Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
67
glossingSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"seemed almost manufactured"
1
"as if approaching a wild animal"
2
"seemed so sophisticated"
3
"quite identify—before turning and leaving the bar"
4
"melody that seemed to acknowledge the complexity of human connections—those that endure, those that fade, and those that linger with questions that may never find answers"
"The bar wasn't crowded—just a scattering of regulars nursing drinks and murmuring conversations."
1
"Daniel stared into his glass as the bartender returned with his drink—a single malt whiskey that cost more than Rory made in a day."
2
"She remembered the girl she'd been at Cardiff—ambitious, a little naive, convinced she knew how the world worked."
3
"The music changed—a jazz instrumental that filled the space between them with notes that seemed both melancholic and hopeful."
4
"Rory thought about her own life—no prestigious career, no corner office, no impressive salary."
5
"He gave her one last look—a mixture of regret and something she couldn't quite identify—before turning and leaving the bar."
6
"The jazz music continued to play, filling the space with a melody that seemed to acknowledge the complexity of human connections—those that endure, those that fade, and those that linger with questions that may never find answers."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
45
technicalSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"The bell above it chimed softly, a sound that had become familiar over the past year."
1
"Silas had taken her under his wing after he learned about her situation with Evan, offering her the flat above the bar at a reasonable rate and the part-time de…"
2
"His suit was expensive, the kind that didn't crease, and he carried himself with an air of confidence that seemed almost manufactured."
3
"Daniel had been her closest friend at Cardiff University, the one who'd stayed up with her during exam weeks, who'd listened patiently when she complained about…"
4
"The bartender arrived to take Daniel's order, giving them a brief nod before disappearing into the back."
5
"The music changed—a jazz instrumental that filled the space between them with notes that seemed both melancholic and hopeful."
6
"The jazz music continued to play, filling the space with a melody that seemed to acknowledge the complexity of human connections—those that endure, those that f…"