Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ03MB9JR5DKV6YMQ1X0KYSZ

Run Details

Duration:
46.6s
Cost:
$0.006516
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of damp concrete and old copper. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow tape, her worn leather watch catching the beam of the industrial lamp a uniform had set up. The entrance to the abandoned Camden Tube station gaped like a rotten tooth. Below, a spiral staircase descended into absolute black. “Down there?” her voice echoed. The constable nodded, not meeting her eye. “Forensics is on their way. You’re the first detective on scene.” She clicked her tongue. “Lucky me.” The stairs were slick with condensation. Her boots, made for city pavement, protested each step. At the bottom, another lamp cast a sickly yellow circle over a cavern that shouldn’t have existed. The old platform was there, tiles cracked and weeping grime. But beyond the last rusted bench, the tunnel wall had been sheared away, revealing a much larger chamber carved from the earth. Market stalls, silent and empty, stood in rows like tombstones. They were made of mismatched wood, draped in stained velvet and moth-eaten furs. A faint, sweet-rot smell of dried herbs and old blood lingered. In the centre of the cleared space, a man lay on his back. His eyes were open, staring at the dripping ceiling. A single, precise wound darkened his chest. A figure knelt by the body, a silhouette against the forensic lamps being brought down. Green eyes, hidden behind round glasses, blinked up at her. Eva Kowalski, her leather satchel sitting open on the floor beside her, stuffed with books. “Eva. What in God’s name are you doing here?” Eva tucked a stray red curl behind her left ear. “I was about to ask you the same. This is… this is a Veil Market night. Or it was. They move every full moon. Someone cleared it out.” Quinn walked a slow perimeter, her gaze missing nothing. The dirt floor was a chaos of footprints. “The call said aggravated robbery. Tourist wandered in, got mugged, fought back, got stabbed.” She pointed at the man’s expensive watch, still on his wrist. His wallet, half-peeking from his jacket, was fat with cash. “Looks straightforward.” “Too straightforward.” Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw tightening. She didn’t touch the body. “No one robs a man in a secret supernatural black market and leaves his wallet. And look at the blood.” She gestured. The spray was minimal, a small pool beneath the wound, staining the packed earth. “The wound is deep, but the blood spatter suggests he was already dead or dying when he hit the ground. No arterial spray. No tracks leading away from the pool. If he was standing when he was stabbed, he’d have staggered, bled more, fallen. This… this is almost theatrical.” Eva adjusted her glasses, leaning closer. “The wound, it’s not from a knife. See the edges? Too clean. Almost cauterized.” “I’ll wait for the medical examiner’s opinion on that.” Quinn stood, wiping her hands on her trousers. Her military precision made each movement economical, deliberate. She scanned the nearby stalls. One, draped in black velvet, had its counter splintered. Shards of small glass phials littered the ground, glinting in the lamplight. “Here’s your robbery,” Quinn said. “Someone smashed this stall. Took whatever was in those containers.” Eva opened her mouth to speak, then stopped. She was staring at the wall behind the splintered stall. Quinn followed her gaze. Carved into the brick, almost hidden by the stall’s bulk, was a sigil. A complex spiral of lines and dots, deeply etched. A patina of verdigris, like old copper, clung to the grooves. “That’s not local graffiti,” Eva murmured, her voice dropping. She pulled a worn journal from her satchel, flipping pages with practiced speed. “It’s a ward. Or was. A containment glyph. This market… it doesn’t just sell enchanted goods. It holds things. Dangerous things.” “Lovely. So someone robbed the supernatural Costco and killed the security guard?” “Maybe. Or maybe the thing they took… fought back.” Quinn circled the body again. The victim’s hands were clean. No defensive wounds. His shoes were polished, his suit expensive but poorly fitted. A tourist, clearly, who had wandered into the wrong alley at the wrong time. Yet… something niggled. She knelt again, ignoring Eva’s sharp intake of breath. She leaned over the body, her face inches from the dead man’s. His gaze was fixed on a point just past her shoulder. She didn’t follow it. Instead, she studied his neck. No ligature marks. No bruises. His skin tone was normal, not the cyanotic blue of asphyxiation. It was the wound, then. Just the wound. Her eyes dropped to his left hand, lying palm-up in the dirt. There, nestled in the hollow of his palm, was a small, brass object. A compass. She used the tip of her pen to nudge it open. The face was etched with the same kind of protective sigils as the mark on the wall. The needle, however, wasn’t pointing north. It quivered, then spun lazily before settling on a direction that pointed straight at the dead man’s heart. “The Veil Compass,” Eva whispered, crouching beside her. She’d read about it. “It points to the nearest rift. Or portal. A supernatural seam in the world.” “It points to a dead man’s chest,” Quinn corrected flatly. “Which is not a seam in the world. It’s a stab wound.” “But what if the wound *is* the seam?” Eva’s green eyes were wide behind her lenses. “What if whatever was in those phials wasn’t just a substance? What if it was a contained entity? A spirit, a shadow-thing? And when the phials were smashed, it was released. It didn’t run. It entered him. Used him as a vessel. The wound isn’t where something went in, Harlow. It’s where it got out.” The theory hung in the cold, damp air. Quinn looked from the compass in the dead man’s hand to the splintered stall, to the ward carved in the wall. The constable’s words—*aggravated robbery*—felt like a child’s story told to comfort themselves in the dark. She stood, her worn leather watch slipping down her wrist. The tick was imperceptible, swallowed by the silence of the underground. “Forensics can have the body,” Quinn said, her voice echoing in the vast chamber. “I want a complete