| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.515 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 93.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1502 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1502 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "crystalline" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.56% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1511 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 80 | | wordCount | 1253 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Rory | 25 | | November | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx | 9 | | Aldric | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Welsh | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Empress" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "Earth" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.502 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like wind through dry leaves" | | 1 | "looked like spun glass" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to slide sideways when stared at directly" | | 3 | "as if offering itself" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.647 | | wordCount | 1511 | | matches | | 0 | "not by fire but by age, their branches interlaced so tightly they formed a s" | | 1 | "not sap but water, clear" | | 2 | "not oaks, but menhirs of pale stone carved with spirals" | | 3 | "not the grove, but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 35.98 | | std | 23.06 | | cv | 0.641 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 93 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 72 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 70 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 57 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 12 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "been trapped" | | 2 | "being drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "were reaching" | | 1 | "was pulsing" |
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| 5.87% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "London’s background thrum — the distant M25, the buzz of streetlamps, the lowing of a train — vanished." | | 1 | "Rory remembered — Nyx was once Aldric, a sorcerer trapped in 1643." | | 2 | "Fruit hung from its branches — crystalline orbs that hummed a low, harmonic chord, like a church organ played underwater." | | 3 | "She could smell roasted meat, fresh bread, the sharp tang of her mother’s Welsh cakes — scents from her childhood in Cardiff, from kitchens she hadn’t entered in years." | | 4 | "Her phone died, then rebooted to a date in 1643 — the year Nyx had been trapped." | | 5 | "Ancient stones ringed its perimeter — not oaks, but menhirs of pale stone carved with spirals that matched the ones on Rory’s scar, though she couldn’t say how." | | 6 | "In the moonlight — or whatever light passed for moonlight here — the dagger blazed with a pale, luminescent fire." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 202 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.034653465346534656 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009900990099009901 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 10.35 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 52.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3724137931034483 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 61.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she walked." | | 1 | "Only Isolde’s voice drifted back," |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 95.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "They rose like ribs from" | | 1 | "She left no footprints in" | | 2 | "Her left wrist itched." | | 3 | "She reached beneath her collar" | | 4 | "They stood beside her, a" | | 5 | "Their voice sounded like wind" | | 6 | "She stepped through." | | 7 | "She checked her phone." | | 8 | "She counted thirty seconds, watching" | | 9 | "Her lavender eyes caught the" | | 10 | "It did not reach her" | | 11 | "They had gone incorporeal up" | | 12 | "They looked down at their" | | 13 | "She didn’t ask." | | 14 | "It was moss, spongy and" | | 15 | "It absorbed sound." | | 16 | "They walked deeper." | | 17 | "She rubbed her wrist." | | 18 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 19 | "She stopped at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.312 | |
| 33.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones did not" | | 1 | "Rory knew every shortcut from" | | 2 | "They rose like ribs from" | | 3 | "Isolde stepped through without hesitation," | | 4 | "She left no footprints in" | | 5 | "Her left wrist itched." | | 6 | "The crescent-shaped scar there, a" | | 7 | "She reached beneath her collar" | | 8 | "That meant no Hel portal," | | 9 | "They stood beside her, a" | | 10 | "Their voice sounded like wind" | | 11 | "Rory adjusted her grip on" | | 12 | "The moonsilver dagger was always" | | 13 | "She stepped through." | | 14 | "The change was immediate." | | 15 | "London’s background thrum — the" | | 16 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 17 | "The moon, previously a sliver" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "She checked her phone." |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 45.87% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it offered a threshold." |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The moonsilver dagger was always cold, but tonight it bit into her palm with a sharpness that felt almost eager." | | 1 | "The moon, previously a sliver behind cloud, now hung swollen and silver above a canopy of leaves that shimmered like mother-of-pearl." | | 2 | "They looked down at their own hands, flexing fingers that were distinctly, unsettlingly human." | | 3 | "The trees grew taller, their trunks spiraling upward in impossible geometries, bark etched with symbols that seemed to slide sideways when stared at directly." | | 4 | "The Fae-Forged Blade glowed faintly at her hip, its leaf-shaped outline casting slender shadows that stretched too far, as if the dark itself were reaching for …" | | 5 | "Fruit hung from its branches — crystalline orbs that hummed a low, harmonic chord, like a church organ played underwater." | | 6 | "Her cool-headed nature, her out-of-the-box thinking, told her this was a door that could be closed or opened." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not looking back" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice soft" |
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| 28.79% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.242 | |