| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His voice scraped like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1490 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1490 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "grave" | | 1 | "electric" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "porcelain" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "footfall" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1494 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1360 | | uniqueNames | 26 | | maxNameDensity | 0.74 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Harlow | 10 | | Quinn | 1 | | Volvo | 1 | | Chalk | 1 | | Farm | 1 | | Glock | 4 | | Brixton | 1 | | Stepney | 2 | | Morris | 4 | | Spanish | 1 | | Electric | 1 | | Ballroom | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Tube | 2 | | Romans | 1 | | Edwardian | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | St | 1 | | Thomas | 1 | | Two | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Glock" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Thomas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Chalk" | | 4 | "Farm" | | 5 | "Brixton" | | 6 | "Stepney" | | 7 | "Spanish" | | 8 | "Thames" | | 9 | "St" | | 10 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1494 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 46.69 | | std | 40.19 | | cv | 0.861 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 105 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 98 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 127 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 122 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 145 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 67 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 85 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | | 0 | "were singing" | | 1 | "was grinning" |
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| 91.53% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Now her Glock chafed against her ribs beneath a soaked leather jacket, and the scar along her left forearm — a ridge of keloid from a knife attack outside a Brixton off-licence — sang in the damp." | | 1 | "Black-and-white photographs papered the gaps: an Edwardian matron with fingers six joints long; a child suspended three feet above a garden bench while his shadow capered independent; a crowd gathered around a manhole emitting fog that ate the cobbles." | | 2 | "A hundred eyes — compound, lidless, absent, ancient — rotated toward her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1366 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.012445095168374817 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0036603221083455345 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 8.95 | | std | 7.78 | | cv | 0.869 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 60.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.41916167664670656 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 70 | |
| 24.69% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the walls erupted with" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 89.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "She had abandoned her Volvo" | | 1 | "She ran faster." | | 2 | "His charcoal coat drank the" | | 3 | "It did not billow." | | 4 | "She had watched him purchase" | | 5 | "She ploughed through a knot" | | 6 | "He vaulted the canal railing" | | 7 | "Her boots struck wet cobbles." | | 8 | "She closed the gap to" | | 9 | "She drew her Glock." | | 10 | "He reached a service ladder" | | 11 | "She holstered the weapon, threw" | | 12 | "Her forearm screamed." | | 13 | "His voice scraped like insect" | | 14 | "His jaw unhinged wider than" | | 15 | "He turned and sprinted toward" | | 16 | "They careened past shuttered leather" | | 17 | "He ducked beneath a half-raised" | | 18 | "She landed in a loading" | | 19 | "Its beam swept the enclosure:" |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 48.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Each step Harlow Quinn took" | | 1 | "She had abandoned her Volvo" | | 2 | "The paramedic beneath her detective's" | | 3 | "She ran faster." | | 4 | "The suspect passed beneath the" | | 5 | "His charcoal coat drank the" | | 6 | "It did not billow." | | 7 | "She had watched him purchase" | | 8 | "The final link in a" | | 9 | "She ploughed through a knot" | | 10 | "The command ripped through drill" | | 11 | "The suspect did not flinch." | | 12 | "He vaulted the canal railing" | | 13 | "Her boots struck wet cobbles." | | 14 | "The narrow path forced single" | | 15 | "Water lapped to her right," | | 16 | "She closed the gap to" | | 17 | "Wrongness dripped from his pores." | | 18 | "She drew her Glock." | | 19 | "He reached a service ladder" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 74.07% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Now her Glock chafed against" | | 1 | "To her left, brick walls" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 30.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The final link in a chain that stretched back thirty-six months to a warehouse in Stepney and the morning DS Morris walked through a door and came out without h…" | | 1 | "Her light fixed on a section of Victorian brick that breathed." | | 2 | "Stairs corkscrewed into a darkness that consumed her torch beam." | | 3 | "Backup arrived to find his polished shoes, his warrant card bent double, and brickwork forced inward where his hands had pressed through steel as if it were wet…" | | 4 | "She had seen the way his mouth hung open, stretched beyond dislocation, frozen in a laugh that had no humour." | | 5 | "Black-and-white photographs papered the gaps: an Edwardian matron with fingers six joints long; a child suspended three feet above a garden bench while his shad…" | | 6 | "Bioluminescent mould clustered in rivets of the ceiling, casting a mercury twilight that rendered everything in shades of surgical grey and bruise." | | 7 | "At a folding card table, three hooded figures slapped down tarot decks that shuffled themselves, the cards whispering classified secrets across stained felt." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |