Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ047MYCA396A0PV52XQ5K5M

Run Details

Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.007764
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the back of Quinn's neck as she vaulted a bollard, her worn leather watch catching the orange glare of a streetlight. Forty metres ahead, the figure in the dark jacket cut left down Camden High Street, knocking into a woman clutching a takeaway bag. The woman stumbled. Curry splashed across wet pavement. Quinn didn't stop. She pressed the radio mic clipped inside her collar. "Suspect heading south on Camden High, crossing toward the market. I need units on Hawley Crescent, now." Static answered her. The rain had other ideas. The figure ducked right, past a shuttered kebab shop and into the narrow service lane that ran behind the old Victorian storefronts. Quinn's boots slapped through ankle-deep water pooling against a blocked drain. The lane stank of grease and rotting cardboard. A row of industrial bins lined one wall, lids propped open by the downpour, and the suspect clipped one as he ran. It crashed sideways, spilling fish bones and black bin bags across his path. He didn't slow. She closed the gap to thirty metres. Twenty-five. Close enough to register details: male, medium build, the hood of his jacket pulled tight, gloved hands pumping at his sides. He'd been standing outside The Raven's Nest for eleven minutes before she'd approached. Eleven minutes of watching the entrance from across the street with the rigid patience of someone who'd been trained to observe. When she'd stepped out of her car, he'd bolted. The lane ended at a rusted metal gate. The suspect hit it at speed, caught the top rail with both hands, and swung over. Quinn followed, the cold iron biting into her palms. She landed on the other side in a crouch and straightened to find herself in a wider yard — some kind of loading bay for the old Camden market buildings. Stacks of wooden pallets. A tangle of shopping trolleys chained together. Beyond that, the curved brick wall of what had once been a Tube entrance, bricked up and graffitied over years ago. Or so the council records said. The suspect veered toward the bricked-up entrance and vanished. Quinn stopped. Rain streamed down her face and she wiped her eyes with the back of her hand. The brick wall stood solid and unbroken before her, layers of old mortar and spray paint, a faded mural of a fox wearing a crown. No doorway. No gap. No way through. She scanned the yard. Nothing moved except the rain and a plastic bag snagged on a chain-link fence, flapping like a trapped bird. "Damn it." She walked to the wall and pressed her palm flat against the bricks. Solid. Real. Cold. Her fingers traced the mortar lines, looking for seams, hidden hinges, anything. The fox mural stared at her with black, hollow eyes. A sound. Low and grinding, like steel moving against stone. Quinn's hand went to her sidearm. The noise came from behind the wall — felt more than heard, a vibration through her fingertips and up into her wrist. Then silence again. She stepped back and studied the space. The loading bay had only one way in and out — the lane she'd come through. But the suspect had run toward this wall and disappeared. She'd watched it happen with her own eyes. No tricks. No misdirection. He'd been right here, and then he wasn't. Three years since Morris had walked into a building in Shad Thames and never come out. The official report said structural collapse. The unofficial whispers — the ones that came to her in pubs and parking garages from people who wouldn't give their names — said something else. Something she'd spent three years chasing through the gaps between what was real and what shouldn't be. She pulled out her phone. No signal. Of course. Quinn circled the loading bay, running her flashlight along the base of the wall. Her beam caught something near the ground, half-hidden behind a stack of pallets. A narrow crack in the brickwork, barely wide enough for a finger, but when she crouched and shone her light directly into it, she saw nothing. Not darkness. Not brick dust. Nothing at all, as if the space behind the wall simply didn't exist until you looked away, and then it existed everywhere. Her stomach turned. She stood and kicked one of the pallets aside. Behind it, set into the base of the wall at knee height, a section of brickwork had been cut and hinged. A door. Crude but functional, its edges hidden by the stacked pallets and the angle of the wall. Someone had been using this for a while. The hinges were oiled. The bricks on the door's face had been recut to fit flush, painted to match the surrounding wall. Quinn crouched again. The door was small — she'd have to crawl through. Beyond it, a passage sloped downward, its walls raw concrete and old London stock brick. The air drifting up from below smelled of damp earth and something else, something chemical and sharp, like sulphur mixed with incense. She keyed her radio again. "This is DI Quinn. I've found a concealed entrance behind the old Camden Tube entrance in the loading bay off Hawley Lane. Suspect entered through same. I'm going in. Send backup to my location." The radio hissed and popped. Then, for half a second, a voice — distorted, too