chemical analysis of those glass shards. I want this sigil photographed, measured, and cross-referenced with every obscure text in the department’s archive. And I want to know who in this city sells containment phials in an illegal market, and what, exactly, they were holding.” She looked at Eva, who was already scribbling notes, her freckled face pale in the lamplight. The usual nervous habit was gone, replaced by focused intensity. “You think this is one of yours,” Quinn said. It wasn’t a question. “One of the *things* your old texts talk about.” Eva looked up, tucking a curl behind her ear. “I think this man died because of something we don’t have a word for yet. And I think the person who smashed that stall knew exactly what they were releasing.” Quinn’s gaze swept the chamber again, this time not looking for footprints or blood spatter, but for the spaces between things. The shadows that clung too deep. The unnatural silence that pressed in. The evidence didn’t add up because it was the wrong kind of arithmetic. The dead man on the floor wasn’t a victim of a robbery gone wrong. He was a message, scrawled in a language she was only beginning to decipher. She turned to the stairs. “Secure the site. No one comes down without my direct order. Not even the press when they get wind of this.” “Where are you going?” Quinn paused, one boot on the first step. “To find out what was worth killing for in a place that doesn’t officially exist.” She gave Eva a long, hard look. “And to find out how a research assistant from the British Museum knows so much about it.” She climbed back up into the normal, mundane darkness of the city, leaving the wrong kind of murder behind. The ticking of her watch felt louder in the silence, a steady, mechanical heartbeat counting down to something she couldn’t yet name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn corrected flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.061
96.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"complex"
count1
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"quivered"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"velvet"
2"scanned"
3"glinting"
4"complex"
5"etched"
6"quivered"
7"silence"
8"echoing"
9"measured"
10"intensity"
11"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1363
ratio0.003
matches
0"is"
1"aggravated robbery"
2"things"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount887
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn13
Camden1
Tube1
Kowalski1
Eva11
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.767
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a child’s story told to comfo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.734
wordCount1363
matches
0"not looking for footprints or blood spatter, but for the spaces between things"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean34.95
std24.15
cv0.691
sampleLengths
054
15
218
36
498
529
640
79
838
952
102
1198
1220
1351
1415
1522
1633
1743
1812
199
2040
2165
2225
232
2452
2526
2622
2771
2844
2921
3062
3126
3222
3339
3474
3526
364
3747
3841
79.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences95
matches
0"been sheared"
1"were made"
2"being brought"
3"were polished"
4"was fixed"
5"was etched"
6"was gone"
29.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was staring"
1"wasn’t pointing"
2"was already scribbling"
3"was only beginning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences115
ratio0.009
matches
0"The constable’s words—*aggravated robbery*—felt like a child’s story told to comfort themselves in the dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount891
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02356902356902357
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007856341189674524
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.85
std8.66
cv0.731
sampleLengths
09
124
213
38
45
57
611
74
82
96
109
1117
1210
1322
1410
1513
1611
1713
189
197
2015
2110
2215
239
2410
2528
269
278
2825
2910
302
318
325
3322
3414
3549
366
3714
3817
398
405
419
4212
435
4410
458
4610
474
4813
499
52.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3826086956521739
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners44
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Instead, she studied his neck."
1"Just the wound."
ratio0.023
83.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences88
matches
0"her voice echoed"
1"She clicked her tongue."
2"Her boots, made for city"
3"They were made of mismatched"
4"His eyes were open, staring"
5"She pointed at the man’s"
6"His wallet, half-peeking from his"
7"She didn’t touch the body."
8"Her military precision made each"
9"She scanned the nearby stalls."
10"She was staring at the"
11"She pulled a worn journal"
12"His shoes were polished, his"
13"She knelt again, ignoring Eva’s"
14"She leaned over the body,"
15"His gaze was fixed on"
16"She didn’t follow it."
17"His skin tone was normal,"
18"It was the wound, then."
19"Her eyes dropped to his"
ratio0.341
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences88
matches
0"The air tasted of damp"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The entrance to the abandoned"
3"her voice echoed"
4"The constable nodded, not meeting"
5"She clicked her tongue."
6"The stairs were slick with"
7"Her boots, made for city"
8"The old platform was there,"
9"They were made of mismatched"
10"A faint, sweet-rot smell of"
11"His eyes were open, staring"
12"A single, precise wound darkened"
13"A figure knelt by the"
14"Eva Kowalski, her leather satchel"
15"Eva tucked a stray red"
16"Quinn walked a slow perimeter,"
17"The dirt floor was a"
18"She pointed at the man’s"
19"His wallet, half-peeking from his"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"At the bottom, another lamp cast a sickly yellow circle over a cavern that shouldn’t have existed."
1"She looked at Eva, who was already scribbling notes, her freckled face pale in the lamplight."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw tightening"
1"Eva murmured, her voice dropping"
2"Quinn said, her voice echoing in the vast chamber"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
2"Quinn corrected flatly (correct)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
80.3216%