| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 874 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 874 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 871 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 773 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | November | 2 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Rory | 13 | | Veil | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Courts | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Blade" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.659 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.296 | | wordCount | 871 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the warning throb of a Hel portal, but something else" | | 1 | "not a sky at all but a shimmering distortion, the Veil itself visible as a rippli" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 21.78 | | std | 23.49 | | cv | 1.079 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 79 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 74 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 60 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 14.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled; her breath did not mist." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the forest floor—cornflowers in November, foxgloves, white blooms she had no names for—crushing sweet and bright under her boots." | | 2 | "Time moved differently in the grove; Rory felt it in the stretch between her heartbeats, each one a slow gong." | | 3 | "Not an earthquake—a breath." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 786 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.020356234096692113 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001272264631043257 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 9.79 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 49.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3258426966292135 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form rippled, edges dissolving" | | 1 | "She exhaled; her breath did" | | 2 | "She drew it." | | 3 | "Her pendant, nestled beneath her" | | 4 | "They moved deeper." | | 5 | "She checked her wrist." | | 6 | "Her watch had stopped, the" | | 7 | "Their bark had turned to" | | 8 | "Their silhouette frayed at the" | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 10 | "She reached out." | | 11 | "They moved when she didn't," | | 12 | "She gripped the blade with" | | 13 | "She looked up." | | 14 | "Her breath shallowed." | | 15 | "It was indifferent, vast, a" | | 16 | "She did not step back." |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks rose from Richmond" | | 1 | "Moss sheathed their flanks in" | | 2 | "Rory counted seven stones, each" | | 3 | "The Fae-Forged Blade hung at" | | 4 | "Isolde glided forward, silver hair" | | 5 | "Rory's thumb traced the crescent-shaped" | | 6 | "Nyx solidified beside the nearest" | | 7 | "Their form rippled, edges dissolving" | | 8 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "The temperature plummeted." | | 10 | "The distant thrum of London" | | 11 | "She exhaled; her breath did" | | 12 | "The amber glow of streetlamps" | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the forest floor—cornflowers" | | 14 | "Isolde followed, leaving no imprint" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted through a patch" | | 16 | "Rory adjusted her grip on" | | 17 | "The moonsilver warmed against her" | | 18 | "She drew it." | | 19 | "The leaf-shaped dagger shed a" |
| | ratio | 0.931 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber glow of streetlamps beyond the park curdled into something greener, older, a phosphorescence that clung to the bark and dripped from the leaves." | | 1 | "Through a gap in the canopy, the sky was not a sky at all but a shimmering distortion, the Veil itself visible as a rippling aurora that barred the way to somew…" | | 2 | "It was indifferent, vast, a mechanism that had turned for millennia without human witness." | | 3 | "The bone-trees leaned inward, their chiming leaves rising to a crescendo that resembled a language half-remembered." | | 4 | "Rory stood her ground, the Fae blade raised, its moonsilver edge catching the aurora and refracting it into spears of cold light that pinned the spirals to the …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |