Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ05QZ8675NQCGFRM20YC5KV

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.005044
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell was a flat, insistent buzz. Not Eva. Eva tapped a rhythm—three quick, two slow, a pause, then one final. This was a stranger. Or a delivery. Rory dragged herself off the couch, Ptolemy leaping from her lap in a huff of tabby indignation. She padded to the door in worn socks, the research notes Eva had strewn across the floor crinkling underfoot. The security chain was still on from the night before. She slid it free, not bothering to look through the peephole, and pulled the door open two inches. The scent hit her first. Not the curry from downstairs, but something clean, faintly spiced, like sandalwood and winter air. Then the tailored charcoal suit, the ivory head of a cane resting on a gloved hand. Her gaze traveled up to platinum blond hair slicked back from a face she knew too well. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor, his heterochromatic eyes—one warm amber, one depthless black—fixed on her. The one black eye seemed to swallow the light. He didn’t smile. His mouth was a neutral line, but his presence filled the narrow space, a pressure against her skin. Rory’s hand tightened on the door edge. The crescent scar on her left wrist, hidden under her sleeve, seemed to prickle. “What are you doing here?” Her voice came out flat. Not surprise. A wall. “May I come in, Rory?” His tone was a low murmur, the French accent he never quite shed softening the edges. He didn’t wait for an answer. He shifted his weight, the movement fluid, and the door yielded a few inches under his unassuming pressure. Not force. Just inevitability. She stepped back. He was inside, closing the door behind him with a soft click, the space immediately too small. The flat smelled of old paper, Earl Grey tea, and her. His eyes took in the chaos—the teetering stacks of scrolls and law texts Eva hoarded, the unwashed mug on the counter, her own dishevelment in sweatpants and an old university hoodie. One platinum eyebrow arched a fraction. “Eva’s not here.” Rory crossed her arms. A barrier. “She’s at the British Library. Archives.” “I am aware.” Lucien removed his gloves, one finger at a time. His hands were elegant, long-fingered. No rings. “I am not here for Eva.” Ptolemy chose that moment to weave between Rory’s ankles, a low, curious trill in his throat. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the cat. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Ptolemy. You have grown.” The cat, a shameless traitor, wound itself around Lucien’s tailored trousers and butted its head against his shin. Lucien bent slightly, allowing a single, precise stroke between the ears. The movement was graceful, controlled, the cane never wavering in his other grip. Rory felt a flush of irritation, at the cat, at the easy way Lucien occupied her space, at the jolt in her pulse at the sight of his hands. “You shouldn’t be here.” “And yet.” He straightened, his gaze sweeping back to her, lingering on her face, her hair, her crossed arms. “You look well. The restaurant suits you.” Her stomach tightened. He knew about the Golden Empress. Of course he did. Information was his currency. “Is that why you came? To comment on my employment?” “I came because I have a job. One that requires your particular set of skills.” He moved further into the room, examining a pile of Eva’s notes on medieval property law without touching them. “And because you left your last address without a forwarding note. You are not easy to find when you do not wish to be.” “I didn’t leave you anything because I didn’t owe you anything.” The words came out sharper than intended. She hated that. He had always been able to slip past her composure. He turned to face her fully. The light from the single window caught the amber eye, making it glow like warm honey. The black one remained a void. “You owed me a conversation, Rory. We had an arrangement. A partnership. You dissolved it and vanished.” “That partnership was put on hold. Indefinitely.” She uncrossed her arms, letting them hang at her sides. Her hands felt empty. “I needed… space.” “Space.” He tasted the word. “You found it. In a delivery job and a flat above a bar in Shoreditch.” It wasn’t a question. He knew. He’d tracked her. The thought sent a cold thread through her veins, laced with something irritatingly close to relief. “Get to the point, Lucien. Why are you here?” He reached into his inner breast pocket and produced a small, folded piece of vellum. Not paper. Vellum, like the old scrolls Eva collected. He held it out between two fingers. “This was delivered to my office this morning. Addressed to you. But sent to me. A clear message.” Rory didn’t take it. “A message about what?” “About debts. About things that were buried coming back to the surface.” His voice was calm, but underneath was the honed edge of danger she remembered. “It concerns your father’s last case. The one he won just before he retired.” Her breath caught. Her father, Brendan Carter, the barrister, had retired from a prestigious career. His final, controversial win was a taboo subject in their family. “That has nothing to do with me. Or with you.” Lucien’s expression didn’t change, but he lowered the vellum slightly. “The opposing counsel in that case, the one who lost everything? His family has a long memory. And they have recently acquired resources. Unusual resources. They believe your father used… unconventional means to secure the verdict.” “He’s a barrister. He used the law.” “He used something else. And now, someone has connected his daughter”—his gaze locked onto hers—“to a fixer in the supernatural underworld. They think you know where the proof is. They think you have it.” A cold dread, sharp and familiar, coiled in her gut. This was the life she’d tried to leave behind. The shadows Lucien moved in, the whispers of things that weren’t human, of power traded and deals struck in places the sun didn’t reach. “This is insane. My dad is a lawyer. I work in a restaurant.” “Which is why you are the perfect place to start looking.” He finally closed the distance between them, the vellum now almost touching her chest. She could feel the warmth radiating from his body. “Take it, Rory.” Her fingers twitched. She looked at the vellum, at his hand, then at his face. The hurt she’d swallowed years ago, the confusion, the infuriating pull he still had on her, it all churned. “And what’s in it for you? Why do you care if someone is harassing me?” Something flickered in the amber eye. Annoyance? Amusement? “Perhaps I dislike loose ends. Perhaps your disappearance was an annoyance I have not yet resolved.” He tilted his head. “Or perhaps… I did not like the way we left things.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. A stupid, traitorous organ. “You were the one who walked out of that café. You said my concerns were ‘quaint’ and that you had ‘more pressing matters’.” “And you threw your tea at my head. An impressive aim, I might add.” His lip twitched. “I have had pressing matters. But not so pressing that I forgot the look on your face.” She stared at him. The memory was vivid: the scalding tea, the stunned silence of the other patrons, his amber eye wide with shock, the black one unreadable. Then him, dabbing his face with a napkin, standing, and walking out without another word. “That was two years ago.” Her voice was barely a whisper. “Time is relative.” He pressed the vellum into her unresisting hand. His fingers were cool against her palm. They lingered for a fraction of a second too long. “Read it. You have my number. If you want to work, you will call. If not…” He shrugged one shoulder, a graceful, dismissive roll. “Then I will assume you are content delivering noodles and letting ghosts from your father’s past catch up with you.” He turned toward the door. Ptolemy, sensing the shift in atmosphere, slunk under the couch. Lucien’s hand was on the knob when Rory spoke, the vellum crumpling in her fist. “Wait.” He paused, his back still to her. “Why send it to you? Why not just come after me directly?” Lucien looked over his shoulder. In the low light, his face was all sharp angles and shadows. “Because the person who sent this wants to play a game. And I detest games where I am not an active participant.” He turned the knob. “They wanted me involved. They’ve succeeded. The question is, what are you going to do about it?” The door opened onto the dim, narrow hallway. Then it closed behind him with that same soft, final click. Rory stood motionless in the center of the cluttered flat, the vellum a hard lump in her hand. The silence he left behind was louder than the buzz of the doorbell had been. Her skin still felt warm where his fingers had brushed hers. She unfolded the vellum with trembling hands. The script inside was elegant, old-fashioned. It wasn't a threat. It was a summons, to an address in Whitechapel, at midnight. And at the bottom, a single, hand-drawn sigil she didn’t recognize, burning itself into her memory. A symbol of debt, unpaid. She sank onto the arm of the couch, the crumpled notes of Eva’s research shifting beneath her. Outside, London hummed its indifferent song. Lucien was gone. But the space he had occupied, the dangerous, complicated space between them, now held a different kind of promise. One that smelled of sandalwood and involved old debts and a father’s secrets. She touched the scar on her wrist, the old childhood wound, and felt the new, sharper sting of a problem she had no idea how to solve. But she knew, with a certainty that settled like a stone in her chest, that she would call him. She had no choice. And some small, reckless part of her, the part that had thrown the tea and then waited for two years for him to call, didn’t want one.
