| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.593 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 87.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1959 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1959 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "complex" | | 6 | "crystalline" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1992 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "arriving" | | 1 | "can" | | 2 | "Get out, Rory, just get out." | | 3 | "texture" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1776 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 8 | | English | 2 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | London | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Seer | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Varga" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.909 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "quite smoke and wasn't quite skin" | | 1 | "quite skin" | | 2 | "something close to it, their surfaces carved wit" | | 3 | "felt like they were closing in" | | 4 | "felt like twenty minutes but might have" | | 5 | "appeared ahead of her without having passed them" | | 6 | "something like one: a circular space enclose" | | 7 | "not quite ultraviolet, not quite infrared, but somewhere in the spaces between, the way the Grove itself seemed to exist in the spaces between worlds" | | 8 | "not quite infrared, but somewhere in the spaces between, the way the Grove itself seemed to exist in the spaces between worlds" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 8 | | per1kWords | 4.016 | | wordCount | 1992 | | matches | | 0 | "not the muted green of English hedgerows but something older, more potent, the flavor of chlorophyll crus" | | 1 | "not with fear but with a recognition she couldn't name, as if she were looking" | | 2 | "not dramatically, nothing so crude as the trees rearranging themselves, but in subtle, unsettling ways" | | 3 | "not the heartbeat she'd felt from the tree earlier, but something deeper, geological, as if the bedrock itself were" | | 4 | "not impossibly so, but enough to trigger a disorienting lurch in her stomach" | | 5 | "not the blue-grey Rory had half-expected but an actual, literal lavender, the color of heather in late su" | | 6 | "not quite ultraviolet, not quite infrared, but somewhere in the spaces between, the way the Grove itself se" | | 7 | "not quite infrared, but somewhere in the spaces between, the way the Grove itself se" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that the" | | 1 | "noticed that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 39.84 | | std | 31.42 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 85 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 70 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 92 | | 18 | 79 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 72 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 97 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 60 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 78 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 100 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 96 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 83 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 63 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 59 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 98.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
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| 80.53% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 279 | | matches | | 0 | "were closing" | | 1 | "were looking" | | 2 | "were breathing" | | 3 | "were vibrating" | | 4 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 31 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 25 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.207 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first in the bark — the way the ridges spiraled instead of running vertical, as if the trees had been slowly wrung out like wet cloth over centuries." | | 1 | "Nyx materialized at her left shoulder — not stepping from behind a tree or rising from a shadow, just *arriving*, the way darkness fills a room when you blow out a candle." | | 2 | "Rory followed the gesture and saw the standing stones — seven of them, set in a rough semicircle ahead, each one taller than she was and shaped from pale wood rather than rock." | | 3 | "It had been cool all morning, dormant, but as she faced the standing stones it gave a single pulse of warmth — subtle, like a heartbeat not her own." | | 4 | "She thought of Evan — of the flat in Cardiff with its locked doors and walls that felt like they were closing in." | | 5 | "Not in temperature — though that shifted too, warming by several degrees — but in *texture*." | | 6 | "Every breath tasted of green — not the muted green of English hedgerows but something older, more potent, the flavor of chlorophyll crushed between teeth." | | 7 | "The Grove was wider than she'd expected — a bowl-shaped depression carpeted in moss so green it seemed to vibrate, ringed by the ancient oaks whose roots formed a natural amphitheater." | | 8 | "Something about its shape made Rory's chest ache — not with fear but with a recognition she couldn't name, as if she were looking at a place she'd dreamed of and forgotten." | | 9 | "Their feet — or whatever served as feet when they chose to manifest them — left no impression on the moss." | | 10 | "The Grove shifted around them as they moved — not dramatically, nothing so crude as the trees rearranging themselves, but in subtle, unsettling ways." | | 11 | "At first it had been the flowers — their tiny bells, growing louder and more complex as she went deeper, layering into something that almost resembled melody." | | 12 | "Beneath it all, a low thrumming — not the heartbeat she'd felt from the tree earlier, but something deeper, geological, as if the bedrock itself were vibrating at a frequency just below human hearing." | | 13 | "She caught herself reaching for the scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit she'd never fully shed — and forced her hand back down." | | 14 | "The moss ahead was disturbed — pressed flat in the shape of steps, leading from the central oak toward a small hollow between two massive root systems." | | 15 | "As she drew closer, she noticed that the root systems framing it had grown into