| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.491 | | leniency | 0.982 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2293 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2293 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "lurching" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "structure" | | 11 | "synchronized" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "crystallized" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 178 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2266 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1839 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 28 | | London | 1 | | England | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Varga | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "England" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.739 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed lit from within" | | 1 | "not quite silver, not quite white" | | 2 | "not quite white" | | 3 | "quite parse" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.441 | | wordCount | 2266 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a smile—something older than amusement, but adjacent to it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 66 | | mean | 34.33 | | std | 24.5 | | cv | 0.714 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 123 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 79 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 68 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 67 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 57 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 54 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "been built" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 23 | | totalSentences | 178 | | ratio | 0.129 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her collarbone—warm, insistent, like a second heartbeat she hadn't asked for." | | 1 | "Nyx materialized enough for a face to form in the dark mass—violet eyes blinking open like wounds in the air." | | 2 | "The oaks stood apart from the park's usual collection—six of them in a rough circle, their trunks bowed inward at angles that made the joints between them look almost architectural." | | 3 | "Not the gentle shift of shade—this was a sharp, electric cool that raised every hair on her arms." | | 4 | "She stumbled forward as the ground shifted under her boots—solid stone becoming soft earth, then something spongy and warm." | | 5 | "Instead, the air around her shimmered with a faint distortion, like heat haze layered over ice, and beyond that—" | | 6 | "She'd seen aerial photos of Richmond Park—it covered thousands of acres, sure—but this space couldn't exist within those borders." | | 7 | "A sound reached her ears—high, sweet, and distant, like someone playing a glass harmonica inside a cathedral." | | 8 | "Every step revealed new layers—the canopy shifted colors above her as she moved, amber fading to rose, rose darkening to violet." | | 9 | "The surface showed a room—a kitchen, warm-lit, with flour-dusted countertops and a woman's hands shaping bread dough." | | 10 | "Wildflowers climbed the stones in cascading curtains, their blooms open and breathing—she could see them expand and contract, a slow rhythm like lungs drawing air." | | 11 | "The air here tasted different—thicker, almost sweet, like breathing through honey." | | 12 | "Nyx melted into the shadows at the amphitheater's rim, their form compressing until only their eyes remained visible—two violet points of light watching." | | 13 | "Her eyes—pale lavender, ancient and unblinking—fixed on Rory with an intensity that made the air pressure in her lungs shift." | | 14 | "The flame in the brass holder threw her face into sharp relief—ageless, but not young." | | 15 | "Not a smile—something older than amusement, but adjacent to it." | | 16 | "The amber light in the canopy deepened, and the wildflowers closed their petals in unison—a synchronized retreat that pulled shadows across the amphitheater like a curtain." | | 17 | "The shimmering distortion between the trees pulsed—a visible ripple that moved like something breathing." | | 18 | "The cold hit her palm like an electric shock, and for a moment she saw the grove differently—the flowers, the stones, the ancient oaks—saw them through a filter of moonlight and violence, saw the blade's history carved into its edge." | | 19 | "Nyx's shadow form flickered—an approximation of a nod." | | 20 | "The grove's ambient light had dimmed to a deep, bruised purple, and the mirror pool she'd passed earlier had gone dark—its surface now black and still, reflecting nothing." | | 21 | "She thought about the map inside—a record of someone else's hunger, someone who'd left her a gift from a realm she'd never heard of three days ago." | | 22 | "The grove exhaled around her, and the wildflowers opened again—one by one, like eyes adjusting to the dark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1872 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.027243589743589744 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005341880341880342 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 178 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 178 | | mean | 12.73 | | std | 8.91 | | cv | 0.7 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 38 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 46.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3202247191011236 | | totalSentences | 178 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the faint crimson glow" | | 1 | "Instead, the air around her" | | 2 | "Then forgot to inhale again." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't stopped noticing it" | | 1 | "She pushed through a curtain" | | 2 | "Their form solidified, feet touching" | | 3 | "They tilted their head, a" | | 4 | "She stumbled forward as the" | | 5 | "Her hands shot out for" | | 6 | "She'd seen aerial photos of" | | 7 | "They grew in spirals and" | | 8 | "She knelt beside the nearest" | | 9 | "Her knees sank into the" | | 10 | "She flexed her hand." | | 11 | "She kept walking." | | 12 | "She paused at a formation" | | 13 | "She jerked back." | | 14 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 15 | "They drifted closer, their form" | | 16 | "Their violet eyes studied the" | | 17 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 18 | "She kept moving." | | 19 | "She reached for the book." |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 14.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 123 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory followed the deer path" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 2 | "She hadn't stopped noticing it" | | 3 | "Rory called back over her" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized enough for a" | | 5 | "Rory scanned the treeline ahead." | | 6 | "The oaks stood apart from" | | 7 | "Each tree wore a shawl" | | 8 | "Something grown into the wood" | | 9 | "She pushed through a curtain" | | 10 | "The pendant flared hot against" | | 11 | "Their form solidified, feet touching" | | 12 | "Rory rubbed her arms, but" | | 13 | "Something darker underneath, like the" | | 14 | "The kind of scent that" | | 15 | "They tilted their head, a" | | 16 | "Rory stepped between the two" | | 17 | "The world folded." | | 18 | "She stumbled forward as the" | | 19 | "Her hands shot out for" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 36.23% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time she reached" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 45.01% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood apart from the park's usual collection—six of them in a rough circle, their trunks bowed inward at angles that made the joints between them look …" | | 1 | "The kind of scent that made your stomach clench with hunger for a meal you'd never tasted." | | 2 | "The veins pulsed in a rhythm that matched the pendant's warmth." | | 3 | "The sound of branches growing, of roots reaching through stone, of flowers opening in a darkness that existed somewhere beneath the visible ground." | | 4 | "The reflection shifted, and she saw her father standing at the stove, a wooden spoon in his hand, mouthing something she couldn't hear." | | 5 | "The ground rose ahead, creating a natural amphitheater ringed by low stone walls that might have been natural formations or might have been built by something w…" | | 6 | "At the center of the amphitheater stood a single stone table, its surface carved with spiraling patterns that matched the markings on the oaks." | | 7 | "Her eyes—pale lavender, ancient and unblinking—fixed on Rory with an intensity that made the air pressure in her lungs shift." | | 8 | "The shimmering distortion between the trees pulsed—a visible ripple that moved like something breathing." | | 9 | "She thought about the map inside—a record of someone else's hunger, someone who'd left her a gift from a realm she'd never heard of three days ago." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.127 | | leniency | 0.255 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.073 | |