Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ03YHZ0Q9QBTNGH0GWBQ62W

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.004479
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the neon glow of Soho’s signs into a shimmering, liquid mess. Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed in the chill air, each exhale a short, sharp puff of frustration. Ahead, the silhouette of her suspect—lean, hooded, moving with a fluid urgency—darted around a corner into a narrower alley. Quinn’s worn leather watch pressed against her wrist, a familiar, grounding pressure as she accelerated, her boots splashing through shallow puddles that reflected the fractured city lights. He was good. She’d give him that. Three weeks of surveillance on The Raven’s Nest, three weeks of cataloging faces and license plates, had led her here. A dead drop exchange behind a overflowing dumpster. A quick hand-off of a small, heavy package. And then he’d bolted, catching her half a step behind. Quinn’s cropped hair was plastered to her skull. Water dripped from the sharp angle of her jaw. The alley smelled of wet brick and discarded food. He vaulted a low wall, landing lightly on the other side, and she followed without breaking stride, the muscle memory from years of pursuit overriding the burn in her lungs. He was heading for the main thoroughfare again, a calculated risk to lose her in the thickening evening crowd. But he didn’t merge into the river of pedestrians. Instead, he cut diagonally across the street, ignoring the blare of a taxi horn, and slipped through the unassuming door of a derelict-looking newsagent. The sign above was dark, the windows papered over with yellowed copies of old tabloids. Quinn reached the door a second later. She pulled it open. It wasn’t a shop. It was a narrow, concrete stairwell descending into gloom, the air thick with the smell of mildew and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet, like old copper. The suspect was already twenty steps down, his silhouette a receding shape in the gloom. No police radio chatter. No backup. This wasn’t procedure. This was instinct. The kind that had kept her alive, and the kind that had gotten DS Morris killed. *Unexplained circumstances.* The official report. She knew what that meant now, in a way she hadn’t three years ago. It meant doors you shouldn’t open. It meant rules that didn’t apply. She took the stairs two at a time. Her footsteps echoed a stark counterpoint to his lighter tread. The walls were damp, slick with condensation. A single, caged bulb overhead flickered, casting long, dancing shadows. At the bottom, a heavy steel door stood slightly ajar. Music thumped from within—a low, rhythmic bass that vibrated through the soles of her shoes. Muffled voices, a cacophony of languages, rose and fell. Quinn pushed the door open. She wasn’t in a basement. She was on a platform. An abandoned Tube station, its tiled walls grimy but still bearing the faded, Art Deco lines of a forgotten era. The tracks below were gone, filled in and paved over to create a sprawling, chaotic bazaar. The ceiling was a network of pipes and old wiring, draped with strings of colored lights that cast the space in hues of blue, amber, and green. Stalls were crammed together, constructed from scrap metal, old doors, and heavy canvas. The air was a soup of competing smells: roasting meat, chemical incense, wet wool, and the sharp ozone tang of ozone. It was the Veil Market. She’d heard whispers in the interrogation rooms of low-level informants, seen references in files flagged as ‘fringe activity.’ A place for things that couldn’t be sold in daylight. For people who couldn’t walk in the sun. The suspect was already twenty yards ahead, weaving through a dense crowd of shoppers haggling over shimmering fabrics and jars of iridescent powder. Quinn hesitated at the threshold, her hand resting on the grip of her sidearm, holstered and useless here without a warrant, without a reason that would hold up in any court she knew. Her bearing, so precise on the street, wavered. This was the edge of the map. The territory Morris had ventured into. The thought was a cold stone in her gut. She stepped onto the platform. The crowd parted around her, eyes flicking to her soaked coat, her clipped hair, the hard set of her mouth. She didn’t look like a customer. She looked like trouble. A vendor with six fingers on one hand gave her a toothy grin. “Looking for something to warm the blood, Detective?” Quinn ignored him, her focus locked on the hooded figure. He was moving toward the far end of the market, where the stalls grew darker, the goods more obscured by shadow and heavy drapes. He glanced over his shoulder. For the first time, she saw his face under the hood—young, pale, with startled, dark eyes. Their gazes met for a split second. Panic warred with determination in his expression. He turned and shoved through a beaded curtain into a stall that sold nothing but glass eyes in a hundred different colors. Quinn closed the distance. She parted the beads, the clatter loud in the sudden, relative quiet of the stall. Empty. A back flap of canvas lifted in a draft. She pushed through it into a narrow passage that ran behind the stalls, a service corridor of sorts. Pipes dripped overhead. The roar of the market was muffled here. He was at the end of the passage, fumbling with a bone token—pale, intricately carved—tapping it against a section of grimy tile. A section of the wall slid inward, revealing a darker, steeper stairwell leading further down. He looked back one more time, his face a mask of grim resolve, and slipped through. The wall began to close. Quinn sprinted. She jammed her hand into the narrowing gap, the rough tile scraping her skin. The mechanism whined in protest, but she held it open just enough to squeeze through, tumbling onto a steep, metal staircase. The wall sealed shut behind her with a heavy thud, plunging her into near-total darkness. She could hear him below, his footsteps ringing on metal. She drew her torch from her belt, clicked it on. The beam cut a pale swathe through the black, illuminating industrial grating, bundles of cable, and the fleeing figure of her suspect two flights down. “Police! Stop!” The words were reflex, sounding small and absurd in the echoing shaft. His answer was to move faster. She pursued, the stairs vibrating under her weight. This wasn’t a Tube station anymore. This was something older, deeper. A forgotten service shaft. The air grew colder, carrying the mineral scent of deep earth and stagnant water. He burst out into another, larger cavern. Quinn followed, her torch sweeping the space. It was a junction of some kind, old maintenance tunnels radiating outward like spokes. Her suspect skidded to a halt twenty feet away, chest heaving. He turned to face her, cornered. Quinn stopped, torch beam steady on his chest. Her own breathing was ragged, her pulse a frantic drum against her ribs. “Nowhere left to go,” she said, her voice low and even, the training overriding the adrenaline. “Hands where I can see them.” He raised his hands, but they were empty. The package from the dead drop was gone. “You shouldn’t have followed,” he whispered, his voice raw. “You don’t know what you’ve stepped into.” “That’s the story of my last three years,” Quinn replied, taking a cautious step forward. Her eyes darted around the junction, checking the shadows, the tunnel mouths. “The package. Where is it?” “Gone. Delivered. It was never for you.” “Everything on my street is for me.” Another step. “Who are you working for?” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “You’re standing in his living room.” A sound echoed from the tunnel to Quinn’s left—a soft, rhythmic scrape of something heavy being dragged. Then a low, guttural chuckle that didn’t sound entirely human. The hair on her arms stood up. Her suspect’s eyes flicked toward the sound, a flicker of real fear crossing his features. He’d delivered his package, but he wasn’t safe. Neither was she. The scrape came again, closer. A shape began to coalesce in the darkness of the tunnel mouth, something large and low to the ground, catching the torchlight with a wet gleam. Quinn had a choice. Stand her ground in this alien territory, with an unidentified suspect and an unknown threat emerging from the dark. Or retreat, back through the wall, back to the chaotic market, back to the surface and the clean, predictable rules of her world. She thought of Morris. Of the empty desk beside hers. Of the unexplained file she kept locked in her desk, not in the evidence room. She didn’t retreat. She brought her other hand up, resting it on the butt of her pistol. She didn’t draw. Not yet. But her stance shifted, her weight settling, her focus splitting between the suspect and the dark tunnel. “Talk fast,” she said, her voice hard as iron. “What’s coming?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count2
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count2
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"cacophony"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count2
14
word"constructed"
count1
15
word"wavered"
count1
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"weight"
count2
19
word"pulse"
count1
20
word"flicked"
count1
21
word"flicker"
count1
22
word"predictable"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"fractured"
3"calculated"
4"gloom"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"stark"
8"flickered"
9"dancing"
10"rhythmic"
11"vibrated"
12"cacophony"
13"chaotic"
14"constructed"
15"wavered"
16"resolve"
17"echoing"
18"weight"
19"pulse"
20"flicked"
21"flicker"
22"predictable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"d with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1494
ratio0.001
matches
0"Unexplained circumstances."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1409
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn14
Raven1
Nest1
Morris3
Tube2
Art1
Deco1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Morris"
3"Art"
4"Deco"
5"Market"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1494
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean37.35
std23.35
cv0.625
sampleLengths
078
153
275
348
457
528
631
769
85
9107
1041
1156
1230
1335
1421
1591
1658
1737
1821
1952
2045
2114
226
2337
2445
2521
2622
2732
2832
297
3014
3114
3234
3326
3431
3546
3625
373
3836
3911
88.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences128
matches
0"was plastered"
1"were gone"
2"were crammed"
3"was muffled"
4"was gone"
5"being dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was heading"
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences136
ratio0.044
matches
0"Ahead, the silhouette of her suspect—lean, hooded, moving with a fluid urgency—darted around a corner into a narrower alley."
