Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ03NER5XBK4F0HD7ZT7656V

Run Details

Duration:
5m 19s
Cost:
$0.058501
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest fizzed against the November dark. Rory pushed through the door, the cold clinging to her straight black hair. She had spent the evening weaving through Chinatown with crates of dim sum balanced against her hip, and the ache had rooted itself deep between her shoulder blades. Inside, the bar exhaled its familiar scent of polished oak and stale tobacco smoke. Black-and-white photographs lined the walls like silent verdicts. Old maps of cities she would never visit sagged in their frames. She found her usual corner beneath a crooked photograph of a woman boarding a train in Prague, and slid onto the worn leather stool. Silas leant against the back bar, a towel draped over his forearm. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light as he lifted his chin in her direction. The silver signet ring on his right hand tapped twice against the counter. He moved with the restrained economy of a man who had learned to compensate for the limp in his left leg decades ago. He placed a pint of bitter in front of her, his hazel eyes scanning the room with the same methodical sweep he had used in fields she did not ask about. Rory wrapped her left hand around the glass. Her thumb found the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a habit she could not break. She drank. The beer cut through the grease and exhaust of her shift. The door opened. A draught carried in the smell of rain and expensive aftershave. A man stood beneath the threshold, brushing water from a charcoal overcoat. He was tall, his posture rigid, his jaw clean-shaven and angular. Everything about him spoke of transactions and deadlines. Yet something in the set of his shoulders, a particular angle of his head as he scanned the room, made Rory's stomach tighten. His gaze locked onto her. "Carter." She set the pint down. Foam clung to her upper lip. "Caleb." He crossed the floor. Leather soles struck the boards with a clipped rhythm utterly unlike the scuffed-trainer shuffle she remembered from the corridors of Cardiff Law. Up close, the differences accumulated like evidence. The paint-stained jeans had surrendered to tailored wool. The tangled mess of hair that had once fallen across his forehead was cropped to the scalp, combed into submission. Even his scent had changed, from turpentine and roll-up tobacco to cedar and vetiver. "I thought that was you." His laugh was a single note, dry and brokered. "Jesus. How long's it been?" "Four years. Maybe five." "Five." He unbuttoned his coat and sat on the adjacent stool without invitation. The fabric strained across shoulders that had broadened, hardened. "You cut your hair." "You grew into your father's wardrobe." Silas approached, his limp a soft interruption in the quiet. He placed a fresh coaster on the bar. The silver ring clicked against the wood. "Whisky. Neat." Caleb did not look up. Silas poured a measure from the top shelf and withdrew, though Rory knew he listened. He always listened. She turned her glass in slow circles. "You didn't drink whisky." "I didn't do a lot of things." Caleb lifted the glass, regarded the amber liquid, and knocked back half. "I stuck to cheap lager and self-righteousness back then. The whisky came with the job." "Which job?" "Associate solicitor. Commercial property. Hammond and Price. My father's firm." Rory studied his cufflinks. Small brushed-steel rectangles caught the light with a cold gleam. "You said he'd turn your palette monochrome. You promised you'd rather sleep in a studio with damp walls than wear his suits." "He did turn me monochrome." Caleb's thumb traced a water ring on the bar. "And damp walls lose their charm at twenty-four. I discovered I liked central heating and clear boundaries." "Or he wore you down." "Or that." He turned to face her. His eyes were the same storm-grey she remembered, but the skin beneath them had thinned, shadowed. "You look tired, Rory." "I am tired. I deliver food for a restaurant in Chinatown. I live above this bar. Tired comes with the rent." "What happened to the Bar? You were top of our mooting class. Professor Davies said you'd wipe the floor at the Inns of Court." Rory rotated her wrist. The scar peeked beneath her sleeve, a pale sickle against her skin. "Evan happened. Then I left. Then London happened." "I looked for you." "You looked in the wrong places." "I looked everywhere I could think of." Caleb's voice hardened, not with anger but with the friction of old guilt. "Eva wouldn't tell me a thing. She said you'd made it clear. No contact. No trace." "She was protecting me." "Was she?" He finished the whisky. The glass met the wood with a sharp crack. "Or was she punishing me because I saw the bruise on your collarbone at that Christmas party and did nothing?" The photographs on the wall seemed to lean closer. The ice machine in the back coughed and died. Rory's fingers tightened around her pint. "You saw it." "I saw it. Purple. Yellow at the edges. The shape of fingertips." Caleb's knuckles whitened around the empty glass. "You laughed it off. You said you'd walked into a door. And I wanted to believe you, because the alternative meant I'd have to confront him. Call the police. Be the person I pretended I was." "You were twenty-one. We were all pretending." "I was your friend." "Yes." She met his eyes. "You were." Silas returned. He refilled Caleb's glass from the bottle, his movements precise and silent. The grey in his beard seemed starker beneath the green neon. He did not speak. He did not need to. He set the bottle down and limped back to his station, his left leg dragging enough to remind the room that some injuries never fully heal. Caleb stared at the fresh pour. "We were going to change the world. Do you remember? Human rights appeals. Defending asylum seekers. You had that speech about the erosion of legal aid. I painted the banner for the Crown Court protest." "It dissolved in the rain." "The paint ran. Red streaks down your coat. You looked like you'd been shot." A muscle jumped in his jaw. "It was the last time I saw you righteous. You had a fire, Rory. You made the rest of us look like kindling." "I ran out of fuel." "You ran out of support." Caleb's voice dropped to a rough whisper. "I should have followed you that night. I should have picked up the phone. I should have burned his flat down." "But you didn't." "No. I became everything I hated. The suit. The billable hours. The evictions." He laughed, and the sound held no warmth. "And I told myself it was penance. If I couldn't save my friend, at least I could accumulate enough capital to matter." "You mattered anyway." "Not to anyone who knew me before." He buttoned his coat. The gesture was final, a closing of accounts. "You're still there, though. Underneath the exhaustion. I saw it the second I walked in. You haven't let him take that." Rory touched her scar. "He took plenty." "Yes." Caleb stood. He placed two twenty-pound notes on the bar, far more than the whisky cost. "He did. And I let him." He walked to the door. The green neon caught the wet wool of his shoulders, rendering him overexposed and unreachable. The door closed behind him. The fog erased his shape. Rory remained on her stool. She looked at the two notes, at the half-empty bottle Silas had left behind. She raised her left hand, tracing the crescent scar with her opposite thumb. The maps on the walls whispered of borders crossed and rivers forded, of territories neither she nor Caleb had ever reached. She lifted her pint, finished the warm dregs, and set the glass down in the ring of condensation. The neon buzzed above the door. The night continued.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"restrained"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"charm"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"restrained"
2"scanning"
3"methodical"
4"scanned"
5"stomach"
6"traced"
7"charm"
8"whisper"
9"warmth"
10"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"t with anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount848
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Caleb"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Caleb"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
November1
Chinatown1
Prague1
Rory9
Cardiff1
Law1
Caleb10
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Caleb"
4"Silas"
places
0"Chinatown"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.91
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed starker beneath the green neon"
50.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.499
wordCount1334
matches
0"not with anger but with the friction of old guilt"
1"neither she nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean15.51
std20.42
cv1.316
sampleLengths
0111
195
236
368
45
51
611
71
875
95
109
115
124
131
1421
154
166
1725
182
1923
207
214
227
2312
2415
252
2610
2714
2822
295
309
3117
325
332
3421
354
3621
3724
3816
398
404
416
427
4313
4416
454
462
4713
4820
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences136
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same storm-grey she"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015116279069767442
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002325581395348837
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean9.81
std7.31
cv0.745
sampleLengths
012
113
228
314
48
512
624
712
816
913
1023
1131
128
1315
142
1511
163
1711
1812
1911
208
2123
225
231
245
256
261
274
2822
297
308
3120
3214
335
349
355
364
371
3812
399
404
416
4210
438
447
452
465
4715
483
497
38.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners40
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Even his scent had changed,"
ratio0.013
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences80
matches
0"She had spent the evening"
1"She found her usual corner"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"He moved with the restrained"
4"He placed a pint of"
5"Her thumb found the crescent-shaped"
6"He was tall, his posture"
7"His gaze locked onto her."
8"She set the pint down."
9"He crossed the floor."
10"His laugh was a single"
11"He unbuttoned his coat and"
12"He placed a fresh coaster"
13"He always listened."
14"She turned her glass in"
15"He turned to face her."
16"His eyes were the same"
17"He finished the whisky."
18"She met his eyes."
19"He refilled Caleb's glass from"
ratio0.375
3.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Rory pushed through the door,"
2"She had spent the evening"
3"She found her usual corner"
4"Silas leant against the back"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"He moved with the restrained"
8"He placed a pint of"
9"Rory wrapped her left hand"
10"Her thumb found the crescent-shaped"
11"The beer cut through the"
12"The door opened."
13"A draught carried in the"
14"A man stood beneath the"
15"He was tall, his posture"
16"Everything about him spoke of"
17"His gaze locked onto her."
18"She set the pint down."
19"Foam clung to her upper"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9805%