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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt had barely turned before the door swung inward, forcing me back. Lucien Moreau stood in my doorway, platinum hair dishevelled for once, his charcoal jacket torn at the left shoulder. Blood streaked down his sleeve, dark against the fabric. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, found mine with an intensity that made my stomach lurch. "You're bleeding on my welcome mat." "Charming as ever, Carter." He stepped inside without invitation, his ivory-handled cane clicking against the wooden floor. The door shut behind him. "Though I question whether that mat welcomes anyone." "Occupational hazard of living above a bar." I crossed my arms. "The bleeding. Address it or leave." "Direct." A ghost of a smile. "I'd forgotten." Forgotten. Right. Six weeks of silence and he'd forgotten nothing. Neither had I, despite my best efforts. The dreams alone saw to that, those frustrating, vivid dreams where his mouth did things that made me wake up gasping and furious in equal measure. He surveyed the small flat, taking in the secondhand furniture, the stack of delivery menus on the kitchen counter, the single mug by the sink. His gaze lingered on the empty takeout container from Golden Empress sitting atop the bin. "Yu-Fei still employing you?" "Still none of your business." "Everything in this city is my business." He winced, pressing his free hand against his injured shoulder. "Particularly when it concerns you." The words hung between us, heavy with implication. Six weeks ago, those same words had preceded a conversation that ended with me walking out of his office in Whitechapel, my hands shaking, my pride in tatters. He'd offered me protection. I'd called it a cage. He'd called it necessary. I'd called him something unprintable in three languages, which had only seemed to amuse him. Now here he stood, bleeding on my floor, acting as though nothing had changed. "Sit." I pointed to the worn sofa. "Before you stain anything else." "How domestic." "Don't push it." He sat, careful and controlled despite the injury, and I retrieved the first aid kit from beneath the bathroom sink. When I returned, he'd removed his jacket, revealing a white shirt now soaked crimson from shoulder to elbow. The wound beneath was jagged, like something with claws had taken a swipe at him. "Demons?" "Observant." He leaned back as I knelt beside him, opening the kit. "A minor disagreement regarding territory." "Your territory?" "My interest in it." His eyes tracked my movements as I soaked gauze with antiseptic. "There's a faction in Camden that believes half-bloods shouldn't hold property." "Charming neighbourhood." "Indeed." I pressed the gauze to his wound without warning. He didn't flinch, but his jaw tightened. Up close, I could see the weariness etched into the angles of his face, the faint shadows beneath his mismatched eyes. The cane lay across his lap, and I noticed fresh scratches along the ivory handle, the hidden blade partially exposed. "You didn't come here for bandages." I kept my focus on the wound, cleaning it methodically. "There are healers in the underground who owe you favours. Why show up at my door?" Silence stretched between us. I felt his gaze on my face, tracing the profile I refused to turn toward him. "The faction that attacked me. They were asking questions." His voice dropped lower. "About a woman with black hair and blue eyes who works for the Golden Empress." My hands stilled. The gauze pressed against his skin, blood seeping through white cotton. "About me." "About you." Something shifted in his tone, something dangerous lurking beneath the surface composure. "They wanted to know your schedule. Your routes. Which nights you work late." The antiseptic bottle clinked against the floor as I set it down. My scar throbbed on my wrist, an old phantom, a reminder of the last man who'd thought he could control me through fear. "How long have you known?" "Three days." "Three days, and you're only telling me now?" "I was handling it." "Handling it." I stood, putting distance between us. "Like you handled Evan? By showing up after the fact and offering me your protection?" "Evan was human." Lucien's eyes hardened, both the amber and the black. "This is something else entirely. A faction of Avaros-born demons who want leverage over me, and they've decided you're the most effective pressure point." "Because you made me one." The accusation came out sharper than intended. "You, with your cryptic warnings and your 'stay close to me' and your insistence that I needed your protection. You painted a target on my back the moment you showed interest." "Is that what you think this is? Interest?" I turned to face him fully. He remained on the sofa, shoulder still bleeding, looking entirely too composed for a man who'd just admitted I was being hunted by demons. "What else would you call it? You waltzed into my life, made me feel—" I caught myself. Drew a breath. "You made things complicated, and then you disappeared when I wouldn't play by your rules." "I disappeared because you asked me to leave." "I asked you to stop treating me like something that needed saving." "And I told you that saving you was never my intention." He rose, wincing at the movement, and crossed the space between us in three measured steps. The cane clicked with each stride. "I wanted to stand beside you. There's a difference." "Could've fooled me." "Clearly." He stood close enough that I could smell the blood and something else beneath it, something dark and electric that I associated only with him. Sandalwood and ozone, the scent of the supernatural, the scent of every dream I'd tried to forget. "You're impossibly stubborn, Aurora Carter. I've met demons more accommodating." "Then go bother them instead." "Would that I could." His uninjured hand rose, hovering near my face without making contact. "I've spent six weeks trying to forget the way you looked at me that night. The way you walked away without looking back." "I looked back." His hand dropped. "What?" "After I closed the door to the lift. I looked back." The admission scraped out of me, reluctant and raw. "You were still standing there, watching me go. You didn't even move." "Waiting didn't seem wise." His voice had gone rough. "I have little practice at it." Below us, the bar thumped with bass, someone's idea of music. The floorboards vibrated beneath my feet. Here, in this cramped flat with a half-demon bleeding on my sofa, I should have felt afraid. Instead, something far more dangerous coiled through my chest. "The demons in Camden." I forced myself to focus. "What do they want with you?" "Leverage. I told you." "No. What do they want that you have?" His mismatched eyes held mine, and I watched the calculations shift behind them. Lucien Moreau never gave information freely. Everything had a price, a trade, a careful exchange designed to keep him three steps ahead. "There's an object." He spoke slowly, measuring each word. "Something my father left in my keeping when he returned to Avaros. Something that could open a door between realms." "A door." "A permanent breach. They want to bring more of their kind through, establish a foothold in London." He reached into his torn jacket, producing a small velvet pouch. "This is what they're hunting." I didn't take it. "And you brought it here." "I brought it somewhere they wouldn't expect." His hand closed around the pouch. "Somewhere I could ensure its safety while I dealt with the threat." "By dealing with the threat, you mean getting yourself mauled in an alley." "I mean eliminating the faction's leadership before they could act on their intelligence about you." His jaw tightened. "I was partially successful." "Partially." "Two of the three are dead. The third escaped." He pulled the pouch from my reach as I reached for it. "The third also knows where you live." The floorboards creaked overhead. Footsteps, too heavy for the old woman in 3B, too deliberate for the university students in 4A. Lucien's hand moved to his cane, the hidden blade sliding free with a whisper of steel. "Get behind me." "Absolutely not." The footsteps stopped directly above us. Then the ceiling cracked, plaster dust raining down as something massive tore through the floor from the flat above.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
98.73% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"He stood close [close]"
2"He spoke slowly [slowly]"
3"His hand closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.608
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.101
96.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1389
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1389
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"lurch"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"implication"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"ensure"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"stomach"
2"lurch"
3"silence"
4"implication"
5"etched"
6"tracing"
7"throbbed"
8"reminder"
9"measured"
10"electric"
11"vibrated"
12"velvet"
13"ensure"
14"footsteps"
15"whisper"
16"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"felt afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1389
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount827
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Forgotten1
Golden1
Empress1
Whitechapel1
Silence1
Lucien4
Drew1
Sandalwood1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Silence"
2"Lucien"
3"Drew"
places
0"Golden"
1"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1389
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"to that, those"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std16.15
cv0.825
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330
417
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643
740
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1214
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142
153
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171
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338
344
3523
3636
3743
388
3930
4035
418
4212
4342
443
4553
465
4738
483
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"being hunted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount829
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.031363088057901084
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012062726176115802
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean10.68
std7.19
cv0.673
sampleLengths
013
119
29
318
46
517
65
78
811
96
106
112
121
131
148
157
1626
1725
1815
194
205
2117
225
238
2428
254
265
274
2815
2914
307
315
322
333
3420
3518
3615
371
3812
395
402
4115
4211
432
441
459
467
4721
4820
4916
79.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5076923076923077
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners66
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Instead, something far more dangerous"
1"Then the ceiling cracked, plaster"
ratio0.027
14.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences74
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
1"He stepped inside without invitation,"
2"I crossed my arms"
3"He surveyed the small flat,"
4"His gaze lingered on the"
5"He winced, pressing his free"
6"He'd offered me protection."
7"I'd called it a cage."
8"He'd called it necessary."
9"I'd called him something unprintable"
10"I pointed to the worn"
11"He sat, careful and controlled"
12"He leaned back as I"
13"His eyes tracked my movements"
14"I pressed the gauze to"
15"He didn't flinch, but his"
16"I kept my focus on"
17"I felt his gaze on"
18"His voice dropped lower"
19"My hands stilled."
ratio0.514
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The deadbolt had barely turned"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in my"
2"Blood streaked down his sleeve,"
3"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
4"He stepped inside without invitation,"
5"The door shut behind him."
6"I crossed my arms"
7"A ghost of a smile"
8"Neither had I, despite my"
9"The dreams alone saw to"
10"He surveyed the small flat,"
11"His gaze lingered on the"
12"He winced, pressing his free"
13"The words hung between us,"
14"He'd offered me protection."
15"I'd called it a cage."
16"He'd called it necessary."
17"I'd called him something unprintable"
18"I pointed to the worn"
19"He sat, careful and controlled"
ratio0.878
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Now here he stood, bleeding"
ratio0.014
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, found mine with an intensity that made my stomach lurch."
1"The dreams alone saw to that, those frustrating, vivid dreams where his mouth did things that made me wake up gasping and furious in equal measure."
2"Six weeks ago, those same words had preceded a conversation that ended with me walking out of his office in Whitechapel, my hands shaking, my pride in tatters."
3"I'd called him something unprintable in three languages, which had only seemed to amuse him."
4"Now here he stood, bleeding on my floor, acting as though nothing had changed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He spoke slowly (speak)"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.013
leniency0.025
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.025
86.9872%