appear. You have my number. The one that’s not for pizza delivery.” “You changed it,” he said, a statement of fact. “I blocked you.” “Ah.” He straightened, the moment of vulnerability receding as he smoothly reassembled his composure. He looked impeccably in control again, a stranger in an expensive suit. But his eyes—both of them—held a new, weary weight. “My mistake. Then I suppose I had to use the direct approach.” He turned toward the door, and a ridiculous, hollow panic seized her. He couldn’t just leave. Not like this, with everything still unresolved, humming in the air between them. “Wait,” she said, the word blurted out before she could stop it. He paused, his hand on the doorknob, and looked back. She swallowed, her mind racing. What was she doing? Inviting him deeper into the chaos? But the thought of him vanishing back into the rain, into the dangerous world he inhabited, felt like the greater loss. “Eva… she left a bottle of decent Bordeaux. Not this kitchen plonk.” She gestured vaguely at the wine bottle on the counter. “And you’re still damp. You’ll catch cold.” His eyebrow arched, a single, elegant question. The corner of his mouth curved, not a smirk this time, but something softer, more surprised. “Are you inviting me to stay, Rory?” The use of her nickname was a key turning in a lock. “I’m pointing out that the kettle’s on, and you’re here, and the rain’s not stopping.” She shrugged, trying to look casual. “It would be rude not to offer a drink to an old… acquaintance.” “A most logical and entirely dispassionate reason,” he agreed, his heterochromatic eyes warm with a light she hadn’t seen before. He released the doorknob. “In that case, I accept your hospitality.” Rory nodded, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. She turned toward the kitchen to put the kettle on, Ptolemy a purring weight in her arms, acutely aware that Lucien Moreau had just stepped fully into her space, and that this time, she had opened the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.077
85.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count4
highlights
0"truly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"firmly"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"charged"
count2
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"methodical"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"chaotic"
2"weight"
3"sense of"
4"firmly"
5"pulse"
6"charged"
7"stark"
8"methodical"
9"flicker"
10"could feel"
11"fleeting"
12"electric"
13"shattered"
14"racing"
15"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1760
ratio0.002
matches
0"thunk"
1"ma chérie"
2"mew"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1265
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy5
Eva2
Golden1
Empress1
Manchester1
Rory5
French1
London1
Waterloo1
Lucien4
Moreau1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Moreau"
places
0"Manchester"
1"London"
2"Waterloo"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading some map only he could see"
1"felt like the greater loss"
86.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.136
wordCount1760
matches
0"not to touch her, but to rest his hand on the edge of the counter beside her hip"
1"not a smirk this time, but something softer, more surprised"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"sparked that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean38.26
std21.03
cv0.55
sampleLengths
084
170
219
378
425
517
632
727
849
959
1027
1165
1219
1317
1455
1523
1688
1727
1825
1968
2031
2140
2233
2311
2428
2531
2686
2737
2847
2958
3032
3151
3239
3331
349
353
3647
3729
3812
3910
4036
4129
4230
4346
4431
4549
98.83% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"was planted"
1"was fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was just reaching"
1"was still trying"
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences135
ratio0.044
matches
0"Not Eva—she’d texted from Manchester."
1"“Fine. But wipe your feet. Eva’s particular about the carpet.” It was a lie; the carpet was ancient and bore the stains of a dozen spilled curries."
2"He stepped inside, bringing the scent of rain, expensive wool, and something else—sandalswood, maybe."
3"The air grew thick with unsaid things—with the memory of a late-night conversation in a pub that had shifted from intellectual debate to something charged and personal, with the jarring shock of seeing him weeks later in a different context entirely, all professional edges and dangerous knowledge."
4"The genuine concern in his voice—or the very convincing performance of it—unbalanced her."
5"But his eyes—both of them—held a new, weary weight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1278
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.03912363067292645
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.013302034428794992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean13.04
std8.89
cv0.682
sampleLengths
012
120
217
36
429
52
65
75
87
921
1018
1112
127
131
142
159
1615
1728
1810
1912
2013
213
2222
238
244
255
268
2716
288
297
305
3115
3210
3327
3412
354
364
3722
3816
3913
4027
4114
4216
4335
4419
4517
4614
4720
489
4912
51.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34814814814814815
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners47
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Of course it was."
ratio0.01
0.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences104
matches
0"She shed her damp delivery"
1"She grabbed the heavy-bottomed bottle"
2"Her hand froze on the"
3"She turned both locks with"
4"His ivory-handled cane was planted"
5"His voice was low, a"
6"she corrected, the name formal,"
7"She didn’t step back."
8"His gaze dropped to the"
9"Her knuckles were white around"
10"She forced them to loosen."
11"He nodded, that single, elegant"
12"His heterochromatic eyes drifted past"
13"It was simpler, safer."
14"It was a weakness in"
15"She stepped back, the wine"
16"It was a lie; the"
17"He stepped inside, bringing the"
18"He surveyed the space with"
19"he remarked, tapping a precarious"
ratio0.548
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences104
matches
0"The deadbolt’s final, definitive *thunk*"
1"Rory exhaled, the tension in"
2"The flat smelled of old"
3"Home, in its chaotic, cramped"
4"She shed her damp delivery"
5"A cold prickle ran down"
6"She grabbed the heavy-bottomed bottle"
7"The shock of platinum hair"
8"Her hand froze on the"
9"The universe had a truly"
10"She turned both locks with"
11"His ivory-handled cane was planted"
12"The other, a void of"
13"His voice was low, a"
14"she corrected, the name formal,"
15"She didn’t step back."
16"A ghost of a smile"
17"His gaze dropped to the"
18"Her knuckles were white around"
19"She forced them to loosen."
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"When she pulled the door open, he stood there in a charcoal suit that didn’t belong in the shabby corridor, rain beading on the shoulders like scattered diamond…"
1"He surveyed the space with a quiet, assessing gaze that missed nothing: the precarious piles of anthropological texts, the half-unrolled scrolls on the dining t…"
2"He was quiet for a moment, his gaze traveling over her face, as if reading some map only he could see."
3"The air grew thick with unsaid things—with the memory of a late-night conversation in a pub that had shifted from intellectual debate to something charged and p…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he acknowledged, his tone frustratingly even"
1"he said, his voice dropping lower"
2"he said, his voice rough"
3"he said, a statement of fact"
4"she said, the word blurted out before she could stop it"
5"She shrugged, trying to look casual"
15.38% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she corrected (correct)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"she muttered (mutter)"
6"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.577
rawRatio0.467
effectiveRatio0.269
73.9115%