| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 84.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1582 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1582 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 66.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1605 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1375 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.31 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Isolde | 10 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 18 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Hell | 1 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Varga" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Hel" | | 6 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.845 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 9.15% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to move at the edges of her vision, retreating whenever she tried to focus on them directly" | | 1 | "as though drinking in the atmosphere" | | 2 | "fingers that seemed to have too many joints — and pressed their palm against the carved surface" | | 3 | "felt like a question in her hand, elega" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1605 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "roots that rose" | | 1 | "discovering that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 43.38 | | std | 31.94 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 98 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 74 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 95 | | 20 | 93 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 108 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 90 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 26 |
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| 83.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "been counted" | | 1 | "been varnished" | | 2 | "was lit" | | 3 | "being illuminated" | | 4 | "was carpeted" | | 5 | "were powered" | | 6 | "were made" | | 7 | "been told" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 231 | | matches | | 0 | "was like hearing" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was trying" | | 3 | "was like discovering" | | 4 | "was pulsing" | | 5 | "was watching" | | 6 | "was learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "There was something about the forest in this particular stretch — the way the light seemed to fold in on itself between the branches — that made her voice want to whisper without permission." | | 1 | "Rory had noticed it before, in the bar, in the streets — the Half-Fae left no footprints, no scuff of heel against leaf or earth." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted alongside Rory, their form more solid than usual — a towering silhouette of living shadow, roughly humanoid, taller than any person had a right to be." | | 3 | "And then Rory felt it — a shift in the air so subtle it was less a sensation than an absence of one." | | 4 | "They were still oaks — she was fairly certain they were oaks — but their bark had taken on a silvery-blue sheen, as though they'd been varnished with moonlight." | | 5 | "At its perimeter, four standing stones rose from the earth — massive, weathered, draped in moss and lichen that shimmered with an iridescence Rory had never seen on any plant." | | 6 | "They bloomed in profusion — white and violet and a deep, arterial red — swaying gently in a wind that Rory couldn't feel." | | 7 | "Nyx's form rippled — their version of a reaction." | | 8 | "The wildflowers didn't bend away from her boots — they seemed to lean into her step, turning their faces toward her like children greeting a parent." | | 9 | "Between the black-leaved canopy, she could see — not sky, exactly." | | 10 | "They approached the nearest standing stone and reached out — a long, dark hand with fingers that seemed to have too many joints — and pressed their palm against the carved surface." | | 11 | "It was pulsing now — a slow, steady rhythm like a heartbeat." | | 12 | "The moonsilver was cold — it was always cold — and it caught the sourceless light of the grove and threw it back in soft, luminescent blue." | | 13 | "She stepped deeper into the grove, past the standing stones, into the heart of the blooming, impossible clearing, and the world behind her — the drizzle, the park, the ordinary quiet of a London afternoon — fell away like a coat shrugged off at the door." | | 14 | "Through the gap, she could see another sky — amber-warm, glowing, heavy with the scent of something rich and sweet and deeply wrong." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1365 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "deep, arterial red — swaying" |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.0315018315018315 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01098901098901099 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 12.64 | | std | 10.36 | | cv | 0.82 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 57.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.4094488188976378 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "More like recognition." | | 1 | "Then the light died and" | | 2 | "More like a curtain drawn" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair caught what" | | 1 | "She moved without sound." | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 3 | "She'd learned, in the short" | | 4 | "They were still oaks —" | | 5 | "It was lit from within," | | 6 | "She had stopped at last," | | 7 | "They were taller than she" | | 8 | "They bloomed in profusion —" | | 9 | "Their petals were impossibly delicate," | | 10 | "she said softly" | | 11 | "Their voice was different now." | | 12 | "She felt the crescent scar" | | 13 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 14 | "It was warm." | | 15 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 16 | "She'd heard Isolde speak of" | | 17 | "They approached the nearest standing" | | 18 | "Their voice, when it came," | | 19 | "It was pulsing now —" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "Rory called ahead" | | 3 | "The words came out smaller" | | 4 | "Isolde did not look back." | | 5 | "Her silver hair caught what" | | 6 | "She moved without sound." | | 7 | "Rory had noticed it before," | | 8 | "Nyx drifted alongside Rory, their" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 10 | "Rory opened her mouth to" | | 11 | "She'd learned, in the short" | | 12 | "The path narrowed." | | 13 | "The oaks leaned closer." | | 14 | "The temperature changed." | | 15 | "Rory asked, because the trees" | | 16 | "They were still oaks —" | | 17 | "The leaves overhead were darker," | | 18 | "It was lit from within," | | 19 | "She had stopped at last," |
| | ratio | 0.711 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "As if she weighed nothing" | | 1 | "As if she were an" | | 2 | "As though the air had" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "There was something about the forest in this particular stretch — the way the light seemed to fold in on itself between the branches — that made her voice want …" | | 1 | "As though the air had a texture it hadn't carried before, something thicker and older, laden with the weight of things that had happened here across centuries t…" | | 2 | "They were still oaks — she was fairly certain they were oaks — but their bark had taken on a silvery-blue sheen, as though they'd been varnished with moonlight." | | 3 | "It was lit from within, as though the ground itself remembered being illuminated and was trying to remember still." | | 4 | "At its perimeter, four standing stones rose from the earth — massive, weathered, draped in moss and lichen that shimmered with an iridescence Rory had never see…" | | 5 | "They were taller than she was by half again, their surfaces carved with spiraling patterns that seemed to move at the edges of her vision, retreating whenever s…" | | 6 | "The shadows that composed them deepened, and for a moment they seemed to grow taller, their silhouette expanding as though drinking in the atmosphere." | | 7 | "They approached the nearest standing stone and reached out — a long, dark hand with fingers that seemed to have too many joints — and pressed their palm against…" | | 8 | "The wildflowers at her feet turned toward the opening, straining toward that warm, amber light as though it were the sun they'd been waiting for all along." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |