Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ067CRXYSV0S2J5HSY45SB5

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52.5s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth. Aurora counted them as she passed—seven, eight, nine—each one twisted oak bark frozen into impossible angles, grain spiralling in directions that made her eyes sting if she followed it too long. The pendant against her chest pulsed once, twice, a heartbeat of warmth that had grown stronger with every step into Richmond Park. She'd followed that pull from the pavement, through the gates, past the sleeping deer herds that hadn't so much as twitched at her approach. Now she stood at the threshold of Isolde's grove, and every instinct she'd honed surviving Evan screamed that she'd made a terrible mistake. The wildflowers should not have been blooming. November had stripped the park bare, skeletons of ferns and browned bracken crunching beneath her boots on the walk here. But the clearing ahead overflowed with colour—cornflowers and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, their petals luminous silver in the moonlight. The air tasted different here. Sweeter. Heavier. Like the moment before a storm, all ozone and anticipation. She'd come because the pendant wouldn't stop burning. Three days now. Three days of that crimson gem growing warmer against her skin, of waking at 3 AM with the chain clenched in her fist and the feeling that something was pulling her south-west across the city. Silas had noticed her distraction at the bar. Even Yu-Fei had pulled her aside after a shift, asked if she was sleeping enough, if she needed fewer deliveries for a while. She'd told them she was fine. The lie tasted like those silver petals looked—too perfect, too sweet. Moonlight pooled in the clearing's centre, and time felt thick around her, syrup-slow. An hour here could be minutes out there. Or days. The thought made her wrist ache, that old crescent scar throbbing with phantom pain. She stepped between two standing stones. The world behind her went quiet. Not silent—quiet. The distant hum of London traffic, the grind of the night bus on Kingston Road, the drone of planes crawling toward Heathrow. All of it swallowed in a single heartbeat. What remained was worse. Her own breathing, too loud. The crunch of her boots on grass that had no business being green. And beneath it all, like tinnitus at the edge of hearing— Singing. No. Not singing. Something almost like singing, almost like voices, almost like words in a language she almost understood. The almost was worse than clarity would have been. The pendant flared hot against her collarbone. She pressed her palm flat over it, the gem's warmth seeping through her jacket, her shirt, her skin. The pulse had rhythm now, matching something—her heartbeat or that not-singing, she couldn't tell which came first. You came for a reason, she reminded herself. You followed the pull. You wanted answers. The same rationale that had driven her into Evan's arms. The same logic that had kept her there for two years. Want and reason tangled together until she couldn't separate them. She walked deeper into the grove. The wildflowers leaned as she passed. Not toward her—away. Bending like reeds in a wind she couldn't feel, petals trembling, stems straining from her path. The pendant burned hotter. She let her hand fall from it, watched the crimson glow paint her shirt blood-red. Something moved at the edge of her vision. She turned. Nothing. Just more standing stones, more impossible flowers, more moonlight that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. The trees at the clearing's edge weren't trees anymore—they were suggestions of trees, charcoal smudges against a sky that held too many stars for London. The not-singing grew louder. Almost words. Almost a voice she almost recognized. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She grabbed for it, desperate for connection to the world outside this pocket of wrongness. The screen lit her face blue-white. No signal. Of course no signal. But a notification had come through. A text from Eva, timestamped three minutes ago, though that couldn't be right— where are you?? your boss called looking for you. said you never showed for your shift. rory its been two days?? Two days. Her stomach dropped. She'd left the flat at ten PM. Walked forty minutes to the park. That was— that was tonight. That was just tonight. The not-singing resolved into something closer to words. "Almost." She spun. The voice had come from everywhere. From the stones. From the flowers. From the too-many stars. "Almost found." The pendant blazed. She gasped, stumbled backward, and her heel caught on something that hadn't been there a moment before. She fell hard, palms slapping against grass that was warm and soft in a way grass shouldn't be, in a way that reminded her of skin. She scrambled up, wiping her hands on her jeans. The standing stones had moved. Not much. Not enough to be certain, except she was certain. The gap she'd walked through had narrowed. The stones on either side leaned inward now, oak-bark grain spiralling toward her like fingers closing. She ran. The grove stretched before her, longer than it had been, the far end receding with each stride. Her boots pounded warm grass. Her breath tore from her lungs. The wildflowers didn't bend away this time—they reached for her, petals brushing her ankles, stems curling like fingers around her calves. She kicked free, kept running, kept— The clearing ended. Not at trees. Not at stones. At a sheer drop into nothing, into a darkness so complete it seemed to swallow the moonlight that touched it. She skidded to a stop, arms pinwheeling, pebbles tumbling over the edge and making no sound as they fell. The not-singing was behind her now. All around her. Inside her. "Almost home." A hand closed around her wrist. She screamed, whirled, and found nothing. No one. Just the standing stones in a perfect circle around her, closer than before, close enough that she could reach out and touch two at once. The grip on her wrist remained. Cold. So cold it burned. She looked down. Nothing held her. But her crescent scar had opened. A thin line of blood traced the old wound's curve, dark as the pendant's glow, and where it dripped onto the grass the wildflowers bloomed brighter. She stood alone in the grove. Completely alone. So why could she feel breath on the back of her neck?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1075
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1075
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"resolved"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"anticipation"
3"perfect"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"resolved"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1066
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1061
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.28
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde1
Evan2
Yu-Fei1
London2
Kingston1
Road1
Heathrow1
Singing1
Eva1
You3
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Evan"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Singing"
4"Eva"
5"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Kingston"
4"Road"
5"Heathrow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like those silver petals looked—to"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1066
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"screamed that she'd"
1"feeling that something"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean20.5
std20.02
cv0.977
sampleLengths
010
177
223
365
48
569
66
711
837
96
106
1165
121
1328
147
1535
1615
1731
186
1944
208
2147
224
238
2427
256
2619
2721
282
2925
308
311
3218
332
3446
359
365
3734
382
3955
403
4145
4211
432
446
4533
4614
473
4832
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was pulling"
1"was sleeping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences123
ratio0.098
matches
0"Aurora counted them as she passed—seven, eight, nine—each one twisted oak bark frozen into impossible angles, grain spiralling in directions that made her eyes sting if she followed it too long."
1"But the clearing ahead overflowed with colour—cornflowers and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, their petals luminous silver in the moonlight."
2"The lie tasted like those silver petals looked—too perfect, too sweet."
3"Not silent—quiet."
4"And beneath it all, like tinnitus at the edge of hearing—"
5"The pulse had rhythm now, matching something—her heartbeat or that not-singing, she couldn't tell which came first."
6"Not toward her—away."
7"The trees at the clearing's edge weren't trees anymore—they were suggestions of trees, charcoal smudges against a sky that held too many stars for London."
8"A text from Eva, timestamped three minutes ago, though that couldn't be right—"
9"That was— that was tonight."
10"The wildflowers didn't bend away this time—they reached for her, petals brushing her ankles, stems curling like fingers around her calves."
11"She kicked free, kept running, kept—"
98.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.041628122109158186
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009250693802035153
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean8.67
std7.38
cv0.852
sampleLengths
010
131
222
324
423
57
620
721
85
91
101
1110
128
133
1435
158
1623
176
1811
1913
208
212
2214
236
246
252
2622
278
284
295
3013
3111
321
331
342
3516
369
377
3818
3917
408
414
423
4310
4411
4510
466
476
483
4916
46.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.35772357723577236
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just more standing stones, more"
1"Almost a voice she almost"
2"Of course no signal."
3"Just the standing stones in"
4"So cold it burned."
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences101
matches
0"She'd followed that pull from"
1"She'd come because the pendant"
2"She'd told them she was"
3"She stepped between two standing"
4"Her own breathing, too loud."
5"She pressed her palm flat"
6"You came for a reason,"
7"You followed the pull."
8"You wanted answers."
9"She walked deeper into the"
10"She let her hand fall"
11"Her phone buzzed in her"
12"She grabbed for it, desperate"
13"your boss called looking for"
14"Her stomach dropped."
15"She'd left the flat at"
16"She gasped, stumbled backward, and"
17"She fell hard, palms slapping"
18"She scrambled up, wiping her"
19"Her boots pounded warm grass."
ratio0.257
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences101
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora counted them as she"
2"The pendant against her chest"
3"She'd followed that pull from"
4"The wildflowers should not have"
5"November had stripped the park"
6"The air tasted different here."
7"She'd come because the pendant"
8"Silas had noticed her distraction"
9"She'd told them she was"
10"The lie tasted like those"
11"Moonlight pooled in the clearing's"
12"An hour here could be"
13"The thought made her wrist"
14"She stepped between two standing"
15"The world behind her went"
16"The distant hum of London"
17"Her own breathing, too loud."
18"The crunch of her boots"
19"Something almost like singing, almost"
ratio0.693
99.01% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now she stood at the"
1"Even Yu-Fei had pulled her"
ratio0.02
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Aurora counted them as she passed—seven, eight, nine—each one twisted oak bark frozen into impossible angles, grain spiralling in directions that made her eyes …"
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2"She fell hard, palms slapping against grass that was warm and soft in a way grass shouldn't be, in a way that reminded her of skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.6500%