Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ04TD5NX9SEQJ4CFPHBRX36

Run Details

Duration:
8m 8s
Cost:
$0.094342
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's bike locked to the Richmond Park gate an hour ago. The Heartstone Pendant seared a red welt against her collarbone by the time she reached the treeline. She unclipped it from inside her shirt and held it in her scarred palm. The deep crimson gemstone flickered with an inner luminescence, picking out a path between the ancient oaks. She followed. The grove breathed. That was the first wrong thing. When she stepped past the boundary stones—gnarled behemoths that looked less like markers and more like frozen giants—air entered her lungs with a weight. The scent of wildflowers clotted the breeze. Rory ran a thumb over the crescent scar on her left wrist. The skin there prickled. "All right, you stupid rock. You brought me here. Now what?" Her voice fell flat. It lacked echo. The silence ate the words whole. She moved deeper. She held the silver chain in one hand, the other brushing thigh-length grass that had no business growing in London. Not in December. Yet in this soil it thrived, slick and green and alive. There was no frost upon the blades. No snap of bare branches overhead. The oaks burned with leaves blacker than her hair, leaves that did not rustle despite the sway of their branches. She walked on grass that should have crackled underfoot. Her boots sank without sound, as if the earth pulled each footfall into damp cotton. The moon hung low, bloated and white. It cast the clearing in a light that bleached the color from her hands. One of the stones bore a knothole at the height of a man's face. Inside the hollow, something pale glistened. She did not stop to inspect it. The silver chain in her hand grew slick. She wiped her palm against her jeans and gripped harder. The pendant knew this place. It had pulled her across the park, past the pond, through bramble thickets that tore her delivery jacket. She had bled a little on the way. The cut on her shoulder itched. A twig cracked behind her. Rory spun. The path stretched back toward the stones, empty. The gap between them showed a smear of darkness where the park lamps ought to pulse. She counted her heartbeats. One. Two. Three. Nothing moved. "Badger." The sound died at her chin. She turned. The pendant hummed. It dragged her another three paces toward the center, where the wildflowers grew dense as snowdrifts. Purple heads nodded. White stems gleamed. Rory knelt. Her fingers brushed a petal. It felt like velvet laid over bone. The chill sank through her skin and settled in the joint. The moon did not shift. She checked her phone. The screen displayed 11:47. She entered the park at half eleven. The battery read forty percent. She had charged it before her shift at the Golden Empress. That was six hours ago. Forty percent drained in six hours? She could buy that. But the lock screen told a different story. The timestamp on Eva's last message—sent just before Rory had left the flat above Silas' bar—read 23:02. It was twenty minutes to midnight. It felt longer. Much longer. The backs of her eyes ached with exhaustion. Her calves burned from walking. She had been in this grove for minutes or half a lifetime. The stones watched her decide. Wrongness pooled in her stomach. Rory pocketed the device. The hum of London had ceased. No distant bus brakes squealed. No aircraft cut the clouds. The grove sat in a pocket of dead acoustics, a bell jar inverted over sacred ground. She listened for the river. Nothing. She listened for the wind. The black leaves waved, silent as ink in water. Even the cold had fled. Her breath should have steamed. It did not. The air held a temperature that matched her feverish skin, a closeness that felt less like atmosphere and more like a throat preparing to swallow. "Don't fold now, Carter." Then a click came. A tongue against teeth. It originated from her right. It originated from her left. It originated from the canopy above. A dry, insectile sound that multiplied, surrounded her. Another click answered. Then another. The rhythm matched no bird, no insect. It carried intent. It carried invitation. Rory's fist tightened on the pendant. The silver chain bit into her fingers. "One of you. Two of you. I don't care. Show yourself. I didn't come for a stroll." No answer. A flower brushed her ankle. No wind existed. Rory stepped back. Her boot crushed a stem. The snap was brittle. It echoed like a dry bone breaking. She froze. Her bright blue eyes raked the tree line. The black leaves shivered. All of them. At once. A ripple passed through the canopy like something vast exhaled beneath the bark. She drew breath. A footfall answered. Not her own. It came from the left, deep in the shadows between two sentinel oaks. Leather on grass. A heel turned in the earth with purpose. The shift of weight from one limb to another. Rory whirled. "Eva?" The name hung, unanswered. Eva had sent her to London. Eva had known something about the pendant's benefactor, had dropped hints in hurried texts. If Eva had walked these stones, she had not walked them alone. Or she had not walked out. But Eva was not here. Rory knew it in her teeth. This was not a friendly reunion. This was not human terrain. The pendant scalded her palm. She hissed, shook her hand, and the gemstone swung free on its chain. The crimson light intensified. It painted the wildflowers the color of dark wine. In that flush of red, Rory caught movement at the corner of her vision. A shape between the stones. Tall. Limbs too long for its height. It stood at the edge of the boundary and did not cross. She fixed her gaze on the spot. It had vanished. The space held only shadow and rough bark. "Fine. You want to dance? Let's dance." The words turned metallic on her tongue. The air thickened. The black leaves shook again, and this time she heard the giggle. It was not a child's sound. It warbled from everywhere and nowhere, a wet note that vibrated in her scarred wrist and her molars. The wildflowers stirred. Hundreds of heads turned toward her, stems creaking like old joists beneath a heavy boot. A second silhouette peeled away from the nearest oak. Then a third. They did not move like men. They did not blink. Rory's pulse hammered in her throat. She had fled Evan's fists. She had outrun debt collectors in Cardiff alleyways. She had survived by calculating odds, by spotting exits. Here, the math failed. The grove had no walls. The path had vanished. The exits were the oaks, and the oaks were wrong. Another footfall. Closer. She snapped her head toward the sound. The nearest figure stood twenty feet away, inside the circle. Darkness clung to it. Its head tilted at an angle that disconnected neck from spine. The limbs hung slack, fingers—if they were fingers— brushing the tops of the white petals without bending the stems. She tracked its silhouette against the moon. It had no shoulders, only a slope that connected neck to arm in one uninterrupted line. When it breathed, the grove breathed with it. Rory's throat constricted. She choked the fear down. It sat in her gut like a stone heavier than the one in her hand. She reached behind her. Her fingers closed around a loose stone, cold and slick with dew. She lifted it. The weight settled her grip. "I'm not prey." The figure tilted its head in the opposite direction. The giggle came again, this time at a spot behind her left ear. Warm air touched her neck. The pendant blazed white-hot. Rory spun, arm raised, stone ready.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"footfall"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"sentinel"
count1
12
word"dance"
count2
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"echo"
3"silence"
4"footfall"
5"pulse"
6"velvet"
7"chill"
8"charged"
9"stomach"
10"echoed"
11"sentinel"
12"dance"
13"vibrated"
14"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences181
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences188
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1263
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
London3
December1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva5
Rory14
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"December"
4"Golden"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.946
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like velvet laid over bone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1310
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences188
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.77
std28.37
cv0.953
sampleLengths
061
13
253
311
413
594
6103
75
833
92
101
116
1252
135
1477
1535
165
1756
1838
194
2050
2113
2217
237
243
2551
2642
272
281
2964
3069
317
3211
337
3464
3522
3651
373
3882
3923
4024
413
4231
436
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs224
matches(empty)
97.26% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences188
ratio0.016
matches
0"When she stepped past the boundary stones—gnarled behemoths that looked less like markers and more like frozen giants—air entered her lungs with a weight."
1"The timestamp on Eva's last message—sent just before Rory had left the flat above Silas' bar—read 23:02."
2"The limbs hung slack, fingers—if they were fingers— brushing the tops of the white petals without bending the stems."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount525
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.009523809523809525
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences188
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences188
mean6.97
std4.77
cv0.684
sampleLengths
011
117
214
317
42
53
66
724
87
912
104
1111
124
133
146
153
1620
173
1811
197
206
2120
229
2315
247
2514
2614
276
287
298
3010
315
3218
338
346
355
362
378
3816
394
401
411
421
432
441
456
462
473
4816
493
39.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners47
61.35% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences163
matches
0"Even the cold had fled."
1"Then a click came."
2"Then a third."
ratio0.018
75.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences163
matches
0"She unclipped it from inside"
1"Her voice fell flat."
2"It lacked echo."
3"She moved deeper."
4"She held the silver chain"
5"She walked on grass that"
6"Her boots sank without sound,"
7"It cast the clearing in"
8"She did not stop to"
9"She wiped her palm against"
10"It had pulled her across"
11"She had bled a little"
12"She counted her heartbeats."
13"It dragged her another three"
14"Her fingers brushed a petal."
15"It felt like velvet laid"
16"She checked her phone."
17"She entered the park at"
18"She had charged it before"
19"She could buy that."
ratio0.362
36.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount138
totalSentences163
matches
0"Rory's bike locked to the"
1"The Heartstone Pendant seared a"
2"She unclipped it from inside"
3"The deep crimson gemstone flickered"
4"The grove breathed."
5"That was the first wrong"
6"The scent of wildflowers clotted"
7"Rory ran a thumb over"
8"The skin there prickled."
9"Her voice fell flat."
10"It lacked echo."
11"The silence ate the words"
12"She moved deeper."
13"She held the silver chain"
14"The oaks burned with leaves"
15"She walked on grass that"
16"Her boots sank without sound,"
17"The moon hung low, bloated"
18"It cast the clearing in"
19"She did not stop to"
ratio0.847
30.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences163
matches
0"If Eva had walked these"
ratio0.006
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"When she stepped past the boundary stones—gnarled behemoths that looked less like markers and more like frozen giants—air entered her lungs with a weight."
1"She held the silver chain in one hand, the other brushing thigh-length grass that had no business growing in London."
2"It cast the clearing in a light that bleached the color from her hands."
3"It had pulled her across the park, past the pond, through bramble thickets that tore her delivery jacket."
4"The air held a temperature that matched her feverish skin, a closeness that felt less like atmosphere and more like a throat preparing to swallow."
5"Its head tilted at an angle that disconnected neck from spine."
6"It had no shoulders, only a slope that connected neck to arm in one uninterrupted line."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.6822%