Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0595CBAY8FFZW8TQJWPZNK

Run Details

Duration:
56.3s
Cost:
$0.008486
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled the hood of her jacket tighter against the damp Richmond air. The car park was empty, just her sensible sedan and a row of silent trees. She checked her phone. 10:47 PM. Eva’s text was still on the screen: *You have to see it. After dark. The standing stones. Follow the path past the deer sanctuary.* Eva was prone to whimsy, to finding ‘magic’ in London’s forgotten corners. But this had been specific. Almost urgent. Rory owed her a visit anyway; it had been weeks. She locked the car, the beep swallowed by the profound quiet of the park at night. The trail was a pale ribbon of packed earth under the weak moonlight. Her footsteps sounded too loud. A distant rumble of traffic on the A3 was the only proof the city still existed. The air changed as she moved deeper, growing warmer, sweeter. The usual smells of leaf mould and damp were replaced by something like honey and crushed green stems. Wildflowers brushed her ankles in colours too vivid for the season—electric blues, screaming yellows, velvety blacks. She found the standing stones where Eva had described: a rough circle of ancient oaks, their bark gnarled into what could be faces in the shifting light. The air between them shimmered, like heat haze on a summer road. Rory’s breath caught. *A trick of the light.* She stepped through. The change was instantaneous. The sounds of the park vanished. The damp chill disappeared, replaced by a warm, still air that tasted of pollen. The sky above was a deep, unblinking violet, studded with stars that were too large, too bright. The wildflowers here grew waist-high, a silent, perfumed jungle. A gentle glow emanated from the petals themselves. “This is it,” Rory murmured, her voice swallowed by the immense quiet. “The Grove.” She touched the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. It was cool, a solid weight of silver and crimson gemstone against her skin. A gift from an unknown source after the incident in the city. It was just a pendant. A beautiful, expensive-looking one. It hadn’t done anything. Not yet. She followed a narrow path that seemed to clear itself for her, the flowers parting as she passed. The silence wasn't empty. It pressed on her eardrums, a physical weight. The only sound was the soft rustle of her own jacket. Then, a second rustle, from her left. Too light to be a person. Rory stopped. Turned. The flowers stood still, an unbroken wall of colour and shadow. Nothing moved. She walked on, faster now. The path led to a central clearing, where the glow was brightest. A single, impossibly large oak stood in the centre, its trunk wider than her car. Its roots were like melted candle wax, pooling on the ground. This had to be the heart of it. Eva had said to “listen for the truth between the heartbeats.” Rory stood before the tree, her practical mind cataloguing details. The bark was smooth in places, rough in others. The air hummed. She pulled out her phone. No signal. The clock read 10:51 PM. She’d been walking for at least fifteen minutes. A high, thin sound reached her. Not a whistle. Not a cry. A melody, if it could be called that, played on a pipe made of bone. It was sweet, piercing, and utterly alien. It came from the trees behind her. She spun around, her heart hammering a frantic tattoo against her ribs. The path was gone. Only the flowers, tall and whispering in a breeze that didn’t touch her face. “Hello?” Her voice was a croak. The melody stopped. In its place came a sound like wet leaves slapping against stone, coming from the same direction. Then, from her right, the snap of a twig. Heavy. Deliberate. Rory backed up until her shoulders hit the great oak’s trunk. The bark was cool and unnervingly smooth, like skin. She slid down it into a crouch, making herself small. Her hand went to her neck again. The Heartstone was no longer cool. It was warm, pulsing faintly against her palm. A slow, steady beat, like a second heart. A shadow detached itself from the gloom between two of the outer oaks. It was tall, too tall, and its limbs were articulated all wrong. It moved with a jerky, stop-motion gait, its head swivelling on a neck that bent backwards. It had no face, just a smooth, ovoid blankness. It stopped at the edge of the clearing, tilting its head as if sniffing the air. Rory held her breath. Her eyes burned. *Don’t move. Don’t make a sound.* The thing took a step into the clearing. The wildflowers around its feet withered instantly, turning to grey ash. It made a clicking sound with its jaw. Then, from another direction, a giggle. High, childish, and wet. A small shape darted from behind a root, running on all fours. It looked like a child, but its spine was elongated, its skin a patchwork of bark and pale flesh. It circled the tall thing, giggling. Rory’s pendant pulsed hot, a sudden, sharp spike of warmth. She stifled a gasp. The tall thing’s head snapped in her direction. The blank face fixed on her position. The clicking grew louder, faster. The child-thing stopped its circling and looked at her too, its mouth splitting open in a grin full of pebble-like teeth. They knew. A primal instinct overrode her fear. She scrambled to her feet, putting the massive oak between her and them. Her back scraped against bark. A different sound emerged—soft, wet breathing from the other side of the tree. Close. Too close. Rory chanced a look around the trunk. The tall thing and the child were gone. The clearing was empty, the withered patch of flowers the only evidence they’d been there. The relief was short-lived, a fragile soap bubble. A whisper, right against her ear. Not words, just a sibilant rush of air that carried the smell of damp soil and something like decay. She lurched away from the tree, stumbling into the flowers. They felt cold now, and their petals left a sticky residue on her skin. She ran, not on any path, just away from the oak. Branches that weren’t there a moment ago whipped at her face. The violet sky above seemed to press down, the stars pulsing like malevolent eyes. A root, slick and black, erupted from the ground and caught her ankle. She went down hard, the air knocked from her lungs. Her phone flew from her grasp, its screen shattering against a stone. The Heartstone’s glow was now a steady, frantic pulse, illuminating the flowers around her in a bloody red wash. The sounds closed in. The clicking, the wet giggling, the slap of leaves, the bone-pipe melody—all of them layering over each other, a symphony of wrongness coming from every direction. Shadows danced at the edge of the red light, shapes that didn’t correspond to any plant or tree. She dragged herself up, ignoring the pain in her knee. The standing stones. She had to get back to the standing stones. She forced herself to think. Eva’s path. The sanctuary was north-east from the car park. The stones were… she didn’t know. Panic was a cold fog in her brain. A shape coalesced in front of her. Not the tall one. Something shorter, hunched, made of woven vines and knotted wood. It unfolded itself, two knotholes in its ‘head’ opening to reveal milky, blind-looking eyes. It reached for her with fingers like twigs. Rory backed away, her hand fumbling in her pocket. Her keys. The cold, jagged edge of the car key bit into her palm. She brandished it, a pathetic weapon. The wood-thing tilted its head. The bone-pipe melody swelled, coming from inside its chest. It took another step. Her pendant blazed, a wave of heat so intense it stung her skin. The wood-thing recoiled, a hiss escaping its formless mouth. The red glow of the stone seemed to push back the shadows, to hold the encroaching horrors at a distance of a few feet. Rory clutched it, pressing the fiery gem into her palm. The pain was real, anchoring. The wood-thing circled her, the milky eyes fixed on the light. It was afraid of it. She held her ground, her mind racing. The pendant. The portal Eva mentioned. The Heartstone pulsed near portals. It was pulsing now, not with the slow warmth from before, but with a rapid, urgent rhythm. A beacon. A new sound cut through the cacophony. A deep, resonant *thrum*, like a giant tuning fork struck miles away. It vibrated through the soles of her feet. The wood-thing froze, then turned its blind head toward the source of the sound. With a rustle like autumn leaves, it dissolved back into the undergrowth. The other sounds faltered. The giggling trailed off. The clicking stopped. Even the bone-pipe melody wavered and died. In the sudden, ringing silence, the *thrum* came again, stronger. From ahead. From the direction she’d been running. Rory didn’t think. She ran toward it, crashing through the flower-jungle. The pendant was her guide, its pulse growing stronger, the heat a constant companion against her chest. The path reappeared under her feet, clear and defined. The wildflowers parted for her again, but now they felt sinister, their perfumed scent cloying, almost narcotic. She burst into a smaller clearing. In the centre stood not an oak, but a single, vertical slab of dark stone, twice her height. It was smooth, featureless, except for a symbol carved at its base—a crescent moon, identical to the scar on her left wrist. The *thrum* emanated from the stone, a physical vibration that shook the air. The Heartstone pendant’s glow was now a steady, brilliant crimson, illuminating the symbol, the stone, the terrified circles of her own eyes reflected in its polished surface. A hand, cold as clay, closed around her ankle from behind. Rory screamed. The sound was ripped from her throat, raw and loud in the unnatural quiet. She kicked, hard, connecting with something solid. The grip loosened. She wrenched free, scrambling forward, and slapped both her hands against the vertical stone. It was cold. Smooth. Dead. For a heartbeat, nothing happened. Then the *thrum* stopped. The red glow of her pendant died, plunging her back into the soft, violet gloom. The warmth vanished, leaving a chill that seeped into her bones. Behind her, in the dark, the giggling started again. Closer this time. And it was joined by a voice, a whisper that might have been Eva’s, or her mother’s, or her own, sighing through the flowers. “*Stay with us, Laila. Stay in the Grove.*” Rory pressed her forehead against the cold stone, her breath coming in ragged sobs. The wrongness was no longer at the edges. It was here, in the air, in the stone, in the sound of her own name twisted into an alien tongue. She was not alone. She had never been alone. And the stone, the portal, the thing she had touched to escape, was just another wall. The truth between the heartbeats was silence. And in the silence, something was listening.
created_at"2026-04-24T16:31:02.039Z" 4/24/2026, 4:31:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1873
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1873
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count2
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"chill"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"gloom"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count3
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"lurched"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"symphony"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"cacophony"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"wavered"
count1
20
word"sinister"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"profound"
2"footsteps"
3"electric"
4"shimmered"
5"chill"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"gloom"
9"pulsed"
10"warmth"
11"whisper"
12"lurched"
13"pulse"
14"symphony"
15"racing"
16"beacon"
17"cacophony"
18"vibrated"
19"wavered"
20"sinister"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences211
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences211
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences213
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords40
totalWords1869
ratio0.021
matches
0"You have to see it. After dark. The standing stones. Follow the path past the deer sanctuary."
