Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ030EW512ZNP9M1T6GD7E71

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Duration:
1m 15s
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$0.017588
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed outside, painting fleeting emerald streaks across the rain-slicked pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the Thursday crowd had thinned to a handful of regulars nursing their pints in the corners. Silas dried the last of the glasses, his signet ring clicking against the crystal as he set it on the shelf. The old maps on the walls seemed to breathe in the dim light, their edges curling like secrets tired of keeping quiet. Aurora pushed through the door from the stairwell, still wearing her Golden Empress jacket. The scent of five-spice and fried garlic trailed behind her. She dropped onto her usual stool at the far end of the bar and fished out her phone. "Double shift?" Silas asked, already reaching for the tap. "And then some." She tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear. "Mrs. Huang ordered enough spring rolls to feed a regiment, then complained they arrived two minutes late." "Water?" "Please." He set the glass down without ice, just how she liked it. She drank half of it in one go, the cold a relief against the warmth still clinging to her skin from the kitchen. The door to the street swung open, bringing with it a gust of October wind and a woman in a grey cashmere coat. Her heels clicked against the floorboards as she surveyed the room, her gaze passing over the mounted photographs and the dusty bottles behind the bar. Something in the way she held her chin, that particular tilt of assessment, made Aurora look up from her phone. The woman found her. Her eyes widened, and her mouth formed a shape that might have been surprise or might have been a name. "Rory?" Aurora's fingers tightened around her glass. The voice was different, polished smooth like river glass, but the cadence underneath belonged to someone else entirely. Someone who used to sing off-key to whatever song played in the student union, who once dyed a streak of pink into her fringe during exam term, who argued about case law until three in the morning over cold tea and leftover chips. "Cerys." The word came out flatter than she intended. Cerys Powell stood by the entrance, her blonde hair swept into a chignon that must have taken twenty minutes and a small fortune in product. Her nails were filed into perfect ovals, painted the colour of old bruises. The woman Aurora remembered had chewed her nails down to the quick and worn her hair in a tangled knot held together by optimism and dry shampoo. "God, it's really you." Cerys walked closer, her heels marking her progress across the floor. "I thought—I mean, I heard you'd left Cardiff, but nobody seemed to know where you'd gone." "People leave London all the time." "But you didn't go to London." Cerys stopped an arm's length away, her bag clutched against her hip like a shield. "You just vanished. One day you were there, and then you weren't. Eva wouldn't tell me anything." "That sounds like Eva." Silas appeared with another glass, setting it down without comment. Cerys glanced at him, then back at Aurora, and something shifted in her expression—a recalibration, as though she were trying to match the woman in the delivery jacket to the girl she once knew. "Can I sit?" Aurora shrugged toward the empty stool beside her. Cerys perched on the edge, crossing her ankles, and the gesture was so familiar it hurt. She used to sit like that in lectures, like she might need to flee at any moment. "You look—" Cerys began. "Different?" "I was going to say well." "You'd be the first." Silence pooled between them. The neon sign flickered, casting them in green for a moment before settling back to amber. "I'm here for a conference," Cerys said. "Corporate law, if you can believe it. Three days at the Barbican, talks about mergers and acquisitions and whatever fresh hell passes for networking these days. I saw the sign through the taxi window and thought, why not, one drink before I go back to the hotel and order overpriced room service." "And here I am." "And here you are." Cerys lifted her glass, took a careful sip. Her wedding ring caught the light—a band of white gold with a diamond that spoke of billable hours and sensible investments. The Cerys she remembered had worn a ring made of twisted copper wire from a market stall in Cardiff Bay, given to her by a boy who played the guitar badly and loved her fiercely. "How's Marcus?" Aurora asked, though she already knew the answer. Cerys's hand went to the diamond, a gesture so quick it might have been involuntary. "Marcus is Marcus. He made partner last year. We're in Pontcanna now, did you know? Bought one of those terraced houses with the bay windows. He wants to redo the kitchen but I keep telling him—" "You hate that kitchen." The words landed between them, unguarded. Cerys's mouth opened, then closed. She set her glass down with precision. "I don't hate it." "You used to say it looked like a mortuary." "Well, that was years ago. People change, Rory. Kitchens get renovated. Life moves on." "Does it?" The question hung in the air. From somewhere in the back, Silas dropped something—a muted curse, the sound of metal on stone—but neither woman turned to look. Cerys smoothed an invisible wrinkle from her coat. "I'm happy, if that's what you're asking." "I wasn't asking." "Of course you weren't. You never asked about things you could see for yourself. You just watched and catalogued and decided, and God help anyone who tried to explain themselves because you already knew." She caught herself, pressing her lips together. "I'm sorry. That was—" "Honest." "Unfair." "Those aren't mutually exclusive." Cerys laughed, a short sound that cracked at the edges. "No. I suppose they're not." Aurora signalled Silas for another water. He poured it slowly, his gaze lingering on Cerys with the particular attention he gave strangers who unsettled his regulars. "What about you?" Cerys asked. "What are you doing here, Rory? Living above a bar in Soho and delivering Chinese food?" "Someone has to." "That's not an answer." "It's the one you're getting." Cerys's face did something complicated, a series of micro-expressions that catalogued frustration and resignation and something else—something softer, more tentative, like a hand reaching toward a flame and pulling back at the last second. "I looked for you," she said. "After you disappeared, I must have called a hundred times. Your phone went straight to voicemail. Your flat was empty. Your parents wouldn't tell me anything—your father just stood in the doorway like I was a solicitor serving papers, and your mother—" "My mother cried." "She did. I could see her through the window, crying in the hallway while he told me you were fine and I should stop