| 38.71% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora started then [then]" | | 1 | "she observed cryptically [cryptically]" | | 2 | "Aurora said carefully [carefully]" | | 3 | "the chef explained proudly [proudly]" | | 4 | "Aurora said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.323 | | leniency | 0.645 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.161 | |
| 70.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1836 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "quickly" | | 6 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1836 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "pristine" | | 5 | "structure" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "calculating" | | 14 | "firmly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1828 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 77 | | wordCount | 1177 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 13 | | Isolde | 10 | | Aurora | 21 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Prince | 10 | | Belphegor | 9 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Earth" |
| | places | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Fae-Forged" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.608 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "apples that seemed to contain entire galaxies within their skins" | | 1 | "plants that seemed to lean toward her" | | 2 | "walls that seemed to shift between translucent and opaque" | | 3 | "soup that seemed to absorb the tears" | | 4 | "looked like solidified wine, with Prince" | | 5 | "symbol that seemed to pulse with malevolent intent" | | 6 | "tasted like cinnamon, and a symbol that s" | | 7 | "seemed heavier his smile strained" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1828 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.59% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 29.48 | | std | 14.18 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 55 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Towering vines hung heavy with fruits of impossible colors—purple melons that pulsed with internal light, apples that seemed to contain entire galaxies within their skins." | | 1 | "Instead of water, it flowed with a viscous, golden liquid that smelled of honey and something else—something metallic and ancient." | | 2 | "Warmth spread up her arm, carrying with it fragments of images—a wedding feast in a long-dead kingdom, a pirate's treasure chest overflowing with jewels that turned to dust, a child's birthday cake with candles that never extinguished." | | 3 | "What had been fields of spice trees gave way to manicured gardens where vegetables grew in impossible patterns—a spiral staircase of carrots, a castle of potatoes with onion flagpoles." | | 4 | "A group of figures emerged from the spice fog—five humans in pristine white aprons, moving with practiced efficiency." | | 5 | "They moved through the gardens, the chef leading them toward a structure that rose from the landscape—a colossal dining hall with walls that seemed to shift between translucent and opaque." | | 6 | "The moment her fingers touched it, visions flooded her mind—torn fragments of Earth bleeding into Hel, shadows with too many eyes, screams that tasted like cinnamon, and a symbol that seemed to pulse with malevolent intent." | | 7 | "The symbol from her vision burned in her mind—something that needed to be closed before solstice." |
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| 95.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 557 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.04488330341113106 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012567324955116697 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 13.44 | | std | 7.05 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 60.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3897058823529412 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of water, it flowed" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her gaze distant" | | 1 | "They stepped through the threshold." | | 2 | "Her fingers touched the golden" | | 3 | "She snatched her hand back," | | 4 | "They continued deeper into Dymas." | | 5 | "she observed cryptically" | | 6 | "Their eyes held a distant," | | 7 | "They moved through the gardens," | | 8 | "He was a rotund figure" | | 9 | "He snapped his fingers, and" | | 10 | "She picked up the glass." | | 11 | "He gestured, and the walls" |
| | ratio | 0.129 | |
| 8.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora adjusted the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered, though she doubted" | | 2 | "Nyx's solid form rippled at" | | 3 | "A statement, not a question" | | 4 | "The shade's voice carried the" | | 5 | "Isolde drifted behind them, silver" | | 6 | "she murmured, her gaze distant" | | 7 | "They stepped through the threshold." | | 8 | "The world snapped into focus" | | 9 | "The ground wasn't soil but" | | 10 | "Trees bore leaves that crumbled" | | 11 | "Aurora started, then stopped, unable" | | 12 | "Isolde finished, her expression unreadable" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted toward a bubbling" | | 14 | "The shade reached out a" | | 15 | "Liquid coated their fingertips, glowing" | | 16 | "Nyx said, pulling their hand" | | 17 | "Aurora approached cautiously." | | 18 | "Her fingers touched the golden" | | 19 | "Warmth spread up her arm," |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it dissolved into shimmering" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Towering vines hung heavy with fruits of impossible colors—purple melons that pulsed with internal light, apples that seemed to contain entire galaxies within t…" | | 1 | "Trees bore leaves that crumbled into spices when touched, releasing clouds of paprika, saffron, and curry into the air." | | 2 | "Instead of water, it flowed with a viscous, golden liquid that smelled of honey and something else—something metallic and ancient." | | 3 | "Liquid coated their fingertips, glowing with inner light before dripping back into the stream." | | 4 | "Warmth spread up her arm, carrying with it fragments of images—a wedding feast in a long-dead kingdom, a pirate's treasure chest overflowing with jewels that tu…" | | 5 | "Isolde walked without making footprints, her silver gown brushing against plants that seemed to lean toward her." | | 6 | "The shade paused before a massive tree that bore fruit resembling human hearts." | | 7 | "They moved through the gardens, the chef leading them toward a structure that rose from the landscape—a colossal dining hall with walls that seemed to shift bet…" | | 8 | "One woman shoveled food into her mouth without pause, another methodically arranged ingredients into intricate patterns before consuming them whole, a third wep…" | | 9 | "A crown of fruit sat precariously on his head, occasionally dropping pieces that were immediately consumed by shadowy figures that materialized from the floor." | | 10 | "The moment her fingers touched it, visions flooded her mind—torn fragments of Earth bleeding into Hel, shadows with too many eyes, screams that tasted like cinn…" | | 11 | "Isolde smiled, a rare expression that transformed her ethereal features." | | 12 | "Aurora felt the Heartstone warming against her chest, pulsing in time with her heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her gaze distant" | | 1 | "Isolde finished, her expression unreadable" | | 2 | "Nyx mused, the name hanging in the air like a confession" | | 3 | "Nyx confirmed, without turning" | | 4 | "the chef announced, his voice too loud for the surrounding quiet" | | 5 | "Aurora whispered, the Heartstone Pendant warming against her chest" | | 6 | "the Prince boomed, his voice echoing through the hall despite its impossible size" | | 7 | "Belphegor said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Aurora explained (explain)" | | 4 | "she observed cryptically (observe)" | | 5 | "Nyx confirmed (confirm)" | | 6 | "the chef announced (announce)" | | 7 | "the chef explained proudly (explain)" | | 8 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 9 | "the shade murmured (murmur)" | | 10 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 62 | | tagDensity | 0.242 | | leniency | 0.484 | | rawRatio | 0.733 | | effectiveRatio | 0.355 | |