Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ03ASN6HK2W063BV6RYJEH6

Run Details

Duration:
5m 1s
Cost:
$0.068316
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the crime scene tape at the Camden Town entrance. Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the streetlight. The Friday market above banged out its evening trade in fried onion and diesel exhaust. Below, the abandoned station swallowed every echo. She checked her watch. The leather strap on her left wrist had cracked at the buckle three years ago; she never repaired it. Fourteen minutes past two. The same numbers stamped on DS Morris's death certificate stared back. She descended. The spiral stairwell tightened. Soot greased the Victorian tiles where a thousand shoulders had brushed. Her torch carved a white wedge through the dark. Water dripped ahead, each drop distinct, metronomic, pooling somewhere out of sight. A uniformed constable blocked the archway at the bottom. Young. The press on his tunic held its factory crease. She placed him: Hale. Recent transfer. All shoulders and assumption. "Detective." He stepped aside. Boots scraped stone. "Body's round the bend. Looks like another junkie who chased the wrong dragon down here." Harlow said nothing. She swept her beam across the platform. Black and white tiles stretched into the tunnel's throat, cracked like pulled molars. No syringes. No foils. No collapsed spoon. The air carried rust and something underneath. Burnt sugar. Ozone. The back of her throat tightened. A figure knelt by the third arch. Red hair, curly and heavy with the station's damp, caught the torchlight. Eva Kowalski did not look up. Her fingers hovered above a black scorch mark on the concrete, the flesh of her knuckles bloodless. "You took your time." "I'm not the one with an Oxford MA and a restricted archives pass." Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. Her leather satchel, swollen with books, sagged against her hip. Grime darkened the flap where it had kissed the platform floor. "He's wrong. About the drugs." The dead man lay across the near rail like a discarded overcoat. Arms spread. Thirtyish. Charcoal wool suit, single-breasted. No shoes. His throat had opened in a ragged line that suggested tearing rather than cutting. But the blood disobeyed gravity. Too little. Too contained. It pooled beneath him in a shape too circular, too deliberate. The geometry offended her. Hale had followed her down from the entrance. He loomed at her shoulder, blocking the torch beam with his frame. "Must've been living here for weeks. Got cornered by ferals. Or a bad batch from the new crew. Either way, open and shut. We can clear out before the last Tube runs." Harlow crouched. Her knees cracked. She ignored the sound. The man's eyes stared past the tunnel's vanishing point. Brown irises, milky, the corneas clouding. On his right palm, a mark. Not defensive wounds. A deliberate impression. Perfectly circular. Two inches across. The skin around it had blistered in a clean ring. "Get SOCO back down here." Harlow did not look up from the hand. "They've been and gone. Signed off an hour ago." "I don't care if they signed in blood. Get them back." Eva rose. Her round glasses slipped down her nose. She pushed them up with a thumb that trembled. "They missed the floor." "What about it?" "Look at the dust." Harlow looked. Between the wooden sleepers, the settled grime formed whorls. Not random. Organized. Fanned out from the body like ripples frozen mid-breach. No footprint disturbed the pattern. No scuff. The man had died here, but no one had walked to him. Or away. Eva tilted her head. "You see tracks?" "No." "Exactly." Eva's voice dropped. The curved walls swallowed it. "A man doesn't wander into a sealed tunnel barefoot and misplace his shoes along the way. He didn't crawl. He didn't fall. He arrived. Whole. And then something else took him apart." Hale shifted. Ballast crunched under his heel. "Body fell from the lip, then. Drunk. Stumbled off the edge. Happens every other Friday." Harlow pointed her torch at the platform lip three feet above. The yellow warning paint glinted, unmarred. No scrapes. No torn threads caught on the rivets. She swept the beam back to the corpse. The suit was Savile Row. The fingernails clean, half-moons buffed to pearl. A silver collar pin held a silk tie in place. This man had not stumbled anywhere. He had been placed with the precision of a bookmark. She reached into her coat pocket. Her fingers closed around cold brass. The Veil Compass had been Morris's. Three years dead, and she carried the weight of it in every step. She flipped the lid. The needle did not settle. It jerked toward the tunnel's black throat, trembling against its pin. The sigils etched into the brass face caught the torchlight, faint, green as its own verdigris. Hale took a step back. His shadow bobbed against the tiles. "Quinn? What's that?" "Wrong question." "I'm sorry?" Harlow stood. Her jaw tightened. Her shadow stretched against the curved wall, merging with the scorch mark Eva had traced. "Ask why he's pointing." Eva's breath caught. "The Veil Market shifts in three nights. Full moon." "I know." "Then you know what he is." Harlow studied the mark on the palm again. Not bruised. Branded. A bone token, pressed into living flesh while hot, cooked into the skin. Entry requirement to a market that moved beneath Camden's feet, that dealt in enchanted goods and stolen secrets. The station was not the scene of a crime. It was the threshold. The man had not died by misadventure. He had been manufactured into a key. She turned the compass. The needle held fast. Toward the dark. Toward the rift beneath Camden that no Ordnance Survey recorded, that Morris had died trying to chart. "Get everybody out." Harlow's voice carried the snap of parade-ground command. "But—" "Now. Seal the stairs. No one else down here until I understand what used this man as currency." Her watch ticked. The sound filled