Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ064W59E293AH0WXMATHC21

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.004240
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first wrong thing was the silence. Rory paused just inside the line of ancient oaks, their gnarled roots breaking through the earth like petrified knuckles. She’d expected the hum of London at night—the distant, eternal murmur of traffic, a siren’s far-off keen, even the whisper of planes high above. But the Grove swallowed sound. The air pressed against her eardrums with a thick, velvety pressure, leaving only the ragged sound of her own breathing. She looked up. The canopy above was a dense black lace against a sky devoid of stars. No moon. The darkness wasn’t natural night-darkness; it was solid, textured. She clicked on the small torch clipped to her jacket. The beam cut a weak, conical path through the gloom, illuminating a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in November. Their colours were too vivid—crimsons like fresh blood, yellows like bile, blues the shade of a deep bruise. They clustered around the bases of the oak stones, which rose from the ground in a loose, unsettling circle. The Heartstone Pendant lay cold against her sternum. She reached beneath her collar, fingers closing around the silver chain. The gemstone, usually cool, was utterly inert. Yu-Fei’s words echoed in her memory, a rare sliver of information offered over a bowl of hot and sour soup. *Where the stone grows warm, the door stands open. But doors swing both ways.* The old man had looked at her then, his eyes sharp above his smile, and said nothing more. She’d needed the money. A delivery to a specific address in Richmond Park had been the job. An envelope left at the base of the oldest oak. Simple. But when she’d found the tree, it had been this one, this sentinel at the edge of the clearing, and tucked behind its roots, she’d found not an envelope but a folded piece of parchment, brittle and smelling faintly of ozone. *Bring the stone to the Grove. Midnight.* Now, standing in the suffocating silence, Rory felt the first, cold trickle of regret. She pulled her jacket tighter. The pendant remained inert. Not warm. Not pulsing. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. Her whole body locked. She didn’t turn her head, just let her eyes slide in that direction. The torch beam quivered, painting a shaky line over flowers and shadow. Nothing. Just the thick trunks of the oaks, their bark looking like wrinkled, grey skin. The sound hadn’t been loud, but in this silence, it had been a gunshot. Wind? She hadn’t felt any breeze. “Hello?” Her voice came out small, immediately smothered by the heavy air. It didn’t echo. It just… died. She took a step forward, deeper into the circle. Her boot met soft moss, muffling her footfall. The pendant gave the faintest flicker of warmth, like a dying ember. *This way,* it seemed to say. She moved toward the centre of the grove, where the oaks stood tallest and the flowers grew in a thick, almost deliberate pattern. Another sound. A rustle, like dry leaves skittering across pavement. But there were no leaves on these ancient oaks. She swept the torch behind her. The beam illuminated the path she’d just taken. The flowers seemed different now. Had that cluster of crimson blooms been that close to the central oak? She couldn’t be sure. The Grove’s layout felt fluid, a puzzle rearranging itself at the edges of her perception. She spun around, heart hammering against her ribs. “Who’s there?” The silence answered. But it was a different silence now. A listening one. Her gaze fell on the oak directly ahead. In the torchlight, the bark was a landscape of ridges and hollows. As she watched, the shadows in those hollows deepened, shifted. It was a trick of the light, her tired eyes playing games. But the pattern repeated. In the knot-hole of the next tree, the darkness wasn’t flat. It seemed to pool, to thicken, to curve inward with a slow, liquid intent. A low, resonant hum started at the base of her skull. It wasn’t a sound she heard with her ears; it was a vibration she felt in her teeth, in the bones of her face. The pendant flared with a sudden, sharp warmth. She clutched at it, the heat startling against her skin. Then the shadows moved. Not quickly. Not with any rush that would trigger a scream or a run. They simply… displaced. The patch of darkness under a low-hanging branch seemed to pull away from the trunk, stretching like taffy toward the ground before snapping back. A shape, taller and thinner than any man, detached from the side of a tree two oaks away, its form a void that blotted out the flowers behind it. It took a single, gliding step—no sound, no crunch of moss—and then it was simply part of the tree again, its outline merging with the bark. Rory’s breath hitched. She took a step back, her heel connecting with a root that hadn’t been there a second ago. She stumbled, catching herself with her free hand. Her palm pressed down on the moss, and it felt wrong—too warm, almost feverish, and it yielded slightly, like pressing into living flesh. The humming in her head intensified, a tuning fork struck against her soul. She got to her feet, backing toward the line of oaks she’d entered through. But when she looked back, the forest beyond the clearing was a wall of impenetrable black. The familiar park, the distant city lights, were gone. There was only this circle of ancient, watchful trees. A new scent rode the stagnant air. Not the smell of damp earth and blooming things. It was metallic, like old coins held in a sweaty palm, mixed with the sharp ozone tang from the parchment. A shape detached from the central oak. It didn’t step out from behind it. It *peeled* away from the surface, a vertical sliver of deeper night that unfolded into a tall, impossibly narrow figure. It had no discernible features, just a silhouette that seemed to drink the light from her torch, making the beam look thin and pale around it. The figure didn’t move toward her. It simply stood, facing her, its head—was it a head?—tilted at an angle that strained the neck at an unnatural degree. Rory’s fingers fumbled at her jacket, searching for the reassuring click of her phone. The pendant was now hot, a throbbing, urgent heat against her chest. *Run,* every instinct screamed. *Get out.* But the way was gone. And the figure took another silent, gliding step. Then another. It wasn’t running. It was inevitable, a shadow flowing over the ground, the humming now a physical pressure behind her eyes. She backed away, her hand wrapping around the rough bark of the nearest oak for support. The bark was damp, and it seemed to pulse faintly beneath her touch. Her gaze darted around the clearing. The other shapes were moving now, emerging from the trees, not with dramatic reveals, but with the slow, grinding certainty of geological time. They formed a loose, closing perimeter. Their tilted, dark forms were all she could see beyond the weak circle of her light. The lead figure was only ten paces away. The metallic smell was overwhelming. Rory’s mind raced, cycling through useless facts—Pre-Law textbooks, delivery routes, the name of Evan she tried so hard to forget. None of it mattered here. This place operated on different rules. The figure paused. Its lack of a face was somehow more terrifying than any monster. It was a hole in the world shaped like a man. Then, a sound finally broke the humming. A voice, or something like it, dry and whispering, seeming to come from the ground beneath her feet and the canopy above her at once. **"The door… is open."** The Heartstone Pendant flared white-hot. Rory cried out, yanking it from beneath her shirt. The crimson stone was blazing, its inner glow now a furious, pulsing light that cast long, dancing shadows. In that strobing light, she saw them all clearly. A dozen figures, motionless, their forms wavering at the edges like heat haze. And behind them, further back in the shadows where her torch couldn’t reach, something else moved. Something lower to the ground, that dragged itself with a wet, heavy sound. The lead figure raised a hand—a long, thin, multi-jointed appendage that hadn’t been there a moment ago—and pointed directly at her. **"You… are the key."**
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1425
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1425
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silence"
count5
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"quivered"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"footfall"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"whisper"
2"gloom"
3"echoed"
4"sentinel"
5"quivered"
6"echo"
7"footfall"
8"flicker"
9"warmth"
10"familiar"
11"pulse"
12"raced"
13"dancing"
14"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences132
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords35
totalWords1415
ratio0.025
matches
0"Where the stone grows warm, the door stands open. But doors swing both ways."
1"Bring the stone to the Grove. Midnight."
2"This way,"
3"peeled"
4"Run,"
5"Get out."
6"\"The door… is open.\""
7"\"You… are the key.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1404
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Grove3
November1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Richmond1
Park1
Rory6
Pre1
Law1
Evan1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"November"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
97.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"silhouette that seemed to drink the light from her torch, making the beam look thin and pale around it"
1"something like it, dry and whispering, seemi"
58.66% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.413
wordCount1415
matches
0"not an envelope but a folded piece of parchment, brittle"
1"not with dramatic reveals, but with the slow, grinding certainty of geological time"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Had that cluster"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean42.88
std27.29
cv0.637
sampleLengths
07
168
297
378
476
527
67
764
818
958
1070
1110
1213
1371
1453
154
1696
1752
1861
1936
2060
2127
2232
2336
2480
2544
2626
2732
284
2932
3051
3121
324
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences132
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs216
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"were moving"
2"was blazing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences135
ratio0.067
matches
0"She’d expected the hum of London at night—the distant, eternal murmur of traffic, a siren’s far-off keen, even the whisper of planes high above."
1"The darkness wasn’t natural night-darkness; it was solid, textured."
2"Their colours were too vivid—crimsons like fresh blood, yellows like bile, blues the shade of a deep bruise."
3"It wasn’t a sound she heard with her ears; it was a vibration she felt in her teeth, in the bones of her face."
4"It took a single, gliding step—no sound, no crunch of moss—and then it was simply part of the tree again, its outline merging with the bark."
5"Her palm pressed down on the moss, and it felt wrong—too warm, almost feverish, and it yielded slightly, like pressing into living flesh."
6"It simply stood, facing her, its head—was it a head?—tilted at an angle that strained the neck at an unnatural degree."
7"Rory’s mind raced, cycling through useless facts—Pre-Law textbooks, delivery routes, the name of Evan she tried so hard to forget."
8"The lead figure raised a hand—a long, thin, multi-jointed appendage that hadn’t been there a moment ago—and pointed directly at her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1420
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.03943661971830986
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01267605633802817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean10.48
std7.3
cv0.697
sampleLengths
07
119
224
35
420
53
614
72
89
910
1022
1118
1219
138
1411
157
1620
179
1823
194
2013
2110
221
2341
246
251
2614
275
284
292
302
317
324
3313
3412
351
3614
3714
381
395
4012
413
422
431
449
458
4612
476
4823
492
42.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.28888888888888886
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners39
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences117
matches
0"Just the thick trunks of"
1"Then the shadows moved."
2"Then, a sound finally broke"
ratio0.026
76.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences117
matches
0"She’d expected the hum of"
1"She looked up."
2"She clicked on the small"
3"Their colours were too vivid—crimsons"
4"They clustered around the bases"
5"She reached beneath her collar,"
6"She’d needed the money."
7"She pulled her jacket tighter."
8"Her whole body locked."
9"She didn’t turn her head,"
10"She hadn’t felt any breeze."
11"Her voice came out small,"
12"It didn’t echo."
13"She took a step forward,"
14"Her boot met soft moss,"
15"She moved toward the centre"
16"She swept the torch behind"
17"She couldn’t be sure."
18"She spun around, heart hammering"
19"Her gaze fell on the"
ratio0.359
66.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences117
matches
0"The first wrong thing was"
1"Rory paused just inside the"
2"She’d expected the hum of"
3"The air pressed against her"
4"She looked up."
5"The canopy above was a"
6"The darkness wasn’t natural night-darkness;"
7"She clicked on the small"
8"The beam cut a weak,"
9"Their colours were too vivid—crimsons"
10"They clustered around the bases"
11"The Heartstone Pendant lay cold"
12"She reached beneath her collar,"
13"The gemstone, usually cool, was"
14"Yu-Fei’s words echoed in her"
15"She’d needed the money."
16"A delivery to a specific"
17"An envelope left at the"
18"She pulled her jacket tighter."
19"The pendant remained inert."
ratio0.786
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now, standing in the suffocating"
ratio0.009
72.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The beam cut a weak, conical path through the gloom, illuminating a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in November."
1"It *peeled* away from the surface, a vertical sliver of deeper night that unfolded into a tall, impossibly narrow figure."
2"It had no discernible features, just a silhouette that seemed to drink the light from her torch, making the beam look thin and pale around it."
3"It simply stood, facing her, its head—was it a head?—tilted at an angle that strained the neck at an unnatural degree."
4"Something lower to the ground, that dragged itself with a wet, heavy sound."
5"The lead figure raised a hand—a long, thin, multi-jointed appendage that hadn’t been there a moment ago—and pointed directly at her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4613%