Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ04Z3ZSJ2R25FGTEM7M4PTD

Run Details

Duration:
24.1s
Cost:
$0.003780
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove was always thick, but tonight it clung to Aurora’s skin like wet wool. She stepped between the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, the scent of damp earth and night-blooming jasmine filling her lungs. The wildflowers, which never knew winter, glowed with a faint, phosphorescent sheen under the new moon, their petals opened to a sky she couldn’t see. The canopy overhead was too dense, a living ceiling of leaves that swallowed the stars. She’d come because the Heartstone Pendant had been humming against her collarbone for three days straight. A steady, insistent warmth, a pulse that quickened whenever she passed the alley behind the Golden Empress, the narrow lane that always felt colder than the rest of the street. Yu-Fei had called it a “bad patch,” a place where the city’s breath hitched. Rory called it a Hel portal’s doorstep. The pendant had never lied before. Now, it pulsed a frantic, feverish rhythm against her skin, hot enough to be uncomfortable. She unzipped her jacket slightly, seeking air. The clearing was supposed to be a pocket of calm, a place where Isolde sometimes left gifts of woven grass or perfectly shaped acorns. Tonight, the tranquility felt thin, stretched taut over something else. A twig snapped under her boot. The sound, which should have been ordinary, was singular. It echoed for too long, the crack bouncing off the oaks not in sequence, but all at once, a chorus of fractures. She froze, her delivery-bag instincts screaming *hostile territory*. Her eyes scanned the perimeter of dancing shadows between the trees. Nothing. Just the patient, silent sentinels of oak and hawthorn. She forced herself to move deeper, toward the heart of the Grove where the time-dilation was strongest. Yu-Fei had mentioned, in his oblique way, that sometimes you needed to “find the quiet inside the quiet” to hear certain things. Rory needed to know what the portal connected to on this side. Isolde had warned her the Grove was a door, but doors had two sides. The pendant’s heat was a brand now. She reached beneath her shirt, her fingers closing around the smooth silver chain. The deep crimson gemstone seemed to throb with its own internal light, a faint, sullen glow that painted her palm red. She held it out, using it like a compass. It drew her toward a cluster of ferns near a fallen oak, its roots clawing at the air like skeletal fingers. A whisper of sound threaded through the fern fronds. Not the rustle of wind. It was a dry, sibilant hush, like silk dragging over gravel. Rory’s hand dropped from the pendant to the small utility knife in her pocket. She crouched, her gaze fixed on the spot. The ferns trembled, a slow, rhythmic sway, as if something massive was breathing against them from the other side. “Hello?” Her voice was low, flat. Not a call, but a statement of fact. The echo didn’t come this time. The word simply fell dead at her feet, swallowed by the Grove’s listening silence. The pendant flared, a searing wave of heat that made her gasp and drop it. It swung from her neck, settling against her sternum. The glow intensified, a beacon in the gloom. In its light, she saw the ground beneath the fallen oak. The soil was disturbed, turned over in a neat, circular patch about the size of a dinner plate. No footprints. No tracks of any kind. Just raw, dark earth, smelling of copper and deep rot. As she stared, the patch of earth seemed to… sigh. A fine, dark mist curled from its center, smelling of old roses and something else, something metallic and wrong. It didn’t rise like smoke; it seeped, clinging to the ground before drifting toward her in a low, seeking tendril. Rory backed away, her boots silent on the moss. The motion drew her eye upward, to the canopy. For a moment, she’d thought a branch had moved. Not in the wind. A deliberate, slow articulation, like a joint bending. She stared into the intricate lattice of wood and leaf. Everything was still. But the stillness now felt like a held breath, not an absence of life. A new sound began. It was so faint she almost dismissed it as blood rushing in her ears. A soft, wet clicking. It came from the trees to her left, then answered by another from her right. A conversation. She turned in a slow circle, the clicking keeping pace, triangulating her position. The sounds were precise, metronomic. Not an animal. Not anything with lungs. The pendant pulsed again, a frantic counter-rhythm to the clicking. It was pulling her, drawing her forward, not toward the disturbed earth, but toward the very center of the Grove, where the largest oak stood, its trunk split by lightning centuries ago. A blackened, hollowed-out cavity gaped at its base, large enough for a person to crawl into. The clicking stopped. The silence that replaced it was louder. It vibrated in her teeth. She could feel the Grove watching her. The wildflowers, their cheerful glow now seeming feverish and predatory. The standing stones at the perimeter, no longer markers but bars. The wrongness had saturated everything, seeped into the air she breathed, which now tasted of ozone and static. From the hollow of the great oak, a shape detached itself from the deeper darkness. It didn’t step out; it flowed, a spill of shadow that gathered mass and density on the moss. It was tall, gaunt, its limbs too long, its proportions subtly off. It had no face, only a smooth, ovoid head that tilted, regarding her. Where a mouth should be, a series of fine, vertical slits opened and closed, producing the clicking sound she’d heard. The air grew colder, the pendant’s warmth a useless ember against a spreading frost. Rory didn’t breathe. She didn’t move. Her mind, the quick, out-of-the-box tool she relied on, was utterly blank, stunned into inaction by the sheer violation of it. This wasn’t Fae. This wasn’t from any story Isolde had told her. This was something that had been waiting, something that used the Hel portal not as a doorway, but as a wound in the world it could feed from. The thing took a step, a motion that was both liquid and disjointed, like a marionette on tangled strings. The clicked its mandibles. The pendant gave one last, violent pulse of heat against her chest, then went utterly cold. Rory turned and ran. She didn’t look back. She crashed through the ferns, ignoring the slash of unseen thorns, her feet finding the worn path back to the standing stones. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches reaching. The path, which was a straight line, now felt long, curving, endless. She burst through the boundary stones, the air changing instantly from the Grove’s thick perfume to the crisp, mundane chill of Richmond Park at night. She didn’t stop running until she hit the gravel path near the Penny Fountain, her lungs burning, her muscles screaming. She doubled over, hands on her knees, staring at the perfectly normal, unenchanted ground. The pendant lay cold and inert against her shirt. Its crimson stone was dark, lifeless. She straightened up, her heart hammering a frantic, uneven tattoo against her ribs. She had her answer. The portal connected to something that used the Grove as a hunting blind. And it had seen her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"very"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"sentinels"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"searing"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
18
word"intricate"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"pulsed"
4"echoed"
5"scanned"
6"dancing"
7"sentinels"
8"throb"
9"whisper"
10"silk"
11"trembled"
12"rhythmic"
13"echo"
14"silence"
15"searing"
16"beacon"
17"gloom"
18"intricate"
19"vibrated"
20"could feel"
21"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1247
ratio0.002
matches
0"hostile territory"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1238
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove8
Aurora1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Golden1
Empress1
Hel2
Isolde3
Richmond1
Park1
Penny1
Fountain1
Rory6
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Isolde"
2"Penny"
3"Fountain"
4"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Aurora"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a held breath, not an absence"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords4.01
wordCount1247
matches
0"not in sequence, but all at once, a chorus of fractures"
1"Not a call, but a statement of fact"
2"not toward the disturbed earth, but toward the very center of the Grove"
3"no longer markers but"
4"not as a doorway, but as a wound in the world it could feed from"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
64.18% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean56.68
std21.24
cv0.375
sampleLengths
082
173
256
366
465
571
666
734
878
949
1066
1164
1258
133
1458
1592
1667
1739
1851
1959
2045
215
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was pulling"
89.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences107
ratio0.019
matches
0"It didn’t rise like smoke; it seeped, clinging to the ground before drifting toward her in a low, seeking tendril."
1"It didn’t step out; it flowed, a spill of shadow that gathered mass and density on the moss."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.02971887550200803
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007228915662650603
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean11.65
std6.81
cv0.585
sampleLengths
019
123
225
315
416
530
614
77
86
915
107
1124
1210
136
149
1522
168
1711
181
199
2017
2122
2212
2314
247
2513
2621
279
2821
299
305
3111
3214
338
3419
356
368
376
3814
3915
409
418
4211
4318
442
455
4610
479
481
4919
32.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.24299065420560748
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners26
64.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just the patient, silent sentinels"
1"Just raw, dark earth, smelling"
ratio0.019
84.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences103
matches
0"She stepped between the ancient"
1"She’d come because the Heartstone"
2"She unzipped her jacket slightly,"
3"It echoed for too long,"
4"She froze, her delivery-bag instincts"
5"Her eyes scanned the perimeter"
6"She forced herself to move"
7"She reached beneath her shirt,"
8"She held it out, using"
9"It drew her toward a"
10"It was a dry, sibilant"
11"She crouched, her gaze fixed"
12"Her voice was low, flat"
13"It swung from her neck,"
14"It didn’t rise like smoke;"
15"She stared into the intricate"
16"It was so faint she"
17"It came from the trees"
18"She turned in a slow"
19"It was pulling her, drawing"
ratio0.34
37.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences103
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"She stepped between the ancient"
2"The wildflowers, which never knew"
3"The canopy overhead was too"
4"She’d come because the Heartstone"
5"A steady, insistent warmth, a"
6"Yu-Fei had called it a"
7"Rory called it a Hel"
8"The pendant had never lied"
9"She unzipped her jacket slightly,"
10"The clearing was supposed to"
11"Tonight, the tranquility felt thin,"
12"A twig snapped under her"
13"The sound, which should have"
14"It echoed for too long,"
15"She froze, her delivery-bag instincts"
16"Her eyes scanned the perimeter"
17"She forced herself to move"
18"Yu-Fei had mentioned, in his"
19"Rory needed to know what"
ratio0.845
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now, it pulsed a frantic,"
ratio0.01
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She stepped between the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, the scent of damp earth and night-blooming jasmine filling her lungs."
1"A steady, insistent warmth, a pulse that quickened whenever she passed the alley behind the Golden Empress, the narrow lane that always felt colder than the res…"
2"The deep crimson gemstone seemed to throb with its own internal light, a faint, sullen glow that painted her palm red."
3"The ferns trembled, a slow, rhythmic sway, as if something massive was breathing against them from the other side."
4"She crashed through the ferns, ignoring the slash of unseen thorns, her feet finding the worn path back to the standing stones."
5"She didn’t stop running until she hit the gravel path near the Penny Fountain, her lungs burning, her muscles screaming."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Yu-Fei had (have)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
78.7258%