the archway, louder than mechanics allowed. In the tunnel's throat, something answered. A pressure change. Wind without source. It carried copper and myrrh and the low hum of a generator that had no plug. Eva stepped closer. Freckles stood out against skin that had gone bloodless. "You see it too." Harlow ejected the spent torch battery and slapped in a fresh cylinder. The beam sharpened. It caught the edges of the scorch mark on the wall. Not random burning. Deliberate sigils. Protective wards, scored deep into century-old tile. Someone had tried to keep something out. Or lock something in. "I see enough to know we haven't found the murder," Harlow said. "We've found the lock. And whatever opened it is still waiting on the other side." The compass needle danced against its pin. The temperature dropped. Above, Hale's radio crackled with static that shaped itself into half-formed words. Eva gripped her satchel strap. "The full moon isn't for three nights. If the Market hasn't arrived yet—" "Then he wasn't killed for entry." Harlow looked at the branded palm. The blistered circle. The arranged blood. "He was the invitation." A tile cracked somewhere in the dark. Not from above. From within. The tunnel exhaled. The wind died. In the silence, the compass needle stopped dead. It pointed not into the tunnel, but at the body itself. Harlow went still. "What is it?" Eva whispered. "The door isn't the arch." Harlow crouched. She touched the rail. The metal vibrated against her fingertips. "It's him. The bone token didn't get him inside. It got something out." The corpse's eyelids flickered. Hale swore. The sound echoed off the tiles. Eva's satchel slipped from her shoulder. Books struck the platform. The dust between the sleepers stirred. It rose in threads, braiding upward, reaching for the dead man's open mouth. Harlow drew her sidearm. The torch clattered against the rail. Its beam rolled, catching the scorch marks full-on. The sigils were not scars. They were stitches. And the thread had snapped.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.056
96.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1316
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1316
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"loomed"
2"trembled"
3"silk"
4"carried the weight"
5"etched"
6"traced"
7"silence"
8"vibrated"
9"flickered"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences167
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1316
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1035
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Camden3
Town1
Friday1
Morris3
Victorian1
Hale6
Boots1
Kowalski1
Eva11
Savile1
Row1
Veil1
Compass1
Ordnance1
Survey1
Harlow15
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Victorian"
3"Hale"
4"Boots"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
7"Compass"
8"Survey"
9"Harlow"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.76
wordCount1316
matches
0"not into the tunnel, but at the body itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences195
matches
0"recorded, that Morris"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean26.86
std21.67
cv0.807
sampleLengths
082
165
222
346
446
513
634
759
852
951
1013
119
1211
1322
143
154
1644
177
181
1941
2022
2172
2267
2314
242
252
2624
2712
282
296
3069
3128
3211
331
3418
3540
3616
3749
3827
3922
4018
4122
4237
433
445
4530
464
4737
4831
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences167
matches
0"been placed"
1"been manufactured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences195
ratio0.005
matches
0"The leather strap on her left wrist had cracked at the buckle three years ago; she never repaired it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.017241379310344827
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019157088122605363
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean6.75
std4.95
cv0.734
sampleLengths
013
17
215
37
44
519
64
711
82
94
1011
119
1212
139
141
159
164
172
184
194
203
2115
223
237
2413
252
262
273
287
292
301
316
327
3312
346
3517
364
3713
388
3910
4011
415
4212
432
441
454
462
4714
485
492
55.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3641025641025641
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners71
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences136
matches
0"Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught"
1"She checked her watch."
2"Her torch carved a white"
3"She placed him: Hale."
4"He stepped aside"
5"She swept her beam across"
6"Her fingers hovered above a"
7"Her leather satchel, swollen with"
8"His throat had opened in"
9"It pooled beneath him in"
10"He loomed at her shoulder,"
11"Her knees cracked."
12"She ignored the sound."
13"Her round glasses slipped down"
14"She pushed them up with"
15"She swept the beam back"
16"He had been placed with"
17"She reached into her coat"
18"Her fingers closed around cold"
19"She flipped the lid."
ratio0.257
55.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences136
matches
0"Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the"
1"Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught"
2"The Friday market above banged"
3"She checked her watch."
4"The leather strap on her"
5"The same numbers stamped on"
6"The spiral stairwell tightened."
7"Soot greased the Victorian tiles"
8"Her torch carved a white"
9"Water dripped ahead, each drop"
10"A uniformed constable blocked the"
11"The press on his tunic"
12"She placed him: Hale."
13"He stepped aside"
14"Boots scraped stone."
15"Harlow said nothing."
16"She swept her beam across"
17"The air carried rust and"
18"The back of her throat"
19"A figure knelt by the"
ratio0.809
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Entry requirement to a market that moved beneath Camden's feet, that dealt in enchanted goods and stolen secrets."
1"Above, Hale's radio crackled with static that shaped itself into half-formed words."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.056
87.7235%