| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She hesitated clearly [clearly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.457 | | leniency | 0.914 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 94.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1815 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1815 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "mechanical" | | 6 | "comfortable" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "calculating" | | 9 | "database" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 73 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1790 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1323 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Rawlings" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | London | 2 | | Rawlings | 14 | | Britain | 1 | | Three | 2 | | Patel | 2 | | Morris | 5 | | Thames | 1 | | Woolwich | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Camden | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Rawlings" | | 2 | "Britain" | | 3 | "Patel" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Museum" | | 6 | "Camden" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Thames" | | 2 | "Woolwich" |
| | globalScore | 0.971 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sigils that seemed to shift under the work lights, though she knew that was an illusion of the shadows" | | 1 | "darkness that seemed to resist it—not absorbing the light but pushing back against it, a density in the air that her twenty-two years in London had never prepared her for" | | 2 | "something like this crossed her path again" |
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| 88.27% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.117 | | wordCount | 1790 | | matches | | 0 | "not terror, but a kind of startled peace" | | 1 | "not absorbing the light but pushing back against it, a density in the air" |
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| 45.01% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "promising that tea" | | 1 | "let that sit" | | 2 | "caught that copper" | | 3 | "believed that conclusion" | | 4 | "thought that grief" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 33.77 | | std | 24.95 | | cv | 0.739 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 85 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 90 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 78 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 83 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 90 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 69 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 43 |
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| 87.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "been buttoned" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "been modified" | | 3 | "been removed" | | 4 | "been found" | | 5 | "been hidden" |
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| 52.51% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 226 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "was already moving" | | 2 | "was bagging" | | 3 | "was already constructing" | | 4 | "was investigating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "Camden's noise faded above her—the market crowds, the canal traffic, the perpetual thrum of a city that never stopped eating itself—and descended into this forgotten pocket of London where the air sat thick and stagnant against her lungs." | | 1 | "Tiled walls rose on either side, their vintage advertisements peeling in long strips—a woman in a pillbox hat promising that tea would solve all of Britain's problems, a cinema poster for a film no living person had seen." | | 2 | "The station opened into what might have been a waiting area or a maintenance corridor—hard to tell with so much of the architecture cannibalized by time and water damage." | | 3 | "His face held an expression she'd seen before in photographs of drowning victims—not terror, but a kind of startled peace." | | 4 | "The shoes—good leather, polished recently—pointed straight toward the ceiling." | | 5 | "Quinn reached toward the coat's inner pocket—the one the initial search would have checked but perhaps not examined with the attention she intended." | | 6 | "The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize—sigils that seemed to shift under the work lights, though she knew that was an illusion of the shadows." | | 7 | "The tilework was original to the station—she could see that—but portions had been modified." | | 8 | "A section where the floor tiles had been removed and replaced with a stone that didn't match—older stone, carved with channels that could have been drains or could have been something else entirely." | | 9 | "One of them—a younger woman named Patel whom Quinn had worked with before—was staring at the compass Rawlings still held." | | 10 | "The beam cut into darkness that seemed to resist it—not absorbing the light but pushing back against it, a density in the air that her twenty-two years in London had never prepared her for." | | 11 | "Scuffs marked the floor—recent traffic." | | 12 | "Morris had been investigating a string of disappearances along the Thames, all of them clustering near locations with similar smell signatures—copper and ozone, that sharpness that preceded something she couldn't name." | | 13 | "Her mind was already constructing the next steps—pulling Morris's file, cross-referencing the locations, tracking the movement patterns in this station to find where they led." | | 14 | "The British Museum had researchers who studied such things—occult specialists, antiquities scholars who understood the old symbols better than any police database could." | | 15 | "The time mattered less than the weight of it—the years since Morris, the years before something like this crossed her path again." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 805 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02360248447204969 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0037267080745341614 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 13.07 | | std | 10.94 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 53.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.40875912408759124 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "More than one person." | | 1 | "More than a few." |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Her watch caught the glow" | | 1 | "She followed the cabling of" | | 2 | "His position was wrong." | | 3 | "He lay on his back" | | 4 | "His face held an expression" | | 5 | "He was wrong." | | 6 | "She crouched beside the corpse," | | 7 | "She leaned closer and caught" | | 8 | "Her fingers found something hard" | | 9 | "She drew it out." | | 10 | "It pointed toward the eastern" | | 11 | "He took it from her" | | 12 | "She walked the perimeter, her" | | 13 | "Her expression held recognition." | | 14 | "She hesitated, clearly calculating whether" | | 15 | "She pulled her phone and" | | 16 | "She had never believed that" | | 17 | "He'd been found in an" | | 18 | "They'd said cardiac arrest then" | | 19 | "She met his gaze directly," |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 30.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 91 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn stepped off the" | | 2 | "Camden's noise faded above her—the" | | 3 | "Her watch caught the glow" | | 4 | "The leather band had worn" | | 5 | "She followed the cabling of" | | 6 | "The tracks remained, rusted over," | | 7 | "The station opened into what" | | 8 | "Rawlings stood near the center," | | 9 | "Quinn stopped three feet from" | | 10 | "The victim was male, mid-thirties," | | 11 | "His position was wrong." | | 12 | "That was the first thing" | | 13 | "He lay on his back" | | 14 | "His face held an expression" | | 15 | "Rawlings said without looking up" | | 16 | "Rawlings scratched at his jaw" | | 17 | "Quinn let that sit." | | 18 | "An anonymous tip leading to" | | 19 | "Someone wanted this body found," |
| | ratio | 0.858 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn stepped off the rusted ladder into the darkness below, her boots finding purchase on cracked tile that hadn't seen regular foot traffic in forty ye…" | | 1 | "The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in a wool coat that had seen better days but couldn't be called cheap." | | 2 | "Something that reminded her of the ozone sharpness before a lightning strike." | | 3 | "Small, brass, its casing worn with a patina of verdigris that spoke of age and handling." | | 4 | "The beam cut into darkness that seemed to resist it—not absorbing the light but pushing back against it, a density in the air that her twenty-two years in Londo…" | | 5 | "The kind of wear patterns that suggested regular use, a steady flow of movement that had no official record or explanation." | | 6 | "Morris had been investigating a string of disappearances along the Thames, all of them clustering near locations with similar smell signatures—copper and ozone,…" | | 7 | "Rawlings was bagging the compass, writing it up as a personal effect of the deceased, closing the loop of interpretation that would make this death ordinary and…" | | 8 | "The British Museum had researchers who studied such things—occult specialists, antiquities scholars who understood the old symbols better than any police databa…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She crouched, careful to keep distance from the techs' work" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rawlings confirmed (confirm)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |