| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "His fingers closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.37 | | leniency | 0.739 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 94.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1674 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1674 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "effortless" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "variable" | | 8 | "resonance" | | 9 | "navigated" | | 10 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1663 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1095 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | November | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Rory | 12 | | Pontcanna | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Marseille | 1 | | English | 1 | | Farsi | 1 | | Avarosian | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "English" | | 2 | "Farsi" | | 3 | "Avarosian" | | 4 | "Brick" | | 5 | "Lane" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.952 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed untouched by the cold, as though weather were a courtesy he simply declined" | | 1 | "sounded like a spell poorly cast" | | 2 | "quite human, a resonance that hummed in the marrow of her bones" | | 3 | "looked like a man who hadn’t slept since" | | 4 | "sigil that seemed to writhe when she looked at it directly" | | 5 | "not quite but it was close—a crack in the armor" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.601 | | wordCount | 1663 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite, but it was close" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 31.38 | | std | 29.08 | | cv | 0.927 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 129 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 86 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 117 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 78 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 62 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 82 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 55 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 47 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 81.34% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "was slicked" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "was supposed" | | 4 | "was cramped" | | 5 | "was pinned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy wound figure-eights around her ankles, purring until he wasn’t—until his tabby body went rigid, tail puffed to twice its size, every orange-and-black hair standing on end." | | 1 | "One eye caught the hallway’s single bulb and held it—amber, hungry." | | 2 | "She didn’t need to; Lucien saw it in the tightening of her jaw, the way her free hand came up to grip the door as if the flat might drift out to sea." | | 3 | "He gave her silence instead—a silence that stretched and deepened until she could hear the rain against the curry house awning three floors down, the hiss of Ptolemy’s breath, the too-fast beat of her own heart." | | 4 | "She hated him for that—for being articulate, for being patient, for packing three months of absence into a single sentence that cracked her ribs open." | | 5 | "Eva’s flat was cramped on the best days—a one-bedroom shoebox above a Brick Lane curry house, every surface colonized by books and scrolls and the arcane detritus of Eva’s postgraduate research." | | 6 | "Without the hallway’s shadows, the lines of exhaustion showed—fine brackets around his mouth, a tension in his shoulders that his tailor couldn’t hide." | | 7 | "The gesture was defensive; she knew it, and she didn’t care." | | 8 | "Then, slowly, he reached into the inner pocket of his suit and withdrew a thin metal disc on a chain—old iron, pitted, stamped with a sigil that seemed to writhe when she looked at it directly." | | 9 | "She could smell him now—bergamot and cold stone, the scent of doors that opened into other realms." | | 10 | "It wasn’t a smile, not quite, but it was close—a crack in the armor." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1112 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.02787769784172662 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007194244604316547 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 14.34 | | std | 11.91 | | cv | 0.831 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 52.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3620689655172414 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 91.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Just enough to plant the" | | 1 | "Then, slowly, he reached into" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 44.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She looked straight ahead, into" | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 2 | "His ivory cane rested across" | | 3 | "She’d seen the blade that" | | 4 | "She’d stopped counting the days" | | 5 | "Her full name in his" | | 6 | "His head tilted a fraction" | | 7 | "She didn’t say the name" | | 8 | "She didn’t need to; Lucien" | | 9 | "She expected a smirk." | | 10 | "He gave her silence instead—a" | | 11 | "Her throat closed." | | 12 | "She hated him for that—for" | | 13 | "She was supposed to be" | | 14 | "She was supposed to think" | | 15 | "His voice had dropped, roughening" | | 16 | "She knew he’d once held" | | 17 | "She knew he’d burned a" | | 18 | "She didn’t lock it." | | 19 | "He looked like a man" |
| | ratio | 0.438 | |
| 7.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt turned with" | | 1 | "Rory braced her shoulder against" | | 2 | "A gust of curry-scented air" | | 3 | "Ptolemy wound figure-eights around her" | | 4 | "Rory didn’t need to look" | | 5 | "She looked straight ahead, into" | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 7 | "Rainwater beaded on the shoulders" | | 8 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 9 | "The other was a hole" | | 10 | "His ivory cane rested across" | | 11 | "She’d seen the blade that" | | 12 | "She’d stopped counting the days" | | 13 | "Her full name in his" | | 14 | "The sound was low, guttural," | | 15 | "Animals always knew." | | 16 | "Lucien glanced at the tabby" | | 17 | "His head tilted a fraction" | | 18 | "Rory’s fingers curled against the" | | 19 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy wound figure-eights around her ankles, purring until he wasn’t—until his tabby body went rigid, tail puffed to twice its size, every orange-and-black ha…" | | 1 | "Rainwater beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal suit and ran in thin rivulets down the lapels, but he seemed untouched by the cold, as though weather were a c…" | | 2 | "His platinum hair was slicked back with the kind of precision that took effort to make look effortless, exposing the stark geometry of his face." | | 3 | "His ivory cane rested across his polished shoe, its silver head fashioned into something that might have been a serpent or a flame." | | 4 | "She’d seen the blade that hid inside it once, drawn in an alley behind a Soho club, thin as a needle and twice as cruel." | | 5 | "The sound was low, guttural, a frequency that made Rory’s molars ache." | | 6 | "Lucien glanced at the tabby with something that might have been regret, then back at her, and she felt the weight of that mismatched gaze settle between her col…" | | 7 | "He gave her silence instead—a silence that stretched and deepened until she could hear the rain against the curry house awning three floors down, the hiss of Pt…" | | 8 | "She hated him for that—for being articulate, for being patient, for packing three months of absence into a single sentence that cracked her ribs open." | | 9 | "But Lucien had always been the exception, the variable she couldn’t solve for, the half-demon fixer from Marseille who quoted contract law in English and love p…" | | 10 | "Lucien navigated the chaos without disturbing it, finding the one clear patch of floor near the kitchenette with the unconscious grace of a man who had spent hi…" | | 11 | "The words hung in the kitchenette, braiding with the steam from the forgotten kettle that had boiled dry on the hob." |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he repeated, sharper" | | 1 | "His fingers closed around, knuckles whitening" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.261 | | leniency | 0.522 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |