| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "marble" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "mosaic" | | 12 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1120 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.69% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1010 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.807 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.893 | | wordCount | 1120 | | matches | | 0 | "not the directed burn of sun, but the ambient warmth of an oven with its door left open" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 32.94 | | std | 29.18 | | cv | 0.886 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 125 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 98 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 99 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Six feet of faint shimmering distortion peeled open, exhaling roasted figs, copper, and something darker — the scent of appetite without end." | | 1 | "Heat radiated from everywhere — not the directed burn of sun, but the ambient warmth of an oven with its door left open." | | 2 | "Isolde emerged, and the wildflowers — crimson things with black centres — turned to face her." | | 3 | "The air here didn't cool; it clung, a damp towel steeped in perfume and fermentation." | | 4 | "The melody didn't travel through the air; it entered Rory's blood and made her heart beat in triple time." | | 5 | "Beneath it, the wet sounds of feasting — the pop of joints sucked clean, the tear of flesh that sighed as it parted, the gulp of throats working without pause." | | 6 | "The ground itself was a mosaic of teeth — molars and incisors, polished and set in gold grout." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1006 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.016898608349900597 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 8.68 | | std | 6.24 | | cv | 0.719 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 54.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3643410852713178 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 64.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Too far to see." | | 1 | "Too close to ignore." |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes reflected nothing." | | 1 | "She raised the moonsilver blade." | | 2 | "It drank the moonlight that" | | 3 | "She stepped through." | | 4 | "It had weight." | | 5 | "It pressed against her cheekbones" | | 6 | "Her organs tugged to the" | | 7 | "Her lavender eyes scanned the" | | 8 | "She reached for a pear" | | 9 | "Her pendant seared against her" | | 10 | "It was crushed velvet, deep" | | 11 | "They passed rows of helbound" | | 12 | "Their faces shone with rapture." | | 13 | "He didn't wipe his chin." | | 14 | "He didn't blink." | | 15 | "Their pupils had swallowed the" | | 16 | "She looked at Rory." | | 17 | "Her smile split too wide." | | 18 | "She returned to her grapes," | | 19 | "Their shadow touched a discarded" |
| | ratio | 0.252 | |
| 18.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 91 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's fingers whitened around the" | | 1 | "The silver chain sawed into" | | 2 | "The gem throbbed, a second" | | 3 | "Nyx coalesced from the shade" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes reflected nothing." | | 5 | "Isolde stood at the boundary" | | 6 | "She raised the moonsilver blade." | | 7 | "It drank the moonlight that" | | 8 | "Rory's scar itched." | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "The amber sky struck her" | | 11 | "It had weight." | | 12 | "It pressed against her cheekbones" | | 13 | "Heat radiated from everywhere —" | | 14 | "Her organs tugged to the" | | 15 | "Nyx caught her, their hand" | | 16 | "Isolde emerged, and the wildflowers" | | 17 | "The Fae woman ignored their" | | 18 | "Her lavender eyes scanned the" | | 19 | "The grove had been green." |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 48.54% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them, the air tore." |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx caught her, their hand passing through her jacket and leaving frost on the bone beneath." | | 1 | "It was crushed velvet, deep burgundy, that absorbed their steps and released the scent of clove." | | 2 | "Their pupils had swallowed the whites of their eyes, fixed on the next row, the next swallow, the next sensation that would drown them." | | 3 | "Beneath it, the wet sounds of feasting — the pop of joints sucked clean, the tear of flesh that sighed as it parted, the gulp of throats working without pause." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.353 | |