calling." "That sounds like Da." "Rory, what happened? Evan—" "Don't." The word came out sharp enough to cut. Aurora's hand had gone to her left wrist without thinking, her thumb tracing the crescent scar there. The silence that followed felt like a held breath. Cerys studied her, and Aurora could see her friend filling in the gaps, connecting dots she should have connected years ago but had been too caught up in her own trajectory to notice. The recognition in her eyes was painful to witness. "I should have—" Cerys started. "You couldn't have." "I should have seen it." "You saw what I wanted you to see. I got very good at that." The admission sat between them, raw and unexpected. Cerys's hand moved across the bar top—not toward her glass, not toward her bag, but toward Aurora's wrist, toward the small scar that had always been explained away as a childhood accident. Her fingers stopped just short of touching, hovering in the space between past and present. "Does Eva know?" "Eva knows enough." "And I don't deserve the same?" "You chose Marcus. You chose the house in Pontcanna and the conference at the Barbican and the life that looks like a magazine spread. You chose to leave Cardiff just as surely as I did, only you did it the way we always talked about—the career, the ring, the proper path." Aurora met her eyes. "I didn't have that option." "That's not fair." "Fair hasn't made an appearance in this conversation yet." Cerys withdrew her hand. She picked up her bag, then set it down again, as though she couldn't decide whether to stay or go. The diamond on her finger seemed duller now, or perhaps the light had simply shifted. "I used to think about you," she said quietly. "When I couldn't sleep, I'd wonder where you were. If you were happy. If you'd found something better than law school, better than Cardiff, better than—" "Better than Evan?" "Better than all of it." Aurora turned her glass between her palms, watching the water ripple. The bar sounds filled the silence—low conversations, the clink of glasses, the distant hum of traffic through walls that had heard a hundred confessions and would hear a hundred more. "I deliver spring rolls to ungrateful strangers," she said at last. "I live in a flat the size of a wardrobe. I have a landlord who probably knows more about the intelligence community than anyone alive, and I sleep with a chair wedged under the door handle. So if you're asking whether I'm happy, I don't know the answer to that. But I'm safe. I'm breathing. And most days, that's enough." Cerys's eyes were bright, though no tears fell. She had learned restraint somewhere along the way, the kind that held grief in a clenched fist and called it composure. "I miss you," she said. "I'm right here." "That's not what I mean and you know it." Aurora did know. She missed the Cerys who used to steal chips from her plate and argue about whether mandatory sentencing was just, the Cerys who laughed with her whole body and wore copper rings and dreamed of legal aid work in communities that actually needed it. That woman sat across from her now in cashmere and diamonds, and the distance between them could not be measured in years or miles. "I should go," Cerys said. "Early session tomorrow. Mergers and acquisitions, the thrill a minute." "Cerys." She paused, half off the stool, her coat gathered around her like armour. Aurora wanted to say something—something that would bridge the gap, something that would acknowledge the friendship they'd shared and the failures they'd both carried and the years that had sculpted them into strangers who recognised each other's faces. But the words sat in her throat, heavy and tangled, and the moment stretched until it snapped. "Take care of yourself," she said instead. Cerys nodded once, then walked toward the door. Her heels marked her exit, each click deliberate and precise, and the green neon caught her silhouette as she stepped into the London night. Silas appeared at the end of the bar, drying his hands on a cloth. "Old friend?" "Something like that." "Something like that usually means exactly that, just harder to admit." Aurora finished her water and set the glass down with a click. "She used to be different. We both were." "Aren't we all?" She looked at the door where Cerys had stood, at the rain now tracing paths down the glass, at the city that had swallowed her whole and asked nothing in return but survival. "I suppose we are." Silas poured her another glass without being asked, and they sat together in the amber light while the neon pulsed and the old maps watched and the night carried on without them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.215
leniency0.43
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.051
92.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1971
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1971
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"fleeting"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count2
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"fleeting"
1"crystal"
2"warmth"
3"perfect"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
7"unsettled"
8"tracing"
9"measured"
10"pulsed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"clenched fist"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1960
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1280
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Cerys"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Cerys"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Golden1
Empress1
October1
Aurora16
Powell1
Cerys26
Silas7
Silence1
Cardiff1
Bay1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Powell"
2"Cerys"
3"Silas"
4"Silence"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"Bay"
3"London"
globalScore0.484
windowScore0
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a held breath"
1"seemed duller now, or perhaps the light had simply shifted"
97.96% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.02
wordCount1960
matches
0"not toward her glass, not toward her bag, but toward Aurora's wrist, toward the small scar"
1"not toward her bag, but toward Aurora's wrist, toward the small scar"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs96
mean20.42
std21.31
cv1.044
sampleLengths
076
142
29
330
41
51
635
768
824
91
1067
111
1273
1331
146
1538
164
1744
183
1941
204
211
226
234
2420
2559
264
274
2864
2910
3051
314
3218
334
349
3514
362
3727
3815
393
4045
411
421
434
4415
4526
4621
473
484
495
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"were filed"
1"been explained"
2"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs221
matches
0"were trying"
7.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences148
ratio0.047
matches
0"Cerys glanced at him, then back at Aurora, and something shifted in her expression—a recalibration, as though she were trying to match the woman in the delivery jacket to the girl she once knew."
