| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he asked quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1295 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1295 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "electric" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "carried the weight" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "furrowed" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "measured" | | 15 | "loomed" | | 16 | "echoing" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her fist" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "a flicker of amusement" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1290 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1020 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 8 | | Carter | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 10 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for something beyond the surface" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.775 | | wordCount | 1290 | | matches | | 0 | "not about herself but about the life he left behind as an operative" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 61.43 | | std | 18.42 | | cv | 0.3 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 70 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn’t ask how she was; his eyes scanned the lines etched into her face, noting the leaner jaw, the sharper cheekbones, the tiredness that lingered behind the smile." | | 1 | "She lifted it, her gaze drifting to a photograph on the wall—an old black‑and‑white shot of a bustling 1950s London street." | | 2 | "\"I left law behind. The city demanded different deliveries.\" Her words carried the weight of a collective end—law, an abusive ex, a life once charted in university corridors." | | 3 | "Aurora stared at the scar, the memory of a childhood accident resurfacing—a slip, a broken wrist, a crescent shape left as a reminder of vulnerability." | | 4 | "They both stared at the photographs lining the wall—faces frozen in time, eyes pleading for stories." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1024 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.0234375 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0068359375 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 18.17 | | std | 8.04 | | cv | 0.442 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 50.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3380281690140845 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She brushed the dampness from" | | 1 | "His grey‑streaked auburn hair fell" | | 2 | "He lifted the glass, the" | | 3 | "His left leg, supported by" | | 4 | "Their gazes locked for a" | | 5 | "She felt the crescent scar" | | 6 | "she said, voice low, the" | | 7 | "He set his glass down," | | 8 | "he answered, his tone threaded" | | 9 | "He gestured toward the empty" | | 10 | "She slid onto the stool," | | 11 | "He didn’t ask how she" | | 12 | "She lifted it, her gaze" | | 13 | "He paused, eyes narrowing as" | | 14 | "She swirled the whiskey, watching" | | 15 | "Her words carried the weight" | | 16 | "She glanced at the signet" | | 17 | "He gestured toward the bookshelf" | | 18 | "Her voice softened, the past" | | 19 | "He stared at the neon" |
| | ratio | 0.567 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon green sign flickered" | | 1 | "The muffled clink of glasses" | | 2 | "She brushed the dampness from" | | 3 | "Silas Blackwood swirled a glass" | | 4 | "His grey‑streaked auburn hair fell" | | 5 | "He lifted the glass, the" | | 6 | "His left leg, supported by" | | 7 | "A familiar shape moved through" | | 8 | "Aurora’s bright blue eyes scanned" | | 9 | "Their gazes locked for a" | | 10 | "She felt the crescent scar" | | 11 | "she said, voice low, the" | | 12 | "The words hung in the" | | 13 | "Silas lifted his eyebrows, a" | | 14 | "He set his glass down," | | 15 | "he answered, his tone threaded" | | 16 | "He gestured toward the empty" | | 17 | "She slid onto the stool," | | 18 | "The scar on her wrist" | | 19 | "Silas poured a drink, the" |
| | ratio | 0.967 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn’t ask how she was; his eyes scanned the lines etched into her face, noting the leaner jaw, the sharper cheekbones, the tiredness that lingered behind th…" | | 1 | "Silas took a slow sip, the liquid warming his throat, his mind turning over memories like old maps." | | 2 | "They sat there, two old friends bound by memory, the bar humming around them as if it, too, held its breath, waiting for the next confession to surface." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He paused, eyes narrowing as if searching for something beyond the surface" | | 1 | "Her voice softened, the past slipping out like dust" | | 2 | "he asked quietly, the nickname slipping into his voice like a breath" | | 3 | "he said, his tone measured" | | 4 | "He set, the sound echoing" | | 5 | "she said, voice barely above the low din" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |