| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1425 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1425 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "sentinel" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "dancing" | | 14 | "wavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 35 | | totalWords | 1415 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "Where the stone grows warm, the door stands open. But doors swing both ways." | | 1 | "Bring the stone to the Grove. Midnight." | | 2 | "This way," | | 3 | "peeled" | | 4 | "Run," | | 5 | "Get out." | | 6 | "\"The door… is open.\"" | | 7 | "\"You… are the key.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1404 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Pre | 1 | | Law | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "silhouette that seemed to drink the light from her torch, making the beam look thin and pale around it" | | 1 | "something like it, dry and whispering, seemi" |
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| 58.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.413 | | wordCount | 1415 | | matches | | 0 | "not an envelope but a folded piece of parchment, brittle" | | 1 | "not with dramatic reveals, but with the slow, grinding certainty of geological time" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 42.88 | | std | 27.29 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 97 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 96 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 4 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t running" | | 1 | "were moving" | | 2 | "was blazing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d expected the hum of London at night—the distant, eternal murmur of traffic, a siren’s far-off keen, even the whisper of planes high above." | | 1 | "The darkness wasn’t natural night-darkness; it was solid, textured." | | 2 | "Their colours were too vivid—crimsons like fresh blood, yellows like bile, blues the shade of a deep bruise." | | 3 | "It wasn’t a sound she heard with her ears; it was a vibration she felt in her teeth, in the bones of her face." | | 4 | "It took a single, gliding step—no sound, no crunch of moss—and then it was simply part of the tree again, its outline merging with the bark." | | 5 | "Her palm pressed down on the moss, and it felt wrong—too warm, almost feverish, and it yielded slightly, like pressing into living flesh." | | 6 | "It simply stood, facing her, its head—was it a head?—tilted at an angle that strained the neck at an unnatural degree." | | 7 | "Rory’s mind raced, cycling through useless facts—Pre-Law textbooks, delivery routes, the name of Evan she tried so hard to forget." | | 8 | "The lead figure raised a hand—a long, thin, multi-jointed appendage that hadn’t been there a moment ago—and pointed directly at her." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1420 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.03943661971830986 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01267605633802817 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 10.48 | | std | 7.3 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 42.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.28888888888888886 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the thick trunks of" | | 1 | "Then the shadows moved." | | 2 | "Then, a sound finally broke" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 76.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d expected the hum of" | | 1 | "She looked up." | | 2 | "She clicked on the small" | | 3 | "Their colours were too vivid—crimsons" | | 4 | "They clustered around the bases" | | 5 | "She reached beneath her collar," | | 6 | "She’d needed the money." | | 7 | "She pulled her jacket tighter." | | 8 | "Her whole body locked." | | 9 | "She didn’t turn her head," | | 10 | "She hadn’t felt any breeze." | | 11 | "Her voice came out small," | | 12 | "It didn’t echo." | | 13 | "She took a step forward," | | 14 | "Her boot met soft moss," | | 15 | "She moved toward the centre" | | 16 | "She swept the torch behind" | | 17 | "She couldn’t be sure." | | 18 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 19 | "Her gaze fell on the" |
| | ratio | 0.359 | |
| 66.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The first wrong thing was" | | 1 | "Rory paused just inside the" | | 2 | "She’d expected the hum of" | | 3 | "The air pressed against her" | | 4 | "She looked up." | | 5 | "The canopy above was a" | | 6 | "The darkness wasn’t natural night-darkness;" | | 7 | "She clicked on the small" | | 8 | "The beam cut a weak," | | 9 | "Their colours were too vivid—crimsons" | | 10 | "They clustered around the bases" | | 11 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cold" | | 12 | "She reached beneath her collar," | | 13 | "The gemstone, usually cool, was" | | 14 | "Yu-Fei’s words echoed in her" | | 15 | "She’d needed the money." | | 16 | "A delivery to a specific" | | 17 | "An envelope left at the" | | 18 | "She pulled her jacket tighter." | | 19 | "The pendant remained inert." |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 42.74% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the suffocating" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 72.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The beam cut a weak, conical path through the gloom, illuminating a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in November." | | 1 | "It *peeled* away from the surface, a vertical sliver of deeper night that unfolded into a tall, impossibly narrow figure." | | 2 | "It had no discernible features, just a silhouette that seemed to drink the light from her torch, making the beam look thin and pale around it." | | 3 | "It simply stood, facing her, its head—was it a head?—tilted at an angle that strained the neck at an unnatural degree." | | 4 | "Something lower to the ground, that dragged itself with a wet, heavy sound." | | 5 | "The lead figure raised a hand—a long, thin, multi-jointed appendage that hadn’t been there a moment ago—and pointed directly at her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |