Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ04AWXS61SNHRN793Z55NRV

Run Details

Duration:
5m 26s
Cost:
$0.042382
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain turned Camden's backstreets into rivers of ink. Detective Harlow Quinn crossed beneath a railway bridge where water ran ankle-deep, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered flat, the worn leather watch on her left wrist drinking in the wet. Three hours earlier she had stood across from The Raven's Nest in Soho, watching the distinctive green neon sign flicker above the entrance until the lamps inside died. She had not crossed the threshold into the room where old maps and black-and-white photographs wallpapered the walls. She had waited. When Tomás Herrera slipped out through the hidden back room behind the bookshelf, she followed. Now she was eight miles north, and Herrera still ran. He vaulted a chained gate beside a derelict pub. His Saint Christopher medallion caught a streetlamp and died. He did not look back. Quinn hit the gate at full speed. Her palms slapped rusted iron. She vaulted, landed in a courtyard choked with weeds, and surged forward. Her boots crushed broken glass. A cat screamed from a windowsill. "Herrera." She spat his name into the downpour. "Stop." He rounded a chimney stack and vanished. She chased him across the courtyard. A construction tarp snapped like a sail in the wind and whipped across her path. She tore through canvas. Herrera cut across a flooded intersection. A night bus blared past, tires spraying a wall of water that soaked her to the bone. She did not blink. Rain drilled into her sharp jaw and ran cold rivulets down her collar. He ducked beneath a curled lip of scaffolding. She hurdled a cement mixer. Her lungs burned. "Herrera." Her voice cut through the storm. "You're making it worse." He skidded to a halt at the lip of a concrete embankment. The canal below churned black. His warm brown eyes found hers across fifteen feet of torrent. The scar on his left forearm traced a pale seam through dark hair as he raised both hands. Rain whipped his short curly hair against olive skin. "Go home, Harlow." "I don't answer to you." "You don't want what's down there." Herrera laughed, a bark lost to the wind. "You think this is about smuggling? A trafficking charge?" "Talk at the station." "I'd rather die." He jumped. Not into the canal—onto a maintenance ladder bolted to the embankment wall. The rungs disappeared into a cutaway door set into the stone, an entrance that appeared on no municipal blueprint. Steam boiled out, carrying the reek of myrrh and copper. It clawed at the back of Quinn's throat. She holstered her Glock and climbed. The passage widened into a vaulted chamber. An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Tiled walls curved overhead the color of old bone. Stalls hunched beneath torn velvet along the platform. Hooded figures moved between them with the gait of predators who had never known daylight. This was the Veil Market. She had seen the name scrawled across confiscated ledgers—enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information brokered in exchange for bone tokens. Her partner, DS Morris, had whispered about it the week before he vanished into unexplained circumstances. Herrera melted into the crowd. Quinn advanced. Her weapon led the way. A woman sat beside a copper brazier. Vials on her table bubbled with fluid the color of molten jade. A bin had overturned nearby. Bone tokens carved with lunar phases spilled across the platform, clattering like teeth. A child with too many fingers collected them, humming. Beside the woman, a vendor in a plague doctor mask counted teeth beside a cage of moths that bore human faces. "No token." The stall woman's fingernails were obsidian shards. "No entry." "A man passed." Quinn kept her Glock low. "Olive skin. Scar on his left forearm. Saint Christopher medallion." "The Market moves at full moon." The woman's smile revealed filed points. "Law has no tongue here." A shape peeled from the wall. Tall. Naked scalp painted with concentric circles. "She's carrying steel. Cute." "Back off." "Or what? You'll file a report?" The bald man circled her. His breath stank of cloves and grave dirt. "I remember the last officer who attempted that. Morris. He wanted the Market's schedule. Asked when we would shift to another station. Know what he bought? A lie. Know what it cost? Everything." Quinn grabbed his throat and slammed him against the tiles. The crack of his skull echoed down the platform. "Repeat that name." "Morris." The man's painted lips twisted. "DS Morris. Three years cold. Unexplained circumstances. Your words, Detective. Not ours." She released him. Her holster snapped open. The crowd rustled. Glass clinked. At a draped table deeper along the platform, a jar of banned alchemical substances shifted from liquid to smoke and back again, never settling. Somewhere in the dark, a wet sound dragged itself across concrete. A silhouette moved near the tunnel's end. Herrera stood beside a breached archway that led deeper into the earth, a passage beyond the platform where no working train had ever run. He pressed a hand to his bleeding forearm. Blood ran from the knife scar to his wrist. "Harlow." His Seville accent thickened, creeping into his London vowels. "Turn around." "You're under arrest." "Arrest me for what? Saving lives your bureaucracy doesn't believe exist?" "I believe in the law." "The law ends at that arch." Herrera pointed with his scarred arm. "Past there, the rules belong to the Veil. The thing that took Morris, it doesn't wear handcuffs. It doesn't read you your rights. It hungers." Quinn advanced between the stalls. A jar of preserved organs watched her pass. A tapestry depicting the Soho skyline shimmered as though the threads were wet. The Veil Market pressed against her composure, alien and ravenous. "Give me one reason not to drag you out." Herrera stepped backward into the dark. "Because I'm not the one you want. I'm the one patching holes in people the supernatural world chews up. You want the monster that ate your partner? It's down there. Waiting." She stopped at the threshold. The archway exhaled frozen breath that smelled of rotting lilies. Behind her, the Market shifted and rustled like a living throat. Ahead, nothing but unnatural danger and the unknown. Eighteen years of service tightened her spine. Her left wrist ached beneath the leather. The watch ticked once, a lonely percussion in the dark. Herrera's voice floated from the void. "Your move, Detective." Quinn racked her pistol. The sound cracked through the station like a starting gun. She stepped across.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.485
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"grave"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"tapestry"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"churned"
2"traced"
3"velvet"
4"grave"
5"echoed"
6"tapestry"
7"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1080
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount858
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow1
Quinn8
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Tomás1
Herrera9
Saint1
Christopher1
Glock2
Tube1
Veil2
Market3
Morris1
Seville1
London1
Rain3
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Market"
8"Morris"
9"Rain"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Seville"
3"London"
globalScore0.976
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1080
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean23.48
std23.21
cv0.988
sampleLengths
0103
110
223
335
49
57
665
716
811
955
103
115
1223
134
143
152
1649
176
1886
195
207
2167
2211
2318
2417
2517
262
2752
2822
2918
307
3140
3248
3312
343
3511
365
3737
3836
399
4037
4134
4224
439
4414
453
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
94.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences119
ratio0.017
matches
0"Not into the canal—onto a maintenance ladder bolted to the embankment wall."
1"She had seen the name scrawled across confiscated ledgers—enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information brokered in exchange for bone tokens."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013872832369942197
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003468208092485549
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean9.08
std6.38
cv0.702
sampleLengths
08
131
228
318
43
515
610
79
89
95
107
115
1212
135
146
158
161
177
186
1915
204
216
2217
234
2413
258
265
273
287
294
3012
315
3211
3318
349
353
365
3714
389
394
403
412
4212
4319
4410
458
466
477
486
499
70.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44537815126050423
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners53
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Somewhere in the dark, a"
ratio0.011
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences92
matches
0"She had not crossed the"
1"She had waited."
2"He vaulted a chained gate"
3"His Saint Christopher medallion caught"
4"He did not look back."
5"Her palms slapped rusted iron."
6"She vaulted, landed in a"
7"Her boots crushed broken glass."
8"She spat his name into"
9"He rounded a chimney stack"
10"She chased him across the"
11"She tore through canvas."
12"She did not blink."
13"He ducked beneath a curled"
14"She hurdled a cement mixer."
15"Her lungs burned."
16"Her voice cut through the"
17"He skidded to a halt"
18"His warm brown eyes found"
19"It clawed at the back"
ratio0.348
36.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences92
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn crossed beneath"
1"She had not crossed the"
2"She had waited."
3"He vaulted a chained gate"
4"His Saint Christopher medallion caught"
5"He did not look back."
6"Quinn hit the gate at"
7"Her palms slapped rusted iron."
8"She vaulted, landed in a"
9"Her boots crushed broken glass."
10"A cat screamed from a"
11"She spat his name into"
12"He rounded a chimney stack"
13"She chased him across the"
14"A construction tarp snapped like"
15"She tore through canvas."
16"Herrera cut across a flooded"
17"A night bus blared past,"
18"She did not blink."
19"Rain drilled into her sharp"
ratio0.848
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Now she was eight miles"
ratio0.011
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A night bus blared past, tires spraying a wall of water that soaked her to the bone."
1"Beside the woman, a vendor in a plague doctor mask counted teeth beside a cage of moths that bore human faces."
2"Herrera stood beside a breached archway that led deeper into the earth, a passage beyond the platform where no working train had ever run."
3"A tapestry depicting the Soho skyline shimmered as though the threads were wet."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Herrera laughed, a bark lost to the wind"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She spat (spit)"
1"Herrera laughed (laugh)"
2"The woman's smile revealed (reveal)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
86.8703%