something resembling a doorway — two curving walls of living wood, their surfaces covered in lichen that glowed a soft, bioluminescent blue." | | 16 | "The hollow was larger inside than it had any right to be — not impossibly so, but enough to trigger a disorienting lurch in her stomach." | | 17 | "Her eyes were pale lavender — not the blue-grey Rory had half-expected but an actual, literal lavender, the color of heather in late summer, and they held an intelligence that was immediate and unnerving." | | 18 | "She wore a simple dress of undyed linen, and her bare feet — Rory noticed — rested on the moss without leaving so much as an impression." | | 19 | "Her voice was soft, musical, and carried an accent Rory couldn't place — something older than any modern tongue, vowels shaped by centuries." | | 20 | "It was a complicated smile — warm and distant at once, the smile of someone who had watched centuries turn like pages and found each one both heartbreaking and tedious." | | 21 | "Rory felt Nyx's presence behind her — a subtle thickening of the shadows in the hollow's entrance — and drew strength from it." | | 22 | "The dark water dripped from her slender fingers, and as each drop fell back into the basin, it caught the firelight and fractured into colors Rory had no names for — not quite ultraviolet, not quite infrared, but somewhere in the spaces between, the way the Grove itself seemed to exist in the spaces between worlds." | | 23 | "She gestured, and the fire between them shifted — the flames flattening, spreading, becoming a mirror of dark water and light." | | 24 | "Somewhere in the canopy, a bird sang a note that Rory felt in her bones, and for a single, suspended moment, every impossible thing she had seen since stepping between the standing stones — the wrong sky, the breathing earth, the footprints without weight — coalesced into a single, crystalline understanding:" |
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| 97.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1751 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 76 | | adverbRatio | 0.043403769274700174 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012564249000571102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 16.46 | | std | 11.93 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 56.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3884297520661157 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Then in the canopy, where" | | 1 | "Then in the roots, which" | | 2 | "Then came the birdsong, if" | | 3 | "Then she saw the footprints." | | 4 | "Somewhere in the canopy, a" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 82.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 2 | "they said, their voice threading" | | 3 | "It had been cool all" | | 4 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 5 | "She thought of Evan —" | | 6 | "She thought of Eva's voice" | | 7 | "She could walk through a" | | 8 | "She stepped between the first" | | 9 | "It looked less like a" | | 10 | "She pulled her gaze down" | | 11 | "She recognized none of them." | | 12 | "Its bark was silver-white, and" | | 13 | "Their feet — or whatever" | | 14 | "She glanced back once and" | | 15 | "They walked for what felt" | | 16 | "She caught herself reaching for" | | 17 | "They were hollows without substance," | | 18 | "Their voice had dropped to" | | 19 | "She stepped through." |
| | ratio | 0.343 | |
| 55.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks grew wrong." | | 1 | "Rory noticed it first in" | | 2 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 3 | "The bark hummed beneath her" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized at her left" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 6 | "they said, their voice threading" | | 7 | "Rory followed the gesture and" | | 8 | "Oak, she realized." | | 9 | "Moss grew in the grooves," | | 10 | "Nyx's form rippled, and for" | | 11 | "Rory looked down at the" | | 12 | "It had been cool all" | | 13 | "She pressed two fingers against" | | 14 | "Nyx tilted their head" | | 15 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 16 | "She thought of Evan —" | | 17 | "She thought of Eva's voice" | | 18 | "She could walk through a" | | 19 | "She stepped between the first" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it first in the bark — the way the ridges spiraled instead of running vertical, as if the trees had been slowly wrung out like wet cloth over centu…" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes caught the last grey light filtering through the canopy and held it, two faint embers in a face made of something that wasn't quite smoke and …" | | 2 | "Petrified oak, or something close to it, their surfaces carved with spiraling patterns that matched the bark of the surrounding trees." | | 3 | "Through the lattice of branches she caught glimpses of color that had no business existing in a London park: a deep, bruised violet bleeding into amber, threade…" | | 4 | "Something about its shape made Rory's chest ache — not with fear but with a recognition she couldn't name, as if she were looking at a place she'd dreamed of an…" | | 5 | "The moss yielded softly under her trainers, springy as memory foam but warm, almost feverishly so, and with each step she heard a faint sighing exhalation from …" | | 6 | "Beneath it all, a low thrumming — not the heartbeat she'd felt from the tree earlier, but something deeper, geological, as if the bedrock itself were vibrating …" | | 7 | "As she drew closer, she noticed that the root systems framing it had grown into something resembling a doorway — two curving walls of living wood, their surface…" | | 8 | "A small fire burned at the center, fed by twigs that were themselves faintly glowing, and the smoke it produced rose in a perfectly straight column before disso…" | | 9 | "Her eyes were pale lavender — not the blue-grey Rory had half-expected but an actual, literal lavender, the color of heather in late summer, and they held an in…" | | 10 | "It was a complicated smile — warm and distant at once, the smile of someone who had watched centuries turn like pages and found each one both heartbreaking and …" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, their voice threading through the air like smoke through keyholes" |
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| 75.93% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |