Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0510GYD6NCHBTQBE4M0AWC

Run Details

Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.005322
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on Eva’s flat door clicked open in sequence—soft, then grinding, then the final heavy thunk—before the door swung inward. Rory stood in the gap, a canvas bag slung over one shoulder, keys still in her hand. The scent of rain-soaked wool and the faint, pervasive aroma of old paper from Eva’s research stacks hit her first. Then she saw him. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow hallway like a tailored shadow, his platinum hair slicked back, the collar of his charcoal suit immaculate. He held his ivory-handled cane in one gloved hand, its tip resting on the threadbare runner. The air in the cramped space seemed to thin. “Rory,” he said. The name, in his low French accent, was a ghost between them. She didn’t step back. The instinct warred with a deeper, older reflex to stay exactly where she was. Her fingers tightened on the keys. “Lucien.” “May I come in?” Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, chose that moment to wind between Lucien’s legs, a rumbling purr cutting the silence. The cat looked up, amber eyes wide, then trotted into the living area. The absurd domesticity of it cracked the tableau. Rory stepped aside. Not a welcome, but a necessity. He moved past her, his shoulder nearly brushing hers in the tight space. She closed the door, the deadbolts remaining undone. A statement. His gaze swept the chaos of the flat: the leaning towers of books on the floor, the scrolls cascading off the sofa, the precarious stacks of notes on the small kitchen table. He didn’t comment. His black-and-amber eyes found hers again. “You’re alone,” he observed. “Eva’s out. For a few days.” She dropped her keys and bag on the one clear surface—a wobbly side table. “How did you find me?” A faint, almost imperceptible lift of one shoulder. “I am a fixer, Rory. Finding people is what I do.” He shifted his weight, the cane making a soft tap. “Especially people I need to find.” The words hung there, loaded with double meaning. She moved into the living area, needing the space between them. “You could have called.” “And you would have answered?” She didn’t. She perched on the arm of the sofa, forcing a casualness she didn’t feel. “What do you want, Lucien?” He didn’t sit. He moved to the window, looking out at the brick wall of the curry house below. The low light caught the sharp line of his jaw. “There is a situation. In my world. It has… spilled. Into yours.” “Our worlds stopped sharing spillover three years ago. That was the deal.” Her voice was level. Cool-headed. The Rory she’d built for herself. He turned from the window. The heterochromatic gaze pinned her. “Deals fracture. You know this. You of all people understand things breaking.” The reminder of her ex, Evan, landed with a dull thud in her gut. She kept her expression blank. “So fix it. That’s your title, isn’t it? The Frenchman who mends the cracks in the supernatural’s dirty laundry.” Something flickered in his amber eye. A spark of old heat. “This is different. A retrieval. An item of some… sentimental importance has been taken. From a private collection.” “And it ended up in my purview how?” “It was delivered. To the Golden Empress. To Yu-Fei’s door, as a matter of fact. Hidden in a shipment of ceramic dragons.” He took a step closer. “You were on shift when the delivery came in. You handled the crate.” Rory’s mind raced. A delivery yesterday, odd timing, Yu-Fei asking her to double-check the inventory against the manifest herself. A cold weight settled in her stomach. “There was nothing unusual.” “There was a carved obsidian box, no larger than your palm. Wrapped in silk. You would have logged it, moved it to storage.” His voice was patient, a scalpel. “It’s gone from storage now. Along with a significant portion of Yu-Fei’s unreported cash reserves from the back office.” She slid off the sofa arm, standing her ground as he closed the distance. “Are you accusing me?” “No. I am telling you that whoever took the box knew exactly when and how to get in. They knew the delivery schedule. They knew who would be working.” He was close now. Close enough that she could see the faint, jagged line where his demonic heritage asserted itself at his temple, usually hidden by his hair. Close enough to smell the scent of him—bergamot, old leather, and something else, something sharper, like ozone after a storm. “I am not here to accuse you. I am here because you are now a witness, and a target.” Her breath hitched. She masked it, tilting her chin up. “A target for who?” “For the people who want that box. And they will not ask politely. They will come for you, Rory, because you are the last person confirmed to have seen it.” He reached out, not to touch her, but his gloved fingers hovered near her elbow, a ghost of a gesture. “I came to offer protection.” The offer was a slap. Three years ago, his protection had looked very different. It had looked like promises whispered in this very city, like plans made in the small hours, like a future she’d been foolish enough to consider. Then his world had bled into hers in a violent, terrifying way, and his “protection” had meant hiding, running, being the fragile human partner he needed to shield. “No,” she said, the word solid. “I don’t need your kind of protection.” “You mistake me for the man I was.” His voice dropped, roughening. “I am offering resources. A safe location. Information. Not chains.” “You offered chains last time, Lucien. You just called them a ‘necessary precaution’.” The old hurt tasted like metal in her mouth. “You hid me away. You decided what I could handle. You didn’t ask. You told.” He flinched. A genuine, minute tightening of his jaw. “I was trying to keep you alive.” “You were trying to keep me yours.” The silence that followed was deafening. Ptolemy hopped onto a stack of books and began grooming a paw, indifferent. Outside, a siren wailed and faded. Lucien’s hand dropped to his side. He took one step back, creating a sliver of space, but it didn’t diminish the tension. “You are right. I was possessive. I saw a threat and I tried to lock it in a vault. I did not see… I did not see that the vault was a cage.” He met her gaze, and for the first time, she saw past the impeccably dressed fixer to the half-demon man beneath. The hurt in his eyes mirrored her own. “I am not here to cage you, Rory. I am here because a cage is exactly where you will end up if they find you first.” She turned away, walking to the kitchenette. Her hands moved on autopilot, filling the kettle. A normal, human ritual. “Why should I believe anything has changed?” “Because I am standing here. Asking.” He followed, but stopped at the threshold of the tiny kitchen. “Because I have spent three years learning that my way of doing things leaves wreckage. And I am… trying a different method.” She flicked the kettle on. The click and growing hum filled the space. “What’s in the box, Lucien? Really.” He leaned against the doorframe, crossing his arms. The movement pulled his suit taut across his shoulders. “A relic. From Avaros. A memory stone. It holds… echoes. Of my father.” The kettle rumbled. Rory stared at the brushed metal side. “Your father.” “He is not a subject I discuss. The stone is a link. Dangerous in the wrong hands. It could be used to draw him through, or to bargain with his kind. It is not a weapon, but a key.” He paused. “And it was a gift. From my mother. Before she died.” The plain, unvarnished pain in his voice cut through her defenses. She knew about loss. She knew about objects that held more weight than their physical form. The kettle clicked off. She didn’t move to make tea. “If I help you,” she said slowly, “it’s not for you. It’s for Yu-Fei. He’s been good to me. This mess landed on his doorstep because of me, apparently. And it’s for me, so I don’t end up in a ‘vault’.” A faint, weary smile touched his lips. “I accept those terms.” He pushed off the doorframe. “You have a change of clothes? Pack a bag. We will not be coming back here.” “Where are we going?” “My flat. It is secure. The wards are… extensive.” He saw her stiffen. “You will have your own room. A lock on the door you control. I give you my word.” She looked at him then, truly looked. At the man who had once commanded her world, who had terrified and thrilled her in equal measure. Who had broken her trust by trying to smother her in it. He looked tired. He looked desperate. She walked past him to Eva’s small bedroom. “I have twenty minutes.” “I will wait.” His voice followed her, quiet and steady. In the bedroom, she pulled a worn duffel from under the bed. She packed mechanically—clothes, toiletries, the worn leather journal she always carried. Her hand hovered over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood fall. A reminder that accidents happened. That breaks left marks. She came back out. Lucien hadn’t moved. He was watching the door, his posture alert, a sentinel. “Ready?” she asked, slinging the duffel over her shoulder. He nodded, turning to face the deadbolts. “Stay behind me. The stairwell is clear, but the street will not be.” She followed him to the door, her hand resting on the cool metal of her keychain still lying on the side table. For a second, she could have just grabbed them, locked the door behind him, and refused to play this game. Stay in her flat, above Silas’s bar, live her quiet, human life. But the look in his eyes stayed with her. The mention of a memory stone from his dead mother. The admission of his own past failures. He was offering her something different, however clumsily. And the alternative was waiting, alone, for whatever came next. She left the keys. She followed him out into the dim hallway. The door closed behind them with a soft click, none of the deadbolts engaged. An unlocked door. A chance, however slim, at something new, built on the ruins of the old.
