Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ03YV2GGW4TG09JN6K2AFCA

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain snapped. The door swung inward. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, his charcoal suit immaculate, his ivory cane tapping the threshold. "Evening, Rory." "Wrong flat. Wrong continent." She moved to slam the door. His cane blocked the jamb. "Move it." "I intend to. Once I'm inside." "Over my dead body." "That," he said, his amber eye catching the hall light while the black one swallowed it, "is precisely the arrangement I'm here to prevent." She stepped back. Not an invitation. A tactical retreat. The flat above Silas' bar offered one window, one exit, and zero patience for fixers from Marseille with demonic lineage. The bass from downstairs thumped through the floorboards. It rattled the empty teacup on her kitchenette counter and pulsed in her sternum, or perhaps that was old rage. Lucien entered. He shut the door with a click that felt louder than the music. "You moved." "Clearly." "From Bethnal Green to here. Above a public house." He surveyed the cramped room. Her abandoned law texts sat stacked beside a hot plate, spines cracked at the constitutional law section she never finished. A crumpled Golden Empress delivery jacket hung from the radiator like a shed skin. The neon sign from the street below bled red through the blinds, striping his cheek. "How predictable." "How did you find me?" "I find everyone. It's rather my job." He set his cane against the wall. She tracked the movement. The blade inside slept, but not deeply. "Though I admit, the smell of kung pao chicken threw me off the scent for a day or two." "Deliberately." "Obviously." She walked to the kitchenette. Her hand found the paring knife by the sink. She didn't grip it. She simply needed the option. "Put the blade down," Lucien said. "It's a vegetable knife." "You're not holding it like a parsnip worries you." She left it on the counter. "Speak. Then leave." He turned. His gaze scraped over her, from her straight black hair to her worn trainers. She felt it like static. Three months since the warehouse in Canary Wharf. Since his skin had burned beneath her palms. Since his black eye bled smoke and he'd shoved her into a taxi with blood on his collar and vanished into the fog. She leaned against the counter. The laminate dug into her lower back. "You look well. Demons agree with you." "Half-demon, cherie. Let's not inflate my pedigree." "Don't call me that." "What shall I call you? Aurora? Too grand. Carter? Too cold." His head tilted. "Rory. The name you gave yourself when you decided to be smaller than you are." "I'm not small." "No. You're hiding." He gestured to the flat. "In a shoebox above a bar, delivering noodles to people who won't remember your face. You were meant for courtrooms. For war." "I was meant for peace. You were the war." "Ninety-two days," she said. "You counted." "You catalogue. I remember." She crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched. Old habit. Childhood accident. Bicycle spoke. Cardiff rain. "What do you want, Lucien?" "My father knows your name." The room shrank. The music below cut out. Or perhaps her ears did. "Brendan Carter's daughter. Cardiff dropout. Part-time delivery girl for a mediocre Sichuan restaurant." He recited her life like a rap sheet. "He finds you unremarkable. I find you distracting. That distinction makes you a target in Avaros." "Your demon daddy doesn't scare me." "He should." Lucien unbuttoned his collar. Beneath the pristine fabric, a brand curled over his collarbone. Fresh. Raw. Red lines against pale skin, pulsing with a rhythm that matched nothing human. "He sent this as a greeting. The next message comes addressed to you." She stared at the mark. Her stomach turned. Not from disgust. From recognition. She'd seen that sigil before. In Evan's flat, carved into the wardrobe door. The night she'd fled Cardiff with a split lip and a rucksack. "Evan," she said. Lucien's jaw tightened. "Your ex didn't stumble into the occult, Aurora. He was recruited. He offered you to them. To us." "Us?" "You and I." He stepped closer. Bergamot and sulfur clung to him, that impossible cologne. "The night I left, I carved your name into the ledger of the dead to keep you off it. I thought distance would sever the tie. It only tightened." "Evan couldn't find his own arse with a map," she said. "Evan found a broker. Avarosian. Low-level, but eager. He traded your bloodline for a seat at the table." "My parents are teachers and barristers. Boring. Happy." "Happy people don't install three deadbolts on their daughter's bedroom door." "That was Eva's flat. Not mine." "Was it?" He stepped closer. "Or did you learn to barricade because of him? The locks. The cat. The research notes on every surface." "How do you know about Ptolemy?" "I know everything. It's tedious." "You don't get to play saviour. Not after you walked away." "I didn't walk." His voice dropped. The formal veneer cracked. "I ran. Because the alternative was pinning you to that warehouse wall and letting the other half of me finish what it started." The air left the room. She remembered the heat of him. The way his platinum hair had fallen across his forehead, slicked back then, dishevelled now. The way his second heart had hammered against her ribs. "You should have stayed," she said. "And watched you burn?" "I'm not flammable." He laughed. It was a broken sound. "You are the only thing that burns me." He reached for her left wrist. His fingers circled the scar. She didn't pull away. She should have. His thumb traced the crescent. Her pulse jumped. "Still cool-headed?" he asked. "Still a liar?" "Always." He pulled her in. Not rough. Inevitable. Like gravity. Her palms flattened against his chest. The wool of his suit scratched. Beneath it, that impossible heat. "Tell me to leave, Rory. Mean it. And I will." "Leave." "No." "You said—" "I lied." His hand slid up her spine, fingers splaying between her shoulder blades. "I lied in Marseille. I lied in Cardiff. I lie for a living. But this," he pressed his forehead to hers, both eyes open, amber and black, human and not, "this is the only truth I have left." She tilted her chin up. "Prove it." His mouth crashed against hers. Not gentle. Not human. His teeth scraped her lower lip. She tasted copper and smoke. Her fingers tangled in his platinum hair, pulling hard enough to hurt. He groaned into her mouth, a sound that vibrated in both his chests. The cane clattered to the floor. He backed her against the wall. The plaster chilled her shoulder blades. His thigh pressed between hers. She arched into him, hating herself for it. His mouth moved to her throat. She felt the sharp edge of his teeth, the hesitation, the restraint. "Do it," she said. "I won't hurt you." "You already did." He stilled. His breath came hot against her neck. "Then let me bleed for it." The floorboards trembled. Not the bass. This was rhythmic. Deliberate. Heavy boots on the stairwell. Too many. Too fast. Lucien's head snapped toward the door. His amber eye flooded with ink. Solid black. Both eyes now, pits of liquid night. He seized his cane. The ivory handle twisted. Steel hissed free, thin and hungry. "They're early," he said. The first deadbolt shattered. The doorframe screamed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"predictable"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"chilled"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"predictable"
2"pristine"
3"stomach"
4"traced"
5"pulse"
6"vibrated"
7"chilled"
8"trembled"
9"rhythmic"
10"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount724
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
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Golden1
Empress1
Canary1
Wharf1
Lucien6
Evan1
Cardiff2
Bergamot1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
places
0"Canary"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1240
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences177
matches
0"seen that sigil"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean16.1
std16.51
cv1.025
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317
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101
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141
151
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176
184
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237
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356
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383
3921
401
4144
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448
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466
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100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount407
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.02457002457002457
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.007371007371007371
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean7.01
std5.92
cv0.844
sampleLengths
03
14
215
32
410
55
62
76
84
924
103
113
123
1320
148
1520
162
1713
182
191
2014
2120
2214
2315
242
255
2614
274
287
2919
301
311
325
339
344
355
366
374
389
396
403
412
4214
435
448
458
4623
475
487
497
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.384180790960452
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners68
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences98
matches
0"She moved to slam the"
1"His cane blocked the jamb."
2"he said, his amber eye"
3"She stepped back."
4"It rattled the empty teacup"
5"He shut the door with"
6"He surveyed the cramped room"
7"Her abandoned law texts sat"
8"He set his cane against"
9"She tracked the movement."
10"She walked to the kitchenette."
11"Her hand found the paring"
12"She didn't grip it."
13"She simply needed the option."
14"She left it on the"
15"His gaze scraped over her,"
16"She felt it like static."
17"She leaned against the counter."
18"His head tilted"
19"He gestured to the flat"
ratio0.551
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences98
matches
0"The chain snapped."
1"The door swung inward."
2"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
3"She moved to slam the"
4"His cane blocked the jamb."
5"he said, his amber eye"
6"She stepped back."
7"A tactical retreat."
8"The flat above"
9"The bass from downstairs thumped"
10"It rattled the empty teacup"
11"He shut the door with"
12"He surveyed the cramped room"
13"Her abandoned law texts sat"
14"A crumpled Golden Empress delivery"
15"The neon sign from the"
16"He set his cane against"
17"She tracked the movement."
18"The blade inside slept, but"
19"She walked to the kitchenette."
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Red lines against pale skin, pulsing with a rhythm that matched nothing human."
1"He groaned into her mouth, a sound that vibrated in both his chests."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His hand slid, fingers splaying between her shoulder blades"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.27
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.027
82.5977%