1"Her wedding ring caught the light—a band of white gold with a diamond that spoke of billable hours and sensible investments."
2"From somewhere in the back, Silas dropped something—a muted curse, the sound of metal on stone—but neither woman turned to look."
3"Cerys's face did something complicated, a series of micro-expressions that catalogued frustration and resignation and something else—something softer, more tentative, like a hand reaching toward a flame and pulling back at the last second."
4"Cerys's hand moved across the bar top—not toward her glass, not toward her bag, but toward Aurora's wrist, toward the small scar that had always been explained away as a childhood accident."
5"The bar sounds filled the silence—low conversations, the clink of glasses, the distant hum of traffic through walls that had heard a hundred confessions and would hear a hundred more."
6"Aurora wanted to say something—something that would bridge the gap, something that would acknowledge the friendship they'd shared and the failures they'd both carried and the years that had sculpted them into strangers who recognised each other's faces."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1291
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"different, polished smooth like"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.032532920216886134
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005422153369481022
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean13.24
std11.93
cv0.901
sampleLengths
013
120
221
322
414
510
618
79
813
917
101
111
1212
1323
1423
1525
1620
174
1820
191
206
2118
2243
231
248
2525
2613
2727
2815
2916
306
3121
3217
334
3410
3534
363
378
3816
3917
404
411
426
434
444
4516
467
4752
484
494
50.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3310810810810811
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences79
matches
0"She dropped onto her usual"
1"She tucked a strand of"
2"He set the glass down"
3"She drank half of it"
4"Her heels clicked against the"
5"Her eyes widened, and her"
6"Her nails were filed into"
7"She used to sit like"
8"Her wedding ring caught the"
9"She set her glass down"
10"She caught herself, pressing her"
11"He poured it slowly, his"
12"Her fingers stopped just short"
13"She picked up her bag,"
14"she said quietly"
15"she said at last"
16"She had learned restraint somewhere"
17"She missed the Cerys who"
18"She paused, half off the"
19"she said instead"
ratio0.278
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences79
matches
0"The green neon hummed outside,"
1"Silas dried the last of"
2"The old maps on the"
3"Aurora pushed through the door"
4"The scent of five-spice and"
5"She dropped onto her usual"
6"Silas asked, already reaching for"
7"She tucked a strand of"
8"He set the glass down"
9"She drank half of it"
10"The door to the street"
11"Her heels clicked against the"
12"Something in the way she"
13"The woman found her."
14"Her eyes widened, and her"
15"Aurora's fingers tightened around her"
16"The voice was different, polished"
17"Someone who used to sing"
18"The word came out flatter"
19"Cerys Powell stood by the"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Someone who used to sing off-key to whatever song played in the student union, who once dyed a streak of pink into her fringe during exam term, who argued about…"
1"Cerys glanced at him, then back at Aurora, and something shifted in her expression—a recalibration, as though she were trying to match the woman in the delivery…"
2"Her wedding ring caught the light—a band of white gold with a diamond that spoke of billable hours and sensible investments."
3"He poured it slowly, his gaze lingering on Cerys with the particular attention he gave strangers who unsettled his regulars."
4"Cerys's face did something complicated, a series of micro-expressions that catalogued frustration and resignation and something else—something softer, more tent…"
5"Aurora's hand had gone to her left wrist without thinking, her thumb tracing the crescent scar there."
6"Cerys studied her, and Aurora could see her friend filling in the gaps, connecting dots she should have connected years ago but had been too caught up in her ow…"
7"The bar sounds filled the silence—low conversations, the clink of glasses, the distant hum of traffic through walls that had heard a hundred confessions and wou…"
8"She missed the Cerys who used to steal chips from her plate and argue about whether mandatory sentencing was just, the Cerys who laughed with her whole body and…"
9"Aurora wanted to say something—something that would bridge the gap, something that would acknowledge the friendship they'd shared and the failures they'd both c…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Cerys walked, her heels marking her progress across the floor"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.253
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.0285%