| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 83 | | tagDensity | 0.12 | | leniency | 0.241 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2414 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2414 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "grave" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "parameters" | | 10 | "standard" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 165 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 238 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2395 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1486 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.75 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Mornington | 1 | | Crescent | 1 | | Underground | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 26 | | Eva | 1 | | Kowalski | 25 | | Webb | 4 | | Morris | 2 | | Transport | 1 | | London | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | Three | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Webb" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Mornington" | | 1 | "Crescent" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Oxford" |
| | globalScore | 0.625 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 72.68% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like copper left in rain" | | 1 | "appeared blanched not from death but from contact" | | 2 | "stain that seemed to sink into the ceramic rather than sit upon it, edges fading into the surrounding white like something seeping through from behind" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.088 | | wordCount | 2395 | | matches | | 0 | "not pulled, but carefully unwound" | | 1 | "not from death but from contact" | | 2 | "not the diffuse impact of a blow, but a concentrated ring" | | 3 | "not for navigation above ground, but for finding something beneath" | | 4 | "not a smile, but the expression someone makes" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 238 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 111 | | mean | 21.58 | | std | 17.33 | | cv | 0.803 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 61 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 59 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 55 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 54 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 79.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "been crossed" | | 1 | "been removed" | | 2 | "been loosened" | | 3 | "been engineered" | | 4 | "been closed" | | 5 | "been accepted" | | 6 | "been killed" | | 7 | "been delivered" | | 8 | "been killed" | | 9 | "been taken" | | 10 | "been positioned" | | 11 | "been recorded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 277 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 238 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Graffiti sprawled across the walls in layers—tags, slogans, and something else." | | 1 | "His tie had been loosened—not pulled, but carefully unwound—and draped across his throat like a ceremonial cloth." | | 2 | "\"The sources predate the medieval period. And the symbol sequence on the wall\"—Kowalski pointed toward the spiral—\"matches protective sigils designed to contain something passing through.\"" | | 3 | "The central point where the carving converged—and there, barely visible in the stuttering light, a discoloration in the tile." | | 4 | "Not from impact—from pressure." | | 5 | "The darkness ahead didn't swallow the light—it held it at a threshold, the stuttering fluorescence reaching a certain point and simply ceasing to continue." | | 6 | "The bruising spread in a pattern—not the diffuse impact of a blow, but a concentrated ring." | | 7 | "A compass—not for navigation above ground, but for finding something beneath." | | 8 | "But the mechanism beneath—the gears and springs that kept time through motion—had stopped." | | 9 | "Quinn's mouth curved—not a smile, but the expression someone makes when they recognise something they've been searching for." | | 10 | "Not a train on adjacent tracks—something in this track." | | 11 | "The gesture carried weight beyond professional greeting—a threshold of its own, an agreement to cross into territory where standard procedure held no authority." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1017 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.01671583087512291 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007866273352999017 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 238 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 238 | | mean | 10.06 | | std | 8.21 | | cv | 0.816 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 48.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.34177215189873417 | | totalSentences | 237 | | uniqueOpeners | 81 | |
| 75.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Too evenly spaced." | | 1 | "Just the lingering bite of" | | 2 | "Somewhere beyond that darkness, trains" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots echoed against the" | | 1 | "His eyes remained open, glassy" | | 2 | "Her curly red hair had" | | 3 | "His tie had been loosened—not" | | 4 | "She traced the air above" | | 5 | "She had not accepted them." | | 6 | "She crouched, bringing her face" | | 7 | "Her breath caught." | | 8 | "She pulled her hand away" | | 9 | "She turned to face Kowalski" | | 10 | "He'd been delivered here." | | 11 | "She met Kowalski's gaze" | | 12 | "She scanned the platform, her" | | 13 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 14 | "She returned to the body" | | 15 | "His body had been positioned" | | 16 | "He had died in circumstances" | | 17 | "His death had been recorded" | | 18 | "She pulled her watch from" | | 19 | "She looked at the younger" |
| | ratio | 0.165 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The fluorescent lights stuttered above" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 2 | "The platform stretched before her," | | 3 | "Graffiti sprawled across the walls" | | 4 | "Symbols she didn't recognise, carved" | | 5 | "A uniformed officer met her" | | 6 | "Quinn's jaw tightened." | | 7 | "Quinn moved past him without" | | 8 | "Her boots echoed against the" | | 9 | "The air grew thicker as" | | 10 | "Something that tasted like copper" | | 11 | "The body lay between two" | | 12 | "The man's arms had been" | | 13 | "His eyes remained open, glassy" | | 14 | "DS Eva Kowalski crouched beside" | | 15 | "Her curly red hair had" | | 16 | "A worn leather satchel sat" | | 17 | "Kowalski didn't rise" | | 18 | "Quinn circled the body, watching" | | 19 | "Webb's left shoe had been" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Now another body lay arranged" | | 1 | "As though the seconds themselves" | | 2 | "Either Kowalski was exactly the" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 57.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Each groove sat precisely one centimeter from the next, as though the binding had been engineered rather than tied." | | 1 | "Three years since her partner had walked into a normal case and never come back, his death certificate citing cardiac arrest despite his heart being healthy eno…" | | 2 | "A stain that seemed to sink into the ceramic rather than sit upon it, edges fading into the surrounding white like something seeping through from behind." | | 3 | "Just the lingering bite of temperature that shouldn't exist in a sealed Underground station." | | 4 | "His death had been recorded under causes that explained nothing, and she had spent every day since trying to understand what no one else would acknowledge." | | 5 | "Now another body lay arranged with precision that served purposes beyond pathology." | | 6 | "A detective with specialised knowledge, positioned in the system, watching for incidents that matched frameworks no one else would see." | | 7 | "Kowalski's hand rested on her satchel, fingers curled around a book spine that promised answers written in languages the modern world had forgotten." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 83 | | tagDensity | 0.012 | | leniency | 0.024 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.024 | |