created_at"2026-04-24T16:39:07.28Z" 4/24/2026, 4:39:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He moved further [further]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.044
94.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1713
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1713
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"wavering"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"churned"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"resolved"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"eyebrow"
2"wavering"
3"pulse"
4"stomach"
5"familiar"
6"perfect"
7"could feel"
8"warmth"
9"churned"
10"flickered"
11"resolved"
12"silence"
13"unreadable"
14"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences123
matches
0"felt a flush"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1709
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1198
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva7
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
French1
Earl1
Grey1
Rory8
Lucien11
Golden1
Empress1
Brendan1
Carter1
Whitechapel1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Earl"
4"Grey"
5"Rory"
6"Lucien"
7"Brendan"
8"Carter"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.585
wordCount1709
matches
0"Not the curry from downstairs, but something clean, faintly spiced, like sandalwood"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean38.84
std24.38
cv0.628
sampleLengths
092
153
247
321
414
549
668
715
825
934
1042
1133
1226
1327
1458
1531
1645
1724
1845
199
2049
218
2240
2336
2446
257
2634
2756
2837
2949
3039
3133
3234
3343
3411
3572
3630
371
387
3912
4060
4170
4242
43135
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences150
ratio0.02
matches
0"Eva tapped a rhythm—three quick, two slow, a pause, then one final."
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor, his heterochromatic eyes—one warm amber, one depthless black—fixed on her."
2"His eyes took in the chaos—the teetering stacks of scrolls and law texts Eva hoarded, the unwashed mug on the counter, her own dishevelment in sweatpants and an old university hoodie."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1205
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single, hand-drawn sigil"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.030705394190871368
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007468879668049793
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean11.39
std7.75
cv0.68
sampleLengths
07
12
212
34
43
517
619
710
818
95
1015
1116
1217
1317
149
153
1618
177
1814
1910
202
212
2221
236
2418
252
262
273
2817
2911
3031
316
327
332
346
3512
365
372
386
3916
406
418
424
4318
4411
4513
4629
474
4819
497
46.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then the tailored charcoal suit,"
1"Of course he did."
2"Then him, dabbing his face"
3"Then it closed behind him"
ratio0.036
27.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences112
matches
0"She padded to the door"
1"She slid it free, not"
2"Her gaze traveled up to"
3"He didn’t smile."
4"His mouth was a neutral"
5"Her voice came out flat"
6"His tone was a low"
7"He didn’t wait for an"
8"He shifted his weight, the"
9"She stepped back."
10"He was inside, closing the"
11"His eyes took in the"
12"His hands were elegant, long-fingered."
13"He straightened, his gaze sweeping"
14"Her stomach tightened."
15"He knew about the Golden"
16"He moved further into the"
17"She hated that."
18"He had always been able"
19"He turned to face her"
ratio0.482
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences112
matches
0"The doorbell was a flat,"
1"Eva tapped a rhythm—three quick,"
2"This was a stranger."
3"Rory dragged herself off the"
4"She padded to the door"
5"The security chain was still"
6"She slid it free, not"
7"The scent hit her first."
8"Her gaze traveled up to"
9"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
10"The one black eye seemed"
11"He didn’t smile."
12"His mouth was a neutral"
13"Rory’s hand tightened on the"
14"The crescent scar on her"
15"Her voice came out flat"
16"His tone was a low"
17"He didn’t wait for an"
18"He shifted his weight, the"
19"She stepped back."
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The shadows Lucien moved in, the whispers of things that weren’t human, of power traded and deals struck in places the sun didn’t reach."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.022
leniency0.044
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.044
86.8865%