Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ03J644P6K859R2MWVQABEN

Run Details

Duration:
6m 5s
Cost:
$0.076263
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt turned. Aurora Carter pulled the door open. Silas’ jukebox bled through the floorboards below—some brass riff that died mid-note. Lucien Moreau filled the threshold. Rainwater dripped from his charcoal lapels onto the landing’s threadbare carpet. In his right hand, the ivory handle of his cane caught the bare bulb overhead, bone-pale and smooth. One eye burned amber; the other drank the light, black as a burnt-out wick. “You’re blocking my exit.” Rory braced her shoulder against the frame. Her straight black hair, damp from the evening shift, clung to her neck in shoulder-length ribbons. Sesame oil and Sichuan pepper ghosted her clothes; the Golden Empress did not rinse out. Her bright blue eyes held his mismatched stare without blinking. “I’m not leaving.” She did not move. He stepped forward. His chest brushed hers, wool against cotton, and he crossed into her kitchen. The flat above Silas’ bar comprised two rooms: a sink that smelled of yesterday’s noodles and a window that rattled when the Tube passed two streets over. Lucien removed neither his coat nor his shoes. His cane tapped once against the linoleum. Three weeks since he’d last cleared this doorway. Twenty-one days since the night he’d backed her against the counter and vanished without a word. She’d scrubbed the kitchenette twice since then, as if bleach could burn away the memory of his hands on her hips. Rory shut the door. The latch clicked. “Evan’s out.” Her jaw tightened. “Early release?” “No release. He slipped his handlers in Bristol.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “He’s crossed the Severn. I traced a phone purchase to Whitechapel an hour ago.” She walked to the sink. Her flats squeaked on the linoleum. She gripped the laminate edge and stared at the kettle’s rust-pocked flank. The crescent scar on her left wrist—the childhood souvenir from a Cardiff bicycle chain—faced outward, silver in the dim light. Beneath it, the veins pulsed with a deeper, older ache. Lucien had seen the police photographs. He knew the geography of her damage. “You came to warn me.” She cranked the tap. Water thundered into the kettle. “How gallant.” “I came because you’re too stubborn to leave.” “And you’re too stubborn to piss off when asked.” Behind her, the cane thumped. He stood close enough that she caught the scent of him—dark cologne cut with sulphur, the signature of wherever he’d spent his night. Not human places. Avaros-touched. Lucien set a folded photograph beside the kettle. She didn’t look. “You’re bleeding.” Rory glanced down. A thin red line crosshatched her thumb—paper cut from flattening delivery boxes at Yu-Fei’s. She raised it to her mouth. He caught her wrist. The touch stopped her breath. His thumb pressed the scar’s crescent edge. His skin ran fever-hot, demon-hot, the way she remembered from the night he’d backed her against this same counter, a hand at her jaw, a question in his eyes, then nothing. She’d trembled then, not from fear of him, but from the want. His mismatched stare made her feel flayed open. She yanked against his grip. “Let go.” He held on, pressure light as manacles. “Make me.” She twisted. The urge to bite him flared. To knee his thigh. To crawl out the rattling window and vanish down the fire escape. She looked up. At five-foot-eleven he dwarfed her five-foot-six frame without effort. Platinum hair, slicked back severe, drew all attention to the hunger in his stare—one eye amber as a warning light, the other an abyss. “You walked out.” Her voice scraped the ceiling. “Three weeks ago. You had me against this counter, my shirt unbuttoned, and you walked out.” Lucien’s amber eye flickered. The black one stayed steady. “I walked out because your pulse hammered here.” His thumb shifted to the artery in her wrist. “I could taste it. I am my father’s son, Rory. You’d seen enough monsters.” “You don’t get to decide what I’ve seen.” “No?” He leaned in. His cane handle gleamed against the cupboard. “You locked the door.” “You gave me the key.” Silas’ jukebox kicked downstairs, a sudden trumpet wail. Neither flinched. Lucien’s grip softened. He traced the old white scar, the childhood mark of a Cardiff summer and an Irish barrister too busy to fix the chain. She’d told him once, drunk on cheap bourbon, that it was the only scar she carried she hadn’t earned through stupidity or trust. Rory’s free hand curled against the counter. “You think I’m afraid of monsters? I work for Yu-Fei Cheung. I deliver kung pao to vampires in Spitalfields. I’m not running, Luc. I’m surviving.” “Then survive with me inside this flat until dawn.” “And after?” His mouth opened. Closed. The unsaid thing hung between them—older than Evan, older than demon blood. The attraction had always thrummed beneath their arguments, a live wire drowned in takeaway whiskey and late-night drops. Three weeks ago it had flared into something that scorched. He’d pulled back because he thought himself kind. She’d let him because she believed herself broken. Rory tugged her wrist free. She turned the tap off. The silence stretched, thin as wire. Lucien reached into his breast pocket and withdrew a thin iron key. Hers. She’d thrown it at him the night he’d left. It had struck his shoulder and clattered on the landing. He must have kept it. He laid it on the counter next to the photograph. Next to a crumpled napkin from the Golden Empress she’d used to jot down a Tuesday order. “I’m not here for thanks.” “Good. You’d starve.” A laugh—low, startled—escaped him. It changed his face, erased the fixer, the broker, the blade hidden in his cane. For a moment he was nothing but Lucien, Marseille-born, terrible at pancakes, fluent in sarcasm and four languages. She’d watched him sleep once, through a hospital curtain after a job gone wrong. He’d murmured in French, then Arabic. She had not told him. He moved. Not toward the door. Toward the narrow sofa that doubled as her bed. He draped his coat across the arm. The cane slid against the cushion, ivory handle whispering against cheap velvet. “You’re staying?” “Do I look like I’m leaving?” “You look like you want me to beg.” His amber eye caught the streetlight bleeding through the thin curtain. “I want you alive. The rest is geography.” Rory crossed her arms. The damp ends of her hair dripped onto her collar. Outside, a siren dopplered past Brick Lane. She could push him out. Deadbolt the door. Reinforce the window with the flatiron she never used. Or she could let the half-demon in the charcoal suit occupy her floorboards and force the conversation they’d buried with their silence. She grabbed the kettle. “There’s no milk.” “I take it black.” “As your soul?” “As my soul.” She filled it anyway, though her hands shook, and the water sloshed, and neither of them looked away from the steam beginning to rise between them like a wall neither could climb.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"thundered"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulsed"
2"thundered"
3"trembled"
4"flickered"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1162
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount915
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Sichuan1
Golden2
Empress2
Lucien9
Cardiff2
Water1
Yu-Fei1
Irish1
Evan1
Tuesday1
Marseille-born1
French1
Arabic1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Empress"
3"Lucien"
4"Water"
5"Evan"
6"Marseille-born"
7"Rory"
places
0"Sichuan"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"French"
5"Brick"
6"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
27.88% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.721
wordCount1162
matches
0"neither his coat nor"
1"not from fear of him, but from the want"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean23.24
std21.61
cv0.93
sampleLengths
09
160
252
33
462
545
67
72
85
925
1066
1116
128
139
1432
1511
162
1723
184
1963
207
219
2260
2324
2440
258
2615
275
2859
2932
309
312
3260
3316
3437
3527
365
373
3862
3934
402
416
428
4319
4460
457
464
473
483
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences135
ratio0.059
matches
0"One eye burned amber; the other drank the light, black as a burnt-out wick."
1"Sesame oil and Sichuan pepper ghosted her clothes; the Golden Empress did not rinse out."
2"The crescent scar on her left wrist—the childhood souvenir from a Cardiff bicycle chain—faced outward, silver in the dim light."
3"He stood close enough that she caught the scent of him—dark cologne cut with sulphur, the signature of wherever he’d spent his night."
4"A thin red line crosshatched her thumb—paper cut from flattening delivery boxes at Yu-Fei’s."
5"Platinum hair, slicked back severe, drew all attention to the hunger in his stare—one eye amber as a warning light, the other an abyss."
6"The unsaid thing hung between them—older than Evan, older than demon blood."
7"A laugh—low, startled—escaped him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount146
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.02054794520547945
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean8.61
std6.43
cv0.747
sampleLengths
03
16
212
35
411
518
614
711
816
915
1010
113
124
133
1413
1527
168
177
188
1916
2021
214
223
232
243
252
2611
2714
285
296
3012
3120
3210
336
347
359
365
372
388
399
405
4123
423
431
448
453
462
473
4814
496
55.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.362962962962963
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her straight black hair, damp"
1"Her bright blue eyes held"
2"She did not move."
3"He stepped forward."
4"His chest brushed hers, wool"
5"His cane tapped once against"
6"She’d scrubbed the kitchenette twice"
7"Her jaw tightened."
8"She walked to the sink."
9"Her flats squeaked on the"
10"She gripped the laminate edge"
11"He knew the geography of"
12"She cranked the tap"
13"He stood close enough that"
14"She didn’t look."
15"She raised it to her"
16"He caught her wrist."
17"His thumb pressed the scar’s"
18"His skin ran fever-hot, demon-hot,"
19"She’d trembled then, not from"
ratio0.475
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences99
matches
0"The deadbolt turned."
1"Aurora Carter pulled the door"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the threshold."
3"Rainwater dripped from his charcoal"
4"Rory braced her shoulder against"
5"Her straight black hair, damp"
6"Sesame oil and Sichuan pepper"
7"Her bright blue eyes held"
8"She did not move."
9"He stepped forward."
10"His chest brushed hers, wool"
11"The flat above"
12"Lucien removed neither his coat"
13"His cane tapped once against"
14"She’d scrubbed the kitchenette twice"
15"Rory shut the door."
16"The latch clicked."
17"Her jaw tightened."
18"Lucien’s jaw tightened"
19"She walked to the sink."
ratio0.818
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"To knee his thigh."
1"To crawl out the rattling"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0501%