1"It was a narrow, concrete stairwell descending into gloom, the air thick with the smell of mildew and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet, like old copper."
2"Music thumped from within—a low, rhythmic bass that vibrated through the soles of her shoes."
3"For the first time, she saw his face under the hood—young, pale, with startled, dark eyes."
4"He was at the end of the passage, fumbling with a bone token—pale, intricately carved—tapping it against a section of grimy tile."
5"A sound echoed from the tunnel to Quinn’s left—a soft, rhythmic scrape of something heavy being dragged."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount624
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.016025641025641024
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008012820512820512
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean10.99
std7
cv0.637
sampleLengths
016
116
219
327
43
54
620
78
88
910
108
119
129
1330
1419
159
1624
1715
187
194
204
2127
2215
234
242
253
263
2716
285
2914
306
316
328
3310
347
3510
3610
3715
389
395
405
415
4220
4316
4427
4513
4621
475
4828
498
43.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3382352941176471
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners46
54.20% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"Instead, he cut diagonally across"
1"Then a low, guttural chuckle"
ratio0.016
60.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences123
matches
0"He was good."
1"She’d give him that."
2"He vaulted a low wall,"
3"He was heading for the"
4"She pulled it open."
5"It wasn’t a shop."
6"It was a narrow, concrete"
7"She knew what that meant"
8"It meant doors you shouldn’t"
9"It meant rules that didn’t"
10"She took the stairs two"
11"Her footsteps echoed a stark"
12"She wasn’t in a basement."
13"She was on a platform."
14"It was the Veil Market."
15"She’d heard whispers in the"
16"Her bearing, so precise on"
17"She stepped onto the platform."
18"She didn’t look like a"
19"She looked like trouble."
ratio0.398
33.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences123
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed in"
1"Quinn’s worn leather watch pressed"
2"He was good."
3"She’d give him that."
4"A dead drop exchange behind"
5"A quick hand-off of a"
6"Quinn’s cropped hair was plastered"
7"Water dripped from the sharp"
8"The alley smelled of wet"
9"He vaulted a low wall,"
10"He was heading for the"
11"The sign above was dark,"
12"Quinn reached the door a"
13"She pulled it open."
14"It wasn’t a shop."
15"It was a narrow, concrete"
16"The suspect was already twenty"
17"This wasn’t procedure."
18"This was instinct."
19"The kind that had kept"
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn’s worn leather watch pressed against her wrist, a familiar, grounding pressure as she accelerated, her boots splashing through shallow puddles that reflec…"
1"Quinn hesitated at the threshold, her hand resting on the grip of her sidearm, holstered and useless here without a warrant, without a reason that would hold up…"
2"But her stance shifted, her weight settling, her focus splitting between the suspect and the dark tunnel."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice low and even, the training overriding the adrenaline"
1"he whispered, his voice raw"
2"she said, her voice hard as iron"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.143
79.0719%