slow, like a recording played at the wrong speed: "...not... alone..." Quinn stared at the radio. The transmission ended. She clipped it back inside her collar and pulled her sidearm from its holster, holding it low beside her thigh. The passage beyond the door was just tall enough to crouch-walk through. The concrete walls were slick with condensation, and water ran in thin streams along the floor, following the downward slope. Quinn moved in a half-crouch, her left hand trailing the wall, her right gripping the pistol. The flashlight in her left hand threw jittery shadows. Twenty metres in, the passage widened. She could stand. The ceiling rose to seven feet, then eight. The walls transitioned from concrete to older brick — Victorian engineering, the kind that lined the abandoned sections of the Tube network. She passed a rusted sign bolted to the wall: PLATFORM 2 — NO PASSENGER ACCESS. Someone had scratched over the words with a knife or chisel, leaving deep gouges in the metal. The passage opened onto a platform. Quinn stepped out and stopped. Below her, where the tracks should have been, an entire world had been built. The old Tube station stretched out in both directions, its vaulted ceiling still intact, its iron pillars still standing in neat rows. But the tracks were gone, replaced by a maze of stalls and tables and makeshift shelters crammed together under strings of bare bulbs and paper lanterns. Hundreds of people moved through the space — no, not all of them people, though she couldn't have said what else they might be. A woman with grey skin and too many joints in her fingers sold glass bottles filled with luminous liquid from a folding table. A man in a pinstripe suit sat on a wooden crate, his face hidden behind a plague doctor's mask, counting coins that glowed faintly blue. A child — or something shaped like a child — chased a ball of green fire between the stalls while vendors shouted and ducked. The noise hit her next. A roar of commerce, of haggling, of laughter and argument in a dozen languages she didn't recognise. The smell of cooking meat, of herbs she couldn't name, of that same sharp sulphur-and-incense scent she'd caught in the passage, magnified a hundredfold. Quinn's hand tightened on her pistol. A stall near the platform steps sold masks — every shape and size, carved from wood and bone and something that looked too pale to be either. Beyond that, a table displayed rows of jars containing things she refused to examine closely. Beyond that, a cage hung from a ceiling beam, and inside it— She looked away. Her suspect was down there. She'd seen the dark jacket flash between stalls forty metres ahead, moving with purpose toward the far end of the station. He hadn't looked back. He knew she was following. He'd led her here deliberately. That thought sat in her chest like a stone. Quinn descended the platform steps. Each step put her deeper into the noise and the crowd. People — things — glanced at her and looked away. Some stared. A tall figure in a hooded cloak turned its head as she passed, and beneath the hood she caught a glimpse of features that were wrong, the geometry of the face shifted in ways her brain refused to process. She kept moving. The crowd pressed close. She pocketed her sidearm — pulling a weapon in a place like this would be either suicidal or a declaration of war, and she had no idea which. Instead, she held her warrant card in her left hand, the leather of her watch band cool against her wrist. The worn leather felt like the only real thing down here. A stallholder reached out and grabbed her sleeve. Dark eyes, skin like oiled teak, a smile that showed too many teeth. "First time, love?" Quinn pulled her arm free. "Police." The stallholder laughed. The teeth glinted. "You'll want to put that little card away, Detective. People down here don't much care for your kind of authority." "I'm looking for a man in a dark jacket. Came through here thirty seconds ago." "And if I'd seen him?" "You'd tell me." The stallholder tilted her head. The smile didn't waver. "Would I?" Quinn held her gaze for two seconds, then moved on. The crowd swallowed her. Ahead, the dark jacket appeared and disappeared between the stalls, always just visible, always just out of reach. A breadcrumb trail. A lure. She passed a table selling bones arranged in patterns she couldn't read. She passed a man breathing fire in a clear circle of space while onlookers tossed coins. She passed a door set into the station wall, reinforced with iron bands, guarded by two figures who stood unnaturally still, their eyes tracking her as she went by. The suspect turned left down a narrow alley between stalls. Quinn followed. The alley twisted, narrowed, dead-ended at a curtain made of hanging beads. The beads clicked and chimed as the suspect pushed through. Quinn reached the curtain a heartbeat later and swept it aside. Beyond it: a small room carved from the brick, lit by a single lamp hanging from a chain. A table. Two chairs. A man sitting in one of them, hands folded on the tabletop, watching her with warm brown eyes and a Saint Christopher medallion resting against his chest. Not her suspect. Someone else entirely. The chair across from him sat empty. "Please," Tomás Herrera said. "Sit down, Detective."
created_at"2026-04-24T16:12:43.863Z" 4/24/2026, 4:12:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pumping"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"scanned"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1823
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1715
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn17
Camden2
High1
Street1
Victorian2
Raven1
Nest1
Tube3
Morris1
Shad1
Thames1
London1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Raven"
4"Shad"
5"Thames"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the only real thing down here"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1823
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean35.06
std30.1
cv0.859
sampleLengths
057
126
28
376
43
572
695
76
89
950
1023
112
1238
1341
1453
1565
169
1780
183
1978
2050
2139
2226
2328
2457
2571
2611
2714
28144
2946
306
3154
323
3340
349
3570
3663
3721
383
396
4026
4115
425
433
4411
4537
4657
4745
4849
496
96.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences157
matches
0"been trained"
1"were oiled"
2"been built"
3"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs284
matches
0"was following"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences168
ratio0.083
matches
0"She landed on the other side in a crouch and straightened to find herself in a wider yard — some kind of loading bay for the old Camden market buildings."
1"The noise came from behind the wall — felt more than heard, a vibration through her fingertips and up into her wrist."
2"The loading bay had only one way in and out — the lane she'd come through."
3"The unofficial whispers — the ones that came to her in pubs and parking garages from people who wouldn't give their names — said something else."
4"The door was small — she'd have to crawl through."
5"Then, for half a second, a voice — distorted, too slow, like a recording played at the wrong speed: \"...not... alone...\""
6"The walls transitioned from concrete to older brick — Victorian engineering, the kind that lined the abandoned sections of the Tube network."
7"She passed a rusted sign bolted to the wall: PLATFORM 2 — NO PASSENGER ACCESS."
8"Hundreds of people moved through the space — no, not all of them people, though she couldn't have said what else they might be."
9"A child — or something shaped like a child — chased a ball of green fire between the stalls while vendors shouted and ducked."
10"A stall near the platform steps sold masks — every shape and size, carved from wood and bone and something that looked too pale to be either."
11"Beyond that, a cage hung from a ceiling beam, and inside it—"
12"People — things — glanced at her and looked away."
13"She pocketed her sidearm — pulling a weapon in a place like this would be either suicidal or a declaration of war, and she had no idea which."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1709
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03159742539496782
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.005851375073142188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean10.85
std8.34
cv0.769
sampleLengths
023
123
23
35
43
59
617
73
85
922
1011
118
1222
1313
143
157
161
1721
1813
1921
209
218
2216
239
2430
254
267
2721
286
299
302
3116
3225
332
342
353
364
3719
382
3913
401
411
421
4312
4410
452
468
476
4822
493
41.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners54
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences138
matches
0"Then silence again."
1"Then, for half a second,"
2"Instead, she held her warrant"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences138
matches
0"She pressed the radio mic"
1"It crashed sideways, spilling fish"
2"He didn't slow."
3"She closed the gap to"
4"He'd been standing outside The"
5"She landed on the other"
6"She scanned the yard."
7"She walked to the wall"
8"Her fingers traced the mortar"
9"She stepped back and studied"
10"She'd watched it happen with"
11"He'd been right here, and"
12"She pulled out her phone."
13"Her beam caught something near"
14"Her stomach turned."
15"She stood and kicked one"
16"She keyed her radio again."
17"She clipped it back inside"
18"She could stand."
19"She passed a rusted sign"
ratio0.225
57.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences138
matches
0"The woman stumbled."
1"Curry splashed across wet pavement."
2"Quinn didn't stop."
3"She pressed the radio mic"
4"Static answered her."
5"The rain had other ideas."
6"The figure ducked right, past"
7"Quinn's boots slapped through ankle-deep"
8"The lane stank of grease"
9"A row of industrial bins"
10"It crashed sideways, spilling fish"
11"He didn't slow."
12"She closed the gap to"
13"He'd been standing outside The"
14"The lane ended at a"
15"The suspect hit it at"
16"Quinn followed, the cold iron"
17"She landed on the other"
18"Stacks of wooden pallets."
19"A tangle of shopping trolleys"
ratio0.804
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The figure ducked right, past a shuttered kebab shop and into the narrow service lane that ran behind the old Victorian storefronts."
1"The walls transitioned from concrete to older brick — Victorian engineering, the kind that lined the abandoned sections of the Tube network."
2"A man in a pinstripe suit sat on a wooden crate, his face hidden behind a plague doctor's mask, counting coins that glowed faintly blue."
3"She passed a door set into the station wall, reinforced with iron bands, guarded by two figures who stood unnaturally still, their eyes tracking her as she went…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.3694%