created_at"2026-04-24T16:26:34.922Z" 4/24/2026, 4:26:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The old hurt tasted like [like]"
1"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.07
85.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"slowly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"cascading"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"cascading"
2"weight"
3"reminder"
4"flickered"
5"raced"
6"stomach"
7"silk"
8"tension"
9"flicked"
10"echoes"
11"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences121
matches
0"looked desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1763
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1116
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
French1
Lucien4
Cool-headed1
Rory5
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Close2
Silas1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like promises whispered in this ve"
1"tasted like metal in her mouth"
29.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.702
wordCount1763
matches
0"Not a welcome, but a necessity"
1"not to touch her, but his gloved fingers hovered near her elbow, a ghost of a gest"
2"not a weapon, but a key"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean30.4
std20.83
cv0.685
sampleLengths
059
14
247
315
425
54
638
732
841
94
1025
1135
1223
135
1421
1541
1623
1722
1838
1929
208
2140
2230
2348
2418
2596
2614
2755
2868
2913
3022
3137
3216
337
3425
35110
3626
3739
3819
3930
4012
4152
4227
4310
4441
4532
464
4731
4843
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
60.38% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was deafening"
1"was watching"
2"was offering"
3"was waiting"
70.06% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences157
ratio0.025
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva’s flat door clicked open in sequence—soft, then grinding, then the final heavy thunk—before the door swung inward."
1"“Eva’s out. For a few days.” She dropped her keys and bag on the one clear surface—a wobbly side table."
2"Close enough to smell the scent of him—bergamot, old leather, and something else, something sharper, like ozone after a storm."
3"She packed mechanically—clothes, toiletries, the worn leather journal she always carried."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1130
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03008849557522124
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007964601769911504
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean11.23
std8.89
cv0.792
sampleLengths
022
117
220
34
422
516
69
73
812
94
1014
116
121
134
1417
1513
168
173
186
1913
208
212
2232
233
246
254
2620
275
288
2921
306
318
3211
334
345
352
3614
375
383
3916
4010
4112
4216
431
446
455
465
4712
4814
495
41.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.29936305732484075
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners47
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then his world had bled"
ratio0.018
27.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences114
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane"
1"She didn’t step back."
2"Her fingers tightened on the"
3"He moved past her, his"
4"She closed the door, the"
5"His gaze swept the chaos"
6"He didn’t comment."
7"His black-and-amber eyes found hers"
8"She dropped her keys and"
9"He shifted his weight, the"
10"She moved into the living"
11"She perched on the arm"
12"He didn’t sit."
13"He moved to the window,"
14"Her voice was level"
15"He turned from the window."
16"She kept her expression blank."
17"He took a step closer"
18"His voice was patient, a"
19"She slid off the sofa"
ratio0.482
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences114
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva’s"
1"Rory stood in the gap,"
2"The scent of rain-soaked wool"
3"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
4"He held his ivory-handled cane"
5"The air in the cramped"
6"The name, in his low"
7"She didn’t step back."
8"The instinct warred with a"
9"Her fingers tightened on the"
10"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, chose that"
11"The cat looked up, amber"
12"The absurd domesticity of it"
13"Rory stepped aside."
14"He moved past her, his"
15"She closed the door, the"
16"His gaze swept the chaos"
17"He didn’t comment."
18"His black-and-amber eyes found hers"
19"She dropped her keys and"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She followed him to the door, her hand resting on the cool metal of her keychain still lying on the side table."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He shifted, the cane making a soft tap"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.035
80.9669%