| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1406 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1406 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "grave" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 167 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 167 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1403 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Thud. Thud. Thud." | | 1 | "It pulses near a Hel portal." | | 2 | "DON’T LOOK AT THE ROOTS." | | 3 | "yeses" | | 4 | "Unfocusing" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1389 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | London | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Heaven | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.45% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if examining her" | | 1 | "felt like static and grave dirt" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.138 | | wordCount | 1403 | | matches | | 0 | "not at the shadow, but at its feet" | | 1 | "Not at the roots of the standing stone, but at the shadows cast by the trees" | | 2 | "Not with her eyes, but with the cold, dead weight of the pendant against her skin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 43.84 | | std | 25.65 | | cv | 0.585 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 73 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 62 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 69 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 57 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | 0 | "was talking" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "was turning" |
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| 91.84% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem within the setting wasn’t just warm now; it was glowing." | | 1 | "The benefactor—some unknown figure from a life that felt increasingly like someone else’s—hadn’t included an instruction manual." | | 2 | "Then training, instinct, a lifetime of running—from Evan, from expectations, from things that whispered in the dark—kicked in." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1397 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lichen-rough under her" | | 1 | "closer, right beside her" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.026485325697924122 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007874015748031496 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 8.35 | | std | 6.38 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 37.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.30357142857142855 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 96.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the silvery grass, the" | | 1 | "Then a new sound." | | 2 | "Just an ancient, gnarled oak" | | 3 | "Then training, instinct, a lifetime" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 92.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been counting the seconds" | | 1 | "It pressed on her eardrums." | | 2 | "She’d come because the pendant" | | 3 | "It hadn’t been a choice," | | 4 | "They smelled of honey and" | | 5 | "Her phone, useless from the" | | 6 | "She’d been here longer than" | | 7 | "It came from the far" | | 8 | "It painted everything in silver" | | 9 | "She shifted her weight, her" | | 10 | "she breathed into the quiet," | | 11 | "She wasn’t sure what she" | | 12 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 13 | "Its warmth seeped into her" | | 14 | "She rose from behind the" | | 15 | "They felt like teeth." | | 16 | "She’d walked in through a" | | 17 | "Her thumb hovered over the" | | 18 | "She scanned the tree line," | | 19 | "It skittered through the air" |
| | ratio | 0.319 | |
| 90.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 102 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass whispered against Rory’s" | | 1 | "She’d been counting the seconds" | | 2 | "The last time, it had" | | 3 | "It pressed on her eardrums." | | 4 | "She’d come because the pendant" | | 5 | "It hadn’t been a choice," | | 6 | "A warmth against her sternum" | | 7 | "Wildflowers, a riot of impossible" | | 8 | "They smelled of honey and" | | 9 | "Her phone, useless from the" | | 10 | "The time display had frozen" | | 11 | "She’d been here longer than" | | 12 | "A long, wet drag, like" | | 13 | "It came from the far" | | 14 | "Rory held her breath, her" | | 15 | "The moonlight, which should have" | | 16 | "It painted everything in silver" | | 17 | "The sound didn’t repeat." | | 18 | "She shifted her weight, her" | | 19 | "The petals released a stronger" |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 36.23% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the silence had weight." |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 70.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "A warmth against her sternum that grew into a pull, a directional certainty in her bones that had guided her off the Park footpath, through a thicket of holly t…" | | 1 | "She scanned the tree line, tracing every shadow, every knotted root that could be mistaken for a crouching form." | | 2 | "The benefactor—some unknown figure from a life that felt increasingly like someone else’s—hadn’t included an instruction manual." | | 3 | "It stood at the edge of the torchlight, a stain on reality, its featureless head cocked as if examining her." | | 4 | "They bulged and twisted, pulling away from their sources, growing tendrils of pure blackness that snaked across the ground." | | 5 | "In the new silence, which was worse than any sound, Rory heard only her own ragged breath and the soft, distinct sound of a footstep on grass behind her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the word swallowed instantly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |