| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 738 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 738 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "fluttered" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "aligned" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "glinting" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "shattered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 730 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 540 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 8 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Compass | 2 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Companion | 1 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.01% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.37 | | wordCount | 730 | | matches | | 0 | "not north but toward an unseen fissure in the stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.54% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 38.42 | | std | 17.13 | | cv | 0.446 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 31 |
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| 96.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "A faint, metallic scent hung in the air—a reminder of rusted rails and long‑dead machinery." | | 1 | "Her left wrist bore the worn leather watch that had survived seventeen years of precinct rotations; its second hand ticked with the steadiness of a metronome." | | 2 | "The name glimmered: “Liam O’Reilly, 29, freelance cartographer.” She glanced at the surrounding stalls, noting the odd assortment of items—bottles of luminescent liquid, vials of powdered ash, a sack of crushed bone tokens." | | 3 | "The market’s usual clientele—shadowy figures with iridescent eyes—watched from the gloom, their faces half‑hidden behind masks stitched with runes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 544 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.016544117647058824 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0055147058823529415 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 80.20% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 15.21 | | std | 5.33 | | cv | 0.351 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 12 |
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| 63.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4166666666666667 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots clanged against the" | | 1 | "Her left wrist bore the" | | 2 | "She halted at the edge" | | 3 | "She clutched a leather satchel" | | 4 | "she replied, stepping closer to" | | 5 | "she muttered, her fingers resting" | | 6 | "she said, voice clipped" | | 7 | "She traced a line from" | | 8 | "she said, voice steady" | | 9 | "she said, pointing a finger" | | 10 | "she recalled, eyes narrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "The cold bite of the" | | 1 | "Her boots clanged against the" | | 2 | "A faint, metallic scent hung" | | 3 | "Her left wrist bore the" | | 4 | "She halted at the edge" | | 5 | "Stalls draped in tattered velvet" | | 6 | "Merchants crowded around a low" | | 7 | "The Compass needle twitched, pointing" | | 8 | "A figure leaned against a" | | 9 | "Eva Kowalski's green eyes scanned" | | 10 | "She clutched a leather satchel" | | 11 | "Eva asked, voice low, her" | | 12 | "Quinn's eyes narrowed behind the" | | 13 | "she replied, stepping closer to" | | 14 | "The corpse was a young" | | 15 | "The ledger’s pages fluttered as" | | 16 | "Quinn asked, crouching to examine" | | 17 | "The name glimmered: She glanced" | | 18 | "The market’s usual clientele—shadowy figures" | | 19 | "Eva moved to the corpse," |
| | ratio | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots clanged against the cracked concrete, echoing off the vaulted arches that had once thrummed with commuters." | | 1 | "Her left wrist bore the worn leather watch that had survived seventeen years of precinct rotations; its second hand ticked with the steadiness of a metronome." | | 2 | "Merchants crowded around a low table that bore a brass compass, its face etched with sigils that glimmered faintly against the verdigris patina." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva asked, voice low, her tone dancing between curiosity and caution" | | 1 | "she muttered, her fingers resting on the scar on the victim’s neck" | | 2 | "she said, voice clipped" | | 3 | "the vendor hissed, eyes glinting" | | 4 | "she said, voice steady" | | 5 | "she recalled, eyes narrowing" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the vendor hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.381 | |