| 40.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Herrera's voice dropped barely [barely]" | | 1 | "She stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |
| 96.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "streaming" | | 7 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1287 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 979 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Herrera" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Quinn | 8 | | Frith | 1 | | Street | 1 | | November | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Morris | 3 | | Chalk | 1 | | Farm | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Lock | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Saint | 2 | | Christopher | 2 | | Herrera | 8 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Saint" | | 3 | "Christopher" | | 4 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Frith" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Camden" | | 5 | "Chalk" | | 6 | "Farm" | | 7 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1287 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 32.17 | | std | 22.77 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 60 | | 37 | 68 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was happening" | | 1 | "was heading" | | 2 | "was being" | | 3 | "was investigating" | | 4 | "were standing" | | 5 | "was trying" | | 6 | "wasn't trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been tracking this lead for three weeks—someone supplying restricted alchemical compounds to kids in Camden." | | 1 | "And whatever had killed him hadn't been natural—she'd known that since the coroner's report came back with results that made no medical sense." | | 2 | "Instead of slowing, instead of searching for another way out, he pulled something from his pocket—a pale disc that caught the streetlight for just a moment—and pressed it against a door that shouldn't have opened." | | 3 | "From the outside, it looked exactly as it should—plywood covering a derelict entrance, graffiti tags, a faded notice about tunnel closures." | | 4 | "Her hand found a gap near the bottom—barely visible, but there." | | 5 | "A figure emerged from the shadows—olive skin, short curly hair, a Saint Christopher medallion catching the light as he stepped closer." | | 6 | "Something flickered behind his eyes—recognition, maybe." | | 7 | "Something that said he wasn't trying to stop her—he was trying to keep her alive." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 995 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.027135678391959798 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006030150753768844 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 11.39 | | std | 8.98 | | cv | 0.788 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 64.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.415929203539823 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her guv'nor had told" | | 1 | "Instead of slowing, instead of" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 92.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "He vaulted a bin, kicked" | | 1 | "She'd been tracking this lead" | | 2 | "She pushed harder." | | 3 | "Her worn leather watch slapped" | | 4 | "He dodged between a night" | | 5 | "He was heading toward Camden" | | 6 | "She'd heard rumours about that" | | 7 | "She'd spent three years trying" | | 8 | "She could feel it." | | 9 | "He slipped through." | | 10 | "She stared at the entrance." | | 11 | "She'd seen that disc in" | | 12 | "You need a bone token" | | 13 | "She thought of Morris." | | 14 | "She approached the door." | | 15 | "It didn't move." | | 16 | "She pushed harder." | | 17 | "She ran her fingers along" | | 18 | "Her hand found a gap" | | 19 | "She crouched, rain pooling around" |
| | ratio | 0.318 | |
| 62.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn's boots struck wet" | | 1 | "The figure didn't slow." | | 2 | "He vaulted a bin, kicked" | | 3 | "Quinn's jaw tightened." | | 4 | "She'd been tracking this lead" | | 5 | "The same compound that had" | | 6 | "The same compound that had" | | 7 | "She pushed harder." | | 8 | "Her worn leather watch slapped" | | 9 | "The alley narrowed, brick walls" | | 10 | "Water cascaded from a broken" | | 11 | "The suspect burst out the" | | 12 | "Headlights blurred past." | | 13 | "He dodged between a night" | | 14 | "Quinn followed, timing her crossing" | | 15 | "He was heading toward Camden" | | 16 | "She'd heard rumours about that" | | 17 | "Whispers from informants who clammed" | | 18 | "Cops in the know turned" | | 19 | "She'd spent three years trying" |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Now he provided off-the-books medical" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn's boots struck wet cobblestones as she rounded the corner onto Frith Street, her breath coming in sharp controlled bursts that fogged in the Novemb…" | | 1 | "Fifty metres ahead, a figure in a dark coat sprinted through the downpour, knocking into late-night revellers who cursed and stumbled into puddles." | | 2 | "The same compound that had made his heart explode in his chest while she watched, helpless, unable to understand what was happening to him." | | 3 | "Instead of slowing, instead of searching for another way out, he pulled something from his pocket—a pale disc that caught the streetlight for just a moment—and …" | | 4 | "Now he provided off-the-books medical care for people who couldn't go to hospital." | | 5 | "He studied her for a long moment, rain streaming down his face, dripping from the scar along his left forearm." | | 6 | "Something that said he wasn't trying to stop her—he was trying to keep her alive." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |