Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ05EA5F8EMA4Y7T4TH7M31Q

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Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.003556
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crime scene tape fluttered against the brick archway like a wounded bird. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under it without breaking stride, her leather watch catching the halogen light as she swept her gaze across the space. An abandoned Tube station. Camden, according to the initial call. The platform was gutted — tiles missing in jagged chunks, graffiti bleeding down the walls in layers of forgotten campaigns. Rusted rails disappeared into darkness at both ends. The air tasted like rust and something older, something mineral and sweet, like licking a coin. "DCI Marsh." Quinn didn't turn. She kept walking the platform, her shoes crunching on broken glass. "You called this in?" Detective Chief Inspector Peter Marsh stood near the body, hands deep in his overcoat pockets. He was a round man with thinning hair and the permanent expression of someone who'd just bitten into something sour. "Uniform patrol found him at half four this morning. Night shift flagged a smell." Quinn crouched beside the body without touching it. Male, mid-thirties. A charcoal suit that had cost more than her annual salary. No visible wounds. His face was frozen in an expression she couldn't quite name — not fear, not surprise. Something closer to recognition. "Name?" "We haven't ID'd him yet. No wallet, no phone. Just him and that." Marsh pointed his chin toward a small object on the platform edge, a few feet from the body's outstretched hand. Quinn didn't reach for it. She studied it first. A compass, brass, about the diameter of a pound coin. Its casing had gone green in places, a patina that spoke of years rather than months. The face was marked with symbols she'd never seen in any academy textbook — not letters, not numbers, something else entirely. The needle was spinning slowly, deliberately, like a hand on a clock. "You touch that?" she asked. "Forensics bagged it twenty minutes ago. Said it was the only thing on him." Marsh shifted his weight. "Probably worth something, if it's an antique." Quinn stood. She pulled out her notebook, not because she needed it — her memory was a steel trap, one of the reasons she'd made detective at thirty-one — but because the ritual of writing helped her think. "Cameras?" "This station's been decommissioned since '09. No working CCTV within two blocks. The nearest is the Tesco Express on the high street, but the feed only covers the front entrance." "So whoever brought him here knew the layout." Quinn looked up from her notebook. "Or was brought here by someone who did." Marsh rubbed his jaw. "Or he came here himself. Homeless encampment — there've been reports of people sleeping down here. Could be a drug deal gone sideways." Quinn crouched again. She took in the man's shoes — polished Oxford brogues, no scuff marks, no mud. She looked at his hands — manicured nails, no calluses, no defensive wounds. His suit jacket was buttoned. His tie was straight. "This man didn't come here voluntarily, and he didn't come here often." She pointed at the rails. "See the rust pattern? The track's been dry for years. But there's a fine layer of dust on the platform, undisturbed everywhere except the path from that access shaft —" she nodded toward a staircase at the far end, "— to where he's lying. One set of footprints. Size ten, probably. Deep stride. Someone was carrying him." "He's not a small man." "Adrenaline carries a lot of weight." Quinn straightened and turned to the uniformed officer near the tape. "Constable. That access shaft — where does it come out?" "Behind the old market building on Chalk Farm Road, ma'am." She nodded. Made a note. The Veil Market — she'd heard the name whispered in the last six months of surveillance on the Clique. An underground black market. Banned substances, enchanted goods, information for sale. None of it admissible in court. None of it explainable. "Marsh, when forensics bagged the compass, did they note which direction the needle was pointing?" He blinked. "I don't — probably southeast. Why?" Quinn looked down the platform, into the dark mouth of the tunnel where the rails vanished. The compass needle, free of its bag, would have been pointing that way. Toward whatever lay beyond the curve of the tunnel wall. "That compass wasn't just sitting on the platform." She walked to the evidence bag, which lay where the forensics tech had left it near the body. She crouched and held the bag up to her torch. The needle had stopped spinning. It was pointing at a specific angle — not southeast anymore, but down. Into the ground. "Needle's pointing down," she said. Marsh came closer, frowning. "Compasses do that. Magnetic fields, underground pipes—" "This isn't magnetic north." Quinn tapped the bag's surface. "Look at the face. Those markings — they're not decorative. That's a measuring system. See the intervals around the edge? The needle isn't pointing at a direction. It's pointing at a specific distance." Marsh stared at her. Then at the compass. Then at the tunnel. "Quinn, that's a compass from a dead man's pocket. It's an antique with fancy engravings. You're reading into it." "I'm reading what's there." She stood and swept the torch across the tunnel mouth. The beam caught something on the brickwork — a mark, faint, at eye level. She crossed to it. The brick had been scored with a sharp object. A symbol. The same angular pattern as the ones etched into the compass face. She held her torch steady and photographed it with her phone. "This wasn't here when the station was operational," she said. "The graffiti's layered beneath it. Someone came back. Recently." "Could be kids." "Kids who know how to read a Shade-crafted compass?" Marsh went quiet. Quinn didn't look at him. She kept her eyes on the brick, tracing the symbol with her gaze. Three angles, nested. A line through the center. She'd seen it before — three years ago, in the case file for Morris's death. A case that had no explanation, no motive, no suspect. A case that had been closed with "circumstances unexplained" stamped across it in red ink. The symbol hadn't meant anything to her then. It meant something now. "Marsh, I need the forensics team back down here. And call the museum — the British Museum, restricted archives. Ask for their night security desk and leave a message for the research staff. Specifically, anyone who works in the occult or antiquities department." She paused. "And get me everything on the Clique's financials. Every transaction, every account, every shell company." "You think this is connected?" Quinn looked at the body. The man's expression stared back at her — that look of recognition, frozen on his face like a last word he never got to speak. "I think this man walked into this tunnel wearing an eighty-thousand-pound suit and died standing up. No wounds. No drugs in his system — and there won't be, because whoever did this didn't need chemicals." She crouched beside him one more time, close enough to see the faint discoloration at his temples — not bruising, not exactly. A shadow beneath the skin, like ink bleeding through paper. "And I think he recognized the person who killed him." She stood. Adjusted her watch. The leather creaked against her wrist, worn smooth from three years of nervous habit. "Get me that museum contact," she said. "And find out who owns that compass."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"magnetic"
count2
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"weight"
2"magnetic"
3"etched"
4"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
93.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1246
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount768
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tube1
Chief1
Inspector1
Peter1
Marsh7
Oxford1
Veil1
Market1
Clique1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Marsh"
3"Morris"
places
0"Chief"
1"Inspector"
2"Peter"
3"Oxford"
globalScore0.719
windowScore0.833
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like rust and something older, som"
1"quite name — not fear, not surprise"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.803
wordCount1246
matches
0"not southeast anymore, but down"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"pointing that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean28.32
std21.6
cv0.763
sampleLengths
037
154
220
349
444
51
633
768
85
925
1038
111
1230
1322
1427
1540
1674
175
1827
1910
2045
2115
228
2339
2457
255
2611
2742
2812
2919
3055
3111
3219
333
349
3569
368
374
3860
395
4030
4177
4219
4314
84.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"was gutted "
1"was frozen"
2"was buttoned"
3"been scored"
4"been closed"
91.60% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was spinning"
1"was pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences110
ratio0.109
matches
0"The platform was gutted — tiles missing in jagged chunks, graffiti bleeding down the walls in layers of forgotten campaigns."
1"His face was frozen in an expression she couldn't quite name — not fear, not surprise."
2"The face was marked with symbols she'd never seen in any academy textbook — not letters, not numbers, something else entirely."
3"She pulled out her notebook, not because she needed it — her memory was a steel trap, one of the reasons she'd made detective at thirty-one — but because the ritual of writing helped her think."
4"She took in the man's shoes — polished Oxford brogues, no scuff marks, no mud."
5"She looked at his hands — manicured nails, no calluses, no defensive wounds."
6"The Veil Market — she'd heard the name whispered in the last six months of surveillance on the Clique."
7"It was pointing at a specific angle — not southeast anymore, but down."
8"The beam caught something on the brickwork — a mark, faint, at eye level."
9"She'd seen it before — three years ago, in the case file for Morris's death."
10"The man's expression stared back at her — that look of recognition, frozen on his face like a last word he never got to speak."
11"\"I think this man walked into this tunnel wearing an eighty-thousand-pound suit and died standing up. No wounds. No drugs in his system — and there won't be, because whoever did this didn't need chemicals.\" She crouched beside him one more time, close enough to see the faint discoloration at his temples — not bruising, not exactly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount757
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02509907529722589
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005284015852047556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.33
std10.15
cv0.896
sampleLengths
013
124
24
36
420
58
616
75
811
94
1015
1120
1214
138
142
1511
163
1716
184
191
2033
215
224
2310
2416
2521
2612
275
2818
297
302
3136
321
3330
3414
358
364
3723
383
3915
4013
415
424
4317
4457
455
4617
4710
4810
492
67.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43636363636363634
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners48
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then at the compass."
1"Then at the tunnel."
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences75
matches
0"She kept walking the platform,"
1"He was a round man"
2"His face was frozen in"
3"She studied it first."
4"Its casing had gone green"
5"She pulled out her notebook,"
6"She took in the man's"
7"She looked at his hands"
8"His suit jacket was buttoned."
9"His tie was straight."
10"She pointed at the rails"
11"She walked to the evidence"
12"She crouched and held the"
13"It was pointing at a"
14"She stood and swept the"
15"She crossed to it."
16"She held her torch steady"
17"She kept her eyes on"
18"She'd seen it before —"
19"It meant something now."
ratio0.28
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences75
matches
0"The crime scene tape fluttered"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"An abandoned Tube station."
3"Camden, according to the initial"
4"The platform was gutted —"
5"The air tasted like rust"
6"Quinn didn't turn"
7"She kept walking the platform,"
8"Detective Chief Inspector Peter Marsh"
9"He was a round man"
10"Quinn crouched beside the body"
11"A charcoal suit that had"
12"His face was frozen in"
13"Something closer to recognition."
14"Marsh pointed his chin toward"
15"Quinn didn't reach for it."
16"She studied it first."
17"A compass, brass, about the"
18"Its casing had gone green"
19"The face was marked with"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She kept walking the platform, her shoes crunching on broken glass."
1"He was a round man with thinning hair and the permanent expression of someone who'd just bitten into something sour."
2"A charcoal suit that had cost more than her annual salary."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.3379%