1"A trick of the light."
2"Don’t move. Don’t make a sound."
3"thrum"
4"thrum"
5"thrum"
6"thrum"
7"Stay with us, Laila. Stay in the Grove."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1836
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Eva7
Heartstone5
Rory15
persons
0"Eva"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences137
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"something like honey and crushed green stems"
1"path that seemed to clear itself for her, the flowers parting as she passed"
2"as if sniffing the air"
3"looked like a child, but its spine was el"
4"something like decay"
92.99% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.07
wordCount1869
matches
0"not with the slow warmth from before, but with a rapid, urgent rhythm"
1"not an oak, but a single, vertical slab of dark stone, twice her height"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences213
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean38.14
std19.4
cv0.509
sampleLengths
058
145
278
347
43
558
614
749
854
916
1062
1142
1253
1318
146
1531
1659
1766
1813
1927
2047
2114
2241
232
2440
2538
2625
2760
2854
2948
3051
3143
3229
3318
3446
3531
3637
3753
3836
3954
4046
4140
4211
4340
445
4535
4636
478
4882
93.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences211
matches
0"were replaced"
1"was gone"
2"were articulated"
3"was elongated"
4"were gone"
5"was ripped"
6"was joined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs279
matches
0"was pulsing"
1"was listening"
75.79% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences213
ratio0.023
matches
0"Rory owed her a visit anyway; it had been weeks."
1"Wildflowers brushed her ankles in colours too vivid for the season—electric blues, screaming yellows, velvety blacks."
2"A different sound emerged—soft, wet breathing from the other side of the tree."
3"The clicking, the wet giggling, the slap of leaves, the bone-pipe melody—all of them layering over each other, a symphony of wrongness coming from every direction."
4"It was smooth, featureless, except for a symbol carved at its base—a crescent moon, identical to the scar on her left wrist."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount77
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.012987012987012988
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences213
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences213
mean8.77
std5.52
cv0.629
sampleLengths
013
115
24
32
412
52
63
77
812
95
102
1110
1216
1313
145
1516
1610
1718
1816
1927
2012
213
225
233
244
256
2614
2717
289
298
3012
312
328
3314
3412
355
364
374
382
3918
404
418
4211
437
446
452
461
4711
482
495
31.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats40
diversityRatio0.20657276995305165
totalSentences213
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences189
matches
0"Then, a second rustle, from"
1"Too light to be a"
2"Only the flowers, tall and"
3"Then, from her right, the"
4"Then, from another direction, a"
5"Even the bone-pipe melody wavered"
6"Then the *thrum* stopped."
ratio0.037
93.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences189
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"She locked the car, the"
2"Her footsteps sounded too loud."
3"She found the standing stones"
4"She stepped through."
5"She touched the Heartstone pendant"
6"It was cool, a solid"
7"It was just a pendant."
8"It hadn’t done anything."
9"She followed a narrow path"
10"It pressed on her eardrums,"
11"She walked on, faster now."
12"Its roots were like melted"
13"She pulled out her phone."
14"She’d been walking for at"
15"It was sweet, piercing, and"
16"It came from the trees"
17"She spun around, her heart"
18"Her voice was a croak"
19"She slid down it into"
ratio0.317
28.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount163
totalSentences189
matches
0"Rory pulled the hood of"
1"The car park was empty,"
2"She checked her phone."
3"Eva’s text was still on"
4"The standing stones."
5"Eva was prone to whimsy,"
6"Rory owed her a visit"
7"She locked the car, the"
8"The trail was a pale"
9"Her footsteps sounded too loud."
10"A distant rumble of traffic"
11"The air changed as she"
12"The usual smells of leaf"
13"Wildflowers brushed her ankles in"
14"She found the standing stones"
15"The air between them shimmered,"
16"Rory’s breath caught."
17"*A trick of the light.*"
18"She stepped through."
19"The change was instantaneous."
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences83
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The damp chill disappeared, replaced by a warm, still air that tasted of pollen."
1"The sky above was a deep, unblinking violet, studded with stars that were too large, too bright."
2"Branches that weren’t there a moment ago whipped at her face."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
82.7806%