Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ04R2QJ168T5A4RR5CZ1XER

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Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.004739
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain fell in sheets, turning London’s pavements into mirrors that shattered with every footfall. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed white in the gloom, her close-cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp. The target—a blur in a dark hooded jacket—twenty yards ahead, rounded the corner onto Camden High Street with a desperate burst of speed. Her worn leather watch dug into her wrist as she pumped her arms, her military-trained gait eating the distance with relentless, efficient strides. The leather of her shoes slapped against the wet asphalt. Steam rose from subway grates, momentarily swallowing the silhouette before it reappeared, ducking through the neon-lit clutter of a shuttered market stall. “Police! Stop!” The voice was a raw bark, lost in the percussive drumming on shop awnings. The figure didn’t flinch. It vaulted a low wall into a narrow alley stinking of old grease and discarded takeout boxes. Quinn followed without breaking stride, her shoulder checking the brickwork as she made the tight turn. The alley spit them out onto a busier thoroughfare. A black cab hydroplaned past, spraying a wave of gutter-water that soaked her trousers to the knee. She ignored it, her focus narrowing to the suspect’s fleeing form, now merging with the sparse, rain-huddled pedestrians. A woman with a golf umbrella swore as the suspect shouldered past. Quinn sidestepped a man staring blankly at his phone, her hand instinctively going to the empty space on her hip where her weapon would be. Plainclothes meant no holster, no backup. Just her and the rain. He turned again, into a street she didn’t recognize, darker than the rest, the buildings leaning in as if to listen. The neon glare of a distant pub sign cast a sickly green glow over wet brick. Then, he was gone. Vanished into the fabric of the night. Quinn skidded to a halt, chest heaving, her gaze sweeping the dead end. Nothing. Just a rusted fire escape, a dumpster overflowing with sodden cardboard, and a single door marked with a faded, peeling sign for a defunct import-export company. Rain dripped from the iron ladder rungs. She pressed her palms against the cold brick, listening past the roar of her own blood in her ears. Nothing but the storm. A dead end. Frustration, hot and metallic, flooded her mouth. She’d had him. After three years of chasing shadows since Morris, of following cold trails that always turned lukewarm and strange, she’d finally had her hands on a thread connected to the clique. And now it was frayed to nothing. Her eyes, accustomed to the gloom, caught a detail. At the base of the dumpster, almost entirely hidden by a discarded pallet, a sliver of light shone from a crack in the pavement. Not electric light. A dull, amber glow, pulsing faintly, like a dying ember. She crouched, the knees of her trousers protesting against the wet grit. The light wasn’t coming from a cellar window or a grate. It was seeping up from between the cobblestones themselves, from a seam where one stone had been recently dislodged. She prodded it with her fingertip. It shifted with a grating sound, revealing a narrow, vertical gap, steep steps descending into earthy darkness. The air rising from it smelled of damp soil, ozone, and something else—copper and burnt sugar. Quinn looked back the way she’d come. The street was empty. Her radio was silent. Protocol screamed at her to secure the perimeter, call for backup, contain the unknown variable. Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his easy grin, the way he’d always checked his weapon twice before a risky approach. The way he hadn’t come back. She reached down and pulled the cobblestone free. It was heavy, real. She set it aside, widening the gap. The steps were rough-hewn stone, slick with moisture. The amber glow was stronger now, casting long, distorted shadows. It was a way down. A way in. He had gone this way. Her fingers brushed the worn leather strap of her watch. Time. Every second she delayed, the trail grew colder. The rules didn’t cover this. The handbook had nothing on markets that breathed beneath the city, on suspects who dissolved into the earth. This was the borderland Morris had died crossing, the threshold she’d spent three years staring at from the safe side. Quinn drew a slow breath, the cold air scraping her lungs. She stepped into the gap, one foot finding the first slick step. She pulled the displaced cobblestone back as far as she could, letting it drop with a muffled thud that sealed the rain and the sky away. The world above vanished. The descent was short, steep, and treacherous. The walls changed from city grime to damp, packed earth, then to rough, ancient brick. The air grew cooler, thick with the scent of ozone and a hundred unfamiliar spices. The amber glow emanated from clusters of glowing fungi clinging to the ceiling, pulsing in a slow, rhythmic pattern. She reached the bottom, her shoes meeting a floor of smooth, worn flagstones. Before her stretched a vaulted tunnel, wide enough for three people to walk abreast. It wasn't empty. It was a thoroughfare. Figures moved in both directions, their forms obscured by hoods, cloaks, and the wavering fungal light. A low murmur of conversation, laughter, and the clang of a blacksmith’s hammer echoed from deeper within. Stalls lined the tunnel walls, displaying wares that made no sense: jars of luminous insects, bolts of fabric that seemed to shift colour when she wasn't looking directly at them, scales balanced with piles of what looked like crushed gemstones. She saw the suspect’s dark hood twenty yards ahead, turning down a narrower side passage. He was limping now, favouring his right leg. Injured. Quinn straightened her spine, squaring her shoulders. She smoothed a hand over her damp jacket, a useless gesture of order in this chaotic space. She was a detective. She investigated crimes. This place was a crime scene, or a city of them. She adjusted her path, not following directly, but taking a parallel route along the opposite wall of the tunnel, letting the flow of strange patrons mask her movement. A vendor with too many eyes in his face watched her pass, his smile yellow in the gloom. She kept her gaze forward, fixed on the corner where her quarry had disappeared. Her hand hovered at her side, fingers curled, a mimicry of a weapon that wasn’t there. The air was thick with potential, with unseen watchers and unheard promises. The choice had been made at the bottom of those steps. There was no going back, not until she had answers, or a body. She reached the side passage and paused at its mouth, pressing herself against the rough brick. Peering around the edge, she saw a smaller market square, a hub where several tunnels converged. Stalls here were more fortified, guards with unnervingly still faces and heavy cudgels stood at the entrances to more exclusive-looking storefronts. The scent of ozone was stronger here, mingled with the sharp tang of alchemical reagents. And there, at the far end of the square, her target stumbled, catching himself on the edge of a stall selling antique medical instruments. He was speaking rapidly to the vendor, a gaunt man with fingers like spiders. Money changed hands—or something shaped like money. The vendor nodded, pointing down yet another, narrower tunnel, one lit by a single, flickering gas lamp. Quinn’s gaze swept the square. Two guards stood near that tunnel’s entrance, their attention on the crowd, on the spectacle of a three-armed woman haggling over a glowing orb. She looked down at herself. Her soaked, professional attire was as conspicuous as a flare. She needed to blend, or she needed a distraction. Her eyes fell on a rack of discarded cloaks near a cloakroom stall, a simple transactional setup: a cloak for a token. Her fingers went to the chain around her neck, not to a medal or a memento, but to the simple silver identification tag she still wore under her shirt. She pulled it free. Not a bone token. But metal was metal. She stepped out of the shadows, walking with that same military bearing, though it felt alien here. She approached the cloakroom stall, not looking at the guards. The operator was a hulking shape wrapped in shadows, only two gleaming eyes visible. “A cloak,” Quinn said, her voice low and steady. She held out the ID tag. The eyes regarded the tag. A hand like a slab of meat reached out, took it, weighed it, then shoved a rough-spun grey cloak across the counter. Quinn took it, throwing it over her shoulders. The hood was deep, obscuring her face in shadow. She pulled it tight, the coarse fabric scratching her chin. She didn’t look back toward the guards. She walked directly across the square, her path taking her through the centre of the activity. She moved past the three-armed woman, past a stall where a man was selling bottled whispers. She reached the entrance to the narrow tunnel just as her target disappeared around a bend within it. The two guards shifted, their heavy cudgels resting on their shoulders. One of them grunted as she passed, a low, curious sound. Quinn didn’t acknowledge it. She kept her pace even, her stride long, disappearing into the deeper, gas-lit gloom of the tunnel. The sounds of the market square faded behind her, replaced by the drip of water and the echo of her own boots on stone. The trail led down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count4
3
word"efficient"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"variable"
count1
6
word"treacherous"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"wavering"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"potential"
count1
12
word"hulking"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"footfall"
2"gloom"
3"efficient"
4"electric"
5"variable"
6"treacherous"
7"rhythmic"
8"wavering"
9"echoed"
10"chaotic"
11"potential"
12"hulking"
13"gleaming"
14"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1595
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1591
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Camden1
High1
Street1
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"fabric that seemed to shift colour when she wasn't looking directly at them, scales balanced with piles of what looked like crushed gemstones"
1"looked like crushed gemstones"
74.61% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.254
wordCount1595
matches
0"not following directly, but taking a parallel route along the opposite wall of the tunne"
1"not to a medal or a memento, but to the simple silver identification tag she still wore under"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
68.98% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean53.17
std20.81
cv0.391
sampleLengths
054
155
22
351
492
548
647
773
846
981
1056
1150
1262
1353
1456
1534
1673
1724
1870
1984
2068
2162
2253
2363
2441
2515
2654
2757
2867
294
97.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"was gone"
1"was frayed"
2"been made"
44.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs258
matches
0"wasn’t coming"
1"was seeping"
2"wasn't looking"
3"was limping"
4"was speaking"
5"was selling"
55.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences131
ratio0.031
matches
0"The target—a blur in a dark hooded jacket—twenty yards ahead, rounded the corner onto Camden High Street with a desperate burst of speed."
1"The air rising from it smelled of damp soil, ozone, and something else—copper and burnt sugar."
2"Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his easy grin, the way he’d always checked his weapon twice before a risky approach."
3"Money changed hands—or something shaped like money."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1610
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"sparse, rain-huddled pedestrians."
1"deeper, gas-lit gloom"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.02111801242236025
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.008695652173913044
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean12.18
std7.36
cv0.604
sampleLengths
014
117
223
323
410
522
62
714
84
917
1016
119
1217
1318
1412
1525
166
175
1821
1916
204
217
2213
231
2426
257
2619
274
283
297
303
3130
327
339
3424
353
3610
3712
3811
3919
406
4117
4216
437
444
454
4615
4720
486
498
35.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2748091603053435
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners36
78.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"Just her and the rain."
1"Then, he was gone."
2"Just a rusted fire escape,"
ratio0.024
68.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences127
matches
0"Her worn leather watch dug"
1"It vaulted a low wall"
2"She ignored it, her focus"
3"He turned again, into a"
4"She pressed her palms against"
5"She’d had him."
6"Her eyes, accustomed to the"
7"She crouched, the knees of"
8"It was seeping up from"
9"She prodded it with her"
10"It shifted with a grating"
11"Her radio was silent."
12"She reached down and pulled"
13"It was heavy, real."
14"She set it aside, widening"
15"It was a way down."
16"He had gone this way."
17"Her fingers brushed the worn"
18"She stepped into the gap,"
19"She pulled the displaced cobblestone"
ratio0.378
22.99% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences127
matches
0"Rain fell in sheets, turning"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed"
2"The target—a blur in a"
3"Her worn leather watch dug"
4"The leather of her shoes"
5"Steam rose from subway grates,"
6"The voice was a raw"
7"The figure didn’t flinch."
8"It vaulted a low wall"
9"Quinn followed without breaking stride,"
10"The alley spit them out"
11"A black cab hydroplaned past,"
12"She ignored it, her focus"
13"A woman with a golf"
14"Quinn sidestepped a man staring"
15"Plainclothes meant no holster, no"
16"He turned again, into a"
17"The neon glare of a"
18"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
19"Rain dripped from the iron"
ratio0.874
39.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"Before her stretched a vaulted"
ratio0.008
95.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A black cab hydroplaned past, spraying a wave of gutter-water that soaked her trousers to the knee."
1"She ignored it, her focus narrowing to the suspect’s fleeing form, now merging with the sparse, rain-huddled pedestrians."
2"Quinn skidded to a halt, chest heaving, her gaze sweeping the dead end."
3"Stalls lined the tunnel walls, displaying wares that made no sense: jars of luminous insects, bolts of fabric that seemed to shift colour when she wasn't lookin…"
4"Her hand hovered at her side, fingers curled, a mimicry of a weapon that wasn’t there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice low and steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.4787%