| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2034 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2034 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "desire" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "structure" | | 6 | "constructed" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "crystallized" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "resonance" | | 14 | "crystalline" | | 15 | "echoes" | | 16 | "resonated" | | 17 | "carried the weight" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "predictable" | | 20 | "depths" | | 21 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 2063 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "where tables groan and rivers flow with honey, where the hungry never eat and the sated never rest." | | 1 | "are" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1750 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 21 | | Dymas | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 18 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 3 | | Earth | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Dymas" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.9 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "revelry that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.424 | | wordCount | 2063 | | matches | | 0 | "not mud, not grass, but something yielding" | | 1 | "not grass, but something yielding" | | 2 | "Not with hunger exactly, but with a pull" | | 3 | "Not their shadow-hand this time, but something solid" | | 4 | "not reflected light, but self-generated, each piece a lantern of soft gold, pale blue" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 33.27 | | std | 24.41 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 76 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 71 | | 24 | 79 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 73 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 78 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 73 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 49 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 81 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 53 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 39 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "been built" | | 1 | "were constructed" | | 2 | "were lined" | | 3 | "was carpeted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 296 | | matches | | 0 | "were staring" | | 1 | "wasn't eating" | | 2 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 27 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stumbled, one hand shooting out to catch Nyx's arm — or where Nyx's arm should have been." | | 1 | "Isolde's parting riddle had been less cryptic than usual — *where tables groan and rivers flow with honey, where the hungry never eat and the sated never rest.* Dymas." | | 2 | "The ground beneath her boots was soft — not mud, not grass, but something yielding and dark that released a faint sweetness when compressed." | | 3 | "Rolling hills stretched toward a horizon that glowed amber-gold, the sky above a permanent dusk that cast no shadows — which explained Nyx's discomfort, she realized." | | 4 | "Clusters of fruit hung in heavy pendulums — not grapes, not anything she could name." | | 5 | "\"This way.\" Nyx pointed toward a structure in the middle distance — something that rose from the valley floor like a monument to excess." | | 6 | "The soft ground yielded beneath each step, and Aurora noticed flowers pushing up through the dark surface — white blossoms with centers the color of raw honey." | | 7 | "The soft dark surface gave way to polished stone — pale and veined with gold — that stretched into a wide thoroughfare." | | 8 | "The buildings flanking it were constructed from the same organic material as the structure in the distance — all curves, all swell, all the architectural equivalent of a deep exhale." | | 9 | "Windows — if they were windows — glowed with warm interior light, and behind them, shadows moved." | | 10 | "Platters of food she couldn't identify lined its length — mountains of glistening fruit, towers of spun sugar, whole animals rendered in sauce and garnish, pastries that steamed despite the warm air." | | 11 | "These were beings of appetite given form — some humanoid, some not, all engaged in the mechanical act of consumption." | | 12 | "Nyx's hand found her elbow — or the shadow of their hand passed through her elbow, close enough that she felt the displacement of air." | | 13 | "The architecture shifted as they walked deeper — buildings growing taller, more elaborate, their surfaces carved with images of feasts and revelry that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 14 | "The air grew cooler, and the smells shifted — less sweetness, more smoke, more earth." | | 15 | "She reached toward one — a simple ceramic bowl, white, unadorned." | | 16 | "The bowl sat in its alcove, and she could have sworn she saw something move in the glaze of its surface — a face, perhaps, or just the memory of one." | | 17 | "The canopy above was dense with fruit that glowed — not reflected light, but self-generated, each piece a lantern of soft gold, pale blue, deep violet." | | 18 | "In something more fundamental — a hum that bypassed her ears entirely and resonated in her chest, her stomach, the base of her skull." | | 19 | "The beauty of the place — the terrible, insistent beauty of a realm built to worship appetite — pressed against something inside her that she'd thought she'd buried under practical concerns and London rain." | | 20 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed once — hard — against Aurora's collarbone." | | 21 | "She adjusted the strap of her bag, felt the weight of Isolde's Fae-forged blade against her hip — cold through the fabric, cold in a way that no London winter had ever managed — and kept walking." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1733 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.025389497980380843 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006924408540103866 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 12.89 | | std | 9.34 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 49.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3625 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 27.78% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, past the orchard's" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers closed on nothing" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes caught light" | | 2 | "She already knew the answer." | | 3 | "They were staring ahead, and" | | 4 | "They were exposed here in" | | 5 | "Her stomach tightened." | | 6 | "It had no straight lines." | | 7 | "They turned their faces as" | | 8 | "She thought of Evan." | | 9 | "She covered her nose with" | | 10 | "It stretched at least a" | | 11 | "They sat at intervals along" | | 12 | "He sat perfectly still, his" | | 13 | "His eyes were open but" | | 14 | "He wasn't eating." | | 15 | "He just sat there, watching" | | 16 | "She reached for the pendant" | | 17 | "They moved along the edge" | | 18 | "She reached toward one —" | | 19 | "They pressed on." |
| | ratio | 0.217 | |
| 35.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "The passage contracted behind them" | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled, one hand shooting" | | 2 | "Her fingers closed on nothing" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes caught light" | | 4 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter," | | 5 | "She already knew the answer." | | 6 | "Isolde's parting riddle had been" | | 7 | "The realm of Gluttony." | | 8 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 9 | "The surface gave slightly, like" | | 10 | "Nyx's head tilted at an" | | 11 | "The shadow that comprised their" | | 12 | "They were staring ahead, and" | | 13 | "The landscape unfolded in every" | | 14 | "They were exposed here in" | | 15 | "Vineyards lined the nearest slope," | | 16 | "The vines were thick as" | | 17 | "Clusters of fruit hung in" | | 18 | "Each orb was translucent, filled" | | 19 | "Her stomach tightened." |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 41.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Either way, she was going" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 35.23% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes caught light that had no visible source." | | 1 | "The landscape unfolded in every direction like a fever dream painted by someone who understood desire at a molecular level." | | 2 | "Rolling hills stretched toward a horizon that glowed amber-gold, the sky above a permanent dusk that cast no shadows — which explained Nyx's discomfort, she rea…" | | 3 | "They turned their faces as she passed, tracking her movement with an attention that set her teeth on edge." | | 4 | "The soft dark surface gave way to polished stone — pale and veined with gold — that stretched into a wide thoroughfare." | | 5 | "The smells hit her next: roasting meat, caramelized sugar, fresh bread, and beneath it all, a rich, almost cloying sweetness that coated the back of her throat." | | 6 | "They sat at intervals along the table, eating with a focus that transcended enjoyment." | | 7 | "The architecture shifted as they walked deeper — buildings growing taller, more elaborate, their surfaces carved with images of feasts and revelry that seemed t…" | | 8 | "The canopy above was dense with fruit that glowed — not reflected light, but self-generated, each piece a lantern of soft gold, pale blue, deep violet." | | 9 | "The ground was carpeted with fallen leaves that crunched like thin glass underfoot, and the sound scattered through the space in crystalline echoes." | | 10 | "In something more fundamental — a hum that bypassed her ears entirely and resonated in her chest, her stomach, the base of her skull." |
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| 31.25% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx moved, their form flickering in the amber light" | | 1 | "Nyx paused, their violet gaze sweeping the vineyard" | | 2 | "Nyx turned, their form rippling as they stepped